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Anonymous No.150279801 >>150279809 >>150280391 >>150282062 >>150282563 >>150285504 >>150286370 >>150288074 >>150288864 >>150289210 >>150294339 >>150299889 >>150301876 >>150306195 >>150310481 >>150312892 >>150322870 >>150336028 >>150340903
I am their Silence-Storytime
Randomly stumbled upon this comic the other day and thought it would be fun to storytime so fuck it, here I go.
Anonymous No.150279809 >>150279825 >>150279889 >>150292776 >>150310067 >>150336028
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Anonymous No.150279825 >>150279851 >>150284651
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Anonymous No.150279889
>>150279809
i read that in the cover as science. COVERS ALWAYS LIE FUCKING DROPPED
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>>150279922
>She is not a hallicination.
>She is my waifu.
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>>150279878
>le epic quirky SSRI-laden slut heroine who just loves to help people
Dropped
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Anonymous No.150279966 >>150287532 >>150315272
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Filtered.
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Anonymous No.150280037 >>150280247 >>150287643 >>150289236
Is she supposed to be entirely unlikable?

I get the feeling the author was going for Doctor House but this comes off more as just a narcissistic maniac pixie girl.
Anonymous No.150280046 >>150329030
>>150279981
>getting burger grease all over the loaned book
This is why we can't have nice things
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>>150280068
isn't it a bit early in the day to start drinking patty mayonnaise
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Anonymous No.150280247 >>150280380
>>150280037
You nigs never nog this much when it's a dude detective who's a weirdo.
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Anonymous No.150280368 >>150306402
>>150280084
>Wine grapes
>Sweet
I swear. That's now how it works.
Anonymous No.150280380
>>150280247
Male weirdo detectives tend to be disheveled misanthropes.
This character is a very juvenile power fantasy presented as desired by many and super cool.

In trying to be super cool she comes off as a maniac pixie girl stereotype.
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Anonymous No.150280391 >>150287659 >>150304914
>>150279801 (OP)
>smoking
Fuck off
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Anonymous No.150280811 >>150280851 >>150287910
>>150280631
but angie was german? and a demonic hive shedevil(according to unterlaterbach)?
Anonymous No.150280814 >>150280854
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>>150280811
Heaven forbid a girl have a type.
Anonymous No.150280854 >>150280882
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Anonymous No.150280893
When I read this several years ago, I found the ending a little contrived. Does at least acknowledge how everyone in the final scene is screwing up though.
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Anonymous No.150281288
Thanks for dumping. Might check it out later.
Anonymous No.150281306 >>150281327
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Anonymous No.150281331
Just want to say I'm enjoying the read so far. I am also traveling to Spain next month for fun. How apropos!
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Anonymous No.150281531 >>150283547 >>150306520
>>150280993
Eat something??? She had a burger and fries, at least 4 beers, and she finished the night with a bowl of cookies. Exactly how much does this ghost want her to eat?
Anonymous No.150281555
>>150279922
Would the Know-It-All.

