>>280786783I just read a few unexpected sex scenes in a web novel. It was surprising that they were awkward to read given that the author was fantastic in setting the scene in so many other (usually grim and tragic) ways.
>The Main Heroines are trying to kill me.Don't get me wrong, I love fanservice and lolis and everything else; but sometimes they're just out of place in a story OR the author just isn't good at writing them.
>>280786674This is a good example of a decently written scene. But once you start going on about cocks and pussies or nipples or blowjobs or "thanks to my power of the stars granting me regeneration and this aphrodisiac I ejaculated like 15 times and we went until morning" (paraphrased, but that happened), you see where I'm going with this.
Despite that being in TMHATTKM, the emotional scenes and regret are 10/10, it's such a weird juxtaposition.