"Maya, it's summer! Far too nice outside to be cooped up inside that dark room, ja? You need at least a little sunshine!"
"Vgh, how much of that kruidnoten have you been inhaling? She weighs a ton..."
"[REEEEEE in het Nederlands]"
New(!) booru for Ongezellig art: https://ongezelligbooru.com/
I want their teacher's feet
>I wouldn't know Cobson! It seems like this thread is infested with /co/cucks!
>I want their teacher's feet
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>>149282280>>149282124>>149282015>>149281515Goonerfriends please don't flood this thread for the sake of owning le chuds. Make it tasteful ok?
If you seriously can't contain yourself then fuck off to the gooncord and entertain yourself there.
>>149282322>>149282307>>149282292>>149282277noooo get out of here you dang stinky trolls! ggggrrrrr
>"Maya, it's summer! Far too nice outside to be cooped up inside that dark room, ja? You need at least a little sunshine!"
>"Vgh, how much of that kruidnoten have you been inhaling? She weighs a ton..."
>"[REEEEEE in het Nederlands]"
<nuGOD space
<nuGOD space
>New(!) booru for Ongezellig art:
>https://ongezelligbooru.com/
I am a stinky troll and this is my gemerald
https://files.catbox.moe/ymbso6.mp4
>maybe if I send one more image of cropped porn and a troonbox link I'll finally become a real wom-ACK!
>Of course we love Ongezellig, don't you see how much we goon to it?
>>149282405I just love the girls..... so cvte.... cvddling....
What would you guys watch on the computer with Maya?
This is now a squirreljak thread
>>149282345Oh yeah, using a slur is definitely going to endear you to them.
>OH. MY. MOOT.
>ART FROM 4 YEARS AGO MADE BY A KNOWN PEDOPHILE????
>SIGN. ME. UP!
>>149282540Shaun of the Dead. It's one of my favorite movies, and she seems like someone who hasn't seen it.
>>149282345>gooncordgot any link?
>>149282564He did endear us indeed faggot, go back to your trooncord
>>149282540I dunno, what sorta stuff do Dutch femcels even watch. I'm not watching Boku no Pico....
>>149282564Slur???
>>149282570Maybe we could watch Mymy Delcroix who definitely isnt a B*lgian shill
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>ongezellig threads but it's a glorified porn dump
>>149281026 (OP)What's stopping another anon from taking the IP now and do their own animation with the characters? That buttmad Dutch cuckold?
>TOTAL. /CO/PEDO. DEATH.
>YOU WILL NEVER GET MY IP
>>149282602I mean, 6 years of work and X amount of eurodollars to outsource to other animators, now without even the ability to monitize/crowdfund now that Massad is explicitly holding onto the right until 70 years after he dies? That's what.
They best they can do are snail-pace fan comics.
>New(!) booru for Ongezellig art: https://ongezelligbooru.com/
>WHY IS THIS DUTCHARYAN NOT SELLING US THE IP???
>HOW WILL I MAKE GOON ANIMATIONS THEN AND PAYWALL THEM????
>>149282552Commendable. Do the proper ritual dance and drawfriends will retvrn.
>>149282626Billions must try!
>>149282599Gooner. FFS, every time someone enjoys anything vaguely sexual, Zoomie the Smooth-Brain calls them a gooner.
>>149282662can they draw any Coco?
>>149282581.gg/56ujfzEDu3 is the only one i kno, from disboard. (there's also normal art)
>Gooner. FFS, every time someone enjoys anything vaguely sexual, Zoomie the Smooth-Brain calls them a go-ACKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!
>It's da zoom zoomies that don't let me have a girlfriend or a fulfilling life
>>149281411someone on leddit made a drawn version of this
>>149281026 (OP)Is there still hope that Studio Massa will use these girls again in his future animations?
>>149282540whatever stupid anime show she wishes to watch
>>149283451Even if it's some gay-as-fuck fujoshi shit where it's all about cute boys kissing?
Recently rewatched the series again. I wish the series got picked up. I feel so bad for Maya and can relate. Now I kind of want to see some Siivagunner rips of Ik Ben Het Maar. I know some other channels already made some, but Iād like to see what more people would think with that different kind of exposure, trying to find the reference.
>>149283565>he thinks we will actually watch something
>>149281026 (OP)Actually, the Maya snaps in two.
>>149281026 (OP)How come Mymy has zero sex appeal while both the other sisters are literally built for lovemaking?
>>149284746she is very sexable!!!
