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Anonymous No.24484484 [Report]
Hello saars! I wrote a poem about what it is like to be a brown man in a white man's world. Please critique!

>I used to think that black lives didn't matter
>Thought they shouldn't even be a factor.
>But now I see the truth, it's oh so clear
>Blacks are not the ones we need to fear


>Those whose skin is white must understand
>They're colonizers of our sacred land.
>Destroying all the history we made
>Time to be revengeful, not afraid.


>Rise and take up arms against your masters
>Time to end this awful, bloody chapter
>Make the white man hear our cries of rage
>We will end this so called "golden age"
>India will rule the world with ease
>Soon, you all will cower on your knees
Anonymous No.24484513 [Report] >>24484523
obviously fake, i hope you used chatgpt for this because composing a fake indian commie ultra poem of this length is too much effort even if you are bored.
Anonymous No.24484523 [Report]
>>24484513
No saar! Not ChatGPT, it is a real poem that I wrote.