Would so so very hard...
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Anonymous No.150281957
>>150281646
and he would have gottan away with it, if it weren't for that meddlesome midlifecrisis the rapist!
Anonymous No.150281967 >>150281995 >>150305216
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Anonymous No.150282062
>>150279801 (OP)
Checking in for silence?
Anonymous No.150282076 >>150282097
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Anonymous No.150282309 >>150284567 >>150306985 >>150308199
I'm sure this is a lovely comic, but just skimming the comic while lurking just from a glance it seems to be
>slowburn le-relatable millennial soap opera of a woman only talking to people for hours on end, (it's a 50/50 that this lady is moderately veiled self insert.)
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Anonymous No.150282551 >>150282574
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Anonymous No.150282563
>>150279801 (OP)
more like tumblred upon loooool
Anonymous No.150282574 >>150282613
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Anonymous No.150282613 >>150282734 >>150286457 >>150288395 >>150289151 >>150301231 >>150301692 >>150301938 >>150304424
>>150282574
And that's the End. Thanks for joining me.
Anonymous No.150282734
>>150282613
Well, that was fun. Not fantastic, but fun.
Good storytime, anon. Thanks!
Anonymous No.150283547
>>150281531
Its her grandma, nothing short of a whole roast suckling pig would count as enough food for her
Anonymous No.150283839
Pretty good, and the art is charming as hell.
Anonymous No.150283946 >>150305553
>>150280414
Well, shit. I wasn't expecting him to be dead.
Anonymous No.150284553
Nice art, but Eva is an annoying skank.
Anonymous No.150284567
>>150282309
It's a murder mystery story. Lots and lots of talking tends to come with the territory.
Anonymous No.150284651 >>150285891
>>150279825
>Roberto BolaΓ±o
Faggot
Anonymous No.150284652 >>150285473
I've gotten pretty good at skimming a comic and getting the story from reading only 10% of the writing. Overall decent "read."
Anonymous No.150285427
I liked the comic well enough, but good lord is the main character unlikable.
Anonymous No.150285444 >>150286185
>>150279887
>smoking
dropped
Anonymous No.150285463
>>150279981
>randomly conspicuous areolae
picked up
Anonymous No.150285473 >>150285499 >>150285715
>>150284652
Where's the fun in that?
Anonymous No.150285499
>>150285473
Reminds me of that guy who said he watches anime at 2x speed so he can binge them faster.
Anonymous No.150285504 >>150285556 >>150285609 >>150285853 >>150286185 >>150288913
>>150279801 (OP)
What's it about?
Being trans?
Gay?
In drag?
Anonymous No.150285556 >>150286079
>>150285504
Schizo
Anonymous No.150285609
>>150285504
It's a murder mystery.
Anonymous No.150285715 >>150286090
>>150285473
I had plenty of fun. More fun than other anons it seems. It's not that hard to look at every page, pick up on the story beats, and understand what characters are talking about. Skimming and getting the necessary information from it is a skill. It's mostly for getting important information from a large body of text but it can also be used to speed up reading a story without losing context.
Anonymous No.150285853
>>150285504
about killing yourself
get off the internet retard
Anonymous No.150285891 >>150285963
>>150284651
He's 4chan approved.
Anonymous No.150285920 >>150286134
Just wanted to say this detective has rock'n tits.
Anonymous No.150285963
>>150285891
>"4chan approved."
Double-faggot
Anonymous No.150286079 >>150289166
I'm frankly unimpressed. It's a half way decent murder mystery with a lot of yammering, unwanted and unnecessary political prancing and a frankly unlikeable protagonist.
On the bright side, the art is pretty charming in the overall, and there are some pretty girls, and it wasn't terribly long, so a better use of time than 75% of other modern media to consume
>>150285556
Actually, that's not a bad summary
Anonymous No.150286090 >>150286160
>>150285715
Never mind, you're just a dumb bitch.
Anonymous No.150286134 >>150286199 >>150287161 >>150288924
>>150285920
Is it any wonder Llull likes her?
BTW, anyone got an idea how you pronounce his name?
Anonymous No.150286160
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Anonymous No.150286185
>>150285444
It was on the cover
>>150285504
Smoking, nothing else to it
Anonymous No.150286199 >>150286262 >>150287161
>>150286134
LL in spanish makes a sort of Yuh sound, Amerillo sounds like Ama-ree-yo. So his name sounds like Yuy?
Unless Spaniard Spanish has some other bullshit in it, I know double S makes an Ef sound.
Anonymous No.150286262 >>150287161
>>150286199
It's Castilian apparently, so European Spanish and definitely different from what we're use to in the States.
I found this video that has a guy with the same name and it sounds like they're saying 'Yul' to me, but see what you hear https://www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&v=EKy3HH7mRGA
Anonymous No.150286324 >>150287627
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>>150281408
Can I just say this story has some premium hags? I can't believe how attracted I am to all these women who are definitely over 50.
magi !!vAZ5L9f9nTi No.150286370 >>150288116
>>150279801 (OP)
I am super attracted to the blonde girl with short hair, but I don't really have time to read this right now.
Anonymous No.150286457
>>150282613
Thanks for sharing. It was a good read with great art. So many expressions and gestures I want to try drawing.
Anonymous No.150286547
>>150282460
lmao
Anonymous No.150286642 >>150306379
>>150280338
>And then everyone clapped
Anonymous No.150286852 >>150287029 >>150287511 >>150293951
A sequel was announced recently, out in french next month.
https://www.bedetheque.com/BD-Un-polar-a-Barcelone-Tome-2-Je-suis-un-ange-perdu-527570.html
Anonymous No.150287029
>>150286852
If it can be translated, I'll buy. This one too.
Anonymous No.150287161
>>150286134
>>150286199
>>150286262
Llull (pronounced "jool") is a Catalan surname. The double "l" termination is not a feature of standard Spanish/Castillian, and it arguably looks and sound exotic to most Spanish speakers, especially in Latin America.
Anonymous No.150287506
>>150280000
I really like the art
Anonymous No.150287511
>>150286852
Oh fuck yeah! Definitely will try to buy it when it comes out.
Anonymous No.150287532
>>150279966
He is right you know
Anonymous No.150287627 >>150287827
>>150286324
The french were always pros at making proper premium hags
Anonymous No.150287643 >>150305658
>>150280037
>I get the feeling the author was going for Doctor House but this comes off more as just a narcissistic maniac pixie girl.
What do you think House is? LOL
Anonymous No.150287659
>>150280391
I bet you vape faggot
Anonymous No.150287688
>>150280471
booba
Anonymous No.150287827
>>150287627
These are the Spanish
Not much difference, granted, but still technique separate peoples
Anonymous No.150287836 >>150287927
>>150281947
THAT is a usable panel n the lower right there.
Anonymous No.150287839
>>150280794
10000% necessary poses
Anonymous No.150287910 >>150315379
>>150280811
No, that was Ursula Von der Leyen.
Anonymous No.150287927
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Anonymous No.150288074
>>150279801 (OP)
another womxn imaginary martyrdom tale?
Anonymous No.150288084
pretty fun read, eva is cute and this comic has primo faces and burger-chomping expressions
Anonymous No.150288116
>>150286370
That's okay, take your time.
Anonymous No.150288279
>>150282179
oh shit
Anonymous No.150288296
>>150282215
This is getting funny
Anonymous No.150288388 >>150288457 >>150288908
>>150282519
Hey wait, so what is the origin of the military woman?
Did she even exist? Then the gypsy woman couldn't have ever existed either.
Anonymous No.150288395
>>150282613
thanks op. I enjoyed it
Anonymous No.150288438
>>150281487
>>150281511
I love these two DORKS geeking out at the Greek pantheon similarities.
Anonymous No.150288457
>>150288388
She mentions her being her Great Aunt from the Civil War here >>150281558 but it's so brief and not in depth that it feels weirdly unsatisfying.
Anonymous No.150288509
Terrible art, boring story.
Euros really can't make comics, I guess. Any random Image comic book is 100x better than this.
Anonymous No.150288602
>>150279981
I hate catalunyans
Anonymous No.150288745
>>150281095
>Impulsive, reckless, maniacal, with a strong tendency to make his own rules
Hey waitaminute...
Anonymous No.150288864
>>150279801 (OP)
>Writing in the mirror with lipstick.
Someone has to clean that, you dick.
Anonymous No.150288908
>>150288388
She's the ghost of a Republican
Anonymous No.150288913
>>150285504
It's about a woman unironically having a woman moment

