Human becomes pony. How, why and what happens next are all up to you. New stories and art welcome!
Any type of transformation into ponies, gryphons, changelings, dragons, kirin, etc., whether OC or canonical, & Anonponies of all shapes and sizes.
Want to be the little pony? This is the thread for you.

Previously on PTFG:
https://ponepaste.org/11129 - Sterling Sprocket Finding His Cutie Mark in Neighagra Port - New & Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10964 - Strangers to the Plain by OrwellRedenbacher
https://ponepaste.org/10927 - Armor TF Green by JoshThePinkGump - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10753 - Planes, Trains and Hotel Chains by OrwellRedenbacher
https://ponepaste.org/10464 - Misadventures of Orwell Redenbacher by OrwellRedenbacher
https://ponepaste.org/10592 - Friendly Files by ReMastering
https://ponepaste.org/10607 - Turned Out by definitelynotapurplehorse
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/567872 - Turning Myself Into a Half-Ton Cybernetic Princess Luna In An Abandoned Woolworths To Prank My Friend at 3AM Challenge (Gone Wrong) (Gone Sexual) by Nightprincessluna - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10537 - Moth on the bulb by OrwellRedenbacher - Complete!
>>40293205 - Beach Walk
https://ponepaste.org/10421 - Last moments by OrwellRedenbacher - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10320 - Cathode Ray Mission by OrwellRedenbacher - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10334 - Pon-E suicide funk by Gnisha - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10269 - Very self-indulgent unicorn stallion TF - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10206 - Mares With Guns by OrwellRedenbacher
https://ponepaste.org/9446 - Interstate by Ceiling Necromancer
https://ponepaste.org/9707 - Anu by Meslam
https://ponepaste.org/10203 - Cardboard Cutouts by OrwellRedenbacher
https://ponepaste.org/10220 - Of Beaks and Bullets by Kiyote
https://ponepaste.org/10173 - Chestnut Glaze by pogoman122 - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10081 - Daisy Belle by OrwellRedenbacher - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/9985 - Go Ask Littlepip When She's Two And A Half Feet Tall by Darkdemonlucifer - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/10012 - A Ticket To The Circus by Darkdemonlucifer - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/7247 - The Pon-E Rewrites: Purple Black Gray by Alycorn
https://ponepaste.org/9521 - Nemetona by Meslam
https://ponepaste.org/9720 - Pink In The Club by AtomicGlow - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/9600 - War Story by OrwellRedenbacher - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/9485 - Monster musume pony tf 1 Papi - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/9477 - Untitled Short Pet Story #1 by definitelynotapurplehorse - Complete!
https://ponepaste.org/8210 - My First Maregasm by anonfilly

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Previous Thread:
>>42261072

so much snowpity! yay!

what a fucking faggoty thread to see constantly on the catalog. heres my first and last post
>>42347253
troons don't go to equestria or get fo be ponies. say your stupid memes in cosmic hell faggot you cucked yourself from equestria

This one, via The Concersion Bureau Ponification Potion. Reverting Sunset Shimmer into her glorious, quadrupedal Form.

>>42347300
Who’s this lovely lady? She has some wonderful art :3

Damn, I didn't finish the discord fic in time for the new thread. Ah well, more time to polish it I guess

We need more stories of Anon being transformed into a filly and being abused by twilight.
https://ponepaste.org/3123
https://ponepaste.org/3124

https://ponepaste.org/1144

https://ponepaste.org/3905
https://ponepaste.org/3901

>>42347453
Smh, didn't like mine enough to add it to your post...

>>42347518
You made one? Link?

>>42347787
https://pastebin.com/MLp5CDhG
I also have a more famous, longer one that sucks more in like every conceivable way because it was the first story I ever wrote on /mlp/: https://pastebin.com/aBuFQj0h

>>42347453
I prefer people getting turned into ponies for wholesome reasons.

Colgate's proposal:
She receives your 4 wisdom teeth
You receive entrance to Equestria as a unicorn masterrace and you get to bang all of Colgate's friends.
Sounds good?

Tomorrow

>>42347849
Thanks.

>>42347979
I am not mentally well.

>>42348316
I only have 3, does the offer still stand?

>>42348316
Can I be a mare?

>>42348595
You might become a pony with only three legs.

>>42348598
Of course.

>>42348942
>You might become a pony with only three legs.
At that point may as well transform me into scootaloo

>>42348593
>glimmer flag
we already knew

I'm in the mood to write another short slice of life fluttershy tf story. Any prompts from the thread? I might write it if I like it.

>>42348316
She can get my remaining two and fight my dentist or whatever for the two I had removed

>>42349329
>Human transformed into a pony
>Human finds help
>They take him to Fluttershy
>Nobody is exactly sure why but they keep getting humans in equestria
>Fluttershy is the go to person to help them adjust to their new pony life

>>42349357
Slice of life human to Fluttershy tf prompt, not a tf prompt with Fluttershy in it.

>>42349358
Oh, ok

>>42347849
The prequel link isn't working.

>>42349301
I'm going to sacrifice you to the great glimmy.

>>42349434
Whenever you find an old pastebin link that doesn't work, try looking it up on ponebin: https://poneb.in/RN3srKid

>>42349329
Discord turns Anon into Fluttershy 2.0

>>42349358
How do you expect to have slice of life when the very premise of the story being a human tf into Fluttershy isn't exactly a normal occurrence

>>42349558
Simply set the story in a universe where pony transformation is a routine occurrence.

>>42349558
It's Slice Of Life because I don't have it in me to write an angsty Fluttershy tf green. I'm looking for ideas for short, comfy plots without much drama.

>>42349565
What, like, Fluttershy asks you to take her place in the pony world while she goes to the human world to lean about Earth animals?
(Anon does his best to act like Fluttershy with Angel desperately trying to pantomime warnings to ponies that "Fluttershy" is a fake, but they all think he's just being a cute bunny.)

>>42349586
Sounds cute

>>42347453

Here's a writing prompt. Anon is transformed into a clinically insane mare.

>>42349586
Same idea, but human has always wanted to go to equestria and Fluttershy has always wanted to see the human world, with a simple spell they're able to trade places but nobody can know for 24 hours or the spell will become permanent so anon struggles with fluttershy's basic chores arousing suspicion

>>42347849
I really like the surgery one. Ever gonna make a part 2?

>>42350272
It's meant to be self-contained, sorry. I tend to have somewhat of an eldritch approach to horror at times in the sense that I leave the following years of crazy ass Nimdok mommy adventures as an exercise to the reader's mind, and you'll see some of that weird-ass genetic makeup in Chilly Filly if you read it. That one is noisy to read though because it used to be a CYOA, some of the pacing issues and weird suggestions are things I fed into as jokes, and as such are strange to observe. I have had a long, complicated career as a writer. Aside from short vignettes, I have written almost exclusively for 4chan and it has changed me. In other words, my strange abyss has been one that gazed back.
Pic related, art plunger started for me of Rebuilt right after I wrote it. Never finished by his words, not mine. I like it a lot even in its current state

>>42349426
>>42350685
Alright, humour me. What's the preferred format for this method of TF? Is the latex suit an indepentent entity that takes the wearer along for the ride, or is there some kind of personality replacement or mind-meld going on?

>>42350422
Aww, and I was looking forward to the crazy ass nimdok mommy adventures.

>>42350811
You're free to give it a crack if you like, you are that glimfag right? The writer?

>>42350927
Who?

>>42350927
I mean I could try I guess

*ahem*

> Be filly human abomination.
> Nonny. Full named Nonny Marenstein.
> Turns out the purple nutjob has a sense of humor.
> It's your first day of school.
> You absolutely despise the stares you get. As well as the feeling of your twisted body.
> Doesn't help you're unable to hold things with hooves and can't talk.
> As you enter the classroom and sit down, Mrs Cheerilee smiles at you.
> Once everypony has settled down she gestures for you to come over and speaks.
> "Alright class, today I would like to introduce you to a new student. Her name is Nonny. Unfortunately she's unable to talk, so I won't be having her introduce herself directly. According to her mom, she lost the ability to talk and her ability to grip after getting into a terrible accident. So please be kind to her and no rough housing with her."
> You awkwardly sit back down after that. Feeling unimaginably embarrassed as everypony is currently staring at you.
> Eventually Cheerilee hands out some math work.
> It's a struggle for you to write with your mouth. You feel like you're going crazy already. You're so helpless.
> After finally completing the grueling worksheet the bell rings and it's time for recess. To be fair though the math wasn't actually hard. You just can't write for the life of you.
> When you get outside, you find the farthest unoccupied bench possible and sit down. Then you begin to cry.
> It has been less than a day since Twilight finished turning you completely into this abomination and already it's driving you insane. It's only a matter of time before you break completely.
> Before you could continue to think about your hopeless situation, a voice interrupts your train of thought.
> "Look at this blank flanked freak! She's covered in all sorts of nasty stitches!"
> You turn to see a pink earth pony wearing a tiara glaring at you. A grey earth pony standing to her side.
> You just sigh in response. Not like you can really say anything.
> The pink pony gets up in your face.
> "I don't get why someone as helpless and worthless as you even bothers with coming here. You'll never be able to do anything on your own."
> That actually hurt you a little. You already despised how helpless you are. So being reminded of that fact is like salt in the wound.
> She seems to notice this, further rubbing it in.
> "Useless little blank flank!~ Unable to do anything!~"
> "Now staph right there you two! Pickin' on a disabled pony! Dat's low! Even for you two!" A southern sounding voice shouts. A yellow earth pony being the one who's talking.
> "Yeah!" An orange pegasus shouts.
> Along with them is also a white unicorn who steps between you and the pink pony.
> The snobby duo huff and walk away.
> Then you're immediately surrounded by the trio.
> "We're the cutie mark crusaders!" The white unicorn says.
> "We're on a quest to find our marks!" Shouts the pegasus.
(TBC)

>>42347314
wait, so if she goes back through the portal, then she'd just turn back into a human
you've made her a pariah in both worlds, you sick fuck

>>42351194
> "I'm Applebloom and these are Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle." The yellow earth pony gestures to the unicorn and pegasus respectively. "Wanna join?"
> You nod. Not like you're doing anything else. Plus, with them around, you have somepony to open doors for you.
> You spend the rest of recess listening to the crusaders talk to each other. Occasionally nodding or shaking your head.
> The rest of the school day is more or less uneventful. Well besides the fact you still can't write for shit.
> You walk home with your new friends. Eventually parting ways around midway to your 'home'.
> You knock on the door and spike lets you in.
> You lay down on the nearest couch and sigh.
> Eventually the purple psycho herself enters and lays down next to you. Snuggling up you.
> You'd protest, but you don't want to anger her. Not mention she's actually quite soft and comfortable.
> She strokes your mane gently and hums a simple tune.
> You relax and eventually fall asleep.

