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Five guys and 3 girls, two tall women and 1 loli. and there is 1 boy looks like a magician.

>>281534532
>Too boobs characters confirmed
THANK YOU KAWAGUCHI

Look who's back! It's Captain Alajoki!

>>281534609
YES
YES
YES!

>>281534532
>that name
This is so fucking generic, I can't believe any sane editor would pass this shit.

>>281534676
I'm sure you can come up with a better name, can't you?

Alajoki looks more feminine now

>1(One) whole chapter after break week just to info dump and a big revelation for a character that was just introduce a few chapter ago.
It's over otrbros axe soon

Ah it's new main sword for Otr, just like in cover.

>>281534747
>you can't say that it's generic if it's generic unless you can come up with a better name

So long, Sindra.

>>281534933
what? she was cute and had big tits i feel betrayed

I knew she was a princess, I can tell her design and her personality.

Fin~

What are your thoughts on this latest chapter so far?

>>281534532
suddenly...elite group.

>>281535045
It's so over

>>281535045
Alajoki/10
Thanks OP
It's a shame Sindra didn't join the party

>>281534895
Booba
>>281535045
It gives a bit of hope that we’ll be in it for a longer haul. I’m still a bit tepid on the whole, but I feel like this ‘should’ be able to be really good, if it finds its groove.

>>281534676
Doesn't seem generic to me. Not sure I can think of a group of dudes named after the eight legs of Odin's horse.

>>281534933
She better show up again whenever he needs a sword upgrade/repair

>>281534747
She comes across very sultry here

>>281534532
Likelihood of actually meeting them before the axe?

>>281534783
Why the fuck isn't Muscle Girl going with them again

>>281535299
She's a crafter not a fighter

>>281535226
Pretty certain that we're going to meet them, but only a few chapter before the axed.

I'm not particularly invested in the story (common weakness of new series - you don't feel particularly attached to the characters) but I really want to eat this.

>>281535226
The if we get all the females one after another it's clear the axe is coming

How many chapter before the axe?

>>281535299
Editor-san said he's not allowed to have too many gorilla women until he's out of the U19 danger zone.

>>281535045
That explains her attitude, thanks for dumping.

>>281535498
Two more weeks

>>281535400
Meant Alajoki not the dwarf

>>281535538
Nah that's probably Kiyoshi

>>281535538
I'm thinking about four to five weeks, but it could be sooner than that

>>281534921
Just admit you're retarded.

>>281534532
>L-look! there's gonna be another loli, so please keep reading

>>281535613
Four weeks is just two more weeks after two more weeks when you think about it. Five weeks is impossible.

>>281535579
Not Skilled enough for their group I guess
or alternatively somebody has to actually lead the rabble, bit of both maybe

Where's TOC?

>>281535649
But I don't want more loli, I want gorilla women.

>>281534323
>the old me was big
I swear if kawaguchi turns the loli into a muscle mommy I'll kill him

>The only thing otrfag can talk about in this chapter is just the muscle woman
LMAO AXE SOON

>>281535226
>>281535488
Hope we meet weapons bro first.

how many elemental spirits are there going to be? I guess earth, water, ice, wind, wood, maybe light and darkness?

>>281535456
it's a smorgasbord

>>281535226
You could have a chapter that throws them to you all at once KNY style, I don't see this living long enough for gradual introductions

Kawaguchi's comment.

>>281534571
He really shouldn't have killed him off. Is there hope for revival?

>Has to resort to necrobumping already
It's over, let it go anon

>>281535045
Midgaza

>>281536836
I'm jealous of people that can just get to sleep on command

>>281534532
https://youtu.be/w3n2lr0yfKs

>>281534676
>Noooo! You can't use for your super gang the name of a horse mothered by Loki, the god of flame! Your main character is already fire based! Go look for something nobody recognizes!

>>281536995
>Loki, the god of flame!
Actually, Loki has nothing to do with flame. That's Logi, and people confused the two.

>>281535916
Very telling

>>281534933
It feels REALLY stupid to leave her instead of having her tag along with the iron spirit as a support-type character in battle.
Otr using several spirits is silly, and he clearly doesn't have enough people around his own powerlevel.

>>281537176
It's actually real, what the hell.

>>281534386
The map being just Europe is a bit lazy NGL

>>281535888
of course he will, come on

>>281534676
thats literally the opposite of generic, you fucking faggot

>>281534532
They look cool and these kinds of elite groups are usually standouts in shonen. It's a shame they might not even appear before the series is over though.

>>281534290 (OP)
>le quirky chungus

>>281536838
Nah, that would rob his death unless he really likes him this much.

Correio from chapter 13, and he is actually a male, I kinda didn't expect it.

Maid

>>281538661
evil maid needs correction

>>281534933
why leave the girl with the big tits behind?!?!

Correio early concept art.

>>281538726
She is a maker, not a fighter. Actually, I wonder if Iron Spirit stays at Dwarf Valley?

Honestly, this doesn't feel like it's mashing the gas pedal to cancellation anymore. It could still end next batch mind you, but I feel like the odds have been lowered slightly. NP by contrast is 100% rushing to the end. He may have gotten an early axe notice that was rescinded later even, that does happen.

I'll miss Sindra, she definitely should have gotten the Iron Spirit. Though this chapter feels kinda ambiguous as to whether or not OTR actually took the Iron Spirit with him, he's not like...actually around at all past mid chapter give or take. We'll see where this goes, I guess.

>>281539074
>Though this chapter feels kinda ambiguous as to whether or not OTR actually took the Iron Spirit with him
It's the sword he was given.

>>281534290 (OP)
Ax status: Postponed.

