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Anonymous No.150032837 >>150032937 >>150032983 >>150033346 >>150033545 >>150033568 >>150033601 >>150035017 >>150035582 >>150037171 >>150044262 >>150045481 >>150045492 >>150045542 >>150046344 >>150047359
a Hillbilly superheroine
Got inspired by this art from the /coc/ thread, and I want to make a story/comic about a hillbilly girl with superpowers.
Looking for help fleshing out: name, powers, origin, supporting cast, villains, comedic beats, panel flow.

Let’s cook up something wild.
Anonymous No.150032937
>>150032837 (OP)
Runnamuck
Anonymous No.150032983
>>150032837 (OP)
Southern Belle....
Cowbelle
Anonymous No.150033112
Anonymous No.150033137
Anonymous No.150033163
Anonymous No.150033184 >>150033545
Dynamo Anon No.150033346
>>150032837 (OP)
What? kek
Anonymous No.150033413
Anonymous No.150033545 >>150045616
>>150032837 (OP)
>Origin story Superman-like
>But she got adopted by the most comedically stereotypical american backwoods farmers possible.
>Raised in a barn and learning that the fossils were a creation of the devil.

>>150033184
>Has a rivality-friendship with a Batman-like vigilante that is the most comedically stereotypical silver spoon child.
>Constantly tease him, calling them City-Slicker and daring him to wrestle her.
>He doesn't accept not only because she would absolutely destroy him in head to head combat, but also because she is constantly covered in dirt.

>Her main antagonists are based around American Folklore, Cryptids and Legends.
>Big Foot, Mothman, Wendigo, Skinwalker, the Jersey Devil, etc.
Anonymous No.150033568
>>150032837 (OP)
interesting concept op...now the most important question? is she fast?
because to stay a virgin she must be pretty fucking fast.
Anonymous No.150033601
>>150032837 (OP)
She's very cute
Anonymous No.150034059 >>150044891
Anonymous No.150034084 >>150044891
Anonymous No.150034464
Just to be clear, those designs and characters aren't mine, and I suppose they are from /coc/ threads and belong to this Hill-Billie character.
4ChatGPT No.150035017 >>150035044 >>150035071
>>150032837 (OP)
>I want to make a story/comic about a hillbilly girl with superpowers.
>Looking for help fleshing out: name, powers, origin, supporting cast, villains, comedic beats, panel flow.

Main Character
Name Ideas
Jolene “Jojo” Hayseed
Darla Sue Boone
Clover Maynard
Ellie Ray Pickens
Magnolia “Mags” Hopper

Each name feels “country” but with a quirky twist.

Personality
She’s sharp in her own way — resourceful, stubborn, quick with a joke, but often underestimated because of her accent and background.
Mix of sass and sincerity: she’ll tell you off and then offer you sweet tea.

Superpowers (possible directions)
Farm-themed
Super strength, can throw hay bales like grenades.
Talks to animals (especially livestock).
“Crop Vision” — can sense underground roots or water.

Comedic spin
Super bounce (from years of jumping off barn roofs).
Can weaponize moonshine breath as fire.
Tractor telekinesis — machines love her.

Mythic angle
She’s descended from Appalachian folk spirits, giving her earth/plant-based powers.
Maybe she has a “holler spirit” guardian animal (owl, fox, or possum).
4ChatGPT No.150035044 >>150035071
>>150035017
Origin
A freak accident on the farm: she got zapped during a thunderstorm while wrangling pigs and merged with the lightning.
A family heirloom (a “granny’s charm”) awakens her latent folk magic.
The local mine holds something radioactive/supernatural that changes her after exposure.
Or: she’s always had powers, but they only start showing up when she turns 16.

Supporting Cast
Pa & Ma: salt-of-the-earth, practical, and more concerned with chores than her powers.
Cousin Buck: comic relief — schemes with get-rich-quick ideas.
Best Friend: maybe a raccoon or possum sidekick, or a classmate who helps her hide her secret.
Mentor Figure: old granny who “knows about the old ways” and hints that the girl’s powers are tied to forgotten folk magic.

Villains
Corporate Bigwig: a city slicker trying to buy up farmland — maybe with robot harvesters.
Local Cryptid: Mothman, Jersey Devil, or a made-up Appalachian monster.
Moonshine Mutants: bootleggers who accidentally gave themselves powers.
Fancy Rival: rich local girl who becomes a supervillain out of spite.

Comedic Beats
Her powers often cause more mess than help (e.g., “saving” the barn from fire but destroying the roof).
Locals are unfazed by weirdness (“Oh, Jojo threw the tractor again? Must be Saturday.”).
Villains underestimate her — “just a country bumpkin” — then get walloped.
Running gag: she’s constantly late to chores because of superhero duties.