Cute comic
Anonymous No.150288924
>>150286134
It's pronounced Y-oo-y
Anonymous No.150289151
>>150282613
Thanks OP. While the MC was a pretty insufferable le brilliant quirkball, there were enough glimpses of a human side and chances to chuckle at her manic antics (or expressions in many of the cases) to not deter from reading completely.
Also liked how Llull got into the whole murder mystery and its mythological aspects.
Great art, loved the expressions, and plenty of prime hags like Mommy Merkel AWOOOOOOGA. The militiawoman aunt was really endearing too.
Anonymous No.150289166 >>150293939 >>150294967 >>150296345
>>150286079
The artist is really good, I just wish I could care about the stories he's drawing.
Anonymous No.150289210
>>150279801 (OP)
Neat
Anonymous No.150289236
>>150280037
>Is she supposed to be entirely unlikable?
>
>I get the feeling the author was going for Doctor House but this comes off more as just a narcissistic maniac pixie girl.
But I like her, she doesn't come off as unlikeable just detached.
Anonymous No.150289874 >>150290405
I got about halfway through, so I'm just bumping to keep the thread up a little longer ;^)

Thanks for the dump OP.
Anonymous No.150290405
>>150289874
Well I've just found myself with some downtime, so I'm gonna start reading right now. Bump!
Anonymous No.150290426 >>150290945
Thanks, OP. That art was really great and the characters were fun. It's a shame the third ghost girl never really got introduced.
Anonymous No.150290945 >>150293003
>>150290426
Yeah it defintely feels like they just sorta speedran her introduction. "oh btw this was my auntie who was in war or whatever"
Anonymous No.150291671
>>150280471
massive saggers on this one
Anonymous No.150292670
I hate this place.
Anonymous No.150292776
>>150279809
Bump
Anonymous No.150292781 >>150309681
cool comic
Anonymous No.150293003
>>150290945
I think there's a lot of visual storytelling with the Auntie that's understood more culturally. Similar to say, Jonah Hex's Confederate Uniform, that and her comments about Francisco suggests she was probably fighting for the Socialists or Republicans.
Anonymous No.150293939
>>150289166
His stuff that he's done with Zidrou is much better, like Lydie and beaux etes. I read this when it came out in French and I can't remember anything that happened, besides Tante Angie cop and her seeing her relatives, no actual story.
Anonymous No.150293951 >>150294064
>>150286852
I hope it doesn't take so long to come out in the states. already pre-ordered this one.
Anonymous No.150294064
>>150293951
It'll probably be out digitally in 3-6 months from Europe Comics, then much later physically.
Anonymous No.150294172 >>150294538 >>150294693 >>150306637
>>150281584
> We are trespassing. Photos would never be admitted ass evidence.
Why? Truth remains truth, even if uncovered illegally.
Anonymous No.150294339 >>150295696
>>150279801 (OP)
looks cool, thanks for storytime, ii'll look in a bit
Anonymous No.150294538
>>150294172
Tell that a lawyer.
Things like these are the reason some criminals got scots free.
Anonymous No.150294693
>>150294172
It's legal precedent to prevent tampering with evidence or allowing people to commit crimes for the sake of exposing other crimes. For just about any law it's less "how would this be used in this instance" and more "what are the wider reaching implications of this?"
Anonymous No.150294967
>>150289166
Comic writers and their barely disguised fetish
Anonymous No.150295696
>>150294339
Define "a bit."
Anonymous No.150296113
Writing & Illustrating a whole comic like this has gotta take a loooooong time
Anonymous No.150296345 >>150296519 >>150326529
I swear the author has a cuck fetish...
>>150289166 there it is!