How big do you guys prefer Coco's Cocos?
>>149286239medium-big
also, it seems like zaryans really are done for, huh?
>>149282345what if we're flooding with goon for the sake of goon and our intentions have nothing to do with chud?
>>149286399then go to /aco/?
>>149281026 (OP)>https://ongezelligbooru.com/Nice attempted shill, your "new booru" is actually moderated by the same 12 year old tards that will spam soislop here just because they don't like what they see. Would not recommend giving them your IP as they've proven to misuse it in various cases.
>>149283384Highly highly doubt it.
>>149283680Oh it got picked up alright, by the worst audience one could ask for, but still...
>>149286399Don't think you can convince them, their worldview is centered on them unfortunately.
>>149286496Nahh this is way funnier.
>>149286496nah, don't wanna.
>>149286511no, i'm with them on this. "owning the chuds" is so fucking gay. just post sexy ongezelligs and let the naysayers scream at the wind.
>>149286582or just talk about the girls? do you guys have a favorite one of the other classmates?
>>149283680idk man. sometimes I wonder if the series would have even been what people expected. like did you read any of the provisional episode ideas in the lore doc? they're alright, I guess, but...
>>149286647i'm just going to say "i like mymy cause she's a racist school shooter" again. why do you hate the goon posting anyway? it's not like stopping it will increase the discussion of hypothetical episodes, it just takes it away and leaves nothing in its place.
Posting in the zellig thread
I'm the fanfic anon from the last thread, I wrote some more and wanted your opinions https://pastebin.com/qudG8fD0
>>149286647you can feel the attitude and vibe change over the course of the one episode, and I think the fact that Maya is so central and makes absolutely zero development is lame. it starts lulzy and silly and by the end is very wrapped up in her headspace. I don't think further episodes would be all that fun.
>>149286511Can someone who doesn't have a stick up their ass maka a booru so I can upload drawings of mymy eating Maya out
anons, imagine maya is being a smartass online, you call her bluff, she invites you over and looks at you like this. what would you do?
>>149282540She would be forced to learn everything about all my autist obsessions
ALL THE PEOPLE BUMPING THE THREAD COME FROM AN AI 'P CABAL, /CO/ THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
https://kiwi<f>arms.st/threads/basedjak-party-the-sharty.145349/post-18342293
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>518 Doe Meadow Drive, Owings Mills, MD 21117
>301-558-3929
ALL OF THE AI 'P IMAGES COME FROM THESE PEOPLE
IP: 173.255.175.43
Address: Calle Jose Mariano Abasolo 1571, Cerro del JagĆ¼ey, 45419 San Pedro Tlaquepaque, Jalisco, Mexico
IP: 198.181.163.14
Address: ZaÄ·usalas krastmala 1, Zemgales priekÅ”pilsÄta, RÄ«ga, LV-1050, Latvia
IP: 185.147.213.122 and 185.147.213.128
Address: Stockholm, Sweden
Name: Marko Hoxha
IP: 80.246.28.12
>>149287187I cant imagine that because it doesnt make any sense
ALL THE PEOPLE BUMPING THE THREAD COME FROM AN AI 'P CABAL, /CO/ THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
https://kiwi<f>arms.st/threads/basedjak-party-the-sharty.145349/post-18342293
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>518 Doe Meadow Drive, Owings Mills, MD 21117
>301-558-3929
ALL OF THE AI 'P IMAGES COME FROM THESE PEOPLE
IP: 173.255.175.43
Address: Calle Jose Mariano Abasolo 1571, Cerro del JagĆ¼ey, 45419 San Pedro Tlaquepaque, Jalisco, Mexico
IP: 198.181.163.14
Address: ZaÄ·usalas krastmala 1, Zemgales priekÅ”pilsÄta, RÄ«ga, LV-1050, Latvia
IP: 185.147.213.122 and 185.147.213.128
Address: Stockholm, Sweden
Name: Marko Hoxha
IP: 80.246.28.12
/CO/ THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
>>149286816Wait, is this link just the 'more'? Let me make sure im starting from the beginning
ALL THE PEOPLE BUMPING THE THREAD COME FROM AN AI CP CABAL, /CO/ THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
https://kiwi<f>arms.st/threads/basedjak-party-the-sharty.145349/post-18342293
Twitter users: https://nitter.poast.org/zlgfan https://nitter.poast.org/WolfenKinosis https://nitter.poast.org/OrangerWahnsinn https://nitter.poast.org/yakloc73ht https://nitter.poast.org/yakloc73
