Hi Co can you rate my character pls?

>>149037453 (OP)
There are a number of elements competing for attention without harmonizing into a whole here.

>>149037453 (OP)
I give her a 4head outta 5.

>>149037453 (OP)
maisie williams?

>>149037484
Hmm, you mean there’s too much going on?

>>149037557
There's no sense of harmony. Take an idea then throw a contradiction into it so people both know what the character is and that there's more to her than meets the eye. No vitiligo, no eyepatch, no mole, something in her character. Dress her accordingly.

>>149037610
Is she a heroine? An antagonist? A best friend? Is it immediately obvious from her appearance? If not, refine and redesign.

>>149037642
How would a best friend be immediately obvious

>>149037642
This is the line up

>>149037680
are these people mutants or australian or something.

>>149037695
Australian

give her a longer nose

>>149037453 (OP)
Not the strongest design since I can't get a good reading on what her personality might be from just looking at her. The acne and the tag sticking out of her booty shorts are a nice attempt at trying to add character tho

>>149037453 (OP)
Looks like shit and will get 10 million pornographic drawings, likes and retweets on Xitter

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
>>149037718
state that she is 51% white and its sold.

>>149037555
Hmm

>>149037680
Nigga looks zesty

>>149037680
Truth be told. I dig the blonde the most and that’s mostly because she has a chubby gut.

>>149039341
Thanks

>>149039493
Welcome. Admittedly I’m a sucker for that sort of thing so I’m just a bit biased here. Would be interested to see more of her if you happened to draw anything else involving her.

>>149039537
I can draw her getting banged up the ass

I`ll be expected to see some kind of animated short in the near future to see how these designs work before I judge.

>>149039559
I mean, you're the artist/creator of her. If that's what you wanna draw than go for it.

>>149037453 (OP)
pic related is better designed

>>149037453 (OP)
plappable

>>149039559
I wanna see her drinking an entire keg of beer

>>149037680
You got a working title for this concept? I'm def interested now, wasn't expecting a full cast lineup already

>>149037453 (OP)
Funny design.

>>149037453 (OP)
can you rate mine? she's a cute goth girl addicted to have sex with shy white male nerds

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
Fun OCs, I'd watch a cartoon with them. Far more interesting than what Hollywood allows in adult cartoons these days

>>149037680
Looks like something from Smiling friends. I'd make the girls more grotesque.

>>149037680
that's quite a distint artstyle. how do you make so many designs?

>>149041507
Not the OP in question. But how would you make them more gross exactly?

>>149041544
Yes more like Ren and Stimpy style. Girls looks not gross enough compared to the males and obviously not pretty enough to justify a lack of more gross features

>>149037453 (OP)
I like it

>>149037680
Nobody wants to look at ugly characters

>>149042215
You can do ugly on purpose but here should be a stylistic hook. Good example is a grotesque but hilarious designs. But again this is should be to represent something like a zany situations

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
Would you like a show on Adult Swim that no one will watch and only point to as to why the block has fallen into disrepute?

>>149037453 (OP)
This character is not communicating any specific sense of personality. It seems like you started from a place of “what should I draw” as opposed to thinking about how the character should make you feel or what they’re about. As such, it feels like you went directly into details with specific proportions and body parts instead of letting the expressivity of more basic shapes and lines guide your decisions. I’d probably start from simplified shapes first (like max of 3 ellipses and/or blocks connected by lines) and put something together that can “feel” right in a variety of poses. Then drill down into specifics from there.

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
Bro think he Meat Canyon.

>>149037453 (OP)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mD_N2bTGXEs

>>149042874
You said it better than I did.

>>149037680
I think you could lean a touch more into classic archetypes to help better communicate what these characters are about. There are some cool details about these characters that make them interesting, but the underlying shapes that make up their constitution could use some work.

>>149037680
Completely doable for an adult swim or Netflix type show. Not bad

>>149042874
>>149042897
>>149037484
She looks like a lower class kind of badass girl. Not like a Mary Sue or anything but one of those back talking can-take-a-joke poorer young adult women (who fucks) in a comedy about neighbors living on a block. That’s what this communicates to me, a bunch of fairly happy sort of beaten up people having little episodes on their goofy cheap-ass suburb block. These guys might live in Detroit

>>149037680
I like them all but the black guy's long ass face stands out as a little too ugly. I think the last guy is uglier but it's a more unique head shape compared to the black guy. But overall very cool designs.

>>149043036
Thanks

>>149043036
The black guy is clearly a coy and comfortable closeted homosexual

>>149037680
These all feel like side characters, if that makes sense. None of them give leading man to me.

>>149037453 (OP)
Nice ass, uggo head, but seeing these other freaks >>149037680, i'd say she came out alright. Chimp head dude is also great

>>149037680
Cool artstyle, I can already hear the bogan accents
>>149038394
A lot of pure anglos look like that

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
Why does she look like Jimmy Neutron?

