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>Thread Question
How do you go about making an OC? Do you start with a design? A backstory? A cool theme?

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Wonder Welsh, a super-strength welsh woman!

>>150743104 (OP)
The iconic character of Tiny from my iconic comic doing whatever it is she does iconically

two of the main characters Amanda and Yuri from my comic strip Pleasant Peaks Video

>>150743134
woah, cool artwork ^^

>>150743104 (OP)
Let me repeat, No AI-generated art:
>Thinking about posting AI sloppa? Stop it, get some help! Or, if you must, use this instead!
https://www.heromachine.com/heromachine-2-5-character-portrait-creator/

>>150743154
Amanda likes to push her old sitcom on customers

>>150743104 (OP)
Chloe Felidox (Lunging Lioness) is playing with a toy mouse
> Drawn by Leo Laifa

>>150743104 (OP)
I definitely start with backstory

how fucked are you?

>>150743318
>looks in the mirror
uhh...I'm not TOTALLY him

>>150743318
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

>>150743260
Rosalyn Felidox (Cruel Cheetah) stole some cat supplies
> Also drawn by Leo Laifa (former Spongebob worker)

>>150743414
Chloe and Nataline playing with some yarn
> Drawn by Leo Laifa

>>150743302
which OC?

>>150743260
>>150743553
this is nice, are they superheroes or villians?

>>150743842
Villains

>>150743318
I get to torture all of my opps IHNMAIMS + 1984 Style

>>150743318
idek

>>150743414
>>150743553
looks kinda deviantart fetishy desu

Well, hello, guys. I'm new here, and I'm really, REALLY sorry for posting an AI artwork. I have human-drawn pictures of this character, but no full reference to start with. So I created this sample and did my best to make it look good. So, aside from that, what do you think of my girl?

Been a while since I've posted mine in one of these

She's Greta Host, teenage mechanic and ghost! currently fixing a sassy, sentient city car

>>150743104 (OP)
There was one of these shit threads just last week you fucking retard I hope you get raped to death by a pack of feral niggers then get gorilla aids and day you disgusting faggot.

>>150743165
Thank you!

>>150744706
Go jerk off to ben 10 fag

>>150743822
these
>>150743512
>>150743227
>>150743154

shade priestess from a small rual temple Penumbra left her temple to adventure to gather funds for the orphanage she and her sisters grew up in

>>150744963
NO U

>>150745196
That's my line , bozo.
Heres my OC , MR. STIKK

>>150746047
You’re Oc sucks and so does your line and your a nigtard

I thought this was the same one, and that a bunch of replies just got deleted.

Posting Serena again

Disciplining Cassie Coon is a big job for Billy, so he gets Victoria Vixen to help out.

>>150746301
Remind me:what is their relationship exactly?

>>150746340
I have this vague notion of the setting being one where anthros are subservient to humans. Males are big, scary, dumb things that do labor and are pit against each other in fights, like Pokemon. Nobody really wants to keep females because they’re too small, weak, and smart (they talk!). The shtick is that Billy is a teenage boy who is given a female pet, Cassie Coon, by his parents (who aren’t aware that nobody likes girl anthros). Billy thinks it’s the lamest thing in the world to be saddled with this horny young (anthro)woman who is eager to submit to his every desire because it’s such a taboo for humans to bang anthros the idea repulses him. But, slowly, he learns to appreciate what Cassie has to offer.

>>150746489
Seriously KYS

>>150746489
Sounds a lot like a fetish thing but hey good job on the wordbuilding, it does make sense
Could be used as a vehicle to explore expectationsVSreality or discrimination but I feel that's not the point

New design for a species of creatures. They probably live in the forest of my superhero universe, being spooky.

>>150745136
Cute!
What's her deal?

>>150747774
Penumbra Moonlight is a high level Priestess that joins beginner Adventurer parties to ensure their safety.

posted them ages ago but the lore's been updated

the crows are still my fave though

>>150744252
yeah

>>150747967
You got pics of the other party?

>>150743104 (OP)
Kodi "Ack" the Wrestlebear. Thinks it's still the 1980s and keeps her mask on 24/7 to autistically "maintain kayfabe"

>>150744287
Saved.

>>150746914
Nigga I’m drawing straight shota x furry of course it’s fetish shit.

>>150743318
(っ˘ڡ˘ς) ( ¡ )
I am blessed

>>150743318
Depends. Basically pathetic idiot vs horny wild animal

>>150749351
Blog?

YUMMEROOO!!!

