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Anonymous No.282971830 >>282973792 >>282990312
Otr of the Flame chapter 22
Demigod

https://mangaplus.shueisha.co.jp/viewer/1026967
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Anonymous No.282972365 >>282972650 >>282980219 >>282986050 >>282986456
Oh, that was quick.
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Anonymous No.282972546 >>282972613 >>282972805 >>282973302 >>282973360 >>282973952 >>282973988 >>282975094 >>282976822 >>282980219 >>282999719
Fin~

What are your thoughts on this latest chapter so far?

Is it me, or does his art style seem very clean to read?
Anonymous No.282972613 >>282973016 >>282981057
>>282972546
It honestly looks like it's going to get axed soon. Demon Otr was resolved very quickly and with very cliche lines
Anonymous No.282972650
>>282972365
wtf is going on with Fylgja's face
Anonymous No.282972651
>>282972403
>reattach his arm with magic afterwards
holy shit what a fucking cop out i'm so mad
Anonymous No.282972805 >>282981057
>>282972546
feels like it speedran 20 chapters
guessing it's over soon
Anonymous No.282972850 >>282972982 >>282973111 >>282974196 >>282974583 >>282975104 >>282975721
Does Kawaguchi learn anything from Redhood getting axed?
Anonymous No.282972982
>>282972850
Hope he learns that there's not really a point in getting serialized on WSJ. Hopefully he'll move to J+ or WSM
Anonymous No.282973016 >>282973168 >>282978951 >>282997267
>>282972613
Well, Naruto's first rage mode with Kyuubi also only lasted one chapter. The same goes to Oozaru Goku.
Anonymous No.282973024 >>282973392
>>282972135
So his arm grew back
Anonymous No.282973074 >>282995272
>>282971836
>Fake Demons the second a real one shows up
Anonymous No.282973111
>>282972850
He seriously needs to move to a monthly, he clearly doesn't have the weekly rhythm.
Anonymous No.282973168 >>282973533
>>282973016
Let's hope I'm wrong
Anonymous No.282973214
>>282971836
>>282971878
>>282971922
>>282971970
what an awesome sequence of pages, holy shit
Anonymous No.282973220 >>282978213 >>282978563
Is this shit supposed to be cool or scary? because I find it neither cool nor scary
Anonymous No.282973258
>>282972403
Booba in the distance
Anonymous No.282973302 >>282973476
>>282972546
shit was so cliche
Anonymous No.282973360
>>282972546
They gonna glue his arm back on or what?
Anonymous No.282973392
>>282973024
Nope, it was only temporary.
Anonymous No.282973476 >>282973975 >>282974196
>>282973302
Welcome to a shonen manga, retard.
Anonymous No.282973533
>>282973168
To be honest, I also think the manga might be axed soon. But for me it'll be okay if it lasts at least 50 chapters.
Anonymous No.282973792 >>282973933 >>282975581
>>282971830 (OP)
What's going through his mind here.
Anonymous No.282973850
>>282972213
>Broken text clouds
Nice. Love little tricks like this.
Anonymous No.282973933
>>282973792
>Well, I fucked up
Anonymous No.282973952
>>282972546
I liked it. Very quick but I like edgy transformstions and it had some cool art.