Anyway, i liked glorious summers. The first one.
Anonymous No.150296519 >>150326529
>>150296345
and another one
Anonymous No.150297026
>>150280103
Jordi definitely draws old man porn on the side
Anonymous No.150299216 >>150304323
>>150280277
*looks up oenologist*
Anonymous No.150299830
>>150282179
Zeus mom was Rhea tho
Anonymous No.150299889
>>150279801 (OP)
>no physical release till January
Fuck! I know someone who this would have been a 10/10 Christmas gift for.
Anonymous No.150300730 >>150300922 >>150305576 >>150306447
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>>150280592
>merkel
>looks like merkel
this seems like some feminist idolizing mutti without knowing fuck all about that bootlicking cunt
Anonymous No.150300922
>>150300730
She's teasing the cop you moron.
Where did my life go wrong No.150301231
>>150282613
Thanks OP, this was a fun read, though a bit lacking is tension and a somewhat weak climax.
Anonymous No.150301692
>>150282613
It's my pleasure! Thanks for havin' us!
Anonymous No.150301876
>>150279801 (OP)
calvin ass haircut
Anonymous No.150301938
>>150282613as other have said, thanks OP
Anonymous No.150303071
>>150280754
>>150280794
those poses are fucking insannnnne whatt
wtf this artist drawing all that ass for
Anonymous No.150304323 >>150305370
>>150299216
dumbass
Anonymous No.150304424
>>150282613
>ending
Dropped.
Anonymous No.150304706
>>150280068
Is she being sexually abused by her uncle or something?
Anonymous No.150304813 >>150305807
>>150280187
I found one of the songs from her playlist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gs0xe9DQEPc
Also if she doesn't fail miserably at this I'm calling Mary Sue
Anonymous No.150304861
>>150279887
Kratos.
And in Classic Mythology, Typhon. There was also that time Hera, Athena and Poseidon conspired to dethrone Zeus.
Anonymous No.150304886
>>150281926
whoa
nice puffies
Anonymous No.150304914
>>150280391
She's European. She can't help it!
Anonymous No.150305097
>>150280026
>casually dropping patient info to strangers
Doesn't deserve the license
Anonymous No.150305216
>>150281967
>tfw the mental manifestations of three of your dead relatives watch you have spontaneous lesbian sex
Anonymous No.150305370
>>150304323
>learning makes you dumb
Anonymous No.150305553
>>150283946
Really? It seems pretty obvious he'd be the victim. Literally the big rich guy in a bug rich mansion.
Anonymous No.150305576
>>150300730
Fun fact about Merkel: ever since she expressed regret over her immigration policy you never see her speaking publicly.
Anonymous No.150305658
>>150287643
House feels like a fuckup who is good at what he does but a fuckup everywhere else. This character feels more like a fuckup where all her flaws are repainted as making her better than everyone else.
Anonymous No.150305718
>>150282215
Out fucking skilled
Anonymous No.150305725 >>150315032
>>150282519
>Eva as the Holmes
>Llull as the Watson
>Alemany as the Lestrade
>"So what now? We just let her pursue her calling as a detective?"
And that's what we call a pilot.
Anonymous No.150305807 >>150308728
>>150304813
Her finesse not paying off is actually my gripe after we get a bunch of background about her.

Nothing about Eva's past is why she's involved, a chance client pulled her in by chance. It's not even like she bonded with the grandma early on due to memories of her own to ironically tie things up, the two don't speak until the finale.
I get the impression the scene where Penelope seemed already convinced it was a murder instead of an accident was intended to make it seem she was responsible but using her mousy nature to hide the truth, all to setup a red herring twist that she was clueless, but that just makes why she called a legally clueless shrink to a will reading more contrived. She noted herself Eva's careless, inquisitive nature is stirring more trouble than solving, then asks a second time for her to get involved??
Instead of a disruptive guest of someone so powerless like Penelope; If Eva was a shrink the family paid to write up a good record whenever at risk of being labelled unfit for decent society it could have made more sense why she was invited to confirm the grandma was of sound mind, and why she was disliked but tolerated. It would make her a sellout, but she already shrugged at that when asked why she let herself be a sad rich girl's expensive shoulder to cry on.

But even then, in the end, as fitting as it is for theming, instead of any of her skill and effort resulting in anything: her pressing a lonely old lady does. The second impression I get is some of the quirks and that fumble to victory ending were inspired by Knives Out, but that movie spared itself by the detective admitting he already suspected things but just couldn't prove them, plus he didn't cut an old woman open to prove his innocence.
And whatever the cop lady ignores Penelope can still charge Eva with dissecting a body without a license or request. I can't even imagine the sentence for that.