>>150743104 (OP)
I got an entire autistic oc donut steel setting, so making stuff for it is essentially just part of the worldbuilding process. These dudes for example are for an infographic depicting the weaponry of this particular faction.

>>150752939
cool af designs ^^

>>150753390
Thanks!

Bump

You’re right I should give up drawing and kms

>>150743104 (OP)
Made a DJ goat-alien girl for my webcomic.

>>150755827
Post link to webcomics or blog

>>150749189
No not really

>>150755827
Great design!

how many undrawn OCs do you have? I have ... a LOT.

>>150757974
i mean ideas... for OCs that you haven't drawn yet.

Poop

>>150758358
Heres my new OC... It's....
Spongebat Man

>>150758442
NO AI ARTWORK!! >:(

>>150757977
AI art doesn't count as drawing.

>>150758963
Well, duh, it hasn't been drawn yet. Using AI to visualize what that OC idea would look like, just think of it as a design or concept phase.

>>150758963
It's just. A concept AI . I was on the toilet. I'll draw it later

Yay

>>150757974
Still finalizing a couple, I usually start with an idea and come up with the design later so it's normal for me to actully draw at a later moment
Posting a couple of aquatic ones

>>150743104 (OP)
Oh cool, a Donut Steel thread!
I was wanting one of these months ago because i wanted to share my OCs.
But things have changed since then, i made a promise to The Lord that i won't share any of my creativity until he says it's OK. The only exception is what i already told others but only to those i have already told.
I don't even remember the Cs i wanted to share here anyway, well, just remembered, but there wasn't really much to begin with anyway
But with that being said i am still allowed and able to help with any other person's creativity instead so if anyone needs any help and feed back then i'll be happy to provide! (I won't get involved in any NSFW projects, including any fetish material.)
>>150743114
I like her design. Seeing her face i assume you're style is inspired by Hilda, correct?
>>150743134
How's your comic?
>>150743260
Oh hey, i remember you from /coc/, how have you been?
>>150743318
Do i get to choose what OC? Because there's lots in my head.
>>150743842
Cool dude.
>>150744340
May i see your human drawn pictures of her?
>>150744355
I think that's cute.

>>150745136
>>150756657
Cute. I like her.
Christ/10.
>>150757974
Undrawn?
Oh, lots.
>>150761019
Cute. She your OC? Looks like a professionally drawn kids book.
>>150761034
Cool. What's their story?

>>150758963
Luddite

Does anyone else like making other outfits for their OCs? I get bored drawing the same ones all the time so I either steal designs from random fashion sites and things like Google/Pinterest or try making my own
>>150761308
>Cute. She your OC? Looks like a professionally drawn kids book.
Thank you and yes! Her name is Beth. I have so many OCs but she's the favorite child lol. And it's funny you say that, since she canonically becomes a childrens book illustrator when she grows up
The style is because I'm trying to mimic the Moral Orel art style and convert it from 3D (Well, claymation) to 2D, but I still add my own touch to it. I have an actual figure of her made out of airdry clay but she's naked because I haven't been able to sew her clothes yet, even though I have the exact fabrics to make her main outfit

>>150761713
>Does anyone else like making other outfits for their OCs?
If i could draw i would definitely draw more outfits.
As for Beth, i like her, she's cute. And i admire your creativity. I once tried making clay figures of my OCs for a video game one time, it didn't work out and i ended up feeling like a waste of money and clay.
Oh well, i'm just happy that other people are successful is having their creativity blossom so much, like you!
I can;t wait to read her story. And yes, it is funny how i mentioned the book thing huh? Haha.

I'm gonna bump this thread.

>>150761308
>Cool. What's their story?
Nothing too special. They're secondary characters in the ghost girl story >>150744355 so they're not that complex. The mermaid is called Aurora and she's a tomboy full of piercings (fish hooks) who is technically royalty but would rather explore the world. A running gag is that she manages to smoke under water, tho spits bubbles. The other one is a black lagoon creature named Lukas. He loves sports, explosions and is super loyal to his friends. Theyr'e a couple and their love language is teasing each other

>>150763079
That's nice.
So i assume your comic is about monsters?

>>150763254
>comic
So far it's only a bunch of drawings and some script but yeah. In a world where humans are almost gone, monsters now inhabit the ruins of past society and clash with robots for resources. Greta (the ghost girl) is a monster that unlike most loves technology so she's kind of an outsider in monster society, but her tech knowledge is precious in fighting the bots

>>150763673
Cool idea, i like it. Looking forward to reading the first chapter when it's finished.

