>>149526134 (OP)I hate how disconnected the characters all feel from one another in the final panel. The woman on the left's face is also particularly displeasing. It's a collection of facial features that doesn't really cohere into a face.
Also, the statements issued by the characters in the final panel are too verbose and overwritten to work. People don't hold conversations like that -- dispensing paragraph-length declarations in sequence one after the other.
The ugly blank backgrounds are also horrible. It reminds me of CAD.