>>42350698
I don't know what the general consensus would be. In >>42349426 I think it's just a straight up body transformation, so the personality is intact, but the body has completely changed.

>>42350685 seems like Luna's personality took over.

>>42351260
I'd read a story about twilight fucking up a spell to send a human back to the human world and having him wind up a pony she takes care of out of pity

>>42352766
help the filly!

>>42353056
Nah.

>>42353218
;(

>>42352770
Link?

>>42353867
From the Legend of Zelda?

>>42354470
I'm going to remove your balls.

>>42354514
Fuck you, I'm into that shit

Snippet of something I was working on at work, will likely keep it updated:

>It was an ordinary day in your little podunk town of Blossomvale
>There wasn’t much to do, not much going on at all
>Well, apart from the tulip festival
>It was an annual event that the locals used to fleece the tourists
>They’d all come in, get wow’d by the ‘pretty flowers’, and the florists would charge them out the rear for a bouquet that probably wouldn’t last their drive back home
>You were one of these florists of course
>”Hey Jess, busy day today?”
>Rob approached your stand at the local festival, a smirk from ear to ear, his eyes crinkling
“Eh… Not really. Pretty slow, honestly.”
>God, you crushed on Rob so hard
>He crossed his arms, and cast his gaze around all the other stands
>The crowd wasn’t at its peak for the week yet, stragglers were coming in here and there, but later it would definitely get busy
>”Yeah… Yeah… Not really busy.”
>He looked straight at you then
>And you looked straight at him
>”So, anyways, me and Amber were thinking about going down to the Clover later, wanna come?”
>Amber
>That was the worst part, Rob had a girlfriend
“Yeah sure! I’d love to come. Haven’t seen Amber in a minute.”
>Amber
>Yeah sure she was cool, and nice, and definitely Rob’s type
>Ugh
>”Great! Hey, catch you on your way outta here, yeah?”
“Yeah.”
>And with that he was walking away, hands in his pockets, rubbernecking at all the different flower stands
>You leaned forward with a sigh and put your chin in your palm, elbow against the wood of the stand
>Too slow of a day
>Nobody was even coming by your stand!
>It was rough
>Oh well, at least you’ll get to see Rob and… Amber… Later when you’re off

>>42354843
>A few hours must’ve gone by, but the day was still only halfway over
>You nearly fell asleep a few times as you sat there
>When you were in high school– If someone was caught doing what you were doing?
>The teacher would typically scare them, and the student would headbutt the desk
>Everyone would laugh
>”Well hello there miss!”
>WHAM
>You headbutted the table and then quickly gathered yourself
“Oh, uh, oh jeez. That’s my bad.”
>You coughed, clearing your throat, blushing
>You looked up at the man who spoke to you–
>He had a wide eyed, toothy smile
>It sorta reminded you of the cheshire cat
>And his eyes…
“Uh… How can I help you?”
>You tried to regain composure by brushing a lock of hair between your ear, trying to smile nonchalantly
>The man leaned forward, just slightly
>”Oh my dear, easily startled, are we?”
>You had a terrible habit of being easy to scare, that was true, but you weren’t even expecting this!
>Being at work and all, and almost falling asleep
“Well… No not–”
>”Quite alright, quite alright. Here, say we help you overcome your fear of… Circumstance, shall we?”
>What?
“Well… Look man, I’m not–”
>You raised your hands defensively
>And then he raised his hands, or… One hand
>And then snapped his finger
>You blinked, and he was gone
>Very quickly, you found that you had lost all of the balance you thought you had before
>With a caterwaul, you tilted back from your seat and landed with an ‘Oomph’ on your back
“God… What the hell…”
>Did that guy precision deliver like… Fentanyl dust or something?
>Were you dying right now?
>Is this what dying feels like?
>No, wait, your eyes were closed
>And nothing felt right
>You felt dizzy, incredibly dizzy, and you weren’t sure why
>Why would you feel dizzy?
>Is this anxiety?
>WERE YOU HAVING AN ANXIETY ATTACK?!
>ARE YOU PANICKING!?
>You felt yourself breathing heavier, and heavier, quicker, faster
>And then your eyes snapped open to a sky blue sky
>Clouds floated above you, closer to the ground than you remembered them being
>Reflexively, you went to brush a lock of your hair– To soothe the nerves
>The appendage that came up in front of your face did little to calm you down
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!”

>>42354844
>You shrieked, you cried out, you wailed
>What in the name of the LORD was that?!
>You stared at it after your outburst– Was it a-a-a hoof?
>No! Hooves don’t look like that!
>It was like a hot pink stump, with fur!
>Where was your hand?!
>Where were both of your hands?!
>You quivered there, staring at your trembling… Things
>As it turns out, you wouldn’t be alone for very long
>Footsteps? No, hoofsteps approached you rapidly–
>”Lily? Lily! What’s wrong!”
>”We heard you yell! Is there a monster?! Was it… Discord again?”
>You weren’t even sure you wanted to look at them, but look you did
>Your head practically creaked as it turned, and you found yourself face to face with two bonafide… Pony… Creature… Things
>They sure were cute.
>And that was the last thing you thought about as you nodded off– Into the black
>You came to a few minutes later– You were still on the ground there, laying down, but you must’ve been moved a little
>You felt more comfortable in this position
>Plus, it felt nice having a damp rag over your forehead
>This was really nice, actually
>Did you faint? You’ve never fainted before, not ever
>”Oh! Lily! You’re awake! Oh thank goodness, Orchid and I were so worried!”
>You turned your head, a sleepy smile probably plastered on your face
>Pony
>A cream colored mare, but not a mare, it was impossible to describe
>She looked so expressive, so intelligent, so worried
>”Lily… Why are you looking at me like that?”
>Wait
>Was she talking to you?
“Are you… Talking to me?”
>The cream colored pony’s eyes widened, her pupils becoming pinpricks
>Then she took a deep inhale, and closed her eyes
>”OOOOOORCHIIIID! LILY HAS AMNESIA AGAAAAAIIIIN!”


Fairly short, don't have a load of time.

https://ponepaste.org/11208

I decided to extend the discord fiction a bit to include the happy ending rather than just saying happily ever after. Probably gonna push it a bit over the 10k word mark

>>42354850
This could be fun.

>>42353867
reading comprehension

>>42353867

>>42355938
001.127.201.093

>>42356139
gesundheit?

We need more anon mare stuff.

Wish there was another party to this one fic. But the author hasn't been online since Obama was president. What happened to our main character? Will she forgive Twilight? Will she calm the fuck down? What will be her cutie mark? W̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶s̶h̶e̶ ̶b̶e̶c̶o̶m̶e̶ ̶R̶a̶r̶i̶t̶y̶'̶s̶ ̶m̶a̶i̶d̶?̶
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/291523/raritys-makeover

>>42357067
Sounds like fun. If I didn't have a handful of fics slated for writing, I'd totally write it

>>42357161
Well if you ever decide to do it, please let me know.

>>42357186
I'll have to take some time to read it first before I decide. I'll probably finish the discord fic before taking a look

>>42356678
Cute filly!

>>42347253

>>42347314
That's what you get for abandoning Equestria.

>>42349929
It's very difficult to write a story from an insane point of view.

>>42350698
Two minds, one body might be an idea worth exploring.

>>42349329
In that vein: Anon wants to be a pony. Fluttershy very kindly allows him to share her body.

>>42357904
It'd be time consuming as you'd have to be narrating the insane perspective and everyone else's perspective constantly

I wish to be sent to Equestria pre season 5 as a mare for for the sole purpose of going to Glimmy's village, following her around, drawing this image in the dirt, and not talking ever. Even get a cutie mark in drawing this one specific image. It'll be hilarious. This random mare following her around, never talking, and drawing her saying no. Never explaining anything.

>>42358089
I find this image so fucking hilarious and I have no idea why.

>>42357792
I never understood this image

>>42357067
Just read it. WTF, looks like it was just the beginning of a story and ends right there for no reason

>Be you
>Normal human male, probably straight
>You walk into a bar
"Hey I'll have a glass of Chardonnay."
>Bartender grabs the bottle, pours your glass, sets it down in front of you
>You take a sip, then two, then three
>You spasm, your hands... They Aren't right.
>Your fingers start melding together, they're trembling, you hold them out in front of you
>Nobody else in the bar is reacting
>You shout
"What the fuck is going on?!"
>And nobody answers as your spine cracks, and you collapse to the floor
>You land on your hooves/hands, appendages that are rapidly reforming
>Your back legs crack and twist, your jeans tear, fur splotches out from the newfound holes

>>42358451
IKR? I want a sequel so badly.

>>42359670
I feel like the story could be changed for a better narrative.
>Human in equestria
>Initially wants to go home but fame and celebrity of being HiE is too much of a draw
>Canterlot parties and balls thrown for him, every nerd in equestria wants to know more about human society
>Starts treating the mane 6 like trash and generally becoming a douchebag.
>Twilight has enough of his antics and turns main character into a humble earth pony
>Leaves him to fend for himself till he can learn a lesson on friendship
>Gets a job as a cart pulling stallion, meets a cute mare
>He learns his lesson in friendship and humility and has made himself a happy life with his fiance.
>By the time twilight meets him again, he doesn't want to return to the human world nor his human form

>>42359925
But at that point it has almost nothing in common with the original story.

>>42360296
Kek, I love this
>That should be me

>>42360200
Fair, that idea is more or less just something I thought up along the lines of human in equestria.
I guess there was a reason why the story didn't really continue. There really isn't much of a story here to begin with. First questions i'd ask is: what is the actual story, Steve returning to the human world, or something development in his character. what purpose does human turning into mare serve to the story? it seems to just be some 'just because' deal. Idk not sure what to make of it

>>42360298
I feel like crazy twilight making you her daughter would make a fun story till she somehow regains her senses

>>42360477
I mean they're very clearly upset about being turned into a mare. And are very pissed at Twilight.

>>42361055
Oh, there are quite a few good stories like that.

>>42361081
That could be a catalyst for a story but till then, that's just a series of events till we establish motivation

>>42351260
Typical evil Twilight story.

