I enjoyed it, the story itself was exciting to me.

Badly written wish fulfillment. Total waste of time. Also, if that many nuclear bombs had been set off, the world would be a radioactive graveyard.

>>24473617
How was it badly written? The story was interesting, the characters believable. I dunno how to do the hidden script but I think you might have a valid point.

>>24473644
Let me rephrase my last sentence: I dunno how to hide my text spoilers, but I think your text spoiler was a legit criticism, and I did notice it myself when I read it.

>>24473617
back to kiwifarms jewlover

>>24472876 (OP)
where does one find a copy of this? my Library is all out.

>i enjoyed it
low iq

>>24474006
What’s a more culturally relevant story?

>>24472876 (OP)
It's always interesting to read one of these bogeyman books, to see what they actually contain. The media would have you believe just by reading this book you'll take a questionably obtained truck with a guy that never existed to your nearest federal building.

I think when people say bad writing they are talking about the diary entry format which is a shitty narrative crutch for writers, everything ends up being a list of remarks on events that occurred.

There's also alot of killing. Characters seem to be able to kill without it affecting them much, especially when they are killing people deemed as traitors. Honestly my main gripe with the book is that, everyone is hyper competent and autistic to the rules. The organisation just suddenly exists, no in-fighting, it's a totally efficient guerrilla fighting machine that suffers few setbacks and can operate nationwide. Unlikely.

Also the ending is really stupid, it should've ended after they got to California. Like the whole global nuclear war wouldn't destroy the world? And the main character being forced to suicide mission at the end because he gave up secrets earlier in the book due to being tortured for days on end. As if the organization is so autistic that they can't understand that people will inevitably break under torture. So stupid.

Overall it was an interesting read. A time capsule of boomer white nationalist thinking.

>>24473617
>written wish fulfillment.
>NOOOOO YOU CANT WRITE ABOUT THE THINGS YOU FANTASIZE NOOOOOOOOOO
found the kike

>>24473644
The plot, characters, and theme were all infantile. It tried to be le edgy but instead was teenage edgelord cringe. If it makes you feel any better, I thought Amygdalatropolis was worse.
>>24473848
>>24474763
cope
>>24474003
download it

>>24474743
Interesting take, thank you anon

>>24475149
>get called out and owned
>N-N-N-NOOO YOU DONT HAVE AN ARGUMENT
people can write whatever they fucking want

>>24472876 (OP)
William Luther Pierce was an autistic fratricidal hot-headed retard.

civilized racists read Ben Klassen.

>>24473617
jew boy

>>24476077
>anyone who disagrees with me is a Jew.

retards like you were sterilized in Hitler's Germany.

>>24476084
>>anyone who disagrees with me is a Jew.
kvtch more jew ywnbaw

>>24476086
sorry. I don't speak Mexican.

>>24476084
The point is you don't have an argument. You just don't like the book because it hurt your fee fees about your precious commies, faggots, jews and niggers.
kike.

>>24476091
sorry, I couldn't quite hear you. could you say that again without munching on a taco?

>>24476094
again, no arguments lol. sad kike

>>24476099
cool. now post a timestamp so we can all see those greasy brown hands of yours, Pablo.

>>24476062
Yes, people can write whatever they want, but no one has to care.
>>24476077
If you're the type that's a fan of this book, I'm glad I can't stand it.

>>24475908
You're welcome. Like I said it's always interesting to read one of these bogeyman books.

>>24472876 (OP)

Odd kind of utopian novel that inadvertently reveals the poverty of the authors world view. The author has a long list of people standing in the way of his Zion( like 90% of the world's population), but when it comes to describing what he is in favor of all you get vague gesticulations towards collectivized agricultural. The incoherent combination of culture pessimism and existential optimism that lies at the heart of the fascist worldview, the idea some social paradise can rise like a pheonix out of the corpses of all of the bad brain people, fuels nothing but a touchy, easily rattled anxiety and self pity.

>>24476807
Ok anon I’ll bite. What exactly is the solution for society to function properly you would suggest in lieu of his vague ideas?

>>24472876 (OP)
People on all sides take WLP a lot more seriously than I think he meant. I knew some people who asked him about Hunter while it was in progress and his recurring answer to the story was "I don‘t know but there will be a lot of sex and guns."

>>24473644
>How was it badly written?
The writing, the actual prose, is utterly risible. If I'd turned it in in high school I would have expected to be lambasted, not for the content but for the fact that it reads like a thirteen year old's masturbation fantasy.

>>24477128
well it certainly can't compete with an utterly risible /lit/tard I'll tell you that

>>24472876 (OP)
Never actually finished it desu.
lt was okay.
lf Netflix was based l think the adaptation as a short series would be better then on the page.
There's alot of action and the format of the story itself just lends itself more to film then a novel.

>>24476807
You're treating it like manifesto rather then novel.
lf you talked to a foot soldier in any revolution throughout history you'd get little more then the sort of incoherent idealism you articulate.
ln so far as peirce deserves critique its not for demonstrating this in the novel (quite the opposite) its in him trying in places to treat it like the manifesto its not and doing ideology exposition dumps in the middle.
Most of the story is just action and underdescribed sex though.
You dont have to be marxist to enjoy a book about the russian revolution and you dont have to be a racist to enjoy turner diaries.

>>24477102
NTA but people need to have hope. Without that, they become resentful and foment revolution. Free enterprise, not handouts.

If I were to rewrite this book the first thing I would do is get rid of the diary format, it destroys tension and it lends itself to a bunch of dear diary blah blah that just plain sucks.

Second I would spend far more of the book in the beginning, showing how things fell apart, the gun seizures, racial policing etc. The book takes one of the most interesting things in the book and turns it into mere exposition.

Finally I'd do away with the organization and have it be what it would be in reality, lots of disorganised cells coming together organically to fight the system. And my protagonist wouldn't be some hardcore autistic superman that can kill without flinching, people learn to kill, there's a difference between fighting your enemy and executing a white woman in cold blood for a race crime. Doing that would affect you.

Finally I'd have the ending be way less stupid.

>>24472876 (OP)
I enjoyed it too; hearing the audiobook read by the author gives it a special flavor
>>24478592
I agree with the first two points
the other two points are understandable but remind yourself that it was written in the vein of 70s military pulp or comic books
of we consider that there are no other published (and readable...) works of "nazi" fiction, it's a miracle that even this exists

It inspired a bunch of terrorists and is illegal in several countries so I don't think "le prose" is the selling point, dumb-dumb.