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Only 6 more pages till the chapter is finished, he's drawn a crapton of Funou/AV mini mangas. Do you think we're going to get a Funou/AV schooldays flashback arc?

i want a pregnant futa elf

Tansho next letsgooo

>>11381983
Never ever, only anal, every chapter, indefinitely.

>>11382162
I get the kawakami likes butts, but holy jeez i'd wish he'd tone down the butthole spam a little.

>>11382162
that's exactly what i want

>>11382162
Fuck no!

>>11382162
Hatred wells within me if this becomes our future

>>11381983
Every girls impregnated by schneenis

>>11382162
I am only following at this point for the hope that Umanami will savagely sodomize Yuri for once

Mara is gonna be the biggest elf one day, Funou's reign is coming to an end.

>>11381983
Endgame is clearly building up to Yuri getting knocked up by someone, since the seal on her only blocks getting pregnant if both parties involved don't think about wanting a kid in the heat of the moment.

It's just the question of which of the Elves is gonna get the Lucky Number there

With anal being introduced in av chapter it also builds up to a double penetration scene either funou + umanami being a obvious for that one as they had a scene together and might do so in the future or else something new like mara + funou , av + tansho ect

>>11383767
either mara or some fuckery where all of them will at the same time, and yuri will end up with quadruplets.

What is he gonna do with Tansho next chapter?
I just hope insanely huge amounts of cum are involved

Tansho need’s to cumflate Yuri or get fucked by someone soon

Could be hot if tansho fucks yuri as tansho in turn gets fucked by some other futa

Tansho should fuck Umami's urethra.

>>11383035
Uma will on day surpass and avenge her mother.

where's the anon that said this page was a bad idea

>>11384974
It is kinda dumb desu. The previous two pages we're god tier, this is meh. Reminds me of that butt bashing anime.

>>11384974
futanari no elves' dicks must be very bending.

>>11384974
Not much to see on that page ngl feel like previous pages here were better legit if you didn't know the elf was a futa all you saw here was just 2 chicks banging their asses

>>11384974
I think he's over doing it with the ass.

>>11385028
It's been years since he drew an appealing ass.

I dunno how much I'm going to mess around with this, but I wanted opinions and criticism.

Does anything not read well?
More stars, less stars? (they'll twinkle in the final animation)
Any colors that could be swayed in a direction?
Should it have more highlights on the skin and outlines?

The entirely overambitious idea is to add some steam to the sauna, sweat drops on Funou, dick throbs, chest rising with breaths, some stars twinkling with lil' coronas, and her blinking.
There's also a very tiny niggling idea to have Yuri pop over the wall and stare at her occasionally, maybe once per four loops.
But before that, how's it look so far?

>>11385361
OH HEY LOOK WHO JUST NOTICED HE FORGOT TO GIVE HER EYEBROWS AND AT LEAST A HINT OF HAVING TWO EYES?
ONE HINT: HE'S A FUCKING GROGNARD!
DAMMIT!

>or maybe she looked better without i dunno man im my own worst critic

I'm sure there something wrong with it that i didn't find yet, but this'll do until I notice something a week down the road and redo the entire thing at the cost of my sleep and sanity.

Have a Funou under a magical night sky.

>>11386046
looks nice

>>11384974
ASS TO ASS

>>11386046
Dick throbs look weird, head maybe a bit too small? The base of the dick looks like it's on her navel, it's very hard to see it as between the legs. The hand looks very bizarre, I don't know how to explain it but it looks like it's not attached to her body.
Sorry if the above doesn't help much, can't give you an artist perspective unfortunately.

A new possible futanari

>>11386771
Big areolas are good but the rest is pretty generic

>>11386771
Feel like it would be better if kawakami focuses on current futa's and maybe futa on futa action would be more hype then just more new futa's

>>11385366
Eyebrows are goid. The semi visible eye lash is fine.
Looks like a good start.
Yuri should peak sneak every 3 loops just to save a bit of work.
Stars look fine but maybe add a moon?

>>11386775
I kinda feel like everyone already has massive areolas, not that I'm complaining. Mara basically already has 70%+ coverage, so I don't know what this other elf will be like.

So he belatedly realized he had one too many darkies and hastily stuffed Kasei in for parity. I remember when she was a silver haired tomboy. She had a good scene but I think there was a missed opportunity for double paizuri.

>>11386782
All I want is cute and canon Mara x Tansho.

