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Anonymous No.283488298 [Report] >>283489937 >>283490878 >>283492177 >>283495065 >>283500722
Gonron Egg chapter 2
Anonymous No.283488342 [Report] >>283488913 >>283494907
Anonymous No.283488376 [Report] >>283488901 >>283500635
Anonymous No.283488393 [Report] >>283500635 >>283500888
Anonymous No.283488413 [Report] >>283500808
Anonymous No.283488435 [Report] >>283488610 >>283490093 >>283500808
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Anonymous No.283488485 [Report] >>283488574 >>283488610 >>283491580
Anonymous No.283488508 [Report] >>283488610 >>283489053 >>283491580 >>283497260
Anonymous No.283488530 [Report] >>283495065
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Anonymous No.283488574 [Report]
>>283488485
Reminds me of that one demon in 7DS
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Anonymous No.283488593 [Report]
I really like the egg. You think he's gonna look like his dad when he hatches?
Anonymous No.283488610 [Report] >>283488723 >>283493659
>>283488435
>>283488485
>>283488508
>boy
RAPE
RAPERAPERAPERAPERAPERAPERAPERAPE
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Anonymous No.283488620 [Report] >>283488773 >>283488949 >>283489426 >>283489501 >>283491052 >>283502717
Done, and I don't think I'm willing to dump chapter 3 since I was never a fan of this series. Someone has to take over that.
Anonymous No.283488723 [Report] >>283488894 >>283489137 >>283497045
>>283488610
I'm guessing pic related is going to be a man too, then
Anonymous No.283488773 [Report]
>>283488620
Holy kino, thanks for the dump and see you next week OP
Anonymous No.283488894 [Report]
>>283488723
It's weird that we're 2 chapters in and still haven't seen the other character from the preview
Anonymous No.283488901 [Report] >>283494170
>>283488376
Its sole means of expressing emotions being an eye makes it kinda hard to differentiate if it's a happy eye or an evil one when he talks about life essence on the left there.
Anonymous No.283488913 [Report] >>283490191 >>283494170
>>283488342
I feel this egg will be revealed to be far more evil than the other monster, feels it is way to genocide happy for just a prince trying to regain his crown.
Anonymous No.283488949 [Report]
>>283488620
U19! U19! U19!
Anonymous No.283489053 [Report]
>>283488508
For an stillborn, he sure acts all high and mighty when talking about humans.
Anonymous No.283489137 [Report]
>>283488723
>MCs are a muscle femboy and a trap
300 chapters for Gonron Egg
Anonymous No.283489426 [Report] >>283489475
>>283488620
>saves boy
>doesn't take him as a sex slave
The fuck? Dropped
Anonymous No.283489475 [Report] >>283489516
>>283489426
No everyone is gay like you anon
Anonymous No.283489501 [Report] >>283489791
>>283488620
>genuinely nothing happened, and we are in no different position from the end of ch1

how fucking amateur is this author?
Anonymous No.283489516 [Report]
>>283489475
I refuse to believe that
Anonymous No.283489674 [Report] >>283489722
this shit is going to be axed ch 5
Anonymous No.283489722 [Report]
>>283489674
retard
Anonymous No.283489791 [Report]
>>283489501
>He expects some faggot who makes his main character to look like cuckmin to be good.
Ngmi
Anonymous No.283489834 [Report]
i like the art but it is too generic of a story
Anonymous No.283489937 [Report] >>283494449
>>283488298 (OP)
the only saving grace this series could have is that when it ends it would be kino to have the MC fight whatever comes out of the egg and kill it
Anonymous No.283490093 [Report]
>>283488435
Some times I wonder if the author is gay.
Anonymous No.283490191 [Report]
>>283488913
It is likely that the royal family ate the commoners
Anonymous No.283490204 [Report]
I really want to have hope for this one but it'll probably be another axe. It feels a little stiff and like it only took a second to read. Hopefully it can find its footing in the next few chapters
Anonymous No.283490287 [Report]
Was this guy an assistant for Nakaba?
Anonymous No.283490878 [Report]
>>283488298 (OP)
honestly I liked this episode more than the first. But it's still pretty mediocre.
Anonymous No.283491024 [Report]
>Thread is already dead
Gonron is already getting U19
Anonymous No.283491052 [Report]
>>283488620
>Manga is so bad that not even the dumper likes it
Grim
Anonymous No.283491055 [Report]
>Gonron already has a schizo
based egg
Anonymous No.283491130 [Report] >>283491288 >>283492055 >>283494279
Kaedegami died for this
Anonymous No.283491288 [Report]
>>283491130
>gets axed by a manga about a shota and magic egg
>ch 2 has a trap
fuck the fag editors, idk how Nue wasn't axed too
Anonymous No.283491580 [Report] >>283492135 >>283494419
>>283488508
>>283488485
>draw a girl
>editor: uuuuh you cant show a girl with a slave collar doing a dogeza
>"ok "
>calls it a boy
based?
Anonymous No.283492055 [Report]
>>283491130
good
Anonymous No.283492135 [Report]
>>283491580
He’s going to cut his hair and marry the mc in the last chapter
Anonymous No.283492177 [Report]
>>283488298 (OP)
>gonorrea egg
kek lmao
Anonymous No.283493003 [Report]
this crap is getting axed when they need openings for another batch
Anonymous No.283493194 [Report]
I hope the mindbroken boy sticks with them. He and the cool designs of the monsters are the only things I've liked of the manga so far.