Well illustrated and entertaining? Yes.
Deranged? Also yes.
Anonymous No.150306195 >>150306253 >>150320129
>>150279801 (OP)
Ok, after reading the entire story: the title makes no fucking sense.
Anonymous No.150306253 >>150306790
>>150306195
its feminist buzzword salad. its about the 3 ghosts living in her head, who endured bad men while being silent. thats it.
the art style is really cute, but the political leaning of the author seeps out of every orifice. and no iΒ΄m not some neo-conservative /pol/tard, iΒ΄m left leaning. but this author is trapped in a bubble.
Anonymous No.150306379 >>150306681
>>150286642
Are you this insecure in real life?
Anonymous No.150306402
>>150280368
Depends on the wine. Late cut semillon is a dessert wine made with almost overripe, sweet grapes. Goes great with ice cream.
Anonymous No.150306447 >>150307444
>>150300730
Highly doubt it's based on Merkel. She is retarded, and this cops eyes are actually focused on what she's looking at at least.
Anonymous No.150306520
>>150281531
>I already ate though
>Nonna don't give a fuck, eat this
Anonymous No.150306637 >>150307444
>>150294172
It's worse than you know, anon. If one thing that is discovered leads to another and another, but the first thing was obtained illegally, they are ALL inadmissible in court. It's called fruit of the poisonous tree.
Anonymous No.150306681
>>150306379
you aren't?
Anonymous No.150306790 >>150308837 >>150312936
>>150306253
> but this author is trapped in a bubble
I fully agree. There are no bad women in the story, and even the bitchy Francisco's wife is only bitchy because she was suffering. Moreover, all the heroes of the story are women (Eva, Monturoses grandma, arguably Merkel), while all the men are either powerful and evil or not-so-powerful and neutrally benevolent.
I really liked the artstyle, though. The story was kinda entertaining too, at least there was an intrigue about Eva's voices in the head.
Anonymous No.150306850 >>150307444 >>150308451 >>150315324 >>150325722
>>150282364
hah, that's stretching suspension of disbelief for me already.

Also the shrink narration format while original kinda removes any tension from the story, we already know she's gonna be fine

Still, not a bad little story, protagonist reminds me of Taxi by Alfonso Font (Also a blond female protagonist from Barcelona getting into investigations and such)
Anonymous No.150306985
>>150282309
>self insert
Jesus christ, you fucking pleb.
Anonymous No.150307352
>>150280940
Oh goodness fucking gracious. Peak bodytype
Anonymous No.150307444
>>150306850
>Also the shrink narration format while original kinda removes any tension from the story,

okay they kinda play with that at the end, I hadn't read that far yet. but there's still not much tension due to the flashback nature of the whole thing

>>150306447
Her name literally means "German"

>>150306637
>It's called fruit of the poisonous tree.

Spanish law has a similar concept but it's less cut and dried.

Still the whole ending is a bit of a fantasy, she'd definitely spend a night at the police station AT THE VERY LEAST
Anonymous No.150308199
>>150282309
>skimming
Opinion discarded.
Anonymous No.150308216 >>150310971
Ayo she so quirk chungus.
Anonymous No.150308451 >>150309268 >>150309651
>>150306850
Are there even blonds in Spain? The most I ever saw were brunettes.
Anonymous No.150308728
>>150305807
I think Penelope invited Eva because she was stressed out by her family and wanted someone "on her side" to be there to keep her sane.The family are a bunch of jackals who would've jumped on her if it turned out she actually got anything in the Will. I think her asking Eva to help out was mostly just a "hey can you talk to people and find stuff out?" but Eva goes way above and beyond, less out of obligation, but because she's a nutcase who finds this whole thing fascinating.
Anonymous No.150308837 >>150312912
>>150306790
>There are no bad women in the story
I guess none are outright evil but basically every woman in the family apart from the grandmother and grandaughter are aware of and completely fine with the corrupt nature of the family's wealth. Like sure the 3 main pillars of the family are evil men but that's par for the course in a family business. People inherit sons, not daughters. It's not like the psychiatrist is evil, and we see him for most of the narrative. And then there's Merkel's assistant who seems like a nice enough dude. Like sure a lotta the guys in the Monturoses family are dicks but that's also cuz they're the ones running the business.
Anonymous No.150309174 >>150309213 >>150312932
>>150280362
Why does she have a tattoo of a triangle?
Anonymous No.150309213
>>150309174
She quirky so she tattoo. Das realistic.
Anonymous No.150309268
>>150308451
Anonymous No.150309651
>>150308451
It's a modern European country, anon, they have access to hair dye.

but yeah there's blonds and even readheads, Catalans like to think they're "northeners of the south"
Anonymous No.150309681
>>150292781
Hot comic actually. It's very Hot in EspaΓ±a.
Anonymous No.150310067
>>150279809
Bump
Anonymous No.150310481
>>150279801 (OP)
bump
Anonymous No.150310971
>>150308216
not even
Anonymous No.150311039 >>150311258 >>150311546
I desperately want a board split, but I hate to admit that it's likely that this thread would have been a lot deader if it were up to only comic readers.
Anonymous No.150311258
>>150311039
you seem angry
Anonymous No.150311546 >>150312353 >>150312353
>>150311039
I think it depends, I know asking for these sort of additions only helps to shoot down the likelihood of a split being humored by the current Administration, but it's evident old /co/ had a lot of storytimes and drew a lot of discussion from them because of the ease in posting images and responses.

So if the new /co/ board made captcha more lenient, or non-existent, for the OP, had discerning and involved janitors and moderation, and while we're at it increased the image limit I think it could return to form.

There's no substantial benefit to such a customized board to anyone but those interested in comics and discussing them, plus it's technically encouraging piracy, so it's not going to happen. Nevertheless, evidence for the success of the idea exists in archives: Blacksad, the Bellybuttons and Alone got plenty of replies even during the slow parts just because they were being dumped efficiently enough, and at all. I even recall anons asking for rough translation efforts for side and new material just out of curiosity. But some spoonfeeding is needed to develop a taste for that.
Anonymous No.150312353 >>150312510
>>150311546
The 60 second captcha makes it extremely tedious to dump anything which is why I salute those that do.>>150311546
Anonymous No.150312510
>>150312353
When I started the story time it slowly dawned on me that with a minute between posts it would take me about an hour and a half to dump the whole thing.
Anonymous No.150312729
>>150282215
I love the third panel; the shadow with his hair changing back to when he was a child.