>changed the page where Mara was cumming on a passed out Yuri
Nah Ass2Ass was a mistake

>>11387232
Mara needed some fullbody ass focus. Eventually, she will mark Yuri as her own.

>>11387257
>Mara needed some fullbody ass focus
That is a lie every character has an over abundance of ass focus. Thanks to the Butt plug, the spanking, doggy style, DOG style, this chapter is like 80% Mara's ass.

>>11387268
Compared to the rest of the cast, she sort of needed this level of focus it feels? From the onset this one was about her butt and asshole.

Tansho also needs that attention.

Dead ass this chapter went from like a solid 7-8 at early stages to just a 4-5 at the end due to the changes that were made cause of those 2 clowns. Hope kawakami can realise it and doesnt listen to people in his chat again and just sticks to the shit he makes himself

I would love to see a futaxfuta chapter where Yuri doesn't get any for a night. The elves are already busy for a night with Tansho x Mara, and Umanami x Funou scenes.

>>11387487
>and Umanami x Funou scenes.
Probably won't get that since Pateron doesn't allow incest content.

>>11387450

I agree. The lasts pages was such a disapointment

I'd love to see a dickgirl elf

>>11387535
Then tell him that? He's willing to listen to other opinions. Too late for it now but for future chapters he is willing to think about things. Coolman and Kurohime have offered ideas he's ignored multiple times. He just picks the ideas he likes.

>>11384974
Do dogs really fuck like that? Never seen them mate.

>>11387805
No, dogs erections involve growing a knot at the base so they don't slip out because they have no thumbs to hold on. Sometimes when they are done the knot hasn't gone down but male dog still wants to attempt leaving. Somehow people saw this and it got memed into porn as something dogs do on purpose.

>>11387534
Perfect time for the "she's adopted" plot twist

>>11387858
Interesting, it must suck being a dog

>>11387487
He already said he wasn't allowing NTR, and the slutty protagonist getting her just desserts is the only possible case where it would have teeth when the elves have already accepted her sleeping around.

If elves cam orgasm from both their vagina and penis at once, does that mean they can urinate from both?

Kawakami finished the last pannel today and now is going to find someone to translate the chapter for him to english seems like his plan was to drop the chapter in 2nd / 3rd week of this month.

I wish Kawakami would be more consistent with proportions and dick sizes. It's the one gripe I have with his art. AV san was perfect when she came out but now her dick's twice as big and her ass is 50% bigger and that's not always a good thing.

>>11389468
>her ass is 50% bigger
Soon they will all be nothing but walking asses.

It's finally time for Tansho, hopefully the main idea for the chapter is hot and not boring.
Hope it's some shit like Tansho buys some pills from a shady dealer with the promise they'll increase her penis lenght, but instead they just make her produce gallons of gigathick sperm that gets stuck in her dick and Yuri has to help her weather the cum storm (entire room will be flooded with cum by the end of the chapter)

Wonder if the one page where he showed a new futa means we will have a new futa chapter next or if it's gonna follow the usual pacing of mara > tansho > umanami + funou or / umanami > funou > av > kasei > new girl

remember when kawakami wanted to do shorter chapters

>>11389698
Remember when he wanted to do non sex chapters

just want to ask, are kawakami sensei have a plan to make a plot that yuri suddenly turned to be a man or having dick ?

>>11389742
No in fact it is on the list never ever happening along with
>male characters
>tansho's dick getting bigger
>lolis
>small or flat chest on a futa

>>11389468
Ikr. This was perfect, and he was actually consistent with it for a while, like chapters 34/35. But then he suddenly forgot about it and now Mara and AV´s flaccid dicks are like 10 times larger.

I prefer big flaccid Mara. Shame that he temporarily shrunk her during the beach arc and then gave her the design of hanging out of her bikini.

Big flaccid Mara definitely has it's own appeal but that's already as long as she gets, there's almost no difference between that and her erect dick. I preffer the contrast of her having a moderate flaccid dick and a HUGE hard one.

>>11390173
Besides Funou's got the shower market cornered.

LMFAO

>>11381973 (OP)
How soon can we expect the new chapter?

>>11390350
2-3 days, gotta be translated and then putting the words onto the chapter digitally

>>11390468
Do you have the raws?

>>11390136
Kawakami needs to draw art of the elves in various swimsuits and bikinis.

>>11390655
If you go to his picarto you can watch one of his vods where he goes through the whole chapter marking all the bubbles that needs to be translated. Can screenshot each page to get full chapter if you want it earlier than release xd

>>11390722
If you could that would be awesome

>>11390723
It's show time

>>11390723
>>11390752
Two more days. Now if only Fakku would catch up with the colored and decensored chapters.