>>42361055
She'll never see it coming when I make her my daughter.

>>42358349
It's a shitpost. It's a meme, originally about a breast reduction I believe (perhaps double mastectomy?), where the original goes along the lines of "Who do you think took the boobs?"

>>42357704
Very cute indeed

I'm just gonna go to every quack on craigslist claiming to sell miracles until one of them turns me into a pony, wish me luck

>>42363377
good luck and please report back!

>>42363377
They are going to fucking kill themselves nonny

>>42362245
Foal twilight would be adorable

>>42364119
Very true

>>42359670
What would you write for that story

>>42365052
She eventually calms down. Realizes she has no where else to go and barely even understands her new body, so she begrudgingly returns to them. And she eventually ends up as Rarity's maid.

>>42354850
It's a promising start. Please continue.

>>42365168
Sounds hot. I can probably go for a nice easy slop story to write, I'll probably just pick up right where the other person left off

>>42361994
> turned into maud
> try to explain who you really are
> it all comes out entirely deadpan and no one believes you
I haven't seen a lot of Maudification fics but I'm assuming this is a common trope in them

>>42365441
unf

>>42365863
Nice. lol

Good news! The Discord fiction is officially complete! I just did a proof read on it and I'm quite happy with it. I'll be pasting it over soon. Might have to be tomorrow evening when I finally get to it

>>42363088
Very super cute, i'd even wager.

>>42366051
I'm holding my breath in anticipation.

>>42366507
Pinkie Pie in the mirror :D

>>42366892
Yeah, how did she even get in there?

>>42366507
Being transformed into pinkie would be a pretty grim fate

>>42366952
I suppose the mirror has a world on the other side

>>42366892
>>42366952
>>42367465
Nah, the mirror shows your true self. That's why it's half off. Nopony can handle the truth

>>42368455
unf

>>42369264
>Little do they know she was a dude

>>42369319
Will that knowledge make any difference?

Congrats! You found the portal to Equestria! Except, instead of going in as yourself, you have to inhabit an existing character. Who is it? What are you getting up to once you take their place?
(Don't worry about the real one. They moved to Manehattan, or something. They're fine.)

>>42369324
Kek, idk mare pussy is mare pussy, does bring to question though is this is remotely gay

https://ponepaste.org/11219
Sebastian Ruins Discord's Tea Party
I hope discord anon likes it

>>42369753
The Flutter of a crow taking flight frightens Sebastian as he treks through the woods to find the perfect spot for the spell. His heart pounds with fear as he takes slow meandering footsteps almost scared to find out if the book the gypsy sold him would actually work. Finding a clearing in the dark forest he opens the book and shines his phone light onto it. The page flips open to a page depicting a serpent with antlers and talons like an eagle.
He rereads the description, heart pounding, making sure this was the demon he wanted to summon. The demon Discord is a Lord of chaos with abilities that can bend the fabric of reality in ways our mind cannot comprehend and grant the summoner and wishes or desires regardless of scope or scale, often in ways the summoner least expects. He can be summoned by bridging the gaps between dimensions with the Rune of Disharmony; and upon the rune must be a chicken foot, a lizard tail, a feather, a shark tooth, and a tuft of pony tail.
With visions of power and glory on his mind, he sets about making the rune in the manner described in the book; referencing the picture on his phone multiple times to make sure he has it just right. For too long Sebastian endured the ridicule of being an outcast, with his lofty ambitions, celebrity, world domination, it could all be his. All he has to do is summon this demon and all of his greatest desires can come true: women, fame, money, power, everything. Placing all the items in their place he takes a few steps back, careful not to disturb the rune. Trembling with fear, excitement, and all manner of feelings flowing through his heart, he begins to read the incantation. "Calling thee, all that threaten harmony. Bring thy malice and drink the chalice, for your foes will soon be in woe, as your sight brings fright! Calling thee, all that threaten harmony!" Sebastian repeatedly chants as the rune burns with the fiery glow of brimstone. It's working, he thinks to himself chanting louder and faster as his apprehension to bring the demon of chaos into this world fades away to the backdrop of his apparent success.
Sebastian has to avert his eyes as the glow of the rune starts to sear his skin with the intense heat. With a flash he is thrown back with the book blown away into the darkness. He scrambles to his feet looking all about the dark forest for his demon, but there's nothing there. Confused, he tries to find his phone so he can look for his book, wondering if he messed up the incantation or misplaced the items in the rune.
With an anticlimactic poof of glitter and streamers the horrifying dragonequus appears into view sipping tea with a warm smile. With a light clink, his cup returns to its saucer before opening his eyes. Briefly confused by the situation, he looks down to see a human laughing maniacally. Despite his tea party with Fluttershy being interrupted, he's mildly amused by the creature calling to him and plays along.

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"Discord, demon of chaos, I, Sebastian Felder, have summoned you to do my bidding! Make the world grovel at my feet and satisfy my every desire!” He screams out into the night sky expecting the earth to fracture at his feet. But as the agonizing seconds pass with inaction, Sebastian starts to wonder, why nothing is happening?
Despite mere seconds of interaction, Discord has already had his fill of the human before him and decides to toy with him to try and salvage some fun from the situation. “You humans are so predictable. Your ambitions are so limited in scope, making people grovel at your feet. PFT. How pathetic, so easy.” He menacingly explains before fire erupts around them and Discord wills a throne of skulls into existence for him to ride into the heights of the towering inferno above.
Wincing from the bright flames around him smothering him in heat, Sebastian growls in anger at the demon’s disparaging remarks, he can’t treat me like this, I’m his master, he thinks to himself. “So, what? If all I want is power, what does it matter to you!” He defensively yells out, not understanding the nature of the demon before him.
“I have the power to make the past, present, and future exist in unison, planets and stars bend to my whim, not even the laws of nature are outside my control, and you have the audacity to summon me to make humans your pawns? How unoriginal, I have plenty more fun ideas to do now that you have released me into this world foolish human,” Discord cheers throwing himself back in his throne. “Step one, get rid of you.” He teases flashing the flames around them.
With the heat from the flames searing Sebastian's face he desperately tries to call out the mythical creature. “The book says you have to do as I command, you can’t hurt me, you’re stuck with me!” He smugly cries out with a hint of a waver in his voice trying to remember the recall incantation to send him back to hell just in case.
The flames dissipate and form a rigid metal bird cage. Discords throne fades away crumbling to ash as Discord feigns aguish. “Oh Human, release me from this cursed state of servitude, it is simply too much for me to bear.” He whines slithering to the ground and laying upon the rune.
Sebastian, cautiously optimistic, is pleased by how easy it was to bring the demon under control. Some part of him fantasizes about stomping the demon’s head into the dirt with muddy boots but that will be tomorrow’s mission. “Well, with that insubordination out of the way, let’s get to it. First, I need-,”
In a flash, Discord’s eyes gleam with excitement before snapping his fingers and interrupting the human. “Oh, wait, how silly of me. I can’t hurt you, but they sure can.” He laughs as shadowy black horses surround the cage shrieking and kicking the cage as it cracks and crumbles yielding to the magical shadow horses’ blows.

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Sebastian, covering his ears to protect himself from their shrieking cries, finally accepts that he is in way over his head. Recalling the incantation from the book, he yells out into night. “Demon, thy bidding done, begone, to you whence you came, bear no shame for-,” Sebastian shudders hearing the demonic cry of the dragonequus as the rune erupts in flames under Discord. Encouraged by the apparent success of the incantation, he continues to repeat as the dark shadow horses melt away fading through the bars of the giant bird cage being drawn into the rune. As Discord shrieks in pain and the cage crumbles around them, Sebastian continues yelling the incantation louder with pride defeating the powerful demon with just his voice.
With his claws digging into the earth to resist the pull of the rune, discord shrieks one last time to the human with his demonic tone. “It is my destiny to dominate this world pathetic human, nopony will stand in my way!” Losing his grip and landing upon the rune he cries out in a manner fit for peak Shakespearian drama reaching out to the sky as he is absorbed into the earth
A flash of light reveals the rune just as he had started. Frantic and trembling from the experience, Sebastian scrambles to destroy the rune and ensure the demon cannot return. Trying to gather his thoughts he sets about trying to find the book and see what he did wrong. The Demon horses and the open attempt on his life shattered his confidence. “I did everything the book said to, I did the rune exactly like it said, I put down all the items and-,” Mid thought, Sebastian walks into an invisible wall. Thinking he hit a tree in the dark he fumbles around and feels a perfectly flat solid wall blocking his path. Suddenly he hears an ominous voice behind him cheering and clapping. Turning to see the dragonequus in a director’s chair, floating closer and closer, causes Sebastian to shriek in horror and start crying begging for help.
“Bravo! Bravo! Such marvelous acting from all involved, especially that handsome devil dragonequus, he had me positively moved to tears, Encore!” Discord cheers giving himself a best actor award, before turning his attention to the human. “Now, what was that you were saying about me being stuck with you? Oh, no, quite the opposite I’m afraid. You are stuck with me.”

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Sebastian attempts to run again before hitting another wall, turning, and hitting another before realizing he is boxed in. With the backdrop of the woods turning into carboard cutouts in an instant they all fall away to the void below as he stands on the stage. “How? I sent you back to hell!” Sebastian cries out to the uncaring demon. He tries to flail uselessly against the invisible walls that close in on him, fighting and pushing against the walls, each movement getting tighter and tighter before he can no longer move his legs, body, and finally arms. He groans and screams feeling as though he is about to pop like a balloon. With one more squeeze, he feels his body reconstitute itself into a two-dimensional plane, feeling each cell in his body slip past each other as he moves trapped in the glass plane he looks around at the realm forming around them.
Discord shrinks the little human trapped in the glass, pondering him as he twirls the pane of glass in his claws watching the human tumble. “My, such a fragile little thing. I hope you understand human; I am very annoyed with you. I was having a marvelous tea party with my darling Fluttershy before your antics drew me away to some pedestrian power fantasy. How fitting for an end, glass as fragile as your ego.” He sets the glass on its corner and spins it like a top watching it slowly lose speed maniacally laughing.
Sick with anxiety, the motion, and the general confusion, Sebastian wonders what he did to get a nightmare like this. As the pane slows and falls over, Sebastian tries to think of a way out, any way to take himself back to when he got the book and tell himself no, but with no options, he begs for mercy before the glass shatters scattering his bits to thousands of fragments spread across the table. A brutal end, however the glass shards melt and reform returning Sebastian to his original self. Confused and traumatized Sebastian starts to cry convinced he has gone to hell. No, no it can’t be, I didn’t do anything wrong he tells himself as he yanks on his hair in distress.
With his laughing fit over, Discord attempts to get the human’s attention. “Lucky for you, I’ve been turning over a new leaf as my dearest Fluttershy would be heartbroken to hear what I’ve done to a poor defenseless creature as yourself-,” Discord explains as the human has the audacity to interrupt him.
“Please, I’ll never summon you again, I learned my lesson. Just let me go ho-!” He begs as a large zipper manifests itself from his lips and zips his mouth closed. Yanking on the zipper and feeling around his mouth he belts out a powerful muffled scream wanting to jump into the void to see if it will end his suffering or drag him out of this vivid nightmare.