This has been a really fun read, thanks OP.
Anonymous No.150312892 >>150315101 >>150315397 >>150316376 >>150333844
>>150279801 (OP)
So is there any reason this character could not have been a white man?
Anonymous No.150312912
>>150308837
like the other anon said, neutrally benevolent.
merkels assistant is more of a prop to get to the
>i want to speak to your superior
>she is right next to you
line, imo.
Anonymous No.150312932
>>150309174
i fucking hate this "8th grade school table" style thats so prominent.
Anonymous No.150312936 >>150313089
>>150306790
>There are no bad women in the story
Remind me, WHO was the killer?
Anonymous No.150313089 >>150315147
>>150312936
a sympathetic old lady. the only 100% revolting evil characters are all men. its all very heavy handed and one sided. i dont know how anyone can read the dialogue and not instantly realize that this is obviously written by a feminist.
Anonymous No.150313113 >>150314506 >>150314976
>>150279941
Her necklace is missing in the last panel
Anonymous No.150314506
>>150313113
Dropped.
Anonymous No.150314976 >>150315101
>>150313113

I think it's the neckline of her under shirt, which is the same colour as her skin for some reason. but in either case it certainly is, I hope someone was fired for that mistake
Anonymous No.150315032
>>150305725
Detective B
>b as in defective
>also bisexual
>also bipolar
Anonymous No.150315044
also bitch
Anonymous No.150315101 >>150324263
>>150314976
She doesn't have an undershirt on, you can see her tattoos.

>>150312892
Any reason it would need to be?
Anonymous No.150315147
>>150313089
>a sympathetic old lady. the only 100% revolting evil characters are all men.
Christ you'd hate Candy Mattson then.
Anonymous No.150315272
>>150279966
YES.
Anonymous No.150315309 >>150317138
Anybody calling this woman a Maniac Pixie Dream Girl's as nuts as she is.
Anonymous No.150315324 >>150320582 >>150322171
>>150306850
hardly original, fraiser did it a bunch
the plot of carrying the ghost with you on and talking with them on the car too(also madmen finale but that was probably later)
>>150279941
I doubt it was intentional, the author being a frenchfag, but the starting of the silence(of the lambs and by lambs I mean hags) booba tattoo reads as si, as in oui as in yes I consent.
Anonymous No.150315379 >>150315648
>>150287910
Ursula is a miracle of nature and will push the european space program forward by a hundred years.

That is once we've analyzed and replicated her ability to fall upwards.
Anonymous No.150315397 >>150315596 >>150320882
>>150312892
Oddly, a few actually.

Francisco would not have hit on a guy he found wandering the vineyard, nor would he invite him to an apology drink-n-fuck later, and "Evan" wouldn't have accepted it if he did. Unless he's gay in this scenario.

Jumping over stumbling onto the murder, Evan could still get involved I guess but Joan would have had no reason to tell him anything when he arrived at the skyscraper or yacht if he similarly didn't want to bang him.

Unless you go all in with the Olympian thing and imply Evan is Ganymede the older guys are taken by.
But then this would be a different argument about LGBTQetc writers churning out predictable power fantasies where powerful straight men secretly wanting to mingle with their kind, along with distorting elements from ancient Greek culture to seem pro-homosexuality. Neither of which I have a horse in about, just saying there'd be no winning with how the investigation progresses chiefly from her being desirable.

HOWEVER it would make sense if Alemany shared details and was so lenient with "Evan" if she was also trying to bang him, happens all the time in the Mentalist.
Anonymous No.150315494 >>150315596
>>150281670
>>150281694
>>150281723
Uuuuhhhh, shaving cream is not thick enough to make someone choke. What the fuck? A person would easily just cough it up. I know this is written by a woman but still, how does she think guys shave it off if it was so stiff?
Anonymous No.150315596 >>150315645
>>150315397
obviously he'd be bi, itms only fair
>>150315494
Joan would rather DIE to death than swallow or spit, like a woman
Anonymous No.150315645
>>150315596
>obviously he'd be bi
Ah, well if everyone's onboard with I am Queerlock Holmo, I retract my claim there'd be no winning.
Anonymous No.150315648 >>150315814
>>150315379
iΒ΄d laugh but the ability to fall upwards is not that rare among german politicians
>spahn
>widely hated
>visibly corrupt
>probably maybe the next chancellor
Anonymous No.150315814
>>150315648
Party politics are funny like that.