>518 Doe Meadow Drive, Owings Mills, MD 21117
>301-558-3929
ALL OF THE AI 'P IMAGES COME FROM THESE PEOPLE
IP: 173.255.175.43
Address: Calle Jose Mariano Abasolo 1571, Cerro del JagĆ¼ey, 45419 San Pedro Tlaquepaque, Jalisco, Mexico
IP: 198.181.163.14
Address: ZaÄ·usalas krastmala 1, Zemgales priekÅ”pilsÄta, RÄ«ga, LV-1050, Latvia
IP: 185.147.213.122 and 185.147.213.128
Address: Stockholm, Sweden
Name: Marko Hoxha
IP: 80.246.28.12
ALL THE PEOPLE BUMPING THE THREAD COME FROM AN AI 'P CABAL, /CO/ THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
https://kiwi<f>arms.st/threads/basedjak-party-the-sharty.145349/post-18342293
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>518 Doe Meadow Drive, Owings Mills, MD 21117
>301-558-3929
ALL OF THE AI 'P IMAGES COME FROM THESE PEOPLE
IP: 173.255.175.43
Address: Calle Jose Mariano Abasolo 1571, Cerro del JagĆ¼ey, 45419 San Pedro Tlaquepaque, Jalisco, Mexico
IP: 198.181.163.14
Address: ZaÄ·usalas krastmala 1, Zemgales priekÅ”pilsÄta, RÄ«ga, LV-1050, Latvia
IP: 185.147.213.122 and 185.147.213.128
Address: Stockholm, Sweden
Name: Marko Hoxha
IP: 80.246.28.12
/CO/ REALLY DOES THIS
>>149286923Just go to rule34
>>149286511>Would not recommend giving them your IP as they've proven to misuse it in various cases.This. There was literally some soiteen spamming IP addresses ITT just an hour ago.
>>149287302No it's everything I've written so far. In the previous thread I shown 3 paragraphs. Would appreciate the feedback
>>149287341Having a place like gelbooru where both SFW and NSFW works is archived would be nice
>>149287187cuddle ferociously and predatorially
>>149287654Never wanted to be. But guess who will never be a based aryan? You.
Have some more because clearly you enjoy it.
if the guy who likes to color my stuff is here, i made it easy for ya
https://files.catbox.moe/rbr8pl.png
>>149287762To die in Mymy's schoolocaust... the pleasure, the privilege is mine.
>>149287762how is that easy?
are you being facetious sir
>>149287787how exactly do you want to get killed
>>149286816>>149287520There's no easy way to say this, this fic is a minefield of spelling errors and run-on sentences.
>Yfke whined as she put on a frown face, she had a blonde hair with colorful stripes towards the end of it and was the laid back and kinda air headed member of the group. This should be two sentences. You do this a lot with the comma-separated run on sentences. To be brutally honest, that's a pretty severe mistake.
Also Ctrl+F 'otu'. And 'sliglty'. And who is 'sour'?
>they were going downtown to grab something nice from the grocery store and enjoy it with her friend. Yea, and your subject like morphed from plural to singular here or something. I'm sorry if English isn't your first language but damn. Really the run-on sentences just trigger me like crazy.
As far as content, I really wish Cleo would voice what specifically she has a problem with about the performance. If this is your intro, I'm getting a weak first impression. You're just kind of telling me what the characters are like and having them do the bare minimum to show it. It's insubstantial characterization. I'm not hooked. The shipping part later when Coco and Cleo are together is cute but I feel like you rushed to it. Also doesn't Cleo feel Coco's tits when she grabs her arm? That's my biggest gripe with the fic, actually. Mentioning that the tits could be felt when an arm is grabbed is MANDATORY in any yuri. Especially with a titcow like Coco.
But it has the potential to be a cute fic. I think Cleo wanting the band to last and for her love interest to stay in the band is a good plot, and I'm glad that Coco is getting some love since Mymy and Maya are the more popular waifus. But goddamn... at least get ChatGPT to clean up your grammar and spelling or something. And from there I think you really need to immerse yourself deeper in some of the ideas here. Chisel out more details and specifics. Good news is that the problems aren't even difficult to fix.
>>149287787you wouldn't try to join her? weak.
>>149288004it's just the lines, easy to color if you put the color layer behind them. yes, i forgot to save just the lines of this one.
>>149288004What i want wouldn't really be relevant, would it now?
