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Anonymous No.283653382 [Report] >>283653394 >>283655117 >>283656215 >>283661130 >>283666869 >>283674621 >>283675417
Hero Girl And Demon Lord Call It Quits
Anonymous No.283653394 [Report] >>283653423
>>283653382 (OP)
Anonymous No.283653423 [Report] >>283653466
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Anonymous No.283653466 [Report] >>283653494 >>283675937
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Anonymous No.283653494 [Report] >>283653523 >>283677327
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Anonymous No.283653523 [Report] >>283653564 >>283653609
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Anonymous No.283653537 [Report]
PV: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KQtmM4b7iHc
Anonymous No.283653564 [Report] >>283653603
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Anonymous No.283653592 [Report]
Its okay
Better than half of Jump, that's for sure
Anonymous No.283653603 [Report] >>283653642 >>283653656
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Anonymous No.283653609 [Report]
>>283653523
Imagine freeloading at a JK's apartment
How long until our hero is pregnant?
Anonymous No.283653642 [Report] >>283653674
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Anonymous No.283653650 [Report]
The one shot was way better, this is like a AI version with different styles.
Anonymous No.283653656 [Report]
>>283653603
>she accepted
They're engaged now
Anonymous No.283653674 [Report] >>283653712 >>283654633
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Anonymous No.283653771 [Report] >>283655209
Not sure if it’s something to do with the translation, but this feels really lame. It’s not like any idea is ‘that’ unique, but this feels like a pretty basic version of something that already exists.
Anonymous No.283653776 [Report] >>283653813 >>283655236
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Anonymous No.283653784 [Report]
This shit read like Shounen Sunday manga
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Anonymous No.283653986 [Report] >>283654014
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Anonymous No.283654057 [Report]
This shit make me miss Double Art
Anonymous No.283654080 [Report] >>283654113 >>283654494 >>283656098
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Anonymous No.283654113 [Report] >>283654145 >>283654494 >>283656370
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Anonymous No.283654359 [Report] >>283654399
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Anonymous No.283654399 [Report] >>283654433
>>283654359
desu, i only storytime this because of the alien girl
Anonymous No.283654433 [Report] >>283654475
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Anonymous No.283654468 [Report]
>>283653813
>please clap
Anonymous No.283654475 [Report] >>283654506
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Anonymous No.283654494 [Report] >>283654598
>>283654080
>>283654113
Dropped, before this page I was thinking it seemed better than the pretty meh one shot and I thought they were gonna just discard the isekai adjacent stuff, but then they made it worse.

Even if they hadn't done this I would still probably not have much hype for it, just better than the trash I was expecting, but I got trash indeed
Anonymous No.283654506 [Report] >>283654543 >>283656391 >>283658650
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Anonymous No.283654543 [Report] >>283654572
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Anonymous No.283654572 [Report] >>283654601
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Anonymous No.283654598 [Report]
>>283654494
Maybe it will shadow drop after that
I dont think status window will be prevalent if your manga is either battle shounen, or SoL
Anonymous No.283654601 [Report] >>283654630
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Anonymous No.283654630 [Report] >>283654659
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Anonymous No.283654633 [Report] >>283659505
>>283653674
What manga is he reading?
Anonymous No.283654659 [Report] >>283654689
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Anonymous No.283654689 [Report] >>283654721 >>283654927 >>283655420 >>283655823
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Anonymous No.283654696 [Report]
>>283654014
>>283654045
Need the semi-official H spin-off where they have lovey dovey sex in between those panel moments.
Anonymous No.283654721 [Report] >>283654750
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Anonymous No.283654750 [Report] >>283654787 >>283656199 >>283658540
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Anonymous No.283654787 [Report] >>283654822
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Anonymous No.283654884 [Report] >>283654926
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Anonymous No.283654926 [Report] >>283654959
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Anonymous No.283654927 [Report]
>>283654689
The doujins write themselves. This series will survive because of Nippon cuck culture while actual KINO like Otr or Gonron gets axed.
Anonymous No.283654933 [Report]
>>283653919
>Is that a sword in your pocket or are you just happy to see me?
