Webcomic Critique and Traffic - /ic/ (#7613162) [Archived: 840 hours ago]

Rawry Renders
6/17/2025, 11:41:22 PM No.7613162
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Behold, my autistic creation, this NSFW Furry webcomic here https://juxyworld.cfw.me/comics/1/#content-start

pretty confident in my skills but still amateurish, so any critiques or advice with Clip Studio are welcome. Also trying to figure out how to get more traffic to my site, mostly hosting this on Comicfury.
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Anonymous
6/18/2025, 6:50:44 AM No.7613566
>>7613162 (OP)
I'm not clicking through to your nsfw furry comic, but I will offer a personal opinion based on your single page;
I get the feeling it's a bad idea to tilt your text in a comic, since it should be quick reading - It also feels like your shoving way to much text and textbubbles in to a panel, it'd likely have been better if you had spread it out more between the top, middle, and bottom panel.

I also think you're probably being too experimental with your panel layouts, BUT I do quite like how the bottom panel is broken up to give the tent a more circular feeling.
Anonymous
6/18/2025, 7:33:40 AM No.7613594
>>7613162 (OP)
Seriously, why do you make your mental illness and your fetishes the apparent central theme of your work?Do you seriously think people will be thrilled to read about those subjects outside of places like bluesky or FA? Im not trying to throw shit at your thread for no reason at all but Im also not going to pretend to like your work or its subject matter. I would dare say there is a sizeable % of that particular mentally ill ilk around these parts that enjoy such works and /ic/ is a digital sewage for anything art related after all, so I guess your efforts arent entirely misplaced.
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Anonymous
6/18/2025, 1:53:08 PM No.7613783
>>7613594
are you seriously saying people shouldn't post their art for critique on /ic/? would you rather want another anime girl in void thread? retarded crab
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Anonymous
6/19/2025, 4:43:52 AM No.7614462
>>7613783
>are you seriously saying people shouldn't post their art for critique on /ic/

Well..look at you, you know how to read. Yeah thats what I'm saying dumbass, no one with a shred of self respect should post their work on /ic/, I wish this cancerous board never made it back from the chicken jockey incident but I guess the world needs a sewer and sewer rats like you 2. Go eat some broken glass you stupid waste of oxygen.