>>148909525B-, I didn't hate it, but I have my qualms which I will now list.
>Secret IdentityThe Moon Troopers having a secret identity makes so little sense. They aren't fighting criminals, they aren't throwing anybody in prison who would then break out. They're fighting Kaiju that they just fucking murder and that's it. There's no retribution from the (seemingly mindless) monsters coming, you're literally backed by the government (who already know your identity), why aren't you public with it? Only way I can see them taking it is "Moon Computer said so to isolate them from their peers for the experiment." but that's just writing the story for him.
>Plan to Uncover Secret IdentitiesLike the anon above me said, it would be quite literally illegal to publish their identities. If we're going with them being government-protected, then at best you're looking at dumping it anonymously online. Through a publication? Egged on by her editor? What the FUCK are you on about, that place gets shutdown in an hour from the scandal.
>Last FightI didn't hate Maise taking control for her plan, but Daichi should've 100% been controlling the big mech. From both a standpoint of them coming to understand each other (and share that responsibility) and the standpoint of he's the only one who's probably seen the fucking thing even fused since Maise already fucked it up once. He should've been in control and calling the shots with some nicer tone or something. That was a missed character moment in my mind.
But otherwise, yeah, it was serviceable. The civvie friends get way too much of a backseat outside of mystery meat crush who has the B plot but that's on them shoving as much into the book as they could, so I get it. Thanks for the storytime, OP and good on Matt for making something OK.