>>149288160Something about a hot girl with a gun I can't resist. Especially dying to an underweight girl who i could kill with my bare hands. So cute. Yes just murder me please
>>149287187Abuse the minor.
What is the AOC in The Netherlands again?
>>149282345That's what a sharty would say.
>>149282345I'm not gooning for the sake of owning le chuds you faggot. I'm gooning because i want to NUT. How the hell do you come to /co/ and complain about horny posts anyway?
>>149282280Does the fact that Coco is adopted make it okay for Maya to be canonically turned on by her?
>>149286760>BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP
>>149288131Thank you anon, yeah English is indeed my second language but those spelling errors are also present in my native language as well because I'm terrible at proof reading. I'll revise it and fix the mistakes to my best abilities. Thank you for the feedback.
>>149288284without fail, whenever a coom pic gets posted, it's posted with a message along the lines of "fuck you sharty, fuck u chuds". you're jerking of while thinking about men you hate, you're going to cross some wires, dude.
>>149288362Also I'm not very well versed in music theory so I left that part vague, but I suppose I can just say they're like a couple of milliseconds out of sync or something. This is my first ever serious wrootmg project so I'm trying to get a hold of everything. If this thread is up by the time I finish revising it then I'll post the improved version, but if it's archived you can leave a comment tomorrow. I probably would be finished with it by then.
>>149288387>you're jerking of while thinking about men you hate, you're going to cross some wires, dude.What the hell does this even mean? I jerk off while thinking about autistic cartoon girls who I love. Touch grass.
>>149288419Hmm well music theory isnt the only front where a band can screw up. There's skill & technique, stage presence, charisma, lyrics, even fashion can be a problem.
>>149288462I want with being out of sync, I'm now looking for grammar and spelling mistakes. And for the rushing art, yeah you're right. I really wanted to get toy the angst and hidden emotions parts quickly but I also wanted to set up the scene and have some build up for it.
>>149288185come on, man. if you're gonna die, it has to be alongside her, not by her. surrounded by cops, seeing who can take out the most before one of them lands the shot.
>>149288387I wouldn't put it past these fags to get so fucking DESPERATE for attention and making things about them that now they want you to think of them while you nut. Is that what you're saying? Is that what you want?
>>149288613Mymy is annoying tho. I just want to look at her cute face and hair
>>149289187Dirty Fucking Chink
>>149282345Isn't it the "chuds" who lewd post?
>>149288462Hey anon I revised it a bit, it's mainly formatting, spelling and grammar fixes. I ran it through chat gpt and Grammarly but the latter kept putting commas everywhere so I took some of the suggestions form chat gpt.
>>149289544You know trading this back and I can see why you said all of these, the intro feels very expository and kidna boring. But I genuinely have no idea how to fix it. I'm trying to come up with stuff but I can't fit it in anywhere without fucking up what I already wrote. Probably because I wanna get to the kinky yuri stuff fast
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>>149286816I don't think any other fanfic writers have focused directly on the band, so that's good. Characterization is vital, look back to official artworks and fan art that you like and really try to envision how the members are distinct from one another, how they would act and react in specific scenarios, and then use that brainstorming as a means of setting up touchstone scenes for further plot development and then consider how to weave them together naturally. Can I ask about your plans for the continuation of this? Just interpersonal drama?
Show don't tell is a pretty vital statute here as well, let the actions and dialogue of the characters characterize them over the authority of the narration (Coco being "cheerful", Cleo "gloomy"). You can prescribe a little, obviously, but less is more. You mirror a lot of my own perceptions about the band so that's a good signāit's reassuring to see for me, as well.
Regarding grammar/syntax/spelling and just general stylistic tips, you can upload a txt file to something like GPT or Gemini and either ask it for or to just clean up your draft you smooth out the existing prose, or go paragraph by paragraph just asking for simple editing fixes, or overall advice if you like. Obviously you don't want it writing for you past a certain pointāuse this version to learn how to improve, and then post that once you feel you've internalized it. Use it as an editor. Also, If you're more confident in your writing skill in your native language you can write the first draft and ask for as "faithful and translation as possible" from the model as well. There's seriously no shame in it, we aren't writing Faust here. Just make sure it isn't slopping up your prose.
Oh, and keep Cleo the fuck away from my wife.
>>149287762>>149288160I would like to try throwing her. Is this allowed? You know, to get her into hard to reach vantage points. And through windows.
