>>50254409
Very dam cute. Love the red/blue light and how the wings merge with the darkness
>>50258800
imo this one's better than
>>50259252 The line between the first and second panel shouldn't be thicker than the one between both and the 3rd panel.
But I'm a superweeb so I default to right-to-left
No problem telling it's Koa at the end since the eyes are the same in the shadow in the first panel.
But I guess most people didn't pay too much attention to that panel
Making mute comics that are understood by everyone is hard.
I prefer cute stuff like
>>50267682 but it's nice to see someone getting into comics.
>>50268028
Nice shading on the hair and face, would make the line of her mouth black though. Legs feel disconnected from the body, looking at
>>50268653 it feels like you've really practice a lot faces but don't usually draw hip/lower torso
But it's moe!
