>>24513447 (OP)Stylistically, this passage wears its erudition lightly but insistently. There is not a single academic citation, yet the diction is steeped in seminar-room grandiosity. Ruben’s voice wants to dazzle, but the performative twitches (parenthetical “yes,” self-interrupting “I guess”) function like disclaimers, half-apologizing for the very performance they cannot resist. That combination of apologetic bravado feels distinctively mid-century American Jewish, echoing Bellow or Roth while vibrating at a contemporary frequency; the tension between assimilation and cultural particularity is audible even before any plot has emerged.
For all its charm, the very exuberance that dazzles can tip into overstatement, saturating the prose with a relentless cleverness that threatens to exhaust the reader before the story properly begins. Ruben’s penchant for parenthetical fussing and self-correction foregrounds style so aggressively that substance risks slipping into the margins; one begins to notice the performance of erudition more than the ideas it might meant to convey. That same performative verve leaves little room for affective shading: we are presented with intellect and wit, but emotion remains largely abstract, so the narrator’s humanity can feel curiously distant despite the self-exposure.