Anyway, I decided fuck it. I'm not your usual guy, took some liberties but w/e
>>149289968Thank you for the advice anon, I'll try to tone down the exposition a bit and be more descriptive. I a rally do agree some stuff got a bit too exposition heavy but in my defense I wanted this fic to be able to digested by someone who isn't super familiar with ongezellig though I now realize a couple of people who might read my fic will be ongezellig fans so I'll revise the intro part more now. Also no anon, Cleo will be all up over Coco, she will eb huffing that Coco smell
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>>149290014Consider yourself lucky that I don't consider lesbian sex or love to count in the slightest. Also that it isn't spiritually possible for a swarthoid to truly understand the Coco which shows in your writing :^
>>149289666My idea was this. Cleo complains about a technical detail in the music, then Coco shoots her down to protect bands' feelings after 3 hours of practice. And Coco responds to Cleo in a way that makes Cleo flustered, hinting at the romance aspect. It teases the reader early on, without going all the way in yet. Just so we know there's going to be dykotry right from the start.
>>149290415I'll consider it anon tho I spent an hour revising it so I'll do it later
>>149287762What do you use to draw? This looks like exactly what I wanna do
>>149290463>>149290415Tho I have no idea how to make that change , do you have any recommendations because I can't come up with anyhting
>>149290465nigga I'm pretty sure that's MS paint
>>149287762Grimbo give us a mega o algo of your work bls. for posterity.
>>149290730I mean the hardware nigga
>>149286239Coco coconut size
>>149290126Well I would love to hear how I misunderstood coco's character from you anon, please do tell
I hate this picture because there's now way Mymy would end up with tits bigger than Maya
>>149291660I love that one
https://files.catbox.moe/gcinra.webm
>>149291660That's because they're fake, like her hair and eye color.
>>149281515I wanna see Vera posing like Jim Morison
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IzD1i6x3YNg
>>14928824616, and Maya just happens to be 16. Have fun bro.
>>149281026 (OP)Is that place affiliated with the sharty? If so then it's just another shithole.
>>149293226someone with her? no.
>>149293226I'm with autischme ->
>>149291942I'm as much a gooner as the next guy but i don't like seeing Maya being whored out to two strange men like this >:,(
>>149286239Bigger than her own head, easily
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>>149288613that wasnt you posting your shit to the zarty just now was it? what did you anticipate was going to happen...
anyway, ts sorta addictive, good mindless fun to do when listening to something
>>149293497the correct answer was already given
>>149293861>the correct answer was already givenWhat was the correct answer?
>search "pregnancy"
>0 results
>>149293861I'm retarded, I colored the bow orange
>>149293911Coconut sized
>>149293989here now fuck off
>>149294078who's the father?
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>>149294266Erm, that would be (You)
>>149286511>>149292864>>149287505You people are fuckin idiots. Why the fuck would the zarty self-advertise their fucking booru on /co/, of all places? Zaryans are over. They're out of home IPs, look at pic related of them literally reduced to having to yotsubACK-post in their own fucking imageboard. It's done, they won't trouble threads any longer. Moderators don't play softball with 'jakkers any longer, as you can imagine. The IPs they posted were harvested via targeted IP grabbers or retards not cloaking when raiding.
Consider what you have here. A functional self-hosted booru with a few key advantages over ones like those that could potentially be set up elsewhere. Can you think of any? Really use that noggin.
Also, to spell it out for the morons, if you go here (they're not going to do shit with your IP as long as you don't deliberately upload p', lest they risk friendly fire their their own intended userbase. even then I doubt it. also, protonVPN is free if you're really that paranoid), literally all you need to do is click on the most-used tag in the entire DB (that's the one at the top, for you geniuses) and boom, you've got an ongezellig booru free of zarty shit. If you want the NSFW, start uploading your own to sankaku or something. In the meantime, try some critical thinking practice to just maybe conceive of why it's better to use this booru for the time being.
>>149294078Giving Maya the perfect excuse to never leave the house!
>>149288613how do you feel about fakeGrim stuff?
>>149293861he wouldn't crop out Maya schlicking
No excuses when we have vera btw
>>149295751No can't do.
It's neurotic, socially inept and fertile women for me.
>>149295751Kate as an adult, with experience since age 15, I'm just gonna say that the "holes" are NOT the same after long enough lmao
Please run along now. Or actually, do stay and bump the thread. Whatever
>>149295751yeah she definitely has nothing on coco et al lmao
>>149286511This may be the first hot Maya image. Is there a set?