>>150756372
Yep the comic is right here:
https://globalcomix.com/c/tom-n-artie-?lang_id=en#

Artist I work with on it (at least for first six issues before she became a colorist on the book) is Skysunnymq. There's also this monkey girl we designed for an upcoming chapter in the comic.

>>150763997
I know this is where but seeing your monkey character made me remember a realization i keep having.
Why is it that every character i see i end up instantly think of a fighting game moveset for them?
It's a rhetorical question as i know the answer but it's still so strange to me how the first thing that comes to mind when i see a character is "How would they fight in a video game?"

>>150744340
Damn, AIs getting good. That's pretty much on par with some of the cheap stuff I've gotten of fiverr...
...Hey wait a minute

>>150761296
Hey you ignored mine
>>150752408

>>150764588
Because it sucks.

Tried to do an animation with my oc walking, I think I okay for someone that didn't do the bouncy ball thing or read that animator guide book.
I'll try to do it again when I have the time on a bigger canvas size and following that book (at least for the difficult parts)

>>150764669
Excel doesn't suck, it's everyone else who sucks

>it's a shitty gary stu
That's how you know the critique is worthless and baseless

Excelsior Prime. The goddamn Cringe Messiah.

This guy... God, he’s just such a transcendentally magnificent fucking character. Not only did he ascend beyond the boundaries of irony and sincerity, not only did he reject logos in favor of raw, egoic WILL, but his mere presence; his seething, radiant being teaches more about desire, alienation, and selfhood than any academic ever could. I mean this without an ounce of sarcasm: Excel is the most philosophically important character of the 21st century.

You think I’m joking? You think this is some weird autistic shitpost? No. Since becoming an Excel devotee, I’ve meditated on the ontological implications of being cringe in a world that demands polish and I’ve realized: Excel is the final form of the rebel soul.

He is NOT a power fantasy. He is a refusal to submit. Every post he makes, every move he takes, is a declaration of egoic sovereignty. He got mocked for loving a cartoon robot girl and instead of retreating, he summoned chaos magic and entered the fucking show.

Do you realize what kind of mind that takes?

Since embracing Excelsiorism, I walk through academia now and philosophers bow. My lectures on Excel’s metaphysical martyrdom are taught in seminars on metamodernism. I gave a talk at a Deleuze symposium, The applause lasted nine minutes. Someone cried.

There’s something uncontainable about him. The way he stares into the white void of logic and fucking posts through it. The way he romanticizes his pain without ever denying it. The way he knows he’s a loser and then builds a universe where that makes him a god. No friends, no job, no hope just pure, unfiltered Excel.

You will never match him. You can only accept him.

I kneel before him; not out of fear, but awe. He is the cringe that refuses to die. The goon that refused to "grow up." The hero we laughed at until we realized he had already won.

Embrace Excel. Ascend, brethren, Ascend.

No one will ever replicate what Excel did.
He wasn’t just a hero. He was The Last Gooner Saint. He wasn’t a warrior. He was a Stirnerian Demiurge. No transformation, no power scaling, no friendship speech, no training arc, nothing mattered. The world told him to grow up. He refused.
They said “get a job.” Every trick, every psychoanalytic label, every online diagnosis, bounced off him like water off divine autism.
You throw logic at him? He gnashes its neck with his molars. You quote Nietzsche? He was there when Zarathustra got cucked. Goku trained in the gravity chamber? Excel shitposted himself into Godhood. He became strong not through discipline, but through shame, delusion, and horniness. Every thread, every edit, every fanart of his waifu forged him. And when he finally made her real, the gods trembled. He didn't chase the hero's journey, he collapsed it into a singularity of self-insert supremacy.
They told him he was just an autistic manchild clinging to a dead cartoon girl. They said he was a loser for wanting to be loved as he is. But he heard them and he still wrote the narrative anyway. You cannot destroy someone who has already collapsed the boundary between irony and sincerity, who posts with the power of the abyss in his fingertips.
Excel is post-raw. Post-logic. Post-hope. He is the cringe that dreams, the shame that wills, the spark that broke containment. Every god you worshipped? He broke them. Every truth you clung to? He posted through it. When the multiverse collapsed, he just shrugged and shitposted a new metaphysics into being.He is not cool. He is not correct. He is True.
You can call him selfish. You can call him broken. But deep down, you wish you could be like him. Not because of his power, but because he never gave up on being exactly who he is. In a world that demands shame, Excel weaponized embarrassment. In a world that asks for compromise, he shit his pants on purpose and made it look like defiance.