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The dragonequus wiggles with joy watching the arrogant human suffer. “As I was saying, I have no interest in tormenting you; even though your screams enthrall me like a crescendo in an opera. As much as I’d like an encore, I’ll bid you farewell human, Ta-ta.” He says with a snap of his fingers allowing the table to rapidly shrink.
With the Demon now disappeared into the void and the zipper gone, he cowers and trembles as the vast table shrinks to nothing below his feet. He desperately holds on to the last little bit of the table left before the table sprouts a mouth. Causing him to shriek in terror once more.
“Hey kid, beat it, I’ve got places to be!” The table spits at him before vanishing into a puff of confetti.
With no visual reference Sebastian floats in the void wondering if this was purgatory. The emptiness, no sensation, the only sound left was the sound of his ears ringing. With a little glimmer in the dark Sebastian catches a glimpse of light below him. Unable to stand the dark anymore, he welcomed the little light he saw even as it becomes exponentially brighter. His relief was short lived as he started to see earth below him, houses and eventually trees and cars. With one last shriek he closes his eyes and flails around before feeling himself toss the sheets from his bed. Snapping his bloodshot eyes open, he looks around his room. The transition from nightmare realm to normal reality is so jarring he questions everything. Where’s the demon, why did he let me go, am I in hell, what the fuck just happened! He asks himself hyperventilating. “It was a dream, oh god, it was all just a dream.” He cheers to the world as he looks for anything out of place, walking tables, cannibalistic carrots, even something as mundane as the switch for his lamp wasn’t escaping Sebastian’s anxiety fueled paranoia.
With a sigh of relief Sebastian resumes his quest for power. Apprehensive about even putting his feet on the carpet he touches it with his toe before hopping off the bed completely. He rummages through his drawer before finding the book where he left it. Although everything seems right, he’s still not sure if he had a nightmare, or if he got lucky the demon let him go. “Ok, Discord is definitely not the demon I want to summon,” he tells himself searching through the book and finding promising, albeit less powerful, demons. He flips to the page on discord and immediately turns the page. The mere sight of his illustration enough to send chills to his feet. However, Sebastian’s paranoia creeps back into frame, with some hesitation he flips back to the page onto discord, curious to see if he had the correct recall incantation. He reads the incantation and with a weight taken off his shoulder. He finds that it was the correct incantation.

>>42369767
The illustration of discord slitters across the page and rearranges the letters to the correct recall incantation with magical glee. “Opps, looks like someone left a typo,” Discord teases lifting himself off the page before the book gets slammed on him.
Tossing the book on the floor Sebastian lets out a blood curdling scream. No, it can’t be, that was just a dream! He tells himself as he feels every blood vessel in his chest strain from the horror. “MOM! DAD!” He screams, his eyes never leaving the book not even for a blink, as his mother enters the room.
With a hug, his mother comforts her son, “I’m here for you dear, what happened.” She soothes picking him up without any effort.
Sebastian hugs his mom’s arm refusing to lose sight of the book. “Mom, the book, its cursed, the demon is real.” He begs as his heart sinks from being picked up by his little weak mother. Refusing to look he hears an unfamiliar voice whisper in his ear.
“The book is cursed? Why, how awful! Makes me wonder, why would someone look to the book, that caused them so much trouble. For a second time, I might add,” Discord asks, genuinely curious as to why the human would do something so foolishly reckless.
Sebastian turns to see Discord’s horrifying face before pushing himself away floating into the room of tumbling furniture flailing around in the zero gravity. “Please, I didn’t summon you, I swore, I wouldn’t summon you again!” Sebastian begs as chains reach out from the darkness, pulling him tight from every limb ratcheting tighter threatening to pull him apart.
Discord snaps his fingers and stops the chains satisfied leaving Sebastian there to stretch. He thinks about a more fun way to deal with the pesky human. “I suppose you’re right, you didn’t summon me, but what if you did something far more dangerous and reckless like summon Lord Tirek instead. I suppose we should look towards addressing the root of the problem shouldn’t we.” Discord explains summoning himself some tea and a chair before giving Sebastian a comfy therapist chair. “Tell me Sebastian, what drives you to summon a demon to solve your problems.” He asks as a massive quill takes notes.
With the chains releasing their tension and his body able to relax, he is able to calm himself for a second. Sebastian begins to think about those who have wronged him as his rage builds. “There are these stupid people that need to be taught a lesson, I figure if they were punished, they’d probably be nicer to everyone,” He groans as he contemplates every moment he was never picked for sports, left without a partner for school projects, eating lunch alone.
Discord, already peering into Sebastians mind, is not impressed by the silver screen tier projection on display. “Are you sure you’re not part of the problem?” He asks as the obnoxious quill behind him takes notes.

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Offended at the dragonequus suggestion, he fights back spitting rage. “I tried so hard to be a good friend and they spit in my face. They can get bent; they can grovel at my feet.” He announces with pride standing on the chair
Discord’s eyes glow with delight, “Oh, I have a splendid idea. If you’re so convinced that you know everything about friendship, you should have no problem playing a little game. The rules are simple, I ask you a question about friendship, a correct answer, I will grant one of your desires, if you get them all wrong, well, let’s just say you’ll get the form you deserve. What do you say?” Discord smiles giving Sebastian a lion’s paw to shake on.
Sebastian stares at the paw knowing he is helpless to stop the power of the dragonequus. The offer of being left alone would have sufficed to encourage him to play discord’s game but the opportunity to actually get his wishes makes the risk seem far more worthwhile. “I learned about friendship in elementary school; I’ll play your game,” Sebastian scoffs with a disparaging tone. “As long as there’s no funny business!”
Discord feigns offense at the accusation of being unfair withdrawing his paw. “How dare you, I am nothing but honest and true. Here, let us do a practice round just to make sure you’re comfortable with how this works. Answer correctly you get one of your wishes filled, answer incorrectly and you’ll get the form you deserve. Simple enough? Now, what color is the sky?” Discord asks innocently standing next to the closed blinds.
Sebastian glares at the playful demon as he hesitates to answer. “The sky is blue.” He sheepishly answers wondering if the question is a trick or just a genuinely easy question.
Discord opens the blinds to show the bright pink sky outside the window with green clouds floating around aimlessly bumping into each other as Sebastian curses him for his deception. With a sigh discord continues with his example. “The sky has always been pink, but, for the sake of argument, let’s just say its blue.” With a roll of Discord’s eyes, the sky turns blue and Sebastian’s arms swell like balloons with massive Biceps.
Sebastian can’t help but to flex his new muscles as his enthusiasm for the game becomes overwhelming. This is gonna be easy, he tells himself imagining how the questions are going to be. Just as he’s admiring himself, the biceps deflate like whoopie cushions. With a growl he looks over to the outstretched paw. The last bit of sanity left in him tells him to give up now, but after having a little taste, he has to have it now. “Ok Discord, I’ll play your game,” He agrees grabbing the lion’s paw for a shake
“Splendid, let’s get started, first question, should be easy for you: someone you just met is being selfish and a bit rude to you, if you want to be friends with this person, what should you do.” Discord asks with a serious tone not yet seen by Sebastian.

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“If they’re being rude and selfish, why would I want to be their friend? I’d just tell them to go away.” Sebastian asks with incredulity as he floats in the room.
Discord giggles with childlike glee, “Oh, sorry, the answer I was looking for was: ‘give them space to be themselves.’ I’m afraid you gave a wrong answer so that means one little step closer to the form you deserve,” He explains with a snap of his fingers.
The terrified Sebastian feels something protruding from his hind end burning and stretching the skin as he scrambles to fight the painful growth. He grunts and groans cupping his tailbone trying to stop it. Wincing and groaning in pain the growth bursts through his pants and reveals a beautiful black pony tail. Sebastian grabs the tail and screams out in horror. “What, why did you do that, turn me back!” He begs yanking on his own tail to see if its real.
“You got the question wrong, so I did a little change to turn you into the form you deserve. Those were the rules and you agreed to them. I’m merely playing by the rules,” He teases as a little halo appears over Discord’s head.
Sebastian quickly realizes he was never meant to win this game. He curses himself for his naivety and wants out. World domination be damned; he just wants his life to go back to normal and have this demon go back to his own realm. “Ok, Discord, I learned my lesson, I need to learn to be a better friend, please, leave me alone,” He shamelessly begs to the uncaring Dragonequus.
“No take-backsies! I haven’t had this much fun in ages! Now for the next question,” He cheers over the human’s plea for mercy. “A person, who is your friend, starts to cause you problems that affect you, or your friends personally, what should you do?” He asks with an answer of pure worried silence from the human. “I should have mentioned it before, but no answer is still a wrong answer.” Discord teases ready to snap his fingers again before the human frantically stalls.
Scrambling over his words buying for time he finally gets an answer together, “Um, just let them do whatever they want?” Sebastian desperately answers hoping that the answer is satisfactory to the demon.
Discord snaps his fingers again beginning the next transformation. “Oh, that’s the last thing a good friend would do. The correct answer is: ‘a good friend would set clear and reasonable boundaries.”

