Thread 40713666

>Be me, 23 mtf. Transitioned for a year. Only had sex with one person, a bottom tranny.
>I'm a bottom but I was desperate for attention early in transition.
>Break up after 2 months.
>Start looking to date men, but chicken out over some months.
>I pass pretty well now at 24.
>Friend asks if I can come to a little gathering with a few friends and strangers.
>Agree because why not?
>Seems chill. This guy a few years older than me keeps chatting my head off.
>I'm feeling nervous because I've yet to go out with a guy.
>My friend sucks at keeping secrets, so I assumed he knew I was trans.

He did not.

>I mentioned something about transition.
>Confusion. Then it clicks and his eyes light up a little.
>He doesn't mention it.
>An hour later I'm preparing to leave for the party and he asks me for my number.
>I give it to him, because why not?
> Four days later he texts me and asks to see a movie. Again, I agree.
>It wasn't bad. He was nice and paid for my ticket. Seems like he wanted to say something but doesn't.
>2 days later he reaches out again and asks to watch a movie at his place.
>Friend seems to trust him, so I just go with it.
>I wear a cute dress.
>House is clean and smells good.
>He seems cheery and a little nervous.
>Start watching Dr Strange.
>I can see him eying me the whole time in my peripheral.
>30 minutes into the movie he blurts out asking if he can kiss me.
>I'm not too surprised by it, but it still shocked me a bit.
>He's very attractive and at least a head taller than me. I just can't believe it.
>I stammer out a yes.
>He just gives me a brief one and asks if that's okay. I shake my head up and down slowly.
>Then he's on me with a deep kiss.
>He's heavy, I wouldn't be able to get him off even if I wanted to.
> He starts groping my tits and ass.
>I'm melting. Neve had anything like this.
>He suddendly stops and asks if I want more.
>I want to say no, it's too much, but I just shake my head yes automatically.

Continues below.

Part 2

>He looks through his dresser and pulls out a flat chastity cage. He says, "only if you be a good girl and wear this".

>In my private life I enjoy chastity and can fit into a flat one.
>I quickly leave the room to put it on and come back still dressed.
>"show"
>I feeze up for a second.
>"Show" but louder and more commanding.
>I comply and lift the front of my dress.
>"There we go, nice and cute"
>"key"
>I listen the first time and place the key in his hand.
>"Now that you are listening to orders....
>He pulls his pants down and up springs a 7 inch, thick veiny cock.
>Holy shit
>I look down and glance back and forth between my nonexistent member and his giant.
>He proceeds to put his hand on my head and push down until I was on my knees, eye level with his cock.
>"Suck girl"
>i instantly feel my cage strain, but only slightly. I don't really get hard anymore from the hrt.
>I start to kiss and lick his tip before slowly taking it in my mouth. I do this for at least a minute.
>He puts his hand on the back of my head and I slowly feel myself being able to move my head back less and less.
>Soon I can't breath and start to gag, but he pulls my head all the way to the base before he lets me go.
>I'm coughing and gagging and have tears in the corner of my eyes.
>"Good girl, Nonna"
>I'm still a little dazed, nothing but lust in my mind.

>He sits on the bed, cock sticking straight up. He pats his leg.

>I shake my head no. "I.. I don't know if I'm ready"

>He stands up and just looks at me.
>He grabs my wrist and I take a step back and pull at my wrist.

>Nothing budges. Oh fuck. Oh no.

>"Please, I.. I can't"

>"I didn't ask" he says.

>He pulls my wrist and then grabs me and literally tosses me onto the bed like nothing.

>He takes both my wrists in one hand and I still can't get free.
>With his other hand he lifts my dress
>He looks like an animal that has caught it's prey.
>"Oh Nonna, why did you disobey" "Now I have to train you"

Part 3 continues...

Part 3

>"Please no I-
>His cock still wet with my saliva he enters me.
>Complete shock and pain.
>I start to let out a cry but my mouth is instantly covered with his free hand.
>After around 40 seconds it changes and my brain starts to get foggy again.
>Omg what is this. Omg.
>"Take that dick you disobedient bitch" he growls.
>Pleasure radiates through my body.
>He feels my body clench.
>"I fuckin knew it you naughty girl" he says grinning.
>More pleasure.
>I notice myself moaning in pleasure. God knows how long I've been doing that before I noticed.
>"Here comes your reward"
>Oh no. Oh fuck. This cannot happen. I used to be a man, I can't just let this happen.
>I put all my strength into a last ditch attempt to free myself.
>I only move him a little before he readjusts his grip and hold me tighter.
>I'm about to be boyremoved. No going back.
>Then in an instant it happens. He lets out a long moan and holds me so tight it hurts.
>I feel the warmth.
>A few seconds go by and then he pulls out. He slaps my ass hard and says, "I think I may have just got you pregnant"
>I lowkey believe him.
>I'm a little zoned out and not paying attention.
>I suddendly feel cold sensation in the back and then something enters.
>A butt plug
>"Okay princess, I've gotta go see my family soon so I've got to ask you to leave.
>"Umm can I have the key"?
>"I'll see you in a few days, I know you can do it he says smiling.
>What have I gotten myself into.
>I pull down my dress, and grab my bag.
>He slaps my ass again as I walk by him.
>"See you soon" he says.

Thanks for reading! >u<

lame boring cisfem chad romance
i guess you pass in the mental department

Straight to chastity was too much, checked out of this fantasy

>>40713741
this
>>He looks through his dresser and pulls out a flat chastity cage. He says, "only if you be a good girl and wear this".
ruined it for me

good fagslop but needs to be more slowburn... also no aftercare? this guys a fucking asshole.thx 4 writing

>>40714098
You want him to suck OP's dick?