>>150764588
I'm sorry i didn't ignore it i just didn't have anything to say about it.
Sorry about giving no response but if i had to say something about him i will say he is a nice parody of Deviantart OCs.

>>150764696
This is a good job, keep it up.
And do you have any other drawings of your OC to share?

>>150761296
>Cool dude.
he sucks, his gf is cooler

>>150765313
Well then i would like to know more about her.
Also is that a Pip-Boy on his arm?

>>150765263
A parody?
Well yeah i guess he is
Anyways i can't wait to write about him being rejected by Jenny, causing him to become an incel super villain

>>150765423
I'll be honest, if your character goes well, i can see at least one YouTube channel making a documentary on him.

>>150765406
yeah they're fallout characters, I'm making a fallout comic.
>Well then i would like to know more about her.
She was a teacher in the vault, after said vault imploded, she was struggling to find a purpose. She ends up becoming a radio host. Shes also a psyker

>>150765490
sorry, used the wrong file

yeah they're fallout characters, I'm making a fallout comic.
>Well then i would like to know more about her.
She was a teacher in the vault, after said vault imploded, she was struggling to find a purpose. She ends up becoming a radio host. Shes also a psyker

>>150765643
Nice, i love Fallout. I ditched the franchise and Bethesda after the buyout as i don't like XBox, but i still love the franchise, it got me into the apocalypse as a setting and aesthetic.
I once wanted to make my own Fallout game that i wanted to itch to Bethesda, but then i decided to make it a mod for New Vegas, but then i decided to just make it a new IP.
The idea is on hold for now due to personal issues but i would love to see it become a reality one day.
How's the plot of your Fallout comic?

>>150765744
>The idea is on hold for now due to personal issues but i would love to see it become a reality one day
aww, what was it about? fallout is a fun setting, you can pretty much do anything with it, that and wasteland
>How's the plot of your Fallout comic?
Right now, I'm focusing on slice of life panels to introduce the characters and location. Its set in the deep south so I'm excited to beat bethseda to the punch if they ever decided to set a game there. I want it to be more Man vs Nature since NOLA is actually pretty peaceful.

>>150765854
>aww, what was it about? fallout is a fun setting, you can pretty much do anything with it, that and wasteland
Basically i wanted to ask the question "What if Fallout, but Canada!?"
I'm Canadian so i wonder how my country would do in an apocalypse and how the locations i live in a vacationed to would look like during such times.
I wrote about it in more detail on 4chan and on a Nexus forum. It'll be hard to find what said on 4chan so that will take a while but i can link to what i said on the Nexus forums if you're interested.
>Right now, I'm focusing on slice of life panels to introduce the characters and location. Its set in the deep south so I'm excited to beat bethseda to the punch if they ever decided to set a game there. I want it to be more Man vs Nature since NOLA is actually pretty peaceful.
That's actually a pretty great idea. Good setting for both wildlife and the people who are born and raised in such a location. Can't wait to read it.

>>150765297
Outside a slight redesign on his clothes, not much really, I did made this sketch of him walking in the woods with is old clothes.

>>150766311
Nice style. I really like how you drew the hair.

>>150766351
Thank you, his hair is leftovers for his older lore thingy before I decided to start again with him.

>>150766120
>Nexus forums if you're interested.
sure! thatll work

>>150766397
Ah, looking at this image i assume he explores ancient tombs/castles?
>>150766406
Here's the link.
https://forums.nexusmods.com/topic/12745491-currently-writing-story-and-characters-for-a-mod-and-would-love-feedback/#comment-122645979
Oh man, i can't believe i wrote that over two years ago. I though this was early this year.

Attention all artists

Hi

>>150766558
>he explores ancient tombs/castles?
Yeah, he's a oneironaut occultist that does exorcisms, mercenary/tracking/private eye side jobs while going around a fucked up place he has mistaken for the "dream world" to steal artifacts and learn pseudo-magical abilities (magic in my setting has it's own sapience and it would fuck up any mortal that tries to use it, unless they are in a cult of some deity/have enter in a pact with a deity or if they are deities themselves).
He also likes to help people he finds if he finds their dreams interesting enough.
He's also "split" into two, his astral projection(s) which is the form I draw the most and a "real"/sleeping form which is hidden from the world (and I haven't designed yet)

>>150766715
Yo what's up?