I do think Kawaguchi was probably given the notice to wrap it up, but I'm gonna be optimistic and just see where this heads.
Anonymous No.282973975
>>282973476
mald more
Anonymous No.282973988
>>282972546
Thx mate.
I think it was fine, axe fears aside. Not sure about the idea of fixing his arm that nonchantly. I hope there is a price or something of the sort.
Anonymous No.282974039
>>282972073
Love the way possessed Otr is drawn here
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Anonymous No.282974059
>>282972073
UUUUOOOOOHHHHH SEXY SHOTA SKELETON
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Anonymous No.282974196 >>282978768
>>282972850
He made exactly the same characters as red hood, shota whose entire personaility is being the hero and stoic girl that never changes expression but instead of a giant gorilla is a flat girl, so no he didn't learn anything
>>282973476
All (good) authors try to give it their own personal touch when they use these tropes so even when you've read them dozens of times it can feel somewhat unique about it, what did kawaguchi add to the "demon/berserk form" cliche?
Anonymous No.282974266
>>282972457
Look how happy he is.
Anonymous No.282974583
>>282972850
>Moved characters from the starting as fast as you can.
He learnt that at least but just that, he didn't bother to learn or anything else that was wrong in redhood.
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Anonymous No.282975094
>>282972546
This chapters shows that KAWAGUCHI can draw great things, but somehow he doesn't do it.
Wasted Potential
Anonymous No.282975104
>>282972850
I mean, he learned to fix the pacing.
The rest though...
Anonymous No.282975306
this is the perfect opportunity for OTR to refuse getting his arm reattached. As a lesson and to grow a spine (plus maybe a cool flame-arm on-demand later on)
But I guess it might be too much to ask.
Anonymous No.282975452
>>282972284
>she said the line
Anonymous No.282975581
>>282973792
>fucking shonen MCs and their asspulls
Anonymous No.282975721
>>282972850
Still dived to early into infodumping worldbuilding and power mechanics and a boring training arc killing all hype, flat loli heroine is better than man with tits but her personality still sucks
Anonymous No.282975792
Otr nugget soon
Anonymous No.282975877 >>282976129
POST ALAJOKI
I WANT ALAJOKI FANART
Anonymous No.282976129
>>282975877
Here, chef.
Anonymous No.282976822
>>282972546
>monster form regrows his arm
>it's not there when goping back to normal
Wut?
>>282972248
>>282972284
>>282972320
I bet Rukia-fags are getting PSD from these
Anonymous No.282977609
>>282971922
>>282971970
I like this part.
Anonymous No.282977949
Ort of the yukon.
Anonymous No.282977972
Like I said last week, the monster form is ultimately unimportant, it was just the opportunity to do something cool and slightly edgy. Nice fight sequence this week, if nothing else.

No real indication of OTR getting axed still, at the same time that several other manga are definitely ending within weeks. I don't know how long OTR will run, but it looks like it probably dodged the second axe.
Anonymous No.282978213
>>282973220
It's supposed to be sexy.
Anonymous No.282978403
>>282972320
Didn't she eat two massive stalactites last chap?
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>>282973220
It might work better it Otr himself wasn't a weird Shota, it kinda kills his ability to be cool
Anonymous No.282978768 >>282979538
>>282974196
Grimm had more personality than Etupirko
Anonymous No.282978951
>>282973016
Oozaru Goku isn't a fair comparison since Dragon Ball was the untested follow up to one of Shonen Jump's top 5 biggest series to date at that point, and everyone trusted Toriyama to bring the goods. It was also foreshadowed earlier in the series (with Gohan's death), and Dragon Ball was supposed to end with the Emperor Pilaf arc before its insanely positive reception got Toriyama to continue the series.
Anonymous No.282979538 >>282980180
>>282978768
I like Grimm, but Red Hood was short-lived, and she doesn't develop a relationship with Velous.
Anonymous No.282980180
>>282979538
mommywife magazine. no wonder it got axed then
Anonymous No.282980219 >>282981786 >>282983224
>>282972365
>>282972546

