Ideas on how to make character in my Web comic suffer - /adv/ (#33334730) [Archived: 1014 hours ago]

Anonymous
7/8/2025, 7:23:35 PM No.33334730
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l created this character called Jack (pic rel) as the protagonist of a comic I am working on. I want him to experience suffering and trauma in the comic.

My current ideas are:

Having him get whipped

Having him get waterboarded

Having him be completely naked in front of loads of girls

What do you think of these ideas I have so far?
Replies: >>33335112 >>33336071 >>33337700
Anonymous
7/8/2025, 8:56:12 PM No.33335112
>>33334730 (OP)
>I want him to experience suffering and trauma in the comic.
Why? How exactly does this advance the story or develop his character?
Anonymous
7/9/2025, 12:15:06 AM No.33336071
>>33334730 (OP)
You state you want him to go under suffering and trauma, then go on to list methods of torture. They're not the same...
Anonymous
7/9/2025, 5:46:58 AM No.33337439
i asked my ex who has a gore fetish. he says jack needs more psychological damage. "he's too cute break his mind". subject him to constant stress in his environment
Anonymous
7/9/2025, 6:31:36 AM No.33337700
>>33334730 (OP)
Guy looks like a faggot so its going to be hard to give him trauma.
>Having him get whipped
Hes into that shit or can tolerate it.
>Having him get waterboarded
best it can do to him its give him ptsd
>Having him be completely naked in front of loads of girls
He's not ashamed of himself. And the girls will fall in love with him.

I personally suggest giving him child trauma like an negligent/abusive father or a mother who diddled him. Perhaps he lost his parents and ended up in the wrong home. He's being blackmailed. Secretly gay. Terminal illness. Aids. Secretly a sociopath who gets off of torturing people a la Johan. Perhaps he lost his genitals like juuzou.