At least a third of all seats in Parliament should be taken by citizens chosen at random, really.
Anonymous No.150316376 >>150320216
>>150312892
Francisco would not have tried to seduce a white man.
Joan would not have tried to rape a white man.
A white man would not have been underestimated by what was essentially a crime family.
A white man would not have been able to relate to the positions the women in the Monturos family were in.
A white man would not have the same mother issues as Eva.
A white man would have hooked up with the black restaurant lady and forgotten about the whole case
Anonymous No.150317138
>>150315309
This. She's clearly depicted as skilled in her field, but still flawed.
Anonymous No.150317436 >>150317801
>>150280026
>fucks this wh*te dude instead of the waitress
Dropped
Anonymous No.150317801
>>150317436
Give it time.
Anonymous No.150318640
Thought this book was Italian before I finally started reading, my mistake lol
Anonymous No.150320129
>>150306195
smoothbrain
Anonymous No.150320216 >>150323682
>>150316376
>spoiler
BASED
Anonymous No.150320582
>>150315324
>the author being a frenchfag
He's Spanish, he's just worked in France.
Anonymous No.150320882
>>150315397
>"Evan" wouldn't have accepted it if he did
I'm making the jewy hand tilty gesture while going
>Enhhh....
Anonymous No.150321527 >>150326364 >>150344296
reading
Anonymous No.150322171
>>150315324
>booba tattoo reads as si
It reads CSI because she's a wannabe crime scene investigator.
Anonymous No.150322870 >>150323071
>>150279801 (OP)
>short hair schizo blonde
exactly my type
Anonymous No.150323071
>>150322870
And she's a slut.
Anonymous No.150323682 >>150325052 >>150332339
>>150320216
based on what
Anonymous No.150324263 >>150324369
>>150315101
when you're right you're right, anon

why are there two threds about this comic now?

>>150323418
Anonymous No.150324369
>>150324263
The OP of that thread wants attention and not sharing it with the still live thread of the comic.
Anonymous No.150325052
>>150323682
She was right. Those shoes ARE awesome!
Anonymous No.150325722 >>150326453 >>150326534
>>150306850
This piece is just GORGE
Anonymous No.150326364 >>150327712
>>150321527
Same
Anonymous No.150326453
>>150325722
Yeah Alfonso Font was one of the greats, he's probably largely forgotten now, which is a pity.
Anonymous No.150326529
>>150296345
>>150296519
Well he IS European
Anonymous No.150326534 >>150326563
>>150325722
whoa, it's yours if you have 1750€ to spare, anon

http://www.alfonsofont.com/en/original-art/364-taxi
Anonymous No.150326563 >>150326610
>>150326534
My mistake, those are prices for pages from the album, b&w
Anonymous No.150326610 >>150327117
>>150326563
He's still alive, I could've sworn he'd passed away
Anonymous No.150327117 >>150328802
>>150326610
Someone go run him a visit and let him know how much his work means to so many peoples.
Anonymous No.150327712 >>150328385
>>150326364
Damn, you too??
Anonymous No.150328385
>>150327712
Yep
Anonymous No.150328802 >>150328993
>>150327117
I'd go but Barcelona is a little bit out of the way.
Anonymous No.150328993 >>150329947
>>150328802
Excuses Excuses
Anonymous No.150329030 >>150329947
>>150280046
BOUGHT books.
That was a bookshop, not a library
Anonymous No.150329947 >>150330762
>>150329030
It's genuinely unclear, two panels, two people working there. 5 thick specialist books would be quite a purchase, so I'm gonna go with library.

>>150328993
I'll keep an eye out for cons he may attend, though I think he's very retired at this point. There's a book by Carlos Gimenez, the last outing of the professionals where a bunch of old comic book pros get together and one talks about how he's glad he never went digital and is funding his retirement selling off his originals. I suspect it was him (All the characters in The Professionals are based on Spanish comics pros from the 60s-70s)
Anonymous No.150330485 >>150346583
lemme see
Anonymous No.150330603 >>150331552 >>150331974
>>150282364
>>150282380
there's something bizarrely funny to me about this whole sequence, like it's a pretty common trope to have your protagonist overcome some trauma at the end of your story but it's usually something much less specific.
Like the MC loses their parents in a house fire when they are young and at the climax of the story they have to run into a building to save a person or evidence or whatever
But here it's like "Finally my chance to redeem myself and work through my issues by mutilating this old woman to clear my name" not only is that insane on it's face but I'm pretty sure
A. proving she died from poison doesn't disprove that the Eva killed her
B. I don't think there is ANY court that would accept an unlicensed impromptu dissection of a murder victim BY THE SUSPECT as evidence
and to cap it all off >>150282500 SHE DIDN'T EVEN NEED TO DO IT, the detective just checked the brandy bottle you know like a normal person would, this whole thing is deranged but the narrative treats it all like a quirky meetcute sitcom misunderstanding
Anonymous No.150330641
>>150282404
I like the male shrink is actually competent
Anonymous No.150330762
>>150329947
>It's genuinely unclear, two panels, two people working there. 5 thick specialist books would be quite a purchase, so I'm gonna go with library.
Generally speaking no library would leave so many books on the ground all around.


