Thread 49568503

Eternal flower—
Its beauty will not wither
Its fruits will not come

what a big baka
>writing haiku in english
get out of jaypee

>>49568503 (OP)
Sorry, I don't know how to write japanese poetry.

>>49568557
Thank (you) very much
I will commit seppuku
Can't delete thread, though

>>49568989
dont. pls rember
wen u feel scare or frigten
rember happy day

Sweet lady feet, yet
In half a millennium
Not a single wash

>>49569349
00/10

>>49569349
feet feet feet feet feet
feet feet feet feet feet feet feet
feet feet feet feet feet

>>49568503 (OP)
holy shit get out
of page ten you unseen thread
I just need to think

Soft delicate lips
Let loose the screams of anguish
I LOVE Satorin!

ずんだもち
美味しいなのだ
食べたいな～

At the station, two bright faces come the train to take.
A lotus floats along the lake.

I don't know how to write actual haikus

>>49568503 (OP)
Cherry blossoms falling on the ground
Their scent lingers
Yuyu a cute

>>49580642
I forgot about the syllable per verse thing

Cherry blossoms fall
Their scent still lingers around
Yuyuko a cute

In the evening sky,
clad in red and white, maiden
of eternal shrine.

Marisa's body
height more or less a child's worth
manhandled by me.

>>49586208
that's fucking beautiful
i'm in tears

>>49568503 (OP)
I don't have the IQ to make haiku on the fly.

>>49587018
Fairy laughed at that
"It's not problem with your head—
You don't fly, silly!"

Sad that such a fun thread is being ignored.
Another one (pic related).

Subterranean room,
earth rumbling in the distance,
comfiness inside.

Sparrow chirps gently
But I can't understand it
Am I deaf to song?

>>49597139
more like deaf to calliope.

Yuyuko is fat
I don't care about that though
She's still my ghost wife

>>49597162
I was going for "not getting semantic meaning" as a form of "deafness", but I see that my poetic skill was found severely lacking... lol.

Shrill winds from the east
Echo to the mountain tops
Snow on Hakusan

Bright flowers dancing
Over the riverine waves
To liberation

the jizz i have spilled
in my life to touhou girls
a summer lake's worth

>>49580164
A pure lotus swims
Sky and sea unite in red—
Time gently passes

It's a bit hard to write a haiku about Renko.

Storm is gathering—
Wind's rumblings send on crow's wings
Volatile as news

Pink cherry petals
Falling on the garden soil
Warrior's passing

Red-white butterfly
Dancing to the sound of flutes
Dawn fills the country

Rabbits under stars
Bamboo reaching for the moon—
Where could dust arise?

Mountain frogs greet dawn
Wind stirs the reeds by the lake
The mountain — unmoved

Moon over Kyoto
Rabbit watches turning stars
A lotus unfolds

Will sun rise again?
Will Fantasy continue?
Stop worrying and drink

A crow passing by
The old town’s weary districts
Crow’s view — summer’s wind

Deep in the jungle,
hidden, an abandoned shrine
—signs of ancient cult.

At the mountain's slopes
Echo terrifying sounds—
It's just some barking.

Profoundly orientalist thread

Old road filled with holes
Cold wind blows thru the shrine gate
A world made of gaps

/jp/ is surprisingly good at poetry.

>>49630489
i like this one.

Dressed in black, strong wind
Falling leaves carried above
In a moment — gone

Cold waves from the sea
Rise towards the mountain peak
White moon in the waves

In the sunny woods
A doll in a house, alone
Unbound by its strings

A heron flies down
Stillness under the full moon
No arrow in flight

It would be cool if we got a haiku for every 2hu.

Withered maple leaf
Twirling through cold autumn air
Lands on soothing stream

By the river shore
Under crimson canopy
Twirls the goddess, too

The Moon standing still
Light in the old, silent shrine
A sound at midnight

No clouds on the road
To the snowy mountain shrine
Small rock by the side

>>49632915
/jp/-Just Poetry

Drops of barley juice
Frogs sing to the cloudless moon
It's long after ten

As I fight the world
Your smile my call and purpose
Forever, always

A hot moonlit night
Rabbits in the bamboo grove
One rabbit looks up

For you all

Untrodden valley
Only the wind passes by
The leaves turning red

I think it's interesting which 2hus end up being represented in threads like this.