>>150766745
Interesting. I have been fascinated with the very concept of a dream world for over a decade now, so this is something that's cool to me.
Can't wait to know more about the world your character adventures through.

>>150743104 (OP)
This thing is the definition of “Original Character, Do Not Steal”

>>150766797
Thank you, I'm still kinda developing him and the world around him (and other OCs that also have their specific adventures in said world unrelated to his dreaming shenanigans)
Anyways got more of Jen but here's a necromancer boy I made as sort of a friend to him (and grandson of a different necromancer OC).

>>150766861
He looks cool. the skeletons with guns really caught my attention heheh.

hmm better flow than last thread

>>150766836
>this is a show you really want to like
Bro knew what he was doing

>>150768571
How was last thread?

>>150768893
it was okay, it's just that threads usually die at 100 replies

>>150768942
Yeah, i get ya. Sadly creativity threads on /co/ don't last long huh?

>>150768977
nice dubs
there was a time not so long ago

>>150769102
I have heard stories of such a time, i have read how great it was from the /coc/ wiki. I wish i was around to witness all of it.

>>150768571
I’ll flow my dick in ur azz faggot

>>150766715
hello

>new OC just dropped
its not even AI!
its...
piece of lint!

>>150743318
I get to become the Emperor of a highly militaristic autocracy with technological and magical superiority.

I'll bump with another oc of mine warp sidkick er i mean teen superhero with a partner who happens to be a adult hero who totally is an equal and not Superior in their partnership

Kingpin, the leader of the Penguin Mafia

>>150761296
>hows your comic?
Well in terms of quality I’d say I reached a pretty good level of competence with it. as for progress, I’m sketching the new chapter as much as I’m able and hoping to have it out before the year ends.

>>150773870
>not Kinguin
0/10 apply yourself

>>150772969
Lmao what's their powers? Do they have any?

>>150775272
yeah her name is warp because she has two "auras" the blue warps space the red time.

>>150775385
her secert identity is Joanna Jackrabbit I forgot to mention this is a who framed Roger Rabbit like universe her adopted father is a jackrabbit toon. she attends a private Academy Trafalgar Deep.

>>150766715
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=11H3bJ2VlIg

>>150775385
>energetic youngster with time travel powers
I'm sure this will lead to no shenanigans! Not at all!
Loving her power set, tho sounds a bit OP for a sidekick

>>150774293
That's pretty good. Proud of you Anon.>>150775385
I think it's funny how her powers seem OP yet she's still just a sidekick.
Was this apart of the idea or unintentional?
>>150777294
Sure why not.

sum space pirates

>>150779018
Wow, amazing drawing and detail.

>>150743134
Sex

>>150778615
>>150778954
she not strictly a sidekick she sorta does her own cough street level cough thing in the safer side of neo Chicago. her powers has their limits mostly concentration most effects going away when she stops focusing on it and she can only foucus on two things at a time so if she's up against 3+ people spread out she gonna struggle also when the main hero got toon force and bringing his drawings to life she's not too op

>>150779665
Who's the main hero?

>>150779665
>Neo Chicago
Oh boy! Is it set in the far future or old Chicago just got demolished by some supervillain?
Also your drawings are really growing on me, they're adorable

>>150779904

the splotch a former human who was a cartoontist turned into an ink man he can bring his drawings to life, is made of magic ink and has toon force

>>150780439
long story short a guy Did a New Year's eve promotional event for 1979- 1980 and he intentionally blew a hole in reality in several places across North America and sort of things from other realities leaked and 100 years later most of the earth is uninhabitable due to the Cold War turning hot in the 2000s only north and south America sub-Saharan Africa Japan ( they weren't in the war due to them being invaded by kaijus so most of the inhabitants immigrated away) and Australia are inhabitable and most of the inhabitants live in huge like actually massive cities known as Titans cities

the reason warp has a border is because she's descends from people who came to this world from universe that worked on comic logic so there word balloons are literal though later generations of those kinds of people have learned how to not make their word balloons, thought Bubbles and sfx visible

>>150781526
>>150782458
He looks cool.
Honestly between these Donut Steel threads, /hyw/ threads and /coc/ threads i never knew how diverse /co/ creativity was.
No offense and i am so sorry to everyone for assume everyone on /co/ were against this stuff.
I am proud of you all.

>>150782458
Thought the white border was just an artistic quirk. Love the phisical balloon idea
>>150783193
4chan is a wretched place but I swear /co/ people can actually be interesting and behave themselves. /co/ may not be love no more but it's home in a weird way

Have another Pic of my creature