>>149037453 (OP)
She looks like she smells, but she also looks like she gives good head and loves cocks of all shapes and sizes.

>>149043963
Nah she likes hairy white guys with big dicks

>>149037680
This is competing with Big Mouth for ugliest character design

>>149039787
that side view forehead kills it for me.

>>149037680
That guy on the far right looks interesting. Like what's his story? What with that tattoo and how did he lose his arm? please don't pull a Marvel say he lost his arm because he stuck it out of a bus as a kid or something

>>149044305
That's one of the best parts though

>>149037453 (OP)
>can you rape my character pls?
If it's consensual.

>>149037453 (OP)
>>149037680
/co/ doesn't deserve such kino OC.

>>149037680
They kinda look like they belong in a WEG. yet still interesting.

>>149043000
You're saying this because of the way she is dressed, but I'm talking specifically about shape language. You can figure out who she might be based on some detailed context clues, but a well designed character for animation can (and some may argue should) be able to convey information about the character based on the basic shapes alone. If you saw this character in silhouette and couldn't see her clothing or facial expression, a lot of what you've gleaned from what type of person she is would be erased.

>>149043000
>>149045007

>>149037680
Id watch their show

>>149044302
nah the problem with Big mouth is the "standardized" ugly look of the characters. this is full of personality.

>>149037680
>>149043000
It also doesn't help that the character lineup is the 2d animator equivalence of a T pose. They all stand in neutral positions with hands down by the side with the exception of the character posted in OP who has hands neutrally on hips. This is not much different from Kyle Carrozza's "Tada!" pose that he *always* puts all characters in. I get that these are just concept designs, but subtle changes like shifting more of the weight to one leg or making a character stand open vs closed, or even resting hand positions can convey a lot of personality. The fact that they're all standing the same seems to indicate that individual personality and character traits are a thing that will be worked out later or, at the very least, were not core parts of the characters from their inception. If they had started with personality, it would be nearly inconceivable to draw them without conveying a sense of that.

See >>149045013
No matter how you feel about the actual designs of the characters, the lines have a sense of "flow", the body shapes can be broken down and represented by just 2-3 simple shapes, and the relatively neutral pose of each character still implies a great deal of personality. Notice the line of action in each character even as they're depicted standing still. While some have straight up and down posture, there's a lot of variation in how characters stand/lean/shift weight even while not necessarily implying motion. We know one character is easygoing vs another being cagey vs another being snooty vs another being timid, etc.

>>149043000
>>149045133
In other words, as is, these characters look like they were designed to stand around and talk. They don't communicate visually, so the assumption is that the entirety of the story will be carried via dialog.

I don't want to make it sound like I'm trashing the designs or concepts. That's absolutely not the point. There are some great ideas here, but they look like early drafts. I think workshopping them a touch will go a long way towards pushing more visual cohesion, interest, and communication.

And sorry, OP. I'm really not shitting on the work. I love the individualized style you've got here, but since you were asking what we thought, I figured I'd try to offer a little bit more than a horny comment about her fat ass and a crack about the fiveness of her forhead.

>>149037680
These characters actually look like they’re meant to be laughed at. So I consider these designs to be effective. They’re clearly meant to evoke clear, easily readable shapes without coming across as pure, sterile geometry. Well done, man.

>>149045007
As much as people bash shape language as destiny (myself included), it does have its place. Not for discerning a personality, I think that’s what body language and gesture is for. I see shape language as another lens to use to figure out a character’s design, the way some things aren’t clear until they’re put under ultraviolet light.

>>149045007
>>149045013
>>149045133
"Shape language" is gay, retarded, and meaningless.

OP, NEVER take art advice from /ic/, /co/, or anywhere else on this website. These boards are full of bitter art students and wannabe art students that deliberately try to sabotage others out of spite and dress it up as advice.

>>149037453 (OP)
Meat canyon

>>149037680
I like them. Ignore the wannabes going on about shape language. I would only suggest making the blonde's head bigger, since hers is much smaller than the rest of the cast. It has a good raunchy comedy look and although fluid animation would be difficult, definitely could work with a stiffer family guy style movement.

>>149042893
Kekaroo

>>149045513
If OP comes looking for assessment, then OP should be prepared to hear things they don't agree with. We're just offering perspectives. It's up to OP to consider the feedback and choose what to keep and what to discard.
The fact that you seem to take this personally indicates that you have no idea how actual critiques work. If OP considers the critiques, decides they don't agree and keep the characters as is, that's up to them.

>>149046893
newfag

>>149047043
not even close

>>149046893
Whole this is true /co/ and these places do have bitter people

>>149037486
Cool

>>149042885
>>149045619

>>149048898

>>149049390
Faster.

>>149043864
>A lot of pure anglos look like that
that breed was wiped out a long time ago anon, those are mutts.