熱い夏
燃えるの感が
チルノの死

>>49569923
足足は
足足足の
足足だ！

Quietude above
Hot sun whips blackened storm clouds
The flash of lightning

淋しい小枝
恋は気まぐれな
容赦ない夏

On the village road
A white shape in the dark night
Wind turns at its back

Old light of the moon
Shines on the bamboo forest
An untouched mansion

>>49688940
Is it because some 2hus are more inspiring than others or because some fans are more creative than others?

Litter of kittens
Eight delivered, two survived—
Girl's got too few teats

Doors left wide agape
Hollow wind shears empty house
Some call this place home

Night falls on the other side
Lavender clouds gather, witnessing
The telltale sign of an evening star

A current pushes forth
Unbound by norm and rationale
Word of Wind God

Moonlit autumn night
The wind brushes a gravestone
Pink blossoms spring forth

i can't write one u_u i have writer's block

>>49719175
I don't quite recall
This thread being about you
No-one ever asked

Red and white maiden
Shrine bells echo through the mist
Duty calls again

Silver knives through time
Perfect maid serves endless tea
Seconds bend for her

A past, fading to dust
Deified, her duties mount
"For them, I'll do my best!"

Once, on Christmas Eve
Kanako asked for her wish—
"Total Youkai Death!"

Light in the cold night
Noise in the mausoleum
All dust falls in place

The stars in the sky
Beyond the clouds, far away
But close to the eye

>>49724204
cute doodle. the haiku is fine too.

>>49719273
look at that belly
holy shit just look at it
oh my fucking god

Come on, college boy
Can't suck a dick worth a damn
I'm taking that ass

It's so fucking deep
Ah! Ah! AAH! Yeah, take it boy!
Grab my fucking balls

Upon the mountain
Frog’s call echoes allover
The old earth stands still

>>49724585
Thanks anon, it means a lot coming from you.

hidden from the sight
little lady jumps and play
she slept for all day

The sun's heat rises
From beneath the mountain snow
Eggs spun by hot steam

No wind blows away
The pink petals on the road
No footsteps crush them

>>49738599
うお、幽々子の
ファンタズムごリアル・FEET
ほんとにエロイ

At dollmaker's house
No human shape moves about
Day's end, night has come

Even the moon sleeps
Lost rays of light run about
The cock in the dawn

Lux in tenebris
Even darkness cannot hide—
From eternal flame

Green fields and forests
Filled with festive sound and light
Gone like drifting smoke

Wind brushes the cup—
Steam dances up to the sky,
Mind drifts without weight

Trees are turning green
Clouds pushed by the eastern wind
Snow melting, so soon

>>49738599
Good one.

newborn leaves
tickled by the wind
haru desu

The south wind ceases,
The hill shakes under bird’s wings—
Jizo fell over

It's surprising how this thread has gone on for so long.

Flowers drift around
In the calm river water,
From the fog, new waves

Harvest moon, cold night—
By the road, a stone Jizo
Wearing a straw hat

Oni and Maiden
Split the melon’s crimson heart
Friendship in the shade

Train wheels start turning,
The misty fields move backwards
To the engine's hum

>>49775024
Japanese Goblin
Starts reading between the lines
Hopes she isn't next

Thru the sun-filled path,
Under a roof made of leaves
Green shower of light

A black wind dashes,
Bathed in the white clouds above—
The lark on the breeze

A form on the field
Floating on yellow petals
The sun shines above

A sparrow flies by
Melting in the night's dark shade—
It's song ringing still

>>49569349
10/10

At the mountain top
Over the snow-filled pathway
A face in the mist

By the shrine at night,
A sudden sound vanishes
In a purple flash

Slashing from above
Crimson blade of the angel
Neither here nor there

The mist rolls around
Wet branches rock back and forth—
A forest of dolls

Peaceful summer days
Pass unwitnessed as she rests
Sun warming her skin

Panting Purple Witch
Mourning loss of literature
Wakes her with a slap

Is that your money?
Everything belongs to me.
Your money is mine.

Buddhist training? Bah!
Screw the rules, I have money!
Earthly desires rule!

The unchanging moon
Shoots arrows of light below,
The rabbits sleep tight

Night of providence
His divine light shines northward,
Where veiled gold awaits.