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Sebastian feels his heart shatter as he feels the nerves tingling on his belly. Frantic, he pulls up his shirt to reveal a patch of green fur overtaking his skin. He tries scratching at the growth. He grows increasingly frantic before scratching away at his own skin to stop it, causing himself immense pain as the unstoppable green fluff overtakes his body. “Oh god, please, please, I’ll do anything please, just stop!” He screams out as the fur slowly creeps up his neck. “I’ll be your servant in hell; you can have my soul! Please just let me go!” He begs with tears running down his face.
With his body jiggling with joy, Discord gives the human a disturbing smile, “Ready or not, final question: A friend breaks their promise with you over something very important and takes advantage of your kindness. What should you do?” He asks cracking his knuckles to perform the final transformation
With the green fur overtaking his cheeks Sebastian desperately thinks of some answer he can give that would satisfy Discord. Erring on the side of caution, he thinks of a very friendly answer. With his voice choked up from the anxiety, he finally answers, “You should talk to them and see why they’re acting out?” Sebastian answers on the verge of hyperventilation.
In a heart shattering snap Discord begins the final transformation. “Wrong again!” He cheers with a laugh. “The correct answer was: no real friend would take advantage of your kindness and you should not be friends with such person.” He watches with joy as the transformation takes place and gives the pesky human what they deserve.
Sebastian panics and flails in futility as his legs take a horse-like appearance with his bones groaning and cracking, his leg muscles cramping and tearing, taking the new shape. “Fuck you, piece of shit, you made those answers up!” Sebastian cries out in furious anguish giving the dragonequus double middle fingers before his fingers melt together like wet wax over hot coals. He gazes on in horror as the flesh on his hands melts together to form hooves. His hooves press against his face as it starts to form a pony snoot. Contemplating every decision that brought him to this moment Sebastian stops fighting the magic, and in a tearful state, he lets the transformation take its course. As he relaxes, the pain fades as his body shrinks and his prideful bits fade away to nothing, he gently floats down to the comfort of the bed. Exhausted, Sebastian sits upright struggling to find his way out of his shirt, once he pokes his head out of his shirt, feeling his hooves, flowing mane, and girly bits, his lips tremble as he starts to sob without shame blaming himself for toying with powers beyond his comprehension. Wiping his tears with his hooves, he struggles with the immense burden of regret that brought him to become nothing more than a helpless little filly.

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Discord can hardly contain his giddy laughter picking up the precious little sobbing filly. “Aw, what happened, you had so many strong words to say. So expressive but now you’re looking a bit humbled.” Discord tosses the filly back onto the pile of clothes mocking the filly with his laughter.
Sebastian trembles in fear hiding under the shirt. Hyperventilating and trying to think of a way to escape, he can do nothing more than cry out for his parents. With the shirt blowing away with a simple brief gust. The room has vanished as he desperately clings to the bed trying to figure out how to use his hooves so he doesn’t fall into the void.
“Oh, you want your parents? How adorable, and pathetic. That was a good laugh but I have better things to attend to so-,” Discord teases wanting to simply banish the filly to Tartarus for added cruelty, but he stops himself and rubs his hands together with a mischievous smile. “Parents, oh yes, why didn’t I think of that? I can only imagine how much joy it would bring me to see their faces when they realize their son is a little filly.” Picking up the trembling filly and giving Sebastian a little farewell pat on the head, he prepares to snap his fingers. “You on the other hoof, get to see it for yourself. I’m almost jealous. Ta-Ta!” He mocks with a snap of his fingers disappearing the filly back to his dimension. With that human nonsense behind him, Discord drops the scary void walls around him to walk through his front door, chuckling to himself about the ordeal walking up to his house.
Although Sebastian is traumatized by the transformation, and wonders how he is going to live his life as a pony, he is relieved that the demon finally lost interest in tormenting him and is simply letting him go after what seemed like ages of pointless torment. With a flash, Sebastian reappears right in front of the Dragonequus. When he sees Discord’s horrifying figure once more, he screams and cries trying to shuffle away tripping over his hooves like a newborn foal. “You said you would let me go!” Sebastian screams before being flashed away presumably to the human realm.

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Discord, confused by the sudden reappearance of the filly, shakes off the encounter. “That was odd, I must have sent him to the wrong dimension.” He mutters to himself as Sebastian reappears at his feet once again. Discord groans as the screaming and crying filly fuels his frustration. Severely annoyed, he tries to troubleshoot the issue by flashing Sebastian back into his human form before casting him off back to the human dimension. Moments pass as he thinks he may have solved the problem. However, the second his lion’s paw touches the door knob the little green filly reappears on his door step once more. Ripping off his horn and antler in frustration, Discord puts his scrambled thoughts together, before he realized what spell he used the make the transformation. “This must be that stupid destiny magic, why did I bother, it’s no fun, such a stubborn form of magic, you can’t do anything fun with it.” He whines to himself as the filly cowers on his doorstep.
Sebastian, trembling from having to relive the transformation once more in the magic realm, is almost too shocked to say anything. “I don’t care anymore, just do what you want with me.” He utters softly under his breath between sniffles and tears. He lay on the door step defeated ready for whatever fate claims him in this cruel world he has found himself trapped in.
“If it makes you feel better, you’re proving to be a very ill-mannered guest and overstaying your welcome, despite me being gracious enough to send you home!” Discord groans tossing aside his horns as the new set grow in their place.
Sebastian backs up against the door unable to make eye contact, fearing upsetting Discord any more than he already has. “But I didn’t do anything, I just want to go home!” Sebastian begs looking for a means to escape.
A lightbulb flashes over Discord’s head as a twisted smile creeps over his face. Despite the filly backing away, Sebastian gets scooped up by the tail and dropped into his arms. Discord rocks the filly in his arms with his mind cooking up a little scheme for his persistent little thorn in his side. “What is home anyway? I’m sure an adorable orphan filly like you would find a loving family in no time.”
Sebastian can’t believe his ears as the Dragonequus threatens to take absolutely everything from him. His body, his manhood, and now even his family will be taken from him. With his throat course with crying and screaming, he can’t muster any energy to be more upset and crushed than he already is. “No! you said you were gonna send me home!”
“That’s right, but you can forget all about that human world, your old life, and that poor excuse of a family. My dearest Fluttershy will help you find a loving home in no time.” Discord teases trying to provoke another reaction from the emotionally tapped-out human.

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Sniffling and wiping away tears, Sebastian manages to stammer out a threat through his sore throat. “I’m gonna tell Fluttershy everything you did to me, I’m gonna let everyone know it was you who that turned me into this!” Sebastian yells flailing his hooves in pouty rage.
“Silly little filly, in case you forgot who you’re dealing with here, I think your book called me, and I quote, “a Lord of chaos with abilities that can bend the fabric of reality in ways our mind cannot comprehend.” You’ll be able to comprehend this with ease, I assure you” He gleefully explains, gently reminding the little filly of the power he has as with a mere snap of his fingers.
Sebastian feels his body start to morph forcing him to contort in unnatural ways as his skin burns from phasing between fur, flesh, and scales, his hooves tear themselves apart to form hands before turning into claws and eventually melting back into hooves. he starts to beg before the contortions get any worse or spread across his body. “Don’t hurt me! I’ll listen; I’ll be good I swear! I won’t tell anyone anything.” He eeks out collapsing and writhing in pain begging for mercy once more as his body takes the form of a dragonequus.
Discord wishes he could stop the transformation as is and admire his beautiful creation but as he snaps his fingers, the magic of destiny takes control and reverts Sebastian to his filly form. “Good, now repeat after me, “I’m just a little mare” don’t be shy, just say it with me little filly.” He teases watching his toy catch its breath.
Sebastian feels a jab in his heart, a sting in his pride as the demon forces him to repeat his lines. Although he wants nothing more than to tell off the dragonequus, his filly body and little hooves serve as a permanent reminder as to why resistance is futile. With immense strain and shame, he finally manages to say it. “I’m just a little mare,” Sebastian says with a quiver in his voice, like a toddler forced to apologize after a spanking.
“Excellent work my little pony, say it louder, more pride, nothing to be ashamed of here.” Discord cheers trying to coach his toy to be a convincing lost filly.
Sebastian trembles as Discord slithers his body around him. Teasing and scratching under the chin. Fearing any more punishment he tries to calm his trembling voice. “I’m a just a little mare!” Sebastian forces out holding back his tears as he’s cradled in the dragonequus arms.
With a little chuckle, he opens a portal to Equestria satisfied Sebastian is fearful enough to keep his mouth shut, at least for the time being. “There, there, little filly, I’m going to make sure everyone takes good care of you. If you follow that one simple rule, you’ll forget all about your silly human life and family in no time.” Discord cheers tormenting the trembling little filly in his arms.

>>42349924
>losing all the memories that made you
>you
>within a body that isn’t your own
bloody hell

>>42369799
The blinding sun forces Sebastian to cover his eyes with his hooves as he walks through the portal. Gazing around the beautiful fields and the tree cottage in the distance, he feels the cool breeze cut through his fluffy green coat and curls himself tight to stay warm.
Feeling the filly shiver in his arms, Discord feels a shred of remorse for his actions. With a snap, he gives the filly a blanket as it’s the least he can do to make up for what he did. The two exchange looks, Discord, a look of shame and Sebastian a quick flinch of fear the moment he realized they locked eyes. Walking faster, discord tries getting the filly to Fluttershy as fast as possible.
Hiding under the blanket, Sebastian tries to understand what discord meant by destiny magic, looking around the world around him he struggles to understand why this place. I had a destiny in the human world he defiantly tells himself; I was going to…I was going to, he thinks to himself scrambling to think of what he was doing with his life in the human world, getting ready for community college, and doing a few credits a semester for an Associate’s degree in art? He slumps in the dragonequus’s arms wondering if this place truly was his destiny, what if I am supposed to be a filly, what if this is how the demon gave me my wish, my innermost desires? Considering all the torment he has been through, he defiantly refuses to accept that this as his destiny, he will make it back to the human world somehow.
“Oh Fluttershy! The most awful thing happened; I found this poor little filly all alone in the Everfree forest! Surely there is something you can do to help her find her family.” Discord cries out flinging open the door to the cottage and caking his tone in dramatic flair.
Sebastian plays his part and hoping he will finally be left alone to beg for help but as he turns to see the fluttering Pegasus fly across the room, his eyes are filled with majestic wonder the gleaming yellow feathers and pink mane cause him to sigh with adoration as he gets scooped up by the doting Fluttershy.
“Oh, my goodness, are you alright, you should know better than to go through the Everfree forest all by yourself missy. What if you got attacked by a bug bear or got turned to stone by a cockatrice! Your family must be so worried about you. what do you have to say for yourself?” She scolds with a voice soft enough to cushion a plummeting egg.
Sebastian blushes and stammers as she takes him into the living room. His dreamy stare is shattered as he catches an evil glare from the dragonequus. Remembering the line, Sebastian quickly stammers it out. “I don’t know, I’m just a little mare.” He glances over to see a smile from Discord that fills his little filly heart with relief.