I’m confused, how did he end up shirtless?
Anonymous No.282980250
>demon shota
Hot. Should have been in the first or second chapter. Now it's too late.
Anonymous No.282981057 >>282981627
>>282972613
>>282972805
I don't get that feeling at all, bwo
compared to the insane shit that happens in Sakamoto Days and Baki, what happened in the latest chapters doesn't feel off at all
Anonymous No.282981102
>>282972403
stakesbros... what else should i read
Anonymous No.282981180 >>282981589
is he male or female in that fusion form
Anonymous No.282981589
>>282981180
Yes
Anonymous No.282981627 >>282982131
>>282981057
>compared to the insane shit that happens in Sakamoto Days and Baki
All these comparisons for why Otr wont be axed are so retarded.
>Sakamoto Days
Sakamoto wasn't a 2k seller, and its a comedy manga, Otr is an action/adventure manga.
>Baki
Not a WSJ series.
Anonymous No.282981680
I caught up with this over the last 2 days. It's not terrible but I cant see it lasting.
Anonymous No.282981786
>>282980219
He burnt it off...I guess?
Anonymous No.282982131 >>282982425 >>282982762
>>282981627
>people fight
>IT's a CoMeDy MaNGa
plus Shueisha's suits are so retarded they might be thinking Otr is the second coming of naruto because of that stupid transformation
Anonymous No.282982168 >>282983224
>>282972248
>>282972284
>>282972320
>>282972320
>And people where saying previous chapter she isn't the main love interest.
The heroine calming down a shonen protagonist's demon transformation with her lust pheromones(power of friendship/love) is a staple shonen trope too. Just like sexopirco did here.
Anonymous No.282982425
>>282982131
>IT's a CoMeDy MaNGa
Its not funny but its supposed to be a action/comedy, even though they ran out of jokes and mainly focus on the people fight now.
Anonymous No.282982762
>>282982131
I mean, it's kind of still a comedy manga
>able to reattach arm because the cut was so clean
>sword slices clean through neck, but somehow misses because the molecules didn't connect or some shit
Anonymous No.282983224 >>282984770
>>282982168
literally the Rukia of the series
>>282980219
beats me. he got a sissy getup after transforming in the first chapter too
Anonymous No.282984770 >>282991630
>>282983224
Show me the Orihime and I will agree.
Anonymous No.282984904 >>282985246
Reminder.
We need more Skadi.
Anonymous No.282985246
>>282984904
Hey my kitty pic made it. I was right then and I'm still right now, SEXOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
Anonymous No.282985260
>>282972457
>a second general jobbed
>the 8 heroes or whatever still haven't done anything
Things are about to get nuts.
Anonymous No.282986050
>>282972365
>Super dangerous form that he shouldn't turn into
>Haha I was just kidding bro, he gets hugged once and he turns back to normal
Anonymous No.282986456 >>282988062
>>282972365
This specifically is what makes me think it's probably already dead
Anonymous No.282988062 >>282988370
>>282986456
Why? A bunch of other shonen have had berserk modes like this that got resolved just as fast on intro.
Anonymous No.282988370 >>282988469
>>282988062
If anything, this transformation lasting longer would be a flag for the axe. (I.E, people think Sukuna coming out and 'killing' Yuji in the Detention Arc early on in JJK was because it was close to getting axed.)
It ending pretty quickly makes me think we still got time.
Anonymous No.282988469
>>282988370
Naruto kyuubi mode the first time as well. Hollow Ichigo's first transformation.
Anonymous No.282989312 >>282989372 >>282989400 >>282990352 >>282991630 >>282995224 >>283003233
The wind spirit arc is coming to an end. What do you think of Doadoa as a villain in this arc?
Anonymous No.282989372 >>282989810
>>282989312
Great villain, the best one so far.
Anonymous No.282989400 >>282989810
>>282989312
Easily better than the rest so far by miles, I love a villain who puts his skin in the game quite literally.
Anonymous No.282989810 >>282990071
>>282989372
>>282989400
It does make me wonder if Suruld wasn't doing well with readers. I like Suruld but he was terrible as a villain, at least for me.
Anonymous No.282990071 >>282990195 >>282991138
>>282989810
This fight has been the highest rated and most praised part of the manga among Japanese readers so far. After that comes Otr cutting the giant rock in half and the introduction of the Wind Spirit.
Anonymous No.282990195
>>282990071
>This fight has been the highest rated and most praised part of the manga among Japanese readers so far.
This and that part where Otr gained iron power look pretty awesome. This spread is the reason why Otr got a color page in chapter 18.

I believe the Wind Spirit arc will improve in toc ranking.
Anonymous No.282990312
>>282971830 (OP)
Lets read this shit
Anonymous No.282990352 >>282991147
>>282989312
He's better than whatever the fuck that thing in the latest Ichi chapter is
Anonymous No.282991138 >>282991928
>>282990071
>High rated
>the introduction of the Wind Spirit.
I wonder why?
Anonymous No.282991147 >>282995281
>>282990352
That villain was so lame and gay. What was the last time Ichi had an actual serious villain?
Anonymous No.282991630 >>282996757 >>282997903
>>282984770
the big tittied dwarfette
>>282989312
they changed him mid arc, for the best ofc
Anonymous No.282991928
>>282991138
Yup, I'm glad Kawaguchi is not holding back with the huge milker wind spirit.
Anonymous No.282991979 >>282992068
>>282974089
Artist sauce? I assume it's the same one who made this illust.
Anonymous No.282992068 >>282992205
>>282991979
Well, yes, it's the same artist, the fucking signature is right there. How retarded I am.