Anonymous No.283654959 [Report] >>283654991
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Anonymous No.283654991 [Report] >>283655015
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Anonymous No.283655015 [Report] >>283655045
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Anonymous No.283655069 [Report] >>283655097
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Anonymous No.283655097 [Report] >>283655111 >>283655123 >>283655238 >>283655477 >>283655813 >>283655938 >>283656458 >>283656823 >>283657258 >>283658653 >>283659756 >>283663158 >>283665768 >>283666916 >>283667003 >>283668232 >>283674003 >>283674317 >>283674621
>>283655069
And done
Rate the 1st chapter
Anonymous No.283655111 [Report]
>>283655097
I thought it was pretty good desu
Anonymous No.283655117 [Report] >>283655238 >>283655813
>>283653382 (OP)
Now the whole batch had been out
ITs time to vote which one is the winner
https://strawpoll.com/7rnzVA8e3nO
Anonymous No.283655123 [Report]
>>283655097
Some chuckles, about a 6 or 7
Anonymous No.283655209 [Report] >>283655228
>>283653771
It's a hentai artist no shit
Anonymous No.283655228 [Report]
>>283655209
>hentai artist no shit
N-name
Anonymous No.283655236 [Report] >>283658423
>>283653776
What? But why would anyone in a cool fantasy setting EVER want to live like a normal person! Wages! And boring, monotonous Japan!
Anonymous No.283655238 [Report] >>283655434
>>283655097
Cute, but I don't see it lasting too long. It feels like it only works as a one shot.
>>283655117
Mage is definitely the strongest, but the art might fail it. It's nothing special, very cookie cutter Gintama type.
Anonymous No.283655420 [Report]
>>283654689
>girl os supposed to be really strong
>only battle in chapter one is getting whupped
>demon lord is ridiculously strong, got free reins to freeload and has literally given the hero the means to kill him since she never had it to begin with
>he probably didn't even do anything evil too
I'm tired boss. At least Maou-sama had some bite
Anonymous No.283655434 [Report]
>>283655238
yeah, i feel like there are nothing to look after this chapter
Even this one read like OS
Anonymous No.283655477 [Report]
>>283655097
Boring premise and it was predictable, but was an easy read. I want to see how the next few chapters go, hopefully it's not more of the same
Anonymous No.283655813 [Report]
>>283655097
wow, that was bad
>>283655117
none of them are any amazing, but least Mage has potential and Egg...is tolerable? It has a cute monster villain now?
But this is just plain generic and writing is pretty bad. They spend a third of the chapter just sitting in the apartment.
Anonymous No.283655823 [Report] >>283656490
>>283654689
An egg just left the ovaries
Anonymous No.283655938 [Report]
>>283655097
Cute chapter. I don't think this series should be in the WSJ because it doesn't fit.
Anonymous No.283655940 [Report]
Well, all i can say is
This one look good compare to the rest of batch
Anonymous No.283656098 [Report]
>>283654080
It's native isekai!
Anonymous No.283656199 [Report]
>>283654750
If obviously evil alien best friend is gone I will be dropping this story.
Anonymous No.283656215 [Report]
>>283653382 (OP)
Slop. This is just boring and bad. There's no soul. No heart. No message.
Anonymous No.283656237 [Report]
>>283653744
>raises the stuffed animal's hand
> >_<
cute desu
Anonymous No.283656370 [Report]
>>283654113
>leveling up is that easy
How did she not win already? Though maybe the pressure being off because her duty is done makes it easier.
Anonymous No.283656391 [Report]
>>283654506
kek
Anonymous No.283656437 [Report]
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>>283654213
almost no buildup
Anonymous No.283656458 [Report]
>>283655097
Cute/10. As long as it doesn't go full retard I'll keep reading it, not everything needs to be groundbreaking and fun things are fun. Surprised that it's in WSJ because now I'm expecting 2-3 volumes then cancellation, Jump doesn't feel like the right magazine for this.
Anonymous No.283656490 [Report]
>>283655823
Everytime that level up sound appears it means she started to ovulate. That made the chapter slightly more fun
Anonymous No.283656627 [Report]
>>283653919
>she doesnt want a dimensional subspace in her pockets
is she retarded?
Anonymous No.283656823 [Report]
>>283655097
Meh. Felt like it threw stuff together without trying to make it coherent. Made it harder to get into. And the rest wasn't fun or cool enough to let it slide.
Anonymous No.283657258 [Report]
>>283655097
5/10
Its mediorce
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Anonymous No.283658423 [Report]
>>283655236
Think for literally a second there anon. Being a hero is worse than being a wagie. It's a stressful, dangerous, heavily physical work. Nobody pays you and you have no days off.
Anonymous No.283658540 [Report]
>>283654750
>I'll exclude the aliens from the rewind
Such a DAMN WASTE. It would be interesting if she had to somehow stop her alien evil friend from starting the invasion, even just by appealing to her heart or whatever.