>>42369808
“Aw, thank you for bringing her over, I’ll ask Rainbow Dash and Twilight if they can help find this poor little filly’s family. They must be worried sick.” Fluttershy explains ushering Discord out the door much to Sebastian’s relief.
Discord continuing to play innocent rescuer sheds a few tears and wipes them clean with his handkerchief. “When I was transported to the forest, I knew it was for a good reason, Chaos magic doesn’t just do things for no reason you know. When I found her, I knew she needed help, and who better to help than my darling Fluttershy.” Discord explains as Sebestian eves drops nearly wanting to vomit from the sickening niceties.
“Aw, thank you Discord, you’re proving every day to be reformed already. I’m sorry our tea party was cut so short today, let’s do it again in a few days to make up for it.” Fluttershy quietly cheers, singing the dragonequus’s praises unaware of the horrors inflicted on Sebastian.
“That sounds lovely, you know I’ll be there. Thank you again for taking care of the poor little filly; hopefully you find her family soon. Ta-Ta Fluttershy, see you soon.” Discord waves as the door is shut, finally allowing Sebastian to feel a sense of safety.
Trembling and peeking out the window to watch Discord disappear into his portal. The paranoia creeps in, nothing in this world seems to look right but he can’t tell if it’s the filly eyes, the different dimension, or just another trick. His heart nearly explodes as the tap of a dish carrying a daffodil and daisy sandwich is set on the table. He whips around to see the yellow Pegasus set the dish down for him.
“Sorry, didn’t mean to startle you little one, I’m Fluttershy, what’s your name?” She asks embarrassed by not considering how stressed and worried the filly must be.
Sebastian standing on the couch and franticly flipping between looking out the window and back to the sweet Pegasus behind him, realizes Discord never gave him a name. “My name is Sebastian.” He stammers, busy looking for any signs of the Dragonequus. “Is he gone, like actually gone?” He asks with his hooves trembling in fear.
“Discord? Yea, he had to go home. He may look scary, but don’t worry, he’s super nice.” Fluttershy explains trying to get the anxious filly to stop looking out the window. “I got you some food, you must be starving.” She says as she takes a seat next to the distressed filly. “Don’t worry missy, we’re gonna find your family in no time.”
Sebastian contemplates if it’s worth the risk to tell this stranger what happened. If there is a remote chance he can get back to the human world, he’s willing to consider but he has to know for sure the demon isn’t listening somehow. He trots over to the Pegasus and hops up to whisper into her ear. “Help me, please, I’m not a pony.” He whispers to where Fluttershy can hardly understand.

>>42369811
“What, you’re not a pony?” Fluttershy’s face turns sour with anger as she trusted that horrible Dragonequus to do the right thing, but before she condemns him entirely, she asks a question to make sure. “Discord turned you into a pony?”
Sebastian quivers wondering if Discord’s magic will either start the transformation on its own or only when Discord sees fit, but he presses his luck. “I was a human and he kidnapped me and turned me into a little girl pony! Now I’m stuck here!” He whines pouring his heart out, dumping his sorrow, hugging, and crying against Fluttershy’s soft yellow fluff.
Comforting the little Filly, Fluttershy retorts. “Oh, that big meanie, when I see him again, I’m gonna give him the stare and make him change you back to normal.” Discord softly grumbles mimicking her voice with flawless precision as he discretely unzips himself from his Fluttershy suit. Given how stubborn Sebastian was, he knew he would tell someone what he had done, but he was surprised at just how quickly it took for him to spill the secret. He wanted to give Sebastian the benefit of the doubt, and as much as he would like to just let the poor human go, Sebastian proved he could not be trusted. With a lackadaisical smile he prepares a magic drip. One drop on the poor filly’s head would cleanse the filly’s mind and erase Sebastian, as he knew him, without mercy, leaving behind an adorable orphan filly with nothing but pony thoughts.
Sebastian sniffles cuddling tighter before continuing. “But, I-I don’t know if I wanna to go back to normal, I wasn’t happy as a human and Discord used destiny magic or something and it decided I was a pony. Maybe I am supposed to be here? Do you think I should give it a try, being a pony?” Sebastian asks not knowing how close he came to his doom.
Discord scrambles to dissipate the drip before struggling to find an appropriate reaction to the revelation. “You want to be a pony now? Are you sure, I think Twilight might be able to help turn you back.” Discord starts to prod with a perfect Fluttershy voice, trying to understand the full extent of Sebastian’s feelings. “She can also make sure discord is punished for what he did to you too.”
Sebastian groans in disinterest at the idea of the demon being punished. With a teary sore throat, he partially admits what happened. “Don’t punish him, it’s all my fault I got into this mess.” He groans trying to build up the courage to explain the circumstances.

>>42369813
Discord clings to every word, his curiosity getting the better of him as Sebastian clings to him tightly. “It’s okay, just let it all out. You’ll feel so much better when you get it off your chest.”
With a deep breath and a sniffle, he continues. “I was just some loser, I didn’t have any friends, I didn’t even have a job, I was doing nothing with my life. I came across this book and they said if I summoned one of the demons, they would make every dream come true.” Sebastian cries out trying to explain himself through the sobs. “So, I summoned Discord and tried to use his power to get revenge on the people I hated, and he turned me into a pony. I was willing to do so much worse to my enemies if I had even a little bit of his power. I’m a horrible person, it’s only now that I’m stuck with this pony body that I realize I got what I deserved.” Sebastian sobs making even Discord’s lips tremble with sadness.
Feeling pity on the filly, Discord finally gives up the act, fully unzipping the Fluttershy suit. Despite being obvious about his reveal, Sebastian hardly stirs as Discord tries to find a diplomatic way to approach the situation. “I want to apologize, I feel awful about what I did, I thought I was simply tormenting a bully, but I should have taken the time to have some empathy and understand where your feelings were coming from.”
Hearing the zipper, Sebastian groans realizing he has been tricked again, but his sadness paralyzes him as he waits for his punishment, but instead, treated to kind words and an apology, Sebastian manages to look up to the Dragonequus wiping his tears with his hoof. “No tricks?” Sebastian asks not wanting to get his hopes up just for those fleeting feelings to be crushed yet again.
Discord hugs Sebastian tight pulling him onto his lap, “No tricks, I think I learned a valuable lesson about friendship today, but I doubt Fluttershy will see it the same way, and she will probably never forgive me.” Discord explains slumping back into the couch fearing he will likely be found out anyway regardless of what he ways.
Sebastian, despite still being upset about his pony body, sees an opportunity to set things on the right track with the demon, and takes a leap of friendship. “If it gets us on the right path here, I forgive you, and I promise I won’t tell your friends about everything that happened” Sebastian promises with a quivering hoof extended in friendship.
Although Discord struggles with friendship, he does understand that there is a give and take. He tries to think of what he can do to help Sebastian and he perks up from the somber mood they found themselves in. “I promise I will do everything I can to help you transition to your new life in Equestria so you can live your life as a filly the way the magic intended.” Throwing out a lion’s paw, Discord shakes and makes himself an unlikely new friend

>>42369816
For the first time in forever, Sebastian feels optimistic for the future, an opportunity to live a better life even if it’s in a strange pony body. “I can’t wait to see what Equestria has to offer then.” Sebastian stutters fearful of losing the human world forever for a chance in the unknown. “Think I’ll make a friend in Equestria?”
“Equestria is the friendliest place in all of the dimensions I have had the joy of visiting, I guarantee you’ll find a friend there.” Discord opens a portal to the real Equestria holding the filly tight. With a step, they go through the portal to the real Fluttershy house. Nervous and holding the filly tight for comfort, Discord finds himself ready to face the consequences. “Fluttershy, I have something I need to talk to you about.”

A week later, with some coaching from Fluttershy, Sebastian has learned, how to use his hooves, some proper manners, and a basic idea of what the world he lives in looks like. Sebastian immersed himself in this world ditching his old name and embracing his filly form with a name that fits the image. With beaming pride, she goes by Emerald Glimmer and Fluttershy is all too happy to indulge her. With her mane brushed and presentable, Discord, Fluttershy, and Emerald Glimmer prepare for the big day to put Twilight’s concerns to rest and make a future for the little filly.
Fluttershy makes a last-minute adjustment to the filly’s dress making sure she’s presentable as she tries to put her mind at ease. What if Twilight says she has to go back, what if Rainbow Dash gets mad at discord again? The worry causes her to whine to herself as she gets her tea ready. “I hope they bring the other fillies over; Sweetie Belle and the others are very kind, I think you’ll get along really well.” She explains pouring some tea for Discord.
Discord, expecting this tea party to be an interrogation more than anything, sips away at his tea ready for the questions to come his way. He would rather be anywhere else, but seeing the happy filly dance around with excitement at the idea of being allowed to live in Ponyville and getting a family brings some joy to the dragonequus. Just then his joyous smile evaporates as he hears a knock at the door, with a sigh he whines and takes a sip of tea. “So it begins, my inquisition.” As Fluttershy opens the door, his suspicions are confirmed as twilight enters wearing her element of friendship.
Emerald Glimmer trots up with excitement and gives Twilight a curtesy. Seeing the large tiara makes her nervous as she stammers out a greeting. “Hello, Miss Twilight, do you want some tea?”
Twilight is initially startled as she still isn’t entirely sure if the filly is dangerous or not. With only Fluttershy’s word to go off of, she has to be sure, but seeing the curtsey, she can’t help but to return the gesture. “Hello, you must be Sebastian, Fluttershy told me all about you.”