>>11390794
Fakku actually not behind as kawakami has just not sent any of the next chapters to them as he always does only full volumes with fakku

>>11390794
Kino thanks for the update

Maras dick is getting too big

>>11390723
HE RISE UP!

Zombie-chan has my favorite dick in the series. Wish she'd come back.

it out

>>11392045
Fucking nice

Is there an easy way to download all of these? Reading them on Pixiv is shit.

Ngl this chapter was pretty bad it was changed too much by other people their opinions and some things also made no sense. The early part of the chapter wasn't too bad but once it got towards the sex scenes it just got weirder and some things didn't make sense. At one point mara is like "you had sex with 5 other elves so i should atleast get to cum 4 more times" but then she only cums 3 times so it doesn't make much sense. the sex scenes were also short af idk if it was cause mara is quickshot but it's legit 1 page dick goes in 2nd page she cums for a chapter that's 43 pages that's kinda ass. Talking about ass the ass to ass thing also didn't make sense probably because it was put in due to 1 guy spamming he wanted to see it as legit it goes from ass to ass sex into next page where yuri lies on her back passed out which just shows the previous 2 pages were changed later on while the last 2 pages were not. Hope for future chapters kawakami doesn't get influenced by people spamming i want this i want that

>>11392070
I'll dump.

This one exceeded the file size limit cause the fat asses, so heres a catbox of the full image.

https://files.catbox.moe/wygm3w.jpg

>>11392088
I think the 4th one was cut off by the scene change. Hard to tell in the sketch so I'm going by facial expression and stuff splooshing out. Mara cumming on Yuri's passed out body had to be the fourth one.

The cumming scenes were very underwhelming, the rest was pretty much the same as last chapters have been recently, boring and meh. At least we got a bit of flashback, that's something I guess.

>>11392207
>>11392208
Now that's a glorious scene.

I was hoping for more story/character development which it seemed it was going to be at first but instead went straight into anal again.

>>11392256
yeah this chapter was pretty ass

>>11392224
When is Yuri gonna start adding spunk to her food?

It would be nice if chapters also had better sex scenes as some person said above it kinda just feel the same shit in recent chapters and also short. He makes chapters of 40-44 pages and in the end it would be like 6-8 pages of sex as they cum within 1 page. It would be nice if sex scenes were more pages or atleast not the fact that every futa cums within 1 page

>>11392476
Some plot or world building would be awesome. They have magic so that could be interesting

It would be awesome if he made an updated dick measurement chart with the new characters.

Girth

>>11392576
Scientist is anticipated so much I hope she keeps her quirky behavior

>>11392708
She bring unique stuff to the table if Kawakami keeps the invention thing going
>x-ray glasses
>the realistic and cumming ona-hole
>futa android and countless other shit from the mini-manga

Still waiting for Tansho to get fucked by another futa. Surely it'll happen one day...

>>11392575
We need some futa x futa chapters man

>>11392791
tansho rides a futa cowgirl style and covers them with so much spunk they look like a wedding cake

>>11392238
probably the main complaint I have with it, literally just tiddlywink spurts compared to previous chapters where you had fire-hose cumshots, even the first time he drew the elfs masturbating their dicks after the onsen chapter

>>11392791
We all know Tansho is going to be the top to subvert expectations.
Just like Funou the elf with the biggest everything on the planet, a literal sex icon, seems to be the most submissive elf.

>>11392959
But thats always been Mara's sthick, she a quick and lite shot. If she started shooting ropes, then there would be no point in the other elves.

>>11393337
Feels like funou dick size changed again here as it seems smaller then before thinking about how she gave herself a self paizuri she is too small in this drawing. Feel like only futa whos'dick size doesn't change is tansho just cause she's that small it's hard to forget

wonder if kawakami went with the chat suggestion cause the pages were easier to draw since the chapter was already taking so long.

>>11393337
Feel like funou does look better in this drawing with this size dick then in some where she has enormous dick

>>11393345
Possible but if anything it's his own fault it took so long every day he was working and drawing on the chapter he would spend 1-2 hours drawing mini series sometimes longer. If he didn't do that he would of finished the chapter earlier

>>11389468
IRELAND?

But personally I'd like it if he tried to make a SoL chapter again with those ass sizes. Let's see those elves awkwardly fitting at their desks, work on the jiggle physics to show them wobbling with every step.

