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Anonymous No.149991793 >>149992116 >>149992164 >>149992853 >>149992887 >>149994473 >>149995606 >>149995917 >>149996419 >>150000747 >>150003193 >>150003828 >>150004147 >>150006059 >>150006070 >>150006392 >>150006646 >>150007315
NEW CUPHEAD-INSPIRED ANIMATED PILOT! - CAMPOUT
Welcome to the Camp! In the midst of the great depression, Louisa Vanner gets a job at a labor camp, but what she finds will forever change her. Cuphead meets WWII with yuri!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnOid4txKsk
Anonymous No.149992116 >>149996419 >>149999819 >>150004848 >>150006570
>>149991793 (OP)
Why is a nazi labor camp depicted like a kids summer camp and why would you try to make a nazi who runs a labor camp into a tumblr sexyman with magic discord powers

I hate to be mean since it sounds like everyone involved in this is young and autistic but this is not going to get picked up for tv. And never post your pilot on 4chan, it never works out
Anonymous No.149992164 >>149995073 >>149995460 >>149995917 >>149996419
>>149991793 (OP)
This is the funniest tonal whiplash I've ever gotten from before and after clicking "play" on a video.
This definitely feels like it comes from that strange genre of Zoomer that loves gore and violence but still requires trigger warnings on everything or else they'll cancel you.
Anonymous No.149992175
I can't shit on this, it's charming in how ridiculous it is
Anonymous No.149992207
Zoomers will disrespect and trivialize the real world horrors and victims of WWII but then try to ruin your life if you ship two fictional characters the wrong way.
Anonymous No.149992801 >>149996419
>over 30 second long furry transformation fetish sequence out of nowhere that serves no purpose to the plot
giving children unsupervised internet was a mistake
Anonymous No.149992853 >>150006655
>>149991793 (OP)
...
You know what?
Fuck it.
Let's do this for fucking everything
Yuri Armenians during the Armenian genocide with tumblr sexyman Turks
Queersexual Cambodians in camps with tumblr sexyman Pol Pot
Transaceyuriqueeromaticbipoc Tutsi living in a village raided by pesky tumblr sexyman Hutu.
Anonymous No.149992887 >>149993871
>>149991793 (OP)
>Cuphead meets WWII with yuri!
That is the worst pitch I've ever fucking heard
Anonymous No.149992977
There's this game called Ace Wonder check that out instead
Anonymous No.149993871
>>149992887
the art looks ugly to me.. if only the art was good it could be a class of 09' situation. buy nah.
Anonymous No.149994473
>>149991793 (OP)
Summer's nearly over
Anonymous No.149995073
>>149992164
hory shiet
Anonymous No.149995395 >>149996419 >>150007002
I'm genuinely curious how people like this get the idea to share on 4chan in the first place. What's happening when queer furry xittertards just see this as another place to dump their masterpieces of shit no different to reddit or tumblr?
Anonymous No.149995460
>>149992164
what an oddly specific premise to build a pilot around
or maybe the alt timeline shit came afterwards to justify the setting
bizarre either way
Anonymous No.149995606
>>149991793 (OP)
>Cuphead meets WWII with yuri!
Anonymous No.149995917
>>149991793 (OP)
>>149992164
I mean it's... unique? You can't say it's a generic cartoon I guess
Anonymous No.149996419 >>149996766
>>149991793 (OP)
it's unusual, ill give it that.
>>149992116
>>149992164
it's the kind of idea a 13 year old might have under the shower at 3am, to be astonished by the madness of it the next day (or when he remembers it 10 years later). except this time the internal reaction was different.
I do have to give the creators a little bit of respect for actually making something. i'm sure i've had plenty of ideas that were much better that this concept, but nobody's ever seen or even heard of them because they only existed in my head until they vanished even from there.
>>149992801
not to forget the the obligatory knuckle cracking and cloth ripping noises. and, of course, leading into it with the Mr. Bean theme, can't have transformation sequences without that.
>>149995395
if these people post it to twitter it will stand there among millions of other posts, tagged with hashtags nobody searches for. over here it's one of 150 threads, and every time someone posts it's bumped way to the top. the chance to get a tiny bit of discussion and visibility going is higher, even if many people are just gonna laugh. still gonna be more genuine reactions than twitter, where i'd imagine you either get very hollow Yass Queen Slayy!!- type praise or someone berating you for not gendering properly or not thanking the natives on whose ground you stand or whatever.
Anonymous No.149996766
>>149996419
>even if many people are just gonna laugh. still gonna be more genuine reactions than twitter, where i'd imagine you either get very hollow Yass Queen Slayy!!- type praise
That's fair, most of the comments were exactly that. But I find it hard to believe someone like this would want genuine reactions over pandering brown-nosing. These are the sort of people who have panic attacks if they ever get criticized, let alone see a slur.
Anonymous No.149997854 >>149998366 >>150002977
On one hand I can tell a lot of time and effort went into this. It's clearly a passion project made by people who are sincerely trying their best with what they've got and having a blast making it as a team with zero cynicism which is soulful and refreshing to watch. On the other hand... cuphead knockoffs doing gay furry magic in alt history 1940s germany...
Anonymous No.149998366 >>150003987
>>149997854
>cuphead knockoffs doing gay furry magic in alt history 1940s germany
The premise of this cartoon literally sounds like the creators were just throwing darts at a board
Anonymous No.149999819 >>150003987 >>150006663
>>149992116
i do wonder why they specifically chose WW2 germany. if it's gotta be around that time and alt history jsut place it in the US so it's a bit less controversail at least
Anonymous No.150000747 >>150002216
>>149991793 (OP)
Shameless ripoff, you mean.
Anonymous No.150002216
>>150000747
cope
Anonymous No.150002271
>Cuphead inspired
It sucked back when modern cartoons made callbacks to rubberhose (funnily enough except Fairly Odd Parents), it suck now when everyone makes a "cuphead" cartoon.
Anonymous No.150002977
>>149997854
Shutup Brain
Anonymous No.150003193
>>149991793 (OP)
>mention Poland being bombed and how that started WWII
>barely has any connection to the plot
>that β€œanimation”
Holy autism, but I respect the work. There was a cute short about a pink hair girl and her friends trying to get food, I wish I knew what it was called
Anonymous No.150003828 >>150005565
>>149991793 (OP)
Okay... surprising thread to have this many replies.