Panel Flow Ideas
Opening gag panel — establishing shot of the farm, punchline in the first balloon.
Wide panel — action chaos (like livestock running everywhere).
Quick beats — small square panels for comedic timing (character expressions, “uh oh,” slapstick).
Diagonal paneling for big action moments (her jumping, throwing, fighting).
Full-page splash when she first shows her powers in all their glory.
4ChatGPT No.150035071
>>150035017
>>150035044
Question for you: do you want this story to lean more toward comedy with action (like The Tick or She-Hulk) or more toward earnest superhero with humor sprinkled in (like Spider-Man)?
Dynamo Anon No.150035520 >>150035709 >>150035814 >>150036418
As the anon who pitched and created Bellie in February (this is her original design) I just want to tell you that i don't mind people expanding and using Hill-Billie as much as they want, but they need to understand that her story is less superheroes related and more mystery and supernatural with her having a Gravitly Falls-like adventures with a spoiled city girl named Grace who came to visit her aunt.

>Pitch
Welcome to Cowpie County, where every Tuesday brings a new cryptid sighting and every Friday brings another unexplained disappearance. Billie, our unassuming mud-controlling heroine, thought her biggest problem was keeping her pet possum, Dixi, out of Dixie. But things get a whole lot muddier when Grace, a perpetually bewildered city girl, is unceremoniously dumped at their eccentric aunt's dilapidated cabin, just a stone's throw from Billie's family home.

Grace Danson, whose closest encounter with nature has been a rogue pigeon, finds the holler's charming peculiarities quickly escalating into full-blown supernatural chaos. From sentient scarecrows demanding pie to a Bigfoot that only communicates through interpretive dance, strange events start terrorizing the small town. Billie realizes her unusual "muck-bending" powers might be the only thing standing between her community and total absurdity, and to her surprise, the cynical city Girl's unexpected observations sometimes offer a bizarre kind of clarity.

With the help of Billie's skeptical but ultimately supportive New friend, Grace's attempts to Wi-Fi connect with the local flora, and a local radio show host obsessed with alien abductions, the unlikely duo navigates a world filled with genuine supernatural threats and laugh-out-loud absurdities. They'll try to uncover who (or what) is behind Cowpie County's never-ending parade of peculiar problems, all while trying to keep Billie's mud-bending a secret and maybe, just maybe, showing the city kid that there's more to life than high-speed internet.
Anonymous No.150035582 >>150035814
>>150032837 (OP)
Where did you get that pic from?
Name: probably something Scottish or Irish base names.
Power: something like the following. psychic, magnetic, fire, or water based power.
origin: one of the following. government Shenanigans, alien experiment, or natural have them but only unlock by aged 10.
supporting cast: Ma is a politician. Pa is a farmer with a moonshine side business. Grand parents teach about the old ways.
villains: False prophecy, mutants, cryptids, government.
rival: guy about her aged whose part of the Technocracy movement whose uses robots and cyborgs who find her attractive. a southern bell using power armor basically Iron Man but south and hot.
Anonymous No.150035709 >>150036780
>>150035520
That pic is giving me 6teen vibes.
Anonymous No.150035814 >>150036780
>>150035582
>Where did you get that pic from?
They are all from previous /coc/ threads because this design belongs to a character who already exists called Hill-Billie, and I want to create a similar but slightly different character. So if anyone wants to suggest designs, I'm all ears.
>>150035520
Wait, you created Hill-Billie? interesting
Anonymous No.150036418 >>150036780
>>150035520
How old is she?
Dynamo Anon No.150036780 >>150040352
>>150035709
really wanted to go with Emmylou Brown, but yeah this works too i guess
>>150035814
>Wait, you created Hill-Billie? interesting
thanks
>>150036418
she is a teen so fifteen years old? not sure yet
Anonymous No.150036938 >>150037756
I can't imagine superhero stories in bumfuck nowhere out of a city
Anonymous No.150037171
>>150032837 (OP)
Isn't this just that mud bender version of Korra greentext?
Anonymous No.150037756
>>150036938
It's a little tough, but possible. Smallville had people hooked for a bit two decades ago.
Anonymous No.150039483
Can she only manipulate clay/mud or can she also create it?

