/mlp/ - Thread 42316019

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:37:51 PM No.42316019 [Report] >>42316029 >>42316042 >>42316057 >>42316058 >>42316215 >>42316224 >>42316663 >>42316801 >>42316915 >>42317116 >>42318670 >>42319072 >>42319938 >>42319948 >>42320766

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>HEY! Anon get over I have a bone to pick with you. So I sat down and read your latest fiction books. They’re pretty good and all the characters have good interactions and dialogue. The pacing isn’t bad and you do take moments away from the action so the characters can grow and discuss. But then towards the ending of book 2 you start off the main villains redemption arc. What. The. Heck! He was evil and cruel and even if he thought he was doing the right thing he hurt millions of people and killed thousands more! Thats contrived Anon, nopony should be allowed to reform after being that far gone. I bet I’m not the only fan who thinks this is and if you wanna keep your readers loyalty you should have the bad guy get what he deserves. Oh and one more thing, and this is coming from Rarity but you need more romance. Theres a pretty girl right there with the main character and not once do they share a tender moment, smooch or even blush towards one another. Oh and Twilight says your book could be longer. Something about 400 pages being under the official guidelines of “established” authors.

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:42:16 PM No.42316028 [Report]

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What an egghead.

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:43:32 PM No.42316029 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
Dash it's 3AM get the fuck out of my house

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:46:56 PM No.42316042 [Report] >>42317118

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>>42316019 (OP)
Stfu NEERD no one cares

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:52:28 PM No.42316057 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
>rape

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 9:53:12 PM No.42316058 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
You ponies reform villains all the time. Why don’t you just wait and see if you’re actually invested. Oh and secondly I dont need romance in my story. You can tell yourse- *ahem* I’m sorry “Rarity” that. And if “Rarity” wants romance she can make fanfic from my story. Go ahead I encourage it. Oh and tell Twilight I’ll make my books longer when she stops eating the entire plate of lemon bars everytime I come to visit. Magic uses calories my ass.

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 11:11:11 PM No.42316215 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
Dash, have you been at Granny Smith's moonshine again?

Anonymous 7/1/2025, 11:16:06 PM No.42316224 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
she's right, get back to work writefags.

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 2:14:35 AM No.42316663 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
Alright dashie, you're so right. I should reconsider how much I want to stick to the villain's redemption, and romance is totally not on my priorities but just for you I'll give it a shot.
>Timeskip so that the villain is already reformed, and the main character is rugged and turning to the evil side.
>The pretty girl side character turns out to be a horrible person who absolutely hates the main character and pivots to travel alongside the redeemed villain, and spends half of the third book on long tirades about her relationships that ultimately do nothing to move the plot forward
how's that dashie, I did just as you wanted! Now we can explore how our villain and main character are mirrors! And I hope you like love triangles cause we're sticking with this "will they won't they" for the next two books

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 3:26:03 AM No.42316801 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
Well duh, I'm setting up the romance for book 2.
They're already given subtle hints at their soon to be blossoming relationship.
Oh, yeah, and I'm keeping the villian redemption arc. You ponies literally do it all the time. Also this is a novela, so under 400 pages is just fine. I'm not exactly an author full time you know.

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 4:25:03 AM No.42316915 [Report]

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>>42316019 (OP)
You care about things making sense? Fucking nerd.

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 7:04:45 AM No.42317116 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
The villain is my self insert Dashie.

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 7:07:38 AM No.42317118 [Report]

>>42316042
uuumngggghgghhhh plap plap plaplaplaplap....

Anonymous 7/2/2025, 4:43:49 PM No.42317776 [Report]

Rainbow Plap

Anonymous 7/3/2025, 1:02:07 AM No.42318670 [Report]

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>>42316019 (OP)
…Dashie, that's a cookbook.

Anonymous 7/3/2025, 3:24:36 AM No.42319072 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
Of course Rainbow "Ecoterrorist" Dash the glowie lapdog of the crown would say that.

Anonymous 7/3/2025, 2:25:50 PM No.42319938 [Report]

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>>42316019 (OP)
ogh,, dashjie plamp

Anonymous 7/3/2025, 2:36:28 PM No.42319948 [Report]

>>42316019 (OP)
His redemption will be earned in his own blood in an attempt to destroy the evil that corrupted him in the first place.
But things will not be so easy.
Spoiler: the great evil cannot be defeated by mortals, only kept away or repeled.

I'm not telling you how, READ! ZIGGA! READ!

Anonymous 7/3/2025, 9:41:55 PM No.42320766 [Report]

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