>>281539074
I can see it:
>Wasting a series with an early training arc again?
>Put the plot in motion

>>281534532
I'm always gonna love the dude who's going around rocking the RPG inventory armory on their back.

fapping to Otr

>>281534933
Was really convinced she was gonna join the team, using the Forge Spirit.

>>281535045
Harald? But that's a BOY'S NAME!

>>281536838
Only if goes really long, and they get an Otr goes to Hel arc. So very, very unlikely.

>>281539514
Perhaps it mistranslated? I believe it is Harriet.

>>281538661
I think the big booba Lady Sleipnir on the left >>281534532 is gonna be a maid themed valkyrie.

>>281538624
Yeah I think that was a stupid reveal

>>281539074
It might be a Dorondororon/Earth child situation, he's "saved" right now

>>281540125
Or MayuMayu. But yeah, I'm not letting my guard down just yet, dodging the first round of axes isn't a safety guarantee by any means. It doesn't hurt though, especially when the magazine is currently loaded up with both axe baits and longer series ending.

>>281534532
KURUMADA!

>>281540413
What does it mean by that?

>>281540125
I hope the sale save this series.

>>281534676
it's a huge step up from most of the place/org names

>>281536287
Darkness is definitely an evil spirit, no doubt about it. Light spirit is shown in the first pages, pretty much yeah.

>>281534532
Eight is too fucking many when the Ice Demon only has 5 arms left, and one was beaten and forced to run.
Massive Jobber Flag alert.

>>281535888
If this manga survives long enough, SHE will definitely return

>>281534895
Why did she take her coat off in the second panel

>>281534933
She probably would’ve made the story worse since she wasn’t going to become an iron warrior, but I still wanted shortstack to join

>>281535888
>>281542858
Funny, I do recall one anon expected Fire Spirit to look like a debonair. It seems like anon will get his wish!
>>278593874
Also, there's another anon who believes it will evolve to muscle mommy, lol!
>>278594007

>>281543048
...good question

>>281543048
>>281543118
She was holding a sword and gave it to Otr.

>>281543208
Top kek you’re right, what looks like a cute sweater is just poor foreshortening

>>281543244
No worries, it happens all the time.

>>281537640
My sis and I are into mythos. Internet was a boon.

>>281543743
Are you Nordic by chance?

>>281543758
No, I am a puny French that live in the North of France.

>>281543809
Ah, okay, my mistake then. I thought you were Nordic since they had knowledge of Norse mythos.

>>281543809
You do remember why Normandie is so named, right?

>>281542588
This way there are like 2 that can betray the team to extend the series if need be.

>>281534676
As opposed to?

>>281534532
Geez... Looks like the axe is very close ....

>>281535888
She could just turn into a regular woman

>>281540261
I never said it was safe, I just meant he's got slightly more room to breathe, ultimately it's up in the air if he can actually manage to course correct and turn things around unlike those series

>>281542588
You can always have one of them get the Rengoku treatment

>>281543048
kek now i see it

>>281545450
I only hope the sale actually save this series.

>>281535045
Thank you for posting. Maybe it can improve.

>>281539026
But she has big tits!

>>281549523
And new women characters will even have bigger tits than sindra.
>>281534532

Honestly Otr is miles better than Red Hood.
The latter half of the series is decent.

I think it is time for the legendary one piece axe man to start visiting these threads again.

>>281540125
Considering how the new chapter of KDG felt it might actually be doing significantly worse

>>281534532
Do I have recency bias in my heart or has basically every battle manga in the last 8 years just sort of gone "we don't have time to build this sort of stuff anymore so here's the big group shot of character designs you might like prior to chapter 20"?

>>281545450
my :> wife...

Otr has no chemistry with his own Flame spirit. It seems like they barely interact outside of battles

>>281551339
otr has no chemistry in general, he's just there

>>281547657
Are they commenting on her erotic body?

>>281551400
He kinda just sits around staring at people

>>281551400
pretty much the same problem as last time

>>281535045
>What are your thoughts on this latest chapter so far?
It continues being an improvement over previous chapters, but revealing Etupirko's identity and teasing the elite good guys feels like Kawaguchi got an axe notice.

>>281539514
Princess(male).

>>281553484
At the same time, revealing the whole 'spirit quest' plot line implies to me that it'll at least survive through the next round of cuts, because it is a level of conflict beyond just "beat the ice dudes."

>>281534532
Anon the loli is the magician

>>281534532
>we want the fgo audience

>>281534290 (OP)
This shit is still going. Doesn't this author get all of his series axed. Is he a nepo baby. How does he keep getting work?

>>281534290 (OP)
let's read this piece of shit

>>281551935
The same panel of Otr looking sideways.
Every. Fucking. Time.

>>281534933
should have gone with them

>>281534532
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, guess third time is the charm

>>281544662
Yeah yeah. I don't live in Normandie though.

Otr and Mega Charizard X.

>>281558143
fucking pinecone for a leg

>>281558143
Shouldn't elusam guy be scyther?

>nue herself not in the sticker
does anybody care about the dude himself?

>>281558464
i don't think anyone read it for nue mc.

>>281535045
Twin tails princess.

Otrsisters it's over

>>281534290 (OP)
Otr bros... this series isn't going anywhere and feels short and flat.
Any ideas why or how they can improve it? Personally, I think the protagonist could very well be a mannequin, given the way he "barely" interacts with the world beyond fighting and giving generic speeches when defeating the bad guy.
I think the group should be bigger, have more original and better powers, and add some drama to spice things up a bit, you know.

>>281555209
3 serializations before axe. Though he should honestly just throw the towel on trying to write himself when drawing better suits him.

>>281537836
Well, don't look at hxh map then.