>>149286816
I don't think any other fanfic writers have focused directly on the band, so that's good. Characterization is vital, look back to official artworks and fan art that you like and really try to envision how the members are distinct from one another, how they would act and react in specific scenarios, and then use that brainstorming as a means of setting up touchstone scenes for further plot development and then consider how to weave them together naturally. Can I ask about your plans for the continuation of this? Just interpersonal drama?
Show don't tell is a pretty vital statute here as well, let the actions and dialogue of the characters characterize them over the authority of the narration (Coco being "cheerful", Cleo "gloomy"). You can prescribe a little, obviously, but less is more. You mirror a lot of my own perceptions about the band so that's a good signāit's reassuring to see for me, as well.
Regarding grammar/syntax/spelling and just general stylistic tips, you can upload a txt file to something like GPT or Gemini and either ask it for or to just clean up your draft you smooth out the existing prose, or go paragraph by paragraph just asking for simple editing fixes, or overall advice if you like. Obviously you don't want it writing for you past a certain pointāuse this version to learn how to improve, and then post that once you feel you've internalized it. Use it as an editor. Also, If you're more confident in your writing skill in your native language you can write the first draft and ask for as "faithful and translation as possible" from the model as well. There's seriously no shame in it, we aren't writing Faust here. Just make sure it isn't slopping up your prose.
Oh, and keep Cleo the fuck away from my wife.
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>>149288160
I would like to try throwing her. Is this allowed? You know, to get her into hard to reach vantage points. And through windows.
Anyway, I decided fuck it. I'm not your usual guy, took some liberties but w/e