Anonymous No.283493659 [Report]
>>283488610
I get the feeling that this kid gets this reaction a lot, and that's why he wants to die so badly.
Anonymous No.283494170 [Report]
>>283488901
>>283488913
I feel like that's the intention or at the very least, the Egg is not telling him the full truth
Anonymous No.283494279 [Report]
>>283491130
Don't worry they will soon be together.
Anonymous No.283494327 [Report] >>283501107
manga is apparently about eating and humiliation
Anonymous No.283494392 [Report]
I don't like the draw a woman call it a man, it's so extreme I thought for a couple pages they might have fucked up some translation somewhere
it's also a bit weirdly paced, we just jumped past him consuming the hearts of his enemies and i probably would have dwelled on the second consumption slightly more too
Anonymous No.283494419 [Report]
>>283491580
Yeah I could totally see it being that
Anonymous No.283494449 [Report]
>>283489937
Nah, but along similar lines I really want the protag of shinobi undercover to turn against the state eventually
Anonymous No.283494535 [Report] >>283498284
this feels like it's by a precocious 11 year old
Anonymous No.283494907 [Report]
>>283488342
Teogonia already did this in a better way
Anonymous No.283495065 [Report] >>283497304 >>283501756 >>283506500
>>283488530
Man this is held back by the trash transformation. Just look at the cover >>283488298 (OP)
the simpler spiked up hair fangs and claw gauntlets are much better than that Digimegaloution with the dragon head holding a tiny knife
Anonymous No.283497045 [Report] >>283506376
>>283488723
MYSTERY NIGGA for chapter 3? seriously, when is the black haired character gonna show up
Anonymous No.283497103 [Report]
Something must have gonron at Shuueisha for them to serialise this manga.
Anonymous No.283497260 [Report]
>>283488508
>
Anonymous No.283497304 [Report]
>>283495065
It's not even that it's bad imo it's just to much for what is essentially his starting transformation
Anonymous No.283497378 [Report]
>tfw no mindbroken girly boy sex slave to violate every night
Anonymous No.283497452 [Report]
Yup, it's over.
Anonymous No.283498284 [Report]
>>283494535
then why no sexy almost naked young girls
Anonymous No.283500635 [Report]
>>283488376
>>283488393
What a shame this series won't last long enough to properly set this egg up as a total rat bastard because that genuinely would be a fun reveal, if nothing else.
Anonymous No.283500706 [Report]
>goron egg
I didn’t know they laid eggs
Anonymous No.283500722 [Report]
>>283488298 (OP)
Thanks for dumping
Anonymous No.283500808 [Report]
>>283488413
CUTE
>>283488435
>boy
AIIEEEEEEEEEEE
Anonymous No.283500859 [Report]
Eggbros, are we gonna get mogs by Mage Next Door...?
Anonymous No.283500888 [Report]
>>283488393
Yeah, that egg is 100% evil
Anonymous No.283501098 [Report] >>283504839
I'm really baffled this got greenlit at all. I'm not one to be so negative but this is garbage. Just speechless.
Anonymous No.283501107 [Report]
>>283494327
Yes
Anonymous No.283501756 [Report] >>283505904
>>283495065
Yeah the transformation screams "overdesigned". That dragon head for a hand already detracts from the overall look with its sheer size, but then having it hold a sword as its means of attack should have been vetoed by the editor the moment he saw it. It not even a single being that he wears as some sort of fusion armor. There's this lower jaw he wears as a neck guard (waiting to poke his eyes out if he bends his head down the wrong way). I guess at least his hair doesn't look shit when he's in transformation mode.

As for the chapter, it was ok-ish though felt very by the numbers. A typical MOTW type story to get the hero started on his journey, before some kind of main plot kicks in. Problem is, I don't feel this series will have enough opportunity to actually reach the point of "main plot starts". At least it had the good sense to not spend multiple chapters on an early cannon fodder fight (looking at you, Red Hood). Another thing I'm not sure about is whether I'm supposed to be suspicious about the egg's good intentions or whether the author simply fumbled its characterization.
Anonymous No.283502388 [Report]
What killed the hype
Anonymous No.283502717 [Report] >>283502783 >>283502852 >>283502915 >>283504887
>>283488620
Bets folks, 16,17,18,19, mid 20s, mid 30s, or somehow 100+ chapters. Got my finger on 17, this shit's rough as hell.
Anonymous No.283502783 [Report]
>>283502717
Mid 20s. It will dodge the next round or two
Anonymous No.283502852 [Report]
>>283502717
I put my money on 35 chapters
Anonymous No.283502915 [Report]
>>283502717
This shit is getting aborted for dure, around 10 imo
Anonymous No.283503497 [Report] >>283504487
>a trap
Just add a cute female and the Sasuke fujobait, kids don't like tranny shit
Anonymous No.283504487 [Report]
>>283503497
you don't have any kids
Anonymous No.283504839 [Report]
>>283501098
Yeah like rereading this a couple of times it's baffling this happened in a single chapter
Anonymous No.283504887 [Report]
>>283502717
If Otr continues to tank it MIGHT skirt the first round
Anonymous No.283505904 [Report]
>>283501756
Yeah kids like mcs who fight with their bodies, swords are for secondary or Nakamas
Also you transformed your body, the fuck you need a sword for
Anonymous No.283506376 [Report]
>>283497045
i have flashbacks to Ankoku Delta where the cover character didn't appear until like 20 chapters in
Anonymous No.283506500 [Report]
>>283495065
the clawe gauntlets remind me of Vexx