Loud noise approaches,
The birds in the trees take flight
The train, coming home

>>49568503 (OP)
i fucking
love
kpop

"No season words" verdict.
A ladybug
Is less of an eyesore

Spam filter?
Instead
Block mosquitoes

>>49580164
Finally at least a bowl of stale water in this hell
>>49581313
>syllable per verse
Westoid invention irrelevant to actual Japanese haiku rules
>>49600818
Interesting, if a bit basic.
>>49604917
Naming the season is not a season word if you're not evoking the very feeling of the season.
>>49611848
Storms aren't specific to a season.
>>49612033
This is fine.
>>49635188
This is okay.
>>49647370
Yahoo!
>>49662116
Okay.
>>49669820
Interesting, actually.

"Temperature alone's enough for kigo"
Bigger disaster
Than post-drought flood

Faint buzz and bloom
Worth
The mud surroundings

Cicada my witness as I can't go on;
Yet to rant on kireji, mono no aware
A haiku pro - not even

Summer thunderstorm
Black-white witch rides lightning home
Stars ignite the night

I can't think of one, but I don't want this thread to die.

Wicked hermit’s art
Jiangshi necromancer calls
Silent bump from grave

>>49846747
Thanks anon.

A cold wind at night
The clouds reveal the full moon
Its light fills the field

In the autumn air
Stars rush across the night sky,
Wide eyes gaze at them

>>49831315
I kind of like this one, despite it not having a season indicator.
Even the direction of the wind could work. Something like "Bright light follows the north wind."

Above the old dirt,
A stone faced by the cold winds
Ever unmoving

I’ve got nothing right now, but I’m bumping to keep this thread alive. Keep up the good work, anons!

White mist, sunny day
A blossom drifts from a branch
Never to return

Sliding down once more
You won't die before your time
Stay a little more

Autumn winds gusting
A new world, far from it all
The snake is reborn

Alternatively:

I love her so much
A really wonderful girl
Miracles happen

Midsummer's downpour
Pebble on the river bank
Unconscious white rose

>>49897271
>>49901848
nice ones

As the seasons change:
A good thread, on page 10? How?
Don't die, /2haiku/!

Wind brushes the trees,
Its sound fills the blazing night—
Eyes close, smoke rises.

I don't have time to think of one again, I'm not letting this thread die though.

Lamb of Avarice
Devouring worlds, conquers all
Glutton's Ambition

Greedy little lamb
Endless desires consume me
All of mine is yours

The summer sunset
Reflects on each coming wave
Breaks—then comes again.

Below the green trees
Like a doll with sunlit strings
A girl looking back

Go up haiku thread
You shouldn't go to sleep yet
Anons should write more

On the blooming fields,
Thru sunlit hills and rivers,
Cold wind in the grass

bump

Autumn wind arrives,
The sun rises from the hills,
Pyon! Rabbit rabbit!

>>49946975
nice one

秋の夢：
「明日ハレの日、
ケの昨日。」

In English:

An autumn night's dream:
"Tomorrow will be special,
yesterday was not."

At the end of spring,
The little umbrella says:
BOO! Are you surprised?

>>49951672
AAAAAAAH!

I'm the strongest!
And the best at writing haikus!
Off by one? Can't be me!

>>49951718
Cheeky.

I'm out of ideas
Writing haiku is hard, dude
I'm going to bed

>>49955560
a princess like kaguya should be able to come up with haiku on the spot...

>>49956579
Isn't haiku supposed to be more rustic, all things considered? I'd expect Kaguya to be pretty proficient in tanka.

>>49956618
i said on the spot for a reason. the longer a piece a poetry, the harder to improvise it.

>>49956618
If this thread reaches bump limit, we should have a 2waka thread next.

River guide
Hard at work today
Breast sweat

Keep it going!

An alien visage
Playful mischief, primal fears
The Unknown mirage

False corpse in the depths
Your journey has yet to end
Voyage to the peak

The leaves hold steady
In the early wind and rain—
Summer's end has come

Over melted snow,
Winds gather around a tree
To bring pink petals

The cold wind blows forth,
Ascends towards the heavens—
The bright stars stand still

We did it, we're half way to bump limit!

>>49972947
>we're half way to bump limit!
sasuga ne