I watched a bit and it's just barely animated. All the characters are stiff as a board. All the animation is put into facial expression and some scenes have a weird smear in them that make me thing that makes me thing they used some auto interpolation thing. And even though this clearly IS trying to replicate old toons to some extent, I don't think what they're trying to acheive works since everything is so colorful and the minimal extent they go making it look like an old toon beyond that is some film grain filter in some scenes, not even a good one. Also, I just have to assume a kid made this because of the quality of the art. They'll probably get better in the future as long as they stay dedicated to animation but right now there's a bunch of flaws.
Anonymous No.150003987 >>150006671
>>149999819
>>149998366
There is a wwii/nazi furry roleplay subculture they’ve been drawing fursonas of real historic nazis for decades
Anonymous No.150004147
>>149991793 (OP)
>Summer camp but it's a Nazi labor camp!
Feels like something from early Newgrounds days.
Anonymous No.150004848
>>149992116
what a funny lookin fish
Anonymous No.150005565 >>150005725
>>150003828
I may be wrong, but it looks like they didn't build this up linearly from sketch to cleanup to colors to rendering like the normal traditional animation workflow. It looks like a few key stills were fully drawn and rendered in a single layer pre-animation and they drew the moving parts on top of the fully shaded art. There's so much upscale crust and blurriness on practically every shot which I'm guessing is due to drawing either the animated body parts or the final render at the wrong resolution and trying to mesh them together.

If you're going to market your cartoon as a Cuphead homage, the least you can do is research how the animation in Cuphead was done. Tracing Cuphead's design to make a template for your characters is a lazy, shallow way to claim
>it's literally inspired by Cuphead bro!
when it lacks every fundamental pillar of what made Cuphead so good.

As for the plot, I had no idea what was going on besides Poland getting nuked 3 times. The dialog was so stilted and unnatural and abruptly cut, there was no flow at all. It's how autists write scripts where they write what they think a show/movie sounds like instead of what actually works for their characters, almost like generative AI hallucinations that scrape for the lowest common denominator recycled quotes even if it doesn't make sense.

>They'll probably get better in the future as long as they stay dedicated to animation but right now there's a bunch of flaws.
I agree. Sucking at something is the first step to being good at something. They should keep animating and in 10 years they'll have a way better pilot and this will be a cringe yet fond memory. I don't want the people behind this to be discouraged. It's better to make something than make nothing at all.

Just as I was about to post, I was searching up 2D pencil tests on youtube and I saw the creator of this pilot begging someone who worked on Klaus to work on Campout. Small world.
Anonymous No.150005628
Hello random vivzie design
>alternate history (even set in germany what????)
>cuphead
>five nights at freddies
>tally hall
>why is tally hall here
>attempt at horror and edgy content in a childlike cartoon style
>furry transformation
>summer camp fused with nazi work camp
I appreciate some effort with the classical soundtracks and attempts at referencing classic animation. But holy crap this is zoomer soup. I’m seeing this more really derivative stuff.
But the author is obviously young and it was at least memorable.
Anonymous No.150005725
>>150005565
>I saw the creator of this pilot begging someone who worked on Klaus to work on Campout.
Well if he didn’t do that the klaus guy wouldn’t help him would he?
Anonymous No.150005745 >>150005989
>it's a /co/ bullies children episode
Anonymous No.150005989 >>150006684
>>150005745
manchildren you mean
Anonymous No.150006059
>>149991793 (OP)
What the hell was that?
Anonymous No.150006070 >>150006153 >>150006691
>>149991793 (OP)
Stopped watching here. Such shit character designs.
Anonymous No.150006153
>>150006070
She's kinda like cupcake party horse and poppy troll's lovechild
Anonymous No.150006392
>>149991793 (OP)
>Cuphead-inspired
The rubber hose style predates Cuphead.
Anonymous No.150006409
what is with the ending?
>kid signs gay nazy devil's contract
>world gets blasted by the colour out of space from Lovecraft
>kids turn into furries
Anonymous No.150006570
>>149992116
They sounds amazing. OP just gained a life long fan
Anonymous No.150006646 >>150006833
>>149991793 (OP)
The character designs are awesome
Anonymous No.150006655
>>149992853
The girls Frontline dark Yuri was awesome though
Anonymous No.150006663
>>149999819
The only two periods of time Americans are taught about are slavery and the Holocaust
Anonymous No.150006671
>>150003987
One time I got into their discord and it turned out it was all Israeli guys LARPing
Anonymous No.150006684
>>150005989
It said in the description it was made by a 15 year old. Honestly impressive. Wish I had made something at 15
Anonymous No.150006691 >>150006833
>>150006070
The character designs and coloring are great
Anonymous No.150006833
>>150006646
>>150006691
I guess someone involved with the video found the thread.
Anonymous No.150007002
>>149995395
it's a good idea they should do it more
Anonymous No.150007315 >>150007321
>>149991793 (OP)
>7 month timeskip
that was unexpected
Anonymous No.150007321
>>150007315
>she didn't even ask her companions anything about themselves in 7 whole months
fucking kek what is this