I want to know what you think of my drawing I had made the drawings with my signature but now that I read the rules that is prohibited because there is a dark spot, I want to know what I can improve and what errors there are, this is my first time in 4chan so I don't know how to use it well I'm using a translator in case there are errors thank you very much!( >>=)

>>7640322 (OP)
Go here if you want to post your art.
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>>7640322 (OP)
The main thing I'd change is the hair. Individual strands like that at least to me is very off putting, I'd try for clumps. Also to add a bit of depth I'd slow more of the fingers on the right wrapping around her back instead of being cut off

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>>7640322 (OP)
I would learn a bit more about shoulder anatomy and clothing folds and attempt this again.

>>7640332
I really liked the recommendation of the hands!:3, I didn't like the hair so much although I also do the hair in other drawings of mine :3 thank you very much for the recommendation!

>>7640416
glad to help!

>>7640333
I don't know what it means so sorry
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>>7640353
I will really try to improve in that, thank you very much :3!