It's absolutely a bookshop.
Anonymous No.150331552 >>150331974
>>150330603
It definitely makes more sense when you realize she's operating on like 4 hours of sleep in the past week. But yeah pretty wild contrivance to come to THIS being the logical conclusion. And you don't even need that for her to face her fear. Her fear is dead bodies. Driving with her body with her in the car would have been plenty. Just say it's a really long drive and she has to drive with it in her car for an uncomfortable amount of time.
Anonymous No.150331974
>>150330603
>>150331552
Even if still a little contrived it would have been better to reveal the maid was also a family nurse or an undercover agent, and rather than snitching and hiding she asked Eva to help her perform emergency surgery knowing they wouldn't get to a hospital in time.
Anonymous No.150332339 >>150333806
>>150323682
Where is this image from?
Anonymous No.150333806
>>150332339
/co/
Anonymous No.150333844
>>150312892
Hey, if it were a he instead of a she, he wouldn't have been able to get into several places if he didn't look like an attractive slut, which she is, but she was focused on a mission.
Anonymous No.150333956 >>150335307 >>150336282 >>150337724
In other words, everything the MC did throughout the story was for nothing (except making herself look more like a possible culprit) because the police would have come to the same conclusion anyway.
Anonymous No.150335307 >>150339529
>>150333956
It's about the journey not the destination, man.
Anonymous No.150336028 >>150341949
>>150279801 (OP)
>>150279809
The translated title is apparently 'I Am a Lost Angel' I'm seeing
Anonymous No.150336282
>>150333956
Unlikely. Without the illegal maid's call they wouldn't even have looked at granny(oc assuming granny didn't drink koolaid herself out of guilt without being confronted by sweetits).
Anonymous No.150337724
>>150333956
I think the point is, she's having a manic episode. Things like the autopsy at the end only really make sense viewed through the lens of a breakdown.
It would have been far simpler for her to not get involved, but then there would be no story
Anonymous No.150338528 >>150339527
Anyone else think the three ghosts feel tacked on? I get there's supposed to be some theming around women being abused but it's almost completely irrelevant to the meat of the story. It's almost insulting that our main heroine gets out of being raped in such a cartoonish way when for the most part, the story is grounded. Also the reveal that her mom is bipolar does nothing for me. I don't really get how that's supposed to give us any more insight on her character or anything. If the author just wanted to draw a wacky murder mystery with titties and fanservice I would've been fine. Half-heartedly adding all this other stuff on it comes off as pretentious.

That being said for all my negativity I still had a fun time. 6.5/10, would read the sequel.
Anonymous No.150339527 >>150342361
>>150338528
>Anyone else think the three ghosts feel tacked on?
Yep, but even if the writer didn't tie them to this particular story their presence feels so flat because nothing clever is done with it.
Instead of just having Eva ask Alemany's assistant what PA means to let the reader know she was peeking and is cheeky enough to bring it up what should have been done is have Eva think or ask in a whisper for the ghosts to make themselves useful by looking at what Alemany was writing, showing it to the reader, then cutting to Eva making a copy by hand. But if the reader goes back and looks carefully they'll notice Alemany had her back to a reflective surface creating mystique around whether it was that or the ghosts.
Another example sort of lifted from the Shining would be Eva finding she's locked in the room with the dead grandma by the maid, asking the ghosts to unlock the door from the other side so she can save her, then cutting to Eva carrying the old lady to her car without explanation, maybe she picked the lock herself, maybe she crawled out a window. No answer needs to be given, but those sort of scenes would at least make the ghosts interesting on first read and encourage a re-read to look for clues about how real they might be.

>It's almost insulting that our main heroine gets out of being raped in such a cartoonish way when for the most part, the story is grounded.
I get a feeling Eva Rojas is inspired by Lisbeth Salander, but the writer hesitated to go through with the unfortunate conclusion of the parallel. Which makes Eva look more daft not only because she put herself in the situation in comparison but learns nothing from a convenient and fictional solution getting her out.
Particularly jarring because Eva was warned by the maid about Joan, yet it doesn't play out. She doesn't have a stolen sedative needle on her or incriminating photos to blackmail him into backing off or anything to tie to things around her.
Anonymous No.150339529
>>150335307
>when she inspects the contents of your trousers
Anonymous No.150340903
>>150279801 (OP)
lip Stick
Anonymous No.150341949 >>150345254
>>150336028
That's the second book that's coming out next month.
Anonymous No.150342212
>>150281095
BONER ALERT
Anonymous No.150342361 >>150342441
>>150339527
The point is that the gh-gh-ghosts are schizophrenic hallucinations, not actually a stando. Granted it could be better conveyed if she had other sorts of hallucinations like tiger roars, little moving dots out of the corner of the eye, sudden wardrobe makeover reflecting a change of attitude of the speaker. You know, real schizo things.
Anonymous No.150342441
>>150342361
I thought the meeting with the hippie aunt and her tarot reading implied that they might be real. Apparently Eva's mother also saw them.
Anonymous No.150344296
>>150321527
WHAAAAAAT?
Anonymous No.150345254
>>150341949
Oh!! How exciting
Anonymous No.150346579
Reading bump
Anonymous No.150346583
>>150330485
Thoughts?
Anonymous No.150346664 >>150348332 >>150349839
>>150279981
>12 pages in
>already woke
Anonymous No.150347636 >>150349492
We got some slow readers ITT
Anonymous No.150348332
>>150346664
Because there is a black person in it or (correctly) saying the rich are not real people.
Anonymous No.150349492
>>150347636
I'm still on the cover.
Anonymous No.150349839
>>150346664
It's also unscientific?