>>42369819
“Oh, no, she goes by Emerald Glimmer now, isn’t that adorable? She gets all excited when you use that name.” Fluttershy interjects putting her wing over the filly.
With a glow of her horn, Twilight scans the filly’s mind checking for any signs of mind control, memory erasure or any other anomalies, however, much to her surprise, she just sees the mind of a happy filly. “Huh, nothing out of the ordinary there. Yes, I’d love some tea.”
Discord pouts and takes an obnoxiously loud sip of his tea. “Yes, almost like I had nothing to do with her decision to remain a pony,” He snaps keeping his sass to a minimum as the rest of the mane six arrive to discuss the matter further.
Angered by his seemingly unbothered tone, Rainbow Dash launches accusations at the dragonequus. “Don’t you start playing innocent, we know you did something Discord!”
Discord scoffs clutching his imaginary pearls. “What, me? I’m a kind redeemed soul; I could never do such a thing” he says as Applejack butts in.
“You turned Ponyville into a center of mayhem, and just recently, you mind controlled critters to flood Sweet Apple Acres, then you froze the flood waters to go ice skating! You think we’re gullible enough to believe that you just happen to come across a human, turn them into a filly, and have them be perfectly fine with it?” Apple Jack seethes trying her best to remain even tempered in spite of another obnoxious sip of tea.
Discord seemingly lost in thought breaks with a sensible chuckle. “Oh right, that, good times but as they say, let bygones be bygones, that’s all in the past.” He smirks getting Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack to erupt in anger.
Wanting to make a good impression, and get her mind off the argument unfolding over by the table, Emerald Glimmer gives a curtsey to the rest of the ponies as they enter. Once she locks glances with Sweetie Belle, her demeanor changes from expressive model pony to her usual shy recluse self, more so as she sees Scootaloo and Apple Bloom with her. Her heart pounds as she can’t even scramble the words together to say hello. No! I can’t mess this up; I have to say something, I have to make friends. Oh no, I’m blowing it. The filly whines to herself as her crippling social anxiety starts to take over. As he starts to withdraw, she finds herself cuddling the doll Fluttershy gave her.
“That’s a cute doll, did Fluttershy make it for you?” Sweetie Belle asks wanting to find out what all the fuss over this pony is about. Rarity and Twilight told her all about the human that turned into a pony, but as she looks the newcomer up and down, all she sees is a regular filly.
Emerald Glimmer seeing the opportunity presented to her leaps at the chance. “Uh, yea, she gave it to me, I don’t have a name for it yet.” She explains starting to come out of her shell a little. “Do you have a doll too?”

>>42369821
Sweetie Belle takes her doll out of her saddle bag with the glow of her horn. The magnificent dress for it a replica of one of Rarity’s favorite designs. “Sure do, isn’t she pretty?” She brags as Emerald Glimmer gushes over the dress.
“Aw, yours is so nice and that dress is so elegant” She whines to herself playing with the mane on her doll with envy. “mine’s just naked.”
With a glow of her horn, Sweetie Belle takes a dress from her saddle bag and gives it to Emerald glimmer. Beaming with pride, Sweetie Belle admires the dress as her new friend carefully examines the details of the dress in her hooves. “You can have that one, I’ve had it forever.”
Emerald Glimmer can hardly believe her ears as she has to question the act of kindness. “Really, you mean it? Thank you…uh, what’s your guys’ names?” She asks embarrassed to have skipped over such basic formalities.
Feeling comfortable with the “potentially dangerous” human pony, she introduces everyone. “I’m Sweetie Belle, this is Apple Bloom, and that’s Scootaloo, what’s your name?” She asks using her horn to help get the tight-fitting dress on Emerald Glimmer’s doll.
Admiring the gift and swelling up with joy and confidence, Emerald Glimmer nearly trots in place. “I’m Emerald Glimmer, you can call me Emmy for short!” She cheers excited to meet her new friends.

As the time passes, the Mane Six go back and forth trying to determine if they should let this human transplant stay, but after intense deliberations, Twilight takes a look at the Filly in question. Watching Emmy’s eyes glow with fascination as the cutie mark crusaders talk about their adventures, and crazy things they’ve done in the pursuit of their marks, forces her to consider what her life would look like in Equestria. Asserting herself, Twilight puts her hoof on the table. “Dash, Applejack, I know Discord has done some upsetting things to us, and honestly, we wouldn’t be having this discussion in the first place if it weren’t for him, but we should be thinking; what is best for Sebastian? If what Fluttershy is saying is true then they have never been happier and who are we to deny that.” She explains watching the group of fillies playing and laughing. “I think we should let Sebastian, or Emerald Glimmer, stay in Ponyville and grow up just like any other pony.” Twilight explains with a unifying confidence and smile; however, she notices there are holdouts. “Letting Emerald Glimmer stay doesn’t mean that you think Discord did the right thing.” She sighs trying to get the last two ponies to finally agree.

>>42369824
With a glare of suspicion thrown Discord’s direction, Applejack softly concedes. “If you say so sugar cube, I reckon that little filly aint gonna do anypony harm.” Apple Jack smiles with taking a glance at Apple Bloom smiling and laughing, and with a slightly more optimistic tone, she gives her endorsement. “Aw, let her stay.”
Rainbow Dash, crosses her hooves and gives Discord an indignant scowl. Though she cannot bring herself to agree that discord did nothing wrong, she can’t justify punishing the admittedly adorable green Filly “Yea, she can stay” She groans as Fluttershy gives her a hug.
Twilight smiles with regal confidence as the group decides to let their new guest stay in Equestria. Despite all their initial apprehensions, the human seems to be fitting in quite well and has made a few friends already.
Sweetie belle uses her horn to fix the mane on Emerald Glimmers doll before reaching into her saddle bag. “Oh, don’t worry about it, Emmy, Rarity made me thousands of these dresses from fabric scraps. Pick a couple you really like.”
Scootaloo rolls her eyes tired of all the doll talk, “Come on, hurry up, last I checked, there aren’t any cutie marks for playing with dolls.” Scootaloo whines with exaggerated boredom flopping onto the floor. “Do humans get cutie marks?”
Apple bloom shows off the bow on her doll proud of its curls. “Oh, hush now Scootaloo, we have a whole day to go on a cutie mark crusade.” She explains wondering why Twilight wanted them all there. “We just have to let them talk it all out first is all.”
Emmy takes a couple dresses for her doll that she really likes before her heart quivers in fear as all the ponies get up from the table. She meant to listen in keenly to the conversation at the table but got distracted with all the fun with her new friends. Are they gonna send me back? No, I didn’t do anything wrong, I’m a good little mare she tells herself before finally looking up to see a warm reassuring smile from Twilight that puts her little heart at ease, although her lips quiver in fear as she waits to hear her fate.
Twilight playfully roughens up Emmy’s mane putting the little filly at ease. “Welcome to Equestria Emerald Glimmer, the girls and I decided it’s in your best interest to let you stay. I think you’ll be a wonderful addition to our town.” She explains not expecting the filly to throw her hooves around her to give a tight hug.

>>42369828
As they embrace Applejack calls out to Apple Bloom. “Apple Bloom, I know you’re goin’ by Rarity’s for that tea party later, you better not be late for supper again. Have fun girls.”
Scootaloo rolls her eyes at the idea of the tea party, but with them being all but dismissed, she excitedly throws on her helmet, “Awesome! Come on, let’s go, I have a whole list of things we have to try before the tea party!” Scootaloo cheers with a cheer of excitement from Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom.
Emmy sits back, watching the Cutie Mark Crusaders gear up for another adventure with mellow happiness. Although she enjoyed their company, she conceded that they already had a friend group and that it’d be rude of her to nudge her way in but with a little tug on her dress, she turns to see Sweetie Belle.
“Hey Emmy, want to come with us? It’ll be fun!” Sweetie Belle teases as Scootaloo joins in on the encouragement.
“Oh yea, I never thought about it, I can’t wait to see if humans can get cutie marks too.” Scootaloo thinks leaning on her scooter with ideas of what a human cutie mark would look like.
“Well, she is a pony now, of course she will get a cutie mark, anypony can get a cutie mark.” Apple Bloom cheers making room on the scooter for an additional passenger.
Emmy nearly wells up with tears of joy as she hears her new friends invite her on an adventure. “Are you sure?” She asks, not even waiting for a response before wiggling out of her dress and hopping onto the scooter. “I’d love to!” She looks back to Discord and Fluttershy giving them a beaming smile and waving good bye as the pair lovingly return the gesture. Holding on tight and zooming down the road, Emmy thinks about what brought her to this place as she looks out into the distance. When she first arrived, she often thought that this was a nightmare brought upon her by a foul demon, however she quickly realized this land is a dream come true, all she had to do was open her heart and accept her destiny to be a little pony. Now with friends, and grown ponies willing to help guide her on her journey, she knows she’s in good hands, or hooves, regardless of what comes her way.

>>42369830
And finished. I hope I didn't mess anything up, I made some last second additions before pasting

>>42369754
>The page flips open to a page depicting a serpent with antlers and talons like an eagle.
>page flips open to a page
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For real though, cute story!

>>42369753
Capital work. Here's a napkin doodle for your trouble. I'll give it another couple of skims then come back later with my feedback.

>>42370069
Fuck, how'd I miss that
>>42370205
I had a solid laugh at the doodle. It's super adorable. I'm glad you're liking it so far

>>42365421
Yeah I was writing more yesterday, sadly had some breaking news come down the pipeline and had to actually work. I'll try to update later with more than what I initially posted. There's a vision here.

>>42354850
>https://ponepaste.org/11208
Added to the archive.
https://pone.tf

Y'know, I was reading Kinderquestia stories on ponepaste and I came up with an idea. Anon wakes up in Kinderquestia as anon filly. He plays along, trying his best to be a regular filly. Albeit one that's very smart and calm of anything thanks to his human brain. Overtime though, the folly persona starts to leak into his actual personality as he slowly becomes more and more pony like. Thinking more like they do. Forgetting more about his human past. As he adjusts more and more to life as a pony in Kinderquestria. Maybe it could end with showing anon years later as a full grown mare. Having fully become a pony fully mentally. Albeit a lot more mature and intelligent, as well as a bit strange. Which are what remaining of her original personality pre kinderquestria.

>>42370834
What's Kinderquestia

>>42370938
To put it in the most simple terms possible. It's Equestria, but the child friendly-ness is turned up to 100.

>>42370956
Is there a show or special I can watch or is it just books

>>42370974
Huh?

>>42371067
Is kidnerquestria some sort of spin off franchise or something, or is it just a fan creation

>>42371107
It's a thread that's been on /mlp/ for a long time. >>42302815

>>42371110
Oh that, I don't think I've ever paid it any attention

>>42370834
Anyway back to this. What do y'all think of such a concept?

>>42370834
I hope she had kids of her own.

>>42370320
Alright, here's the critique. I'll start with the bad news.

From a technical standpoint, it's messy. Fundamental grammar is a problem. There's a lot of missing or misplaced punctuation, particularly commas and capital letters, and some confusing sentence structures that make it tough to piece together what's happening moment-to-moment. Scene-setting is a problem area, too. I know it's inherently difficult to give the reader a consistent mental image in a scenario like this, where Discord messes with the surroundings so often, but the prose describing the surroundings is a little inadequate in each case. You could pass that off as a deliberate artistic choice, given the circumstances, but it gets in the way of understanding what's going on.