But I guess our demon lord can just literally erase all threats out of existence.
Anonymous No.283658585 [Report] >>283660127
this feels like a shoujo series. the demon lord feels like a boyfriend type character
Anonymous No.283658650 [Report]
>>283654506
Demon lord's got a good sesnse of humor. I like him.
Anonymous No.283658653 [Report] >>283667815
>>283655097
6/10
Demon lord is too dark, he should've been less tanned in his human form. Not sure if this is going to go as a monster of the week thing or just a romcom
Anonymous No.283659505 [Report] >>283660127
>>283654633
This week's Jump issue.
Anonymous No.283659756 [Report]
>>283655097
Meh. Shoujobait with mid comedy.
Don't care.
Anonymous No.283660107 [Report]
A thread died for this shit
Anonymous No.283660127 [Report]
>>283658585
>>283659505
Mangaka is female after all. Weekly Shoujo Jump
Anonymous No.283660476 [Report]
easily the best 1st chapter of the new batch
Anonymous No.283661130 [Report] >>283661309
>>283653382 (OP)
>not wearing panties
Anonymous No.283661193 [Report] >>283661382
>>283653841
why would they ostracize the hero
Anonymous No.283661309 [Report]
>>283661130
She was always prepared to fight the Demon Lord, even in bed.
Anonymous No.283661382 [Report]
>>283653841
>>283661193
>Sorry Hero, but you are kicked out of the classroom
Too bad the Demon Lord is the shoelacer of the couple
Anonymous No.283661467 [Report] >>283663616
>>283653813
>Asuka Kagurazaka
Where did I hear this name before?
Anonymous No.283662029 [Report]
It's neat, I liked it.
Anonymous No.283662271 [Report] >>283672337
lol
Anonymous No.283663158 [Report]
>>283655097
Bad. Just a group of tropes with no narrative depth. They may as well have just said the words "What is the hero and the demon lord lived a normal life together" and let me imagine it
I still smiled but without an upset I don't think I will read any more of this
Anonymous No.283663592 [Report]
one shot was better, demon king looked a million times better with long hair
Anonymous No.283663616 [Report]
>>283661467
Asuna Kagurazaka
Anonymous No.283665768 [Report]
>>283655097
Demon Lord is too strong. Wasted opportunity with the alien girl and rewind.
Kinda cute otherwise.
Anonymous No.283666589 [Report]
Western normlafaggots status?
Anonymous No.283666869 [Report]
>>283653382 (OP)
Why he dress like a bitch?
Anonymous No.283666916 [Report]
>>283655097
Romcom but the comedy part doesn't work, don't feel like checking out next chapter either boring world building
Anonymous No.283667003 [Report]
>>283655097
U19
Anonymous No.283667194 [Report]
Not only this shit is Isekai but a fucking native Isekai to boot
Anonymous No.283667249 [Report] >>283667578 >>283668727
When will the fuck
Anonymous No.283667578 [Report]
>>283667249
Raucous sex scene in chapter 2 or we riot
Anonymous No.283667815 [Report]
>>283658653
The dark skin is fine. Him being le stoic OP but silly otaku demon lord is boring
Anonymous No.283668232 [Report]
>>283655097
Should have been in Jump+ instead. Better than Blue Box at least.
Anonymous No.283668727 [Report] >>283671119 >>283676285
>>283667249
When the alien friend shows up to try her invasion again and drops in on the demon lord pounding hero ass while a re run of Naruto plays in the back ground
Anonymous No.283671119 [Report]
>>283668727
Overused trope
Anonymous No.283672337 [Report]
>>283662271
heh
Anonymous No.283674003 [Report]
>>283655097
Thank you for posting. I rate it cute out of 10.
Anonymous No.283674075 [Report]
There is a non zero chance they will hook up.
Anonymous No.283674317 [Report]
>>283655097
I liked it, but I'm not convinced it'll work as a full manga yet.
Anonymous No.283674621 [Report]
>>283653382 (OP)
>>283655097
Otr is finished
Anonymous No.283675417 [Report]
>>283653382 (OP)
What's this?
Hataraku Maou: Shoujo Edition?
Anonymous No.283675937 [Report]
>>283653466
isnt this just Maoyuu Maou Yuusha but worse.
Anonymous No.283676285 [Report]
>>283668727
I hope she's accordioning in the anime
Anonymous No.283677327 [Report]
>>283653494
He's not wrong