Can I get some feedback pls?

>>7628049 (OP)
stop drawing grannies

>>7628052
Normal versh >>7628052
Nah

>>7628066
Everything from the neck up is impressively done. But her body is way too oversexualized.

>>7628049 (OP)
are you going for a medieval queen type character?
>>7628956
what if.. *gasp* thats the point

>>7628956
>>7628976
Yeah like a French 1800s cortesean, a tart, I did sexualise the character a lot but yeah I was trying to

>>7629056
I wanted to go for a oversexed character

>>7629059
needs a streak of gray in the hair

>>7629204
Why?

>>7629207
bc it makes my clitty leak

>>7629056
>>7629059
now she looks like an abuela
>>7629204
seems like ppl love pepper hairs

>>7628049 (OP)
finish the drawing if you want feedback.

>>7628049 (OP)
I think she's good but she could use one of those long sheer robes over it or something. Maybe something else you can think of that would suit the character more, but anything to balance the extremely topheavy design out. The hips alone just don't balance it well enough.

Also a note on your side view, if she's tightlacing a corset like that she shouldn't be slumping forward with a busted spine. I'd center her fat ass under her spine a bit more and mess with the corset shape.

>>7629059
Then work on your boob shape. Because right now it is supremely boring and underwhelming, especially when paired with exaggerated cartoony body and head.

>>7628049 (OP)
Post in the generals instead of opening your own threads for yous one artwork.
Common sense and board culture.

>>7630609
It's fine if people are going to be taking up a lot of images and posts just talking about their shit.

You can also hide threads you dislike, pussy.

>>7630534

>>7630697
Turnaround go brrrr

>>7630699
Yeah bud

>>7630699

>>7629059
>>7629056
I'd keep the blue eyes and make her blonde with brown roots growing in.

>>7631396

>>7631976