>>149296604>>149296605She's male protectiveness bait!
That is why I also can't look away.
>>149281026 (OP)Can't believe they would separate her from her love so heartlessly baka.
Hi fanfic anon here
>>149286816 I am thinking about pussying out, stop pretending to have any talent for literature and just write yuri smut. Tho I still really want to have some build up
>>149298639don't do it! i want to read the smut AND the story
>>149298657You know what anon, I'll keep trying jsut for you
>>149294862That's a lot of words from which I only surmise you want to call me a retard (that's your right) but kiddo you seriously can't convince me to use that booru. No I will fucking not.
You're right that the zaryans have no future, I agree with you there. But let's not give these people a head start to have some power in their hands because they don't deserve it. If you give an inch and they'll take a mile and anything you have really. Being able to hide their grotesque bullshit is CERTAINLY not enough. On top of the IP issue it's also worth mentioning their first booru already imploded a month or two ago because they just can't stop creating drama within themselves let alone in other places so there is just no reliability, and thus no staying power as an archive.
TLDR Use the official booru if they ever open up again. Use the /co/llection otherwise or any general booru, just do NOT engage with this shit show. Take the good posts from there and upload them to other places before it implodes again, because with the current state of the soisphere, it will. Feel free to call me a retard again if you want, you can't and won't refute these points.
The show was so great.
I hope massa continues it.
>>149299675she's having trouble
>>149300181>>149300223THIS IS NOT ENOUGH!
SEND IN THE GOOD SHIT!
>>149300333undeserved trips. contribute then
>>149298639Continue with your work please, I would like to read it.
Why does Coco get so much less love than the other sisters? Too normie?
>>149302207I think she gets a good amount of love, just the fans of the others enjoy a little spectacle (hot mess with Maya, burgeoning manifesto with Mymy) and are more likely to blare the trumpet.
>>149302207She was (correctly) recognized as the superior choice early on but then sharties attached to mymy (for some reason even though coco has way more reason to be a racist nationalist if the south africa thing is true, and is actually dutch instead of just larping) and it's 4chan so of course a large portion are going to identify more with Maya being neets themselves.
Unfortunately girls like her are always underappreciated as an archetype.
>>149298639Dude if youre struggling with a specific idea just give on that idea. Don't give up on the overall goal of having a good story. You had a good emotional core established, i think you just need to work backward from that.
>>149295691Did you draw this by mouse?
>>149302518>if the south africa thing is trueThe fuck do you mean if?
>>149300333The good shit is way too explicit for blue boards
>>149302558>>149301692Okay then, I'll try revising it more. BTW I came up with a great idea for the second part. My idea for this story started as Cleo sneaking in a couple of horny moments with the excuse of supporting Coco like coping a feel of her thighs as she gives her a message. I was thinking about how can I continue this then it hit me, Coco was gonna end up feeling this very new, weird but also pleasurable feeling as Cleo's delicate fingers explored and grabbed her body. She is gonna continue getting these massage sessions with the excuse of her feeling very sore, feel bad for using her friend and the climax is gonna be both of them confessing their true intentions. A bit corny and contrived but I think it can work.
currently at McDonald's getting the Mymy Meal
watchall want?
Drew this a while ago, might as well post it here too
>>149300333For the trips I'll send you some goo(d|n) shit
https://files.catbox.moe/oakkke.jpeg
Massa is an ex brony, I almapt have no doubt the show would have yuri stuff if it continued
>>149305131nigga got schizophrenia
making connections out of nowhere
>>149305131Desu horse show really underperformed when the protagonist turned into a princess, maybe I could revisit.
>>149305131>>149305507Only a little bit schozo. Massa was a professed "anthro artist" in his teenage years and created a comic centered around this sort of promiscuous anthro character in which a large amount of sexcapades took place, among other things. In an interview in later adolescence, he listed "viewing drawn erotica" (though not the specific orientation thereof) as one of his hobbies. Also, Mymy and Maya were canonized as being bisexual.
Goonery is built into the ethos of the series at least partially, obviously.
>>149287762Cool art, love your style
>>149306770Okay, but was he a hmofabro or not??
>>149302850kys bitch
>>149303675very cute. I love them being sisterly
>>149307425not rly
I love maya so much I need a girl like her so baaaaaad I get intoxicated at the thought of her.
gn thread
if u don't survive till morning then liggers can anticipate another thread on uhh the 21st
>>149309553The pumpkins are ripe.
Good night.
