Thread 24868797

What does /lit/ think of the introduction to my manifesto.

Also general thread for inceldom. simps and faggots should be filtered. do not reply to them. Do not argue with people who believe women should have reproductive choice. They are your enemies.

>>24868797 (OP)
Ah yes of course, the literature board. Let me drop some recs and bump the thread while I do it

>>24868797 (OP)
Poor punctuation, immediately stopped reading. You have no regard for you readers or their time, and so I have no regard for your writing.

>>24868813
woman spotted.

>>24868797 (OP)
>Pornocracy
kek'd

>>24868818
It's a reference to a book by proudhon. He wrote of the rule of harlots 150 year ago.

This classic.

>>24868812
Good companion book.

Scientific types should drop their books on evo-psyche.

Beep

>>24868797 (OP)
Actually pretty good because the faux intellectual style enhances the pathetic insecurity dripping from your retarded ideas

>>24868965
It's meant for illiterates. Help me make it dumber.

>>24868968
Why do you niggers even bother writing manifestos when King Incel Eliot already dropped My Twisted World? You will NEVER top that masterpiece. I highly recommend you read it.

>>24868977
ER doesnt explain hypergamy in his manifesto bro. He doesnt explain the demographic situation leading to inceldom in sex, and he finally doesnt realize that mass sexlessness leads men onto the war path.

If ER read my write he wouldn't have gone ER. He would stock up an ammo and wait for the boogaloo.

>>24868797 (OP)
You should take the energy you used to write this and get laid instead, one actual orgasm caused by another human will cure you of these non stop fallacies

>>24868797 (OP)
>OP asks about his manifesto
>he finishes writing it then shoots up a school or whatever
>later, someone uncovers him asking for help on his manifesto on /lit/
>they exposeit and /lit/ gets raided
FUCK OP DON'T DO IT

>>24868983
You’re so retarded. Eliot goes into very personal details about hypergamy in his life, you’re approaching this from a neoliberal gay social scientist standpoint. Perhaps you should consult with your pedophile professor in the sauna instead of slandering Roger’s manifesto that was written from the heart

>>24868816
My dick's bigger than yours, and you've probably got one of those big ol tard dicks.

>>24868797 (OP)
Honestly your writing sounds like it was written by a fascist.

Your very first sentence tries to group the world into two groups and then you even write that it's been like this all the time. How do you not see more nuance? And then you continue combat or death, struggle or extinction etc...

Seriously you would benefit going out and talking to 10 strangers each day and doing some random acts of kindness for people. I think your world view would signifigantly improve.

>>24869009
If ER understood hypergamy he wouldn't be going after blonde stacies with his negative SMV

>>24868797 (OP)
Being a virgin in the big 25 is crazy

>>24868987
Nah I am repulsive to women
>>24868990
Not shooting up a school sweaty. My book will be a foundation to justify the concentration camps of the future.
>>24869011
Yes I have a small penis.
>>24869016
You have less of an understanding of the world than I did when I was a teenager.

>>24869250
There are more virgin men now than ever before retard.

>>24868797 (OP)
>>24869253
Why not do the ancient thing of fucking twinks

>>24869268
My boyfriend does (to me)

odds the author is troon that gooned his way into deep self loathing?

>>24868797 (OP)
Pretty good, 6/10, you'll be on your way to maximum security prison in no time

>>24869016
Thats not true. It will make him more determined because most people are animals

>>24868797 (OP)
It's not very evocative. It feels like you are imitating stylistic choices of other manifestos too self-consciously - a hodgepodge of Marx, Kaczynski, and various right-wing moralists. It doesn't produce a lot of pictures in the brain. You should try to trim down the mannerisms. Write with your gut. Write what you really want to say. Write the stuff that bleeds from your pores.

>>24869302
How did you know? Hahaha.

>>24868797 (OP)
Indifference is the way. Find a way to enjoy life without women ever entering your thoughts. That's the way of the truecel. That's what you should teach. Imagine what the world would look like if every man refrained from having sex, finally freeing themselves from their million-year-old shackles, from the outdated view that their masculinity and self worth is tied to their ability to seduce women.

>>24868797 (OP)
>To-day
Stopped reading

>>24868797 (OP)
You need to kill yourself. Family is a net negative for a man. Family is how women practice gynocracy.

>>24869336
Based beyond belief

>>24869638
>family is a net negative for a man
Yeah bro having a mother and a father is in the development in the development of a man's life...

>>24869660
You are domesticated by women and now your purpose in life is to be a pussy slave for the rest of your life, my condolences. You wouldn't get it.

>>24869675
Sorry bro, but my father beat my mom every time she acts up. Not everyone is a pussywhipped whiteoid like you

>>24869700
>>Sorry bro, but my father beat my mom every time she acts up.
They like it, that's what they want. They want men to be possessive of them and be their slaves and provide for them. Congrats your dad is cuckold.

>>24869725
That is true but my mom also worked.

>>24868797 (OP)
I'll critique the writing since everyone else is just tearing you up personally.

This is a series of nonsensical binary fallacies over and over again, declaring we are only given two choices.
>Continued impoverishment = combat or death.
However you provide no evidence to back your claims, that we have to make/must choose either of these. It's a non sequitur logic leap and you might as well suggest we all become bird trainers. You might say, "you would't get it" but you you are the one writing the manifesto to convince us and it's not hitting hard enough.

>>24869815
>However you provide no evidence to back your claims,
Yeah bro, maybe you can read the book after I read it. Retard.

>>24868797 (OP)
>To-day
Dropped

>>24869660
The only thing a man needs is the self.

>>24868810
I heard he went mad after writing this

>>24869846
Luxury belief

>>24869846
sure, but unfortunately for men, what the self is needs is interaction with the world and others.

You can tell a book is going to have sound arguments when you have to preface it by asking everyone to ignore its critics