>>40714131
I don't really know what I'd want to ideally happen, because I'm not much into reading sex scenes and nobody writes these without the expectation of there being long sex scenes
>>He starts groping my tits and ass.
>>I'm melting. Never had anything like this.
this was nice imagery to me in part 1 but then i guess it kind of has to go in a direction that I don't like, but then I guess I would maybe agree that it should be more of a slowburn at least than them just jumping to like straight...that

Part 1: cute 7/10 fagslop
Part 2+: fucking -5/10 degeneracy

>no aftercare
wtf is even the point?? Take this back to the kitchen 6/10

>>40713693
> He looks through his dresser and pulls out a flat chastity cage. He says, "only if you be a good girl and wear this".
it was hot and believable until this

>>40713666 (OP)
>Be me, 23 mtf. Transitioned for a year.
>I pass pretty well now at 24.
Stopped reading there

>>40714201
>>40714243
>>40714294
Okay no. I'm sorry guys, I let you down :( I will remember the feedback.

>>40714331
It's okay anon the beginning part was really good but it got pretty rapey so it needs sweetness at the end to balance things out like a good meal...

>>40714355
This. Also shorter and less paraphilic imo. Give it some fruity love.

Part one is perfect, wouldn't change a thing
but it's realistic, so when part 2 starts with
>>He looks through his dresser and pulls out a flat chastity cage. He says, "only if you be a good girl and wear this".
it immediately becomes extremely obvious that this is fake, which breaks immersion. it's jarring.
the content was mostly pretty hot but this developed way too quickly.
i feel your pain, tho, sometimes you don't want to write a novel just to get to the chastity cage parts
it's a hard thing to force yourself to do but i think there are two separate stories here. one about nona finding a boyfriend and having sex with him for the first time (rape is always a bold choice btw a lot of people will love it and a lot of people will hate it), and then a story about nona getting locked in a chastity cage by her bf unexpectedly. idk if forcing the two together really works.

a lotta people are talking about aftercare and im gonna be honest: i think that's optional. just because it's not what people want irl doesn't mean it cant be hot in a story - i think even the people complaining about it still feel a little squirmy at the thought, even if they know from experience that they don't like that.
just my crazy theory, tho

>>40714403
I think this makes perfect sense. Thank you.

>>40714423
Also, I kinda agree. That was kind of my intention, but it seems I was too heavy handed.

>I start to let out a cry but my mouth is instantly covered with his free hand.
>After around 40 seconds it changes and my brain starts to get foggy again.
>Omg what is this. Omg.
>"Take that dick you disobedient bitch" he growls.
>Pleasure radiates through my body.
>He feels my body clench.
>"I fuckin knew it you naughty girl" he says grinning.
>More pleasure.
>I notice myself moaning in pleasure. God knows how long I've been doing that before I noticed.
>"Here comes your reward"
>Oh no. Oh fuck. This cannot happen. I used to be a man, I can't just let this happen.
>I put all my strength into a last ditch attempt to free myself.
>I only move him a little before he readjusts his grip and hold me tighter.
>I'm about to be boyremoved. No going back.
>Then in an instant it happens. He lets out a long moan and holds me so tight it hurts.
>I feel the warmth.
>A few seconds go by and then he pulls out. He slaps my ass hard and says, "I think I may have just got you pregnant"
>I lowkey believe him.
>My brain is fuzzy and half-conscious but I can feel his wetness leaking out between my thighs
>I whimper a bit as he pushes my hair to the side and kisses the back of my neck
>"fuck that looks so hot, princess" he murmurs as he nuzzles me
>I can't tell if I'm shivering because I'm cold or my body is just exhausted and completely given up on trying to get away from him
>but he is just so warm...
>and he smells so good now
>he chuckles, "it's pretty cute how desperate to cuddle you've gotten all of a sudden"
>his arm locks around my waist and unceremoniously yanks us into spooning position with my ass brushing up against his cock
>I wriggle and try to mumble something in my defense but he's already cocooned us under the covers
>"shh don't try to get me going again" he groans
>I let myself go limp
>drift off as his hands keep exploring my body
>Uh the next morning we ate breakfast or some shit or I made pancakes and got dicked down in the kitchen idfk
Eh I tried?

I don't agree with everyone else about the aftercare, i think having a curt ending like that can add to the hot rapey vibes. I do agree with them about it developing too quickly and unrealistically though. Thank you for writing nona

>>40714501
I really like this. It's cute and still hot. Noted! :)

>>40714516
Agree and agree. Thank you.

>>40714516
Of course it's a personal taste thing. I like hurt/no comfort endings in a multiple part story that will eventually make the final aftercare all the more mushy, but I kinda get where you're coming from.

I liked it but too rapey for my taste. Also no aftercare is criminal.
Up until the BJ it was peak, even if I'm not into chastity.

you write like an amateur. but with how different the first and second parts are, its clear that part 1 is something either someone has done to you or has told you that they will do that you. whereas part 2 is just ur fantasy. a good top likes to have fun and not get straight into fucking. youre still green, young grasshopper :)

>>40713666 (OP)
Federal government will round up transgender women like the homeless in DC.

>>40713666 (OP)
Transgender pornography is dropping in rankings.

>>40713705
>gets banged without lube or foreplay
>"omgeez it feels so good"
>raped but they like it theme
This was written by a retarded woman. All fujos should be killed.