>>11393024
Tansho could give paizuri while she's topping.

>>11393339
Tansho was one of the first victims. I'll never forget how she looked in the shopkeeper's chapter.

>>11393339
>>11393361
It is Funou in a school uniform, maybe its her as a young teenager? People might not know(somehow), but he drew like 100 mini mangas of Funou/AV's high school advenutres during the last chapter.

>>11393431
>4
Yh thought so also which means ngl funou looked better in her younger years with smaller dick xd

>>11393337
So Funou is a horny drunk?

>>11393337
Funou looks smaller than Mara here.

>>11393337
did we ever find out if she was horse girls "mother" or "father"

>>11393576
Not too sure not that i can remember ever seeing anywhere

>>11393576
I think he soft-retconned it into them not being related to avoid payment processors getting on his case.

I know i shouldn't read too much into it but latest translated chapter kinda made me feel bad for Yuri. She was a pervert since the start but her friendship with the girls began genuine. Mara's began out of lust.

Think there might be plans for fakku update soon maybe as he's making colored banners / front pages so to say.

>>11393860
is this a banner now? Because Uma and Mara touching dicks was also one of the request from the previous stream

>>11393585
>>11393645
Damn shame
I'm not huge on incest so that isnt a loss to me, but now we are stripped of a flashback chapter of funou breeding with the other parent

>>11393905
Ah missed that part it might be that then ngl

>>11393860
We really need chapters mixing up the elf girl pairings, instead of just every chapter being Mara -> Tansho -> Umanami/Funou.

>>11394135
I can only assume the reason it hasn't happen is that we would need a story arc to justify the elves actually agreeing to it. Especially with tansho and Mara's jealous tendencies. I'm still surprised they just watched during the beach scene.

>>11393860
Did my best, hope you guys enjoy it.

>>11394143
Its a hentai and the girls are horny af. Don’t need further justifications than this

>>11394165
Amazing! Thanks bro

I wanna suck on Tansho's little micro-peen until she shoots in my mouth

>>11394172
Kawakami has been very committed to keeping their personalities consistent how and things develop. Remember it took years before Yuri even touched a dick.

>>11394185
>Remember it took years before Yuri even touched a dick.
More like he wasn't getting very many job offers that weren't practically slave labor, so he took the plunge in his elf doodles and went full nudity in the onsen chapter. Opened a fanbox at the same time, and made mad cash.
Which then allowed him to make this his full time job.
I remember him complaining about offers he would get for random manga and it would be something like 250k yen for a volume of something, which is literal slave labor. ITs why he took the plunge with what he's currently doing and he's been making insane money ever since.
He makes a lot on fanbox, has like 500~ subs on pateron at $5 a month, then he has DLsite and FAKKU now, which he gets cuts from. Its also why he's so susceptible to chat suggestions, because he doesn't want to displease his customers.

I haven't read any of Kawakami's non-H manga. Are there any that are particularly worth reading?

>>11394197
We got direct nudity chapter chapter 16, 6 chapters before the onsen. He already gave up on the manga being serialized back during the christmas chapter when the dick outlines became more detailed instead of vague blobs. iirc by that time he was already drawing the droopy eared elves in fanbox and that one mara picture. Regardless he still treats the story and that is why the pacing is the way it is instead of light speed like most pornography.

>>11394199
He has only wrote one. he is usually just the illustrator

>>11394203
Ponkotsu Musume no Nichijou? I'll check it out

>>11394197
This makes sense

I hope he finishes this one and the one with AV

>>11394240
You're getting Funou squishing Tansho, and you'll like it.

At least he made Tanshos balls a bit bigger than Funous.

>>11394333
brutal mogging

>>11394197
>literal slave labor
you're an idiot

>>11394333
tansho really has like nothing going for her lol
he is rivaled or beaten in every department
everyone else has equal or larger boobs, ass, even her prized balls are nearly the same size
and that not even addressing the elephant that is her cock

>>11394589
And yet she's the hottest one

>>11394589
and still the best girl by a mile, tansho supremacy

>>11394589
Tansho can cum so much that a entire pool wouldn't be enough

>>11394589
yet with all the art work and doodles, it seems shes gonna dominate Funou one day.

>QUICK!
>YOU HAVE 30 SECONDS FROM READING THIS POST ON A HAITIAN SUGARCANE-YIELD FORUM TO DESIGN A NEW ELF FOR THE CAST OF FUTANARI NO ELF!
>OH CRAP IT'S STARTING! HURRY UP!

