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Anonymous No.937978634 >>937978703 >>937979068 >>937981740 >>937981848 >>937982799 >>937984798 >>937986463
help i wanna write smut but i can't, i'm scared i'm gonna write boner killing stupid shit but i wanna bring a fantasy to life ffs
not asking in /lit/ because that's a scawy boawd with smart people and i'm not smart i'm horny
i have the basic idea down i've even got a skeleton for the story because i'd just be adapting a bomb ass chat i had on janitor ai into actual legible writing with pacing and all instead of just
>*i fuck her*
>*i fuck her realy hard*
>*i cume*
>next day
>*i fuc
basically i'm just asking for advice i guess and maybe general ways to get into the mood to write
Anonymous No.937978703
>>937978634 (OP)
Just sit down and do it.
Anonymous No.937979068
>>937978634 (OP)
Reading = Eating
Thinking = Digestion
Writing = Exercising

Do it on a consistent schedule & you'll get good.

Read Elements of Style & On Writing
Anonymous No.937981740 >>937982561
>>937978634 (OP)
What's the general plot? What's driving the sex scenes? It's not necessarily the actual "The penis goes in the pussy" part of smut that actually makes it worth reading. You have to set the mood and make sure the characters act like they're turned on and working themselves up to fuck.
Anonymous No.937981848 >>937981944 >>937982561
>>937978634 (OP)
I totally relate! In addition to the problem I'm not a very gender fluid person so writing from the perspective of the opposite sex always seemed to me to be an insurmountable obstacle. Have you ever felt like writing fiction for another dude to masterbate to would make you at least partially gay?
Anonymous No.937981944
>>937981848
That's when you call in some help from the opposite sex. AO3 has tons of fujos who'd probably jump at the chance to help critique or write smut.
Anonymous No.937982561 >>937984483
>>937981740
It's a furfag noncon fic, mc is supposed to be some sort of mix of a violent incel and a dark triad kinda guy, he gets with a cis girl and an enby afab and I really wanna emphasize the enby being completely oblivious to all the fucked up shit (getting knocked up in their sleep, their friend being degraded, etc)
>>937981848
Probably a little but I already am partially gay so lel, also it's more for me to reread and jork it, but also share it in case anyone wants it
Anonymous No.937982799 >>937984668
>>937978634 (OP)
Describe the sex. Be graphic. You are being held back by the last of your prudeness. Read it afterwards but not after you jackoff; your reptile mind evacuates all sexual thought once the deed is done and you need to be in the mindset of the horny reader.
Anonymous No.937984483 >>937984668
>>937982561
you're allowed to be scared and have doubts and all those things.
Anonymous No.937984668
>>937984483
?? Abt wot m8?
>>937982799
Aye aye cap'n, nice dubs
Anonymous No.937984798 >>937985232
>>937978634 (OP)
You can make it good later, it just has to exist first.
I started writing a cyberpunk fanfic in march and I've had a lot of fun with it. Sure, it's cringy at times, but I'm telling the story I want to tell and I feel I've learned a lot from the attempt.
Imitation sincerest form of flattery, so find somebody that writes smut you enjoy and then draw inspiration from it.
Ask yourself questions as you read it. Stuff like, how did these two characters meet? Why do I as a reader care about them? What exactly was written that gives me an erection?
Anonymous No.937985232
>>937984798
Oh that imitation bit will be useful, there's one writer I rrreally like so I'll take some inspo from em and all their sexo
Also yeahhh I'll try to have fun, thx anon
Anonymous No.937986463
>>937978634 (OP)
maybe spice things up by fucking her really hard in ass and cume