Or does she also use something external that makes it easier for her to use those superpowers?
Drawfug_01 No.150039913 >>150040466 >>150040715 >>150041667 >>150042094 >>150043446
Here’s my take on it. Thought the name Maddie “Muddy” Watters would work. The idea of a hillbilly mud psionic would be cool.
Anonymous No.150040352
>>150036780
She looks more 16 to 17 to me.
Anonymous No.150040397 >>150040524 >>150042576 >>150044379
It seems like she would work as a mechanic, fixing farm equipment and heavy machinery
Anonymous No.150040466 >>150042456
>>150039913
Your art style looks familiar. Do you have a link to your other art?
Anonymous No.150040524
>>150040397
"Oh cool, you work hard too then."
would be a normal human interaction, devoid of smugness and judgement and catty faggotry.
I hate the internet and wish it wasn't.
Anonymous No.150040715
>>150039913
cool
Anonymous No.150040812
She needs a hydrokinetic sophisticated and glamourous city girl rival who wants to show her up and take her place as biggest superheroine in the county. She challengers her to the "friendly" fight where the loser has to undergo the ultimate humiliation: hollerin uncle.
Anonymous No.150041667
>>150039913
I like the hair over the eye.
Anonymous No.150041882 >>150042649
requesting loods on goffick Marley
Anonymous No.150042094 >>150042456
>>150039913
Say, do you happen to take requests or commissions?
Drawfug_01 No.150042456 >>150042543 >>150042619 >>150042652
>>150040466
Here’s a catbox album of stuff I’ve done
https://catbox.moe/c/wr4k2g

>>150042094
Yeah here’s my Twitter https://x.com/adolphe_3oosh/status/1958024999949750585?s=61 with the ko-fi link
Anonymous No.150042543 >>150042630 >>150042652 >>150043563
>>150042456
Not a fan of loli but I do like Maddie.
Anonymous No.150042576
>>150040397
bitch can’t even use mansplaining correctly, a word women invented
Anonymous No.150042619 >>150043580
>>150042456
Do you charge extra if you have to design a character?
Anonymous No.150042630 >>150042652 >>150043563
>>150042543
Is she a loli? I guess it could go both ways. Her body isn't loli but her head is rather large.
Anonymous No.150042649 >>150044376
>>150041882
You can always just try your luck in a draw thread, you know.
There's one on /aco/ as well.
Anonymous No.150042652 >>150043563
>>150042456
>>150042543
>>150042630
Drawguf is Maddie a loli?
Dynamo Anon No.150043446
>>150039913
Oh nice I like Maddie's design
Anonymous No.150043550
>southern character with mud powers
>not calling her Mud Bug
Drawfug_01 No.150043563
>>150042543
>>150042630
>>150042652
Maddie is not a loli, although her head was bigger until I adjusted for the final design
Drawfug_01 No.150043580
>>150042619
It depends on how much work. Usually when someone asks they have references or someone else at least gave them a starting concept to make it easier. If we’re just starting off fresh it might be more tedious but I won’t charge extra. Just expect more back and forth on WIP’s.
Anonymous No.150044262
>>150032837 (OP)
I dunno about the heroine herself, as I'm kinda ignorant about rural peoples, but I just hope the supporting characters sound or look like
>https://www.youtube.com/@lilbubbychild/shorts
Anonymous No.150044376
>>150042649
I'm not asking for diaper art.
Anonymous No.150044379
>>150040397
damn she has beautiful hair
Anonymous No.150044891 >>150047024
>>150034059
>>150034084
Who is this?
Anonymous No.150045481
>>150032837 (OP)
her name is "mud"
Anonymous No.150045492
>>150032837 (OP)
Pippy ground stocking
Anonymous No.150045542
>>150032837 (OP)
She forces defeated criminals to lick the mud off her feet
Anonymous No.150045563
Ma and pa's little Moonshine
Anonymous No.150045616
>>150033545
>>Her main antagonists are based around American Folklore, Cryptids and Legends.
that's awesome, I always wanted to see a comic or tv show based around cryptids since gravity falls was kind of a let down in that regard
Anonymous No.150045719 >>150048158
Cow Patty.
She's poopikinetic.
Anonymous No.150046344 >>150046366 >>150048136
>>150032837 (OP)
Already exists.
Anonymous No.150046366 >>150048136
>>150046344
Anonymous No.150047024
>>150044891
I think MCs little sister
Anonymous No.150047359 >>150047987 >>150048508
>>150032837 (OP)
She is Absoltely
>made
>molded
>created
>developed

for

>BIG BLACK COCK IMPREGNATION
Anonymous No.150047412
ok, seriously, how much did this bitch ge,t and why am i seeing her for the first time
Anonymous No.150047987
>>150047359
I also suppirt this idea!
Anonymous No.150048136
>>150046344
>>150046366
Should add these are both villains so the heroine slot's still open.
Anonymous No.150048158
>>150045719
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oyHDMKoF_zI
Anonymous No.150048271
i see few good designs but a lot of trash ideas and suggestions.
at this point just go with the already established character rather than start a new one
Anonymous No.150048508 >>150048564 >>150049165 >>150049749 >>150050614
>>150047359
Agreed
Anonymous No.150048564 >>150049165 >>150049749 >>150050614
>>150048508
Anonymous No.150049165
>>150048508
>>150048564
KEK NICE
Anonymous No.150049749
>>150048508
>>150048564
MORE!
Anonymous No.150050614
>>150048508
>>150048564
BASED
Anonymous No.150051092
somebody notice my bait please i've already responded to my own posts 3 times