Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:19:13 PM No.24496090
what do anons think of my prose:
"If where not for this void, where else would I shout for mercy?"
"If where not for this void, where else would I shout for mercy?"
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Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:21:29 PM No.24496094
>>24496090 (OP)
Might be the worst prose I've ever read out of that line alone. But I'm not trying to be mean. It's just very corny and cliché, pretentious. Albeit it's always like that when you're starting, just keep writing.
Might be the worst prose I've ever read out of that line alone. But I'm not trying to be mean. It's just very corny and cliché, pretentious. Albeit it's always like that when you're starting, just keep writing.
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Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:25:43 PM No.24496102
>>24496094
making the effort. spent around five years not even able to read because eyeball issues.
>consider the reference
Tt's literally about anons shitposting on 4chinsky all day.
making the effort. spent around five years not even able to read because eyeball issues.
>consider the reference
Tt's literally about anons shitposting on 4chinsky all day.
Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:30:19 PM No.24496110
>>24496090 (OP)
>checked around for infringement after I wrote this out
"In one hand I hold the key to the other I hold the lock?"
>this can't be original? Either way, it came out of me and I like it.
>checked around for infringement after I wrote this out
"In one hand I hold the key to the other I hold the lock?"
>this can't be original? Either way, it came out of me and I like it.
Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:38:33 PM No.24496127
>>24496090 (OP)
"Where did it go, where did IT go?
Ah, my head!
Of course, of course
Alone on the mountaintop being content
Again, again."
"Where did it go, where did IT go?
Ah, my head!
Of course, of course
Alone on the mountaintop being content
Again, again."
Anonymous
6/25/2025, 10:58:34 PM No.24496182
>>24496090 (OP)
Ah, my head, I say
A vain attempt to shout,
More so if I did it would
Just echo all about,
With key and lock my
Hands are bound
My feet are chained to the ground,
Why then do you insist
To send my out this awful test?
Ah, my head, I say
A vain attempt to shout,
More so if I did it would
Just echo all about,
With key and lock my
Hands are bound
My feet are chained to the ground,
Why then do you insist
To send my out this awful test?
Anonymous
6/25/2025, 11:07:14 PM No.24496206
>>24496094
yes, I agree it is about starting out - was thinking of it as a title but I finished most of the rest. The body without a head is like that of a boulder that needs a push to start rolling.
yes, I agree it is about starting out - was thinking of it as a title but I finished most of the rest. The body without a head is like that of a boulder that needs a push to start rolling.
Anonymous
6/25/2025, 11:43:37 PM No.24496274
>>24496090 (OP)
We must agree to do our best,
Too many have been up here without a vest,
But you have come!
Take me back so we may roam,
You have my heart and I your wits,
But alone,
This mountain just persists.
We must agree to do our best,
Too many have been up here without a vest,
But you have come!
Take me back so we may roam,
You have my heart and I your wits,
But alone,
This mountain just persists.
Anonymous
6/26/2025, 12:05:45 AM No.24496315
>>24496090 (OP)
>construction complete
>pic related mah feels after writing
If where not for this void, where else would I shout for mercy?
In one hand I hold the key to the other I hold the lock?
Where did it go, where did IT go?
Ah, my head!
Of course, of course
Alone on the mountaintop being content
Again, again.
Ah, my head, I say
A vain attempt to shout,
More so if I did it would
Just echo all about,
With key and lock my
Hands are bound
My feet are chained to the ground,
Why then do you insist
To send my out this awful test?
We must agree to do our best,
Too many have been here without a vest,
But you have come!
Take me back so we may roam,
You have my heart and I your wits,
But alone,
This mountain just persists.
>construction complete
>pic related mah feels after writing
If where not for this void, where else would I shout for mercy?
In one hand I hold the key to the other I hold the lock?
Where did it go, where did IT go?
Ah, my head!
Of course, of course
Alone on the mountaintop being content
Again, again.
Ah, my head, I say
A vain attempt to shout,
More so if I did it would
Just echo all about,
With key and lock my
Hands are bound
My feet are chained to the ground,
Why then do you insist
To send my out this awful test?
We must agree to do our best,
Too many have been here without a vest,
But you have come!
Take me back so we may roam,
You have my heart and I your wits,
But alone,
This mountain just persists.
Anonymous
6/26/2025, 6:19:19 PM No.24497970
>>24496094
read this OP post >>24493241
it is a quick/simple brainstorming exercise to get the mental juices movin before reading/writing.
read this OP post >>24493241
it is a quick/simple brainstorming exercise to get the mental juices movin before reading/writing.