I'd still like the sauce, I lost this artist's profile and couldn't find it anymore.
Anonymous No.282992205 >>282992322
>>282992068
here
https://x.com/fccrCRvIM924172/status/1976256327598125194
Anonymous No.282992322 >>282992511
>>282992205
Big thanks
Anonymous No.282992511
>>282992322
no problem.
Anonymous No.282993280
I'd like to know who the editor for Kawaguchi is. Whoever he is, he definitely did a better job as editor than he who must not be named.
Anonymous No.282993963
Waiting for them...
Anonymous No.282995224 >>282995242 >>282997124 >>283001933
>>282989312
a nothing antagonist, the art is good when it comes to impactful moments or expressions, when it comes to action scenes or landscapes, it's unintelligible. I would like to see OTR's / the others goals redefined again, because it seems too vague, the lesser known characters (cowardly book guy/ wind guy, etc) should have more character building scenes, otherwise it'll just be like Wild Strawberry (all the trappings of a shounen without any reader investment)
The villains last lines:
>I got to see your real face, you were smiling
I don't know what he was trying to say at all here, liking war is a virtue for vikings. Furthermore, him doing a self-sacrificial move doesn't really make sense? He was characterized as cowardly, it doesn't fit
Anonymous No.282995242
>>282995224
I would like to see purpose and characterization similar to that from the first chapter, it feels like this sort of thing has been gradually declining since the iron arc, when you don't have a good arc premise and setting like that, the lack of character depth is really felt
Anonymous No.282995272
>>282973074
Fucked around

Found out
Anonymous No.282995281
>>282991147
like 2 chapters ago?
Anonymous No.282995480 >>282995606
Transparent body with visible skeleton is one of my favorite design tropes, I really hope this isn't actually getting axed and this form shows up more, it's hot
Anonymous No.282995606 >>282995616
>>282995480
kinda remind me of his first one-shot manga.

https://mangadex.org/title/ee34b5e5-aa9d-4732-854a-a2454ca89e44/skeleton-bolt
Anonymous No.282995616
>>282995606
https://r-cbs.mangafactory.jp/c16286/c209-24186/
Anonymous No.282996757
>>282991630
>Dwarf
Ha!
Anonymous No.282997124
>>282995224
>I don't know what he was trying to say at all here, liking war is a virtue for vikings.
He was offended by Otr's offer for mercy and saw it as some sort of a moral superiority stance. To prove Otr wrong gave him satisfaction before death, in addition to his personality that likes angering people. As for Otr he isn't above fighting or killing people. But he doesn't want unnecessary bloodshed
>Furthermore, him doing a self-sacrificial move doesn't really make sense? He was characterized as cowardly, it doesn't fit
His methods are cowardly, not his dedication to his conviction. Especially after his whole outlook of life got insulted from his viewpoint.
Anonymous No.282997267
>>282973016
You just named two popular series that had far more freedom to control their pacing
Anonymous No.282997903 >>283000448
>>282991630
As much as I like to see Otr x Sindra happen, Otr x Etupirko is still a safe bet, unfortunately.
Anonymous No.282999719
>>282972546
Thank you for posting.
Anonymous No.283000448
>>282997903
Inb4 some Otr X Sindra doujin comes next month in DLSite
Anonymous No.283001933
>>282995224
I think he meant Otr trying to be a moral fag when a couple of seconds prior he was he was going full demon
Anonymous No.283002684
What if Khuteinn doesn't join the main cast and goes off for his own training journey like Otr first did?
Anonymous No.283003140 >>283003681
This guy
Anonymous No.283003233
>>282989312
all the 4 male villains so far look exactly the same, are they cloned or what?
Anonymous No.283003681
>>283003140
The chances of editor san allowing Kawaguchi to give Otr a crab transformation are low, but not zero.