Diaphalia with two dicks and she also has two little hair tufts on her head that get poofy and/or soft in association with each willy.

>>11395114
grotesque proportions desu

>>11395450
it is wild that her thighs are twice the size of her torso

Kawakami working on coloring next so seems like he will color previous chapters > bundle it > send it off to fakku and then work on tansho chapter

>>11396077
so no more chapters this year then

>>11396077
Damn that's gonna take a while, plus I was hoping he would finish more of those suggestions

>>11392221
Color when?

>>11393833
Why do you think some people were Tanshofags from the start when it was only her and Mara?

>>11396055
yeah if he was going to pump something up put that in her ass or tits or something

>>11396199
I'm a Yurifag personally. So I enjoy every chapter. Sadly Tansho chapters have been the weakest, I hope he does something about it.

>>11394589
Besides the only one who has a huge cum volume, Tansho's the only one who has an actual personality.
If the series ever got picked up by a publisher or he was somehow able to maintain the ecchi tone instead of plunging into porn her advantage might have faltered if the others could get fleshed out, but instead as the other elves have grown worse and Yuri herself got hit with the generic slutification arc, Tansho's stock has only risen.
>>11396212
>I'm a Yurifag
>Tansho chapters have been the weakest
I can't say I'm surprised. You'd never be allowed with Yurifags who were there from the start.

>>11396214
>You'd never be allowed with Yurifags who were there from the start.
Not my fault every Tansho chapter felt like a consolation prize rather than them developing their relationship.

>>11396340
>developing their relationship=more ahegao chapters
Tansho's the only one who ever had chapters resembling an actual development back when it started.

>>11396371
>back when it started.
Exactly.

>>11396603
>Exactly
Retardbro, I already explained to you that she's the only one that's maintained that advantage.

I really hope its a futa/futa scene that ends in double penetration

>>11396199
anti main girl syndrome

>>11396617
It's not perfect, since there lacked shots of the finished product that was uncensored, and most of it was at an angle. Also the video compression for this one was absolute garbage compared to the others for some reason.

>>11396199
Tansho makes the cutest faces and I don't like hyper

>Yuri kissing everyone is okay
>Elves kissing each other, NTR
Nigga what

>>11398208
i guess he's self-inserting as yuri, with her being the mc and all, so she can do whatever she wants, but if she's not involved it feels like ntr to him

>>11398208
This is pretty retarded

>>11398208
But Umanami and Funou were already kissing.

>>11398122
This was an actual nightmare, after the exposed uncensored areas were shown, he added like 50 fucking blur and saturation filters to it. It made it almost fucking impossible. Its not perfect since he keeps his fucking toolbars off screen now so I have no idea what the fuck he was doing, but its better than nothing.

>>11398319
Yeah but only with Yuri around and practically for her entertainment. The AV and Funao stuff is probably only allowed because it's in the past

>>11398349
>>11398122
He needs to make more art and pinups with smaller dick futas. Maybe there should be one in which her and tansho are touching each other.

>>11398208
How new?
This has been a theme of his.
He doesn't want to do futaxfuta because that cucks the MC out of the equation. Everything will always revolve around Yuri. Mara will never elope with Tansho. Uma will never get the self-confidence to take on her NBR by herself. So on, and so forth.

>>11398542
her NBR mom*

>>11398542
Yeah but that's in the manga. He is shooting down non canon study ideas.

>>11398553
That's the thing, he doesn't separate those two. I myself find the logic bizarre.

>>11398349
Anon doing god’s work

>>11398208
Fuck man, he’s taking away all the fun

>>11398319
>>11398349
>>11398122
Rate her size

>>11398637
>fun=cuckshit
Genuinely, I applaud KWKM for being one of the only mangaka to not do the "heehee it's totally not canon ;)" bullshit you retards always pull up as a smokescreen.
Futa elves are Yuri's property.

>>11398635
Yea I just got the Funou/Tansho and AV/Funou one left to do. He's drawing this shit too fast, cause I have to sit there and study his videos for hours guessing what the fuck filters he's using.

>>11398691
Ray-raw's manga is at its best when sticking to futa with female or futa with futa in girls only places.

>>11398208
Based.
Polyamorous female relationships are for cucks.
Yuri harem will remain pure.

Weren't all the elves giga promiscuous in the world lore

>>11398865
Yep and multiple partners is the norm

>>11398846
Show me more.

>>11398871
lol, kawakami put things in the story and forgets right after