Now, here's what I liked. Your characterization of Discord is near-perfect. His specific blend of goofy theatrics and outright callousness is tough to pull off without leaning too hard on one or the other, but you nailed it, and you made full and creative use of his abilities and sense of humour in the process; I'm a particular fan of the cartoony stuff he does to our protagonist prior to the main event. Great use of multiple layers of reality and deception, too - the fake Equestria caught me off-guard, and it's a nice nod to his scheming tendencies that he'd have a contingency to test his plaything further. The 'friendship quiz' with totally arbitraty answers was deliciously on-brand. Having him realise he did 'the right thing' by complete accident was a much-needed touch - he does indeed have a heart, even if it's comparatively Grinch-sized, which plays neatly into the happy ending.

I'm seeing the character limit warning, so I'll summarise: it's hampered by poor fundamental writing, but the underlying ideas are a lot of fun. Overall great impression. If you can polish up your basics, I'd love to see more.

>>42372438

>>42372234
Wow, an actual critique! I don't think I've ever had anyone bother to take the time to read and give a critique beyond "I hate it" or "it's good". It may sound like excuses but I'll kinda explain myself a bit

>From a technical standpoint, it's messy. Fundamental grammar is a problem.
I've always loved writing but I've never really had much formal education on the matter. The community college has a creative writing course I've been wanting to take for my personal edification but haven't bothered with since work, and work training in addition to my other hobbies leave me with about an hour between showering and bed that I can have some fun on the key board. I imagine that's why things are hard to follow as I'm trying to string together 30 different instances where I was able to write and having to think wtf was I writing the night before. Doesn't help that my "proofreading" was done while trying to stay awake.
>You could pass that off as a deliberate artistic choice, given the circumstances
Got me there. A lot of the scenes I left intentionally vague as I was a bit too lazy (or pressed for time if you're being generous) to try and type out a vivid bizarro world. I should have put a bit more effort into the more concrete scenes like the ones that take place inside fluttershy's cottage but I didn't unfortunately. Maybe with some more time I could polish it up really well
>Your characterization of Discord is near-perfect. His specific blend of goofy theatrics and outright callousness is tough to pull off without leaning too hard on one or the other, but you nailed it
Thank you! I probably spent more time than I should have scrutinizing the actions the characters take to make sure they all line up with what I would expect them to do but I'm glad it worked.
>Having him realise he did 'the right thing' by complete accident was a much-needed touch - he does indeed have a heart, even if it's comparatively Grinch-sized, which plays neatly into the happy ending.
I'm glad I got steered away from the mind wipe idea (shout-out to that anon), seemed nice at first but after thinking about it, it gave discord no opportunity to show his kinder side which I needed to make an actual compelling happy ending.

All that taken into consideration my next project will definitely be written with more care to be more readable and easier to follow, hopefully a less challenging setting and less cartoony antics will make for an easier writing experience as this is probably a bit beyond my level

>>42370834
Anyone else interested in such a concept? I'd try writing it myself but I'm not a good enough writer to pull it off unfortunately.

>>42373394
Sounds like it'd make a pleasant read. Not my cup of tea in terms of writing though

>>42369831
It may be cringe to some, but you made it and put it out there, and that's better than some folks out there

>>42373389
Just gave me an idea of a MLP fan being turned into a pony all excited to see equestria and it's been film and flam'd to an industrial hellscape and all the ponies are miserable. Which leads the protagonist to launch a crusade against industry

>>42370834
Ended up writing it in the kinderquestria thread. It's not finished yet, but I'm working on it.
>>42373907

>>42375217
Cool but please post the story in this thread too.

>>42375321
Perhaps once I finish it.

>>42375418
> You wake up in a field of bright green grass. A beautiful blue sky with the occasional soft fluffy cloud was high above you. It would be a beautiful sight, if it weren't for the fact that you have no idea how you got here. Last thing you remembered was going to sleep in your bed.
> You try to get up but end up stumbling and falling flat on your face. You finally notice that you no longer have hands or feet. Instead you have 4 green hooves. Panic begins to flood your body as you look down to get a better view of your body. Realizing that you're some kind of female quadrupedal hooved creature.
> This realization causes you to start screaming. Your voice shrill, high pitched, and feminine. Your vision getting blurry and heart pounding. Nearly fainting.
> Eventually you calm down and try to stand. Shakily standing up. You look around. Noticing a village in the distance. A few pastel blurs approaching from the direction of the village. The sound of clopping slowly getting louder.
> Before you know it, you're surrounded by colorful ponies who all look quite concerned. Some are regular looking ones like you. Some have wings. And some have horns. They're all a lot bigger than you.
> "What's wrong little filly?" A mint green unicorn asks. Gently nuzzling you. It feels quite comforting, as much as you hate to admit it. You also realize that you're most likely the pony equivalent of a child.
> "Wh-where am I?" You hesitantly ask. Looking up at the mint unicorn. Shivering nervously. You're still quite scared due to the fact you're in a foreign body, are a different gender, have no idea where you are, and are surrounded by strange pastel colored animals you've never seen before. So quite a lot to be concerned about.
> "You're in ponyville!" The mint unicorn shouts happily. "I'm Lyra, what's your name?"
> You pause. Unsure whether or not you should say your real name. You don't know if such a name would be considered normal or not here in horse land. Shrinking a little, you shake nervously.
> Lyra nuzzles you some more, sensing your nervousness. "If you're too scared to say it right now, you don't have to. I can happily wait until you've calmed down to hear it."
> You sigh with relief. Relaxing a little. You're then suddenly wrapped up by a pair of legs. Lyra hugging and cuddling you. Feeling emotionally exhausted from all that has happened, and feeling very comfortable in the hug, you start to fall asleep. Before you know it, you out cold.
> Eventually you wake up in a comfortable soft bed. Lyra and a cream colored mare with a blue and pink mane both cuddling you. It feels amazing to your filly body, but your human mind wishes to get up and find out more.
(1/10)

>>42375652
> Eventually you slowly worm your way out of the grasp of the 2 mares. Walking around slowly. Both to not wake them, and also because you've yet to get the hang of walking on all fours.
> Slowly, you explore the house. It's simple but cozy, with 2 stories and a basement. You almost feel at ease. Almost. You're still somewhat nervous, unsurprisingly.
> Eventually you just decided to relax on a couch in the 1st story and think over your situation. You've woken up in a strange unknown land in an equally strange and alien body. It seems you're currently in the care of Lyra and the other mare for now. So at least food and shelter won't be an issue. But you'll have to figure out the culture and societal norms of this place if you want to blend in and not draw attention to yourself.
> Eventually the two mares wake up and come downstairs to the living room. They approach and sit on each of your sides, sandwiching you between them.
> "Glad you woke up!" Lyra says cheerfully. "This is Bon Bon. Me and her are going to take care of you now. According to princess Twilight Sparkle, she couldn't find any records on you. So we offered to adopt you. Congratulations, you're now our daughter!"
> Lyra and Bon Bon proceed to hug you tightly. Both nuzzling into you. You instinctively let out a squeak of happiness, much to the surprise of your human brain. Your filly side filling your mind with immense pleasure from the affection.
> Then Bon Bon speaks up. "So what should we call you sweetie?" She asks curiously.
> "Uhm..." You say, trying to come up with a name. You then look around for any ideas for what would be a fitting pony name. Looking down at your hooves, noting the green color of them. Then you notice a hornet passing by a nearby window and an idea comes to you. "Green Hornet." You say hesitantly.
> They both smile down at you. Causing you relax. Happily smiling back at them. So far, it seems that despite the situation you're in, you don't have much to worry about, fortunately.
> Eventually Bon Bon gets up. "I'm gonna go make dinner. Lyra dear, keep an eye on Hornet please." Lyra nods obediently in response.
> Lyra takes out a brush and begins to gently brush your mane. The sensation causes you to feel immense bliss and causes you to relax further. "So what do you like to do?"
> You're about to say browse the internet, but then realize that you don't know if the internet even exists here. "I like to read." You say instead.
> "You'll love the local library then." She responds happily. "It has all kinds of books about all kinds of things."
> "That sounds nice." You say calmly. Subconsciously letting out a small whinny as you continue to relax. Your human brain trying to resist the filly urge to nuzzle into Lyra.
(2/10)

>>42375654
> Bon Bon eventually finishes making dinner and you all go to the dinner table to eat. It's a delicious carrot stew which you happily slurp up. Only thing of note that happened during the entire dinner was the fact that you found out your hooves can hold things, which is useful.
> After dinner, Bon Bon picks you up by the scruff of your neck and brings you to the bathroom. She proceeds to gently bathe you, much to your embarrassment. But you don't resist.
> You're then tucked into bed by the two mares. Having been given your own bedroom. The bright light of the moon illuminating it.
> "Good night Hornet. Rest well. Tomorrow is your first day of school." Bon Bon says gently as she and Lyra exit the room.
> You freeze up. This news shocking you. Having not realized that since you're a child now, you'll have to go back to school. Tomorrow is going to be interesting to say the least.
(3/10)

>>42375658
And so begins the first day of school.
> You wake up. Sun shining down brightly into your room. Letting out a little yawn, you stretch and head downstairs. Greeting your 'new moms'.
> You eat some cereal for breakfast and are taken to school by Lyra. She drops you off in the school yard, where other foals run about and play with each other. "Have a good day Hornet!" She then waves bye and leaves.
> You look around. Observing the other foals as they play before sitting down in a corner near the entrance of the school and relaxing. Deciding to wait for someone to approach you instead of approaching someone.
> You decide to look through your saddle bag while you wait for school to start. It's full of the typical school supplies. Pulling out a notebook and pencil, you begin to sketch to your heart's content. Drawing pictures of your original world.
> After a bit of drawing, a trio of fillies approaches you. One is a regular pony like you, but instead of a green coat and black mane, she has a yellow coat and red mane. The other 2 are an orange pegasus and white unicorn. Before you know it, you're surrounded by them.
> "Hello! It's nice to meet you! What's your name?" The white one says. Her voice high pitched and squeaky.
> "G-Green Hornet." You say nervously before shaking your head. Getting confused by how nervous you are. You're a grown man, not an actual filly. You shouldn't be so nervous.
> "It's nice ta meet ya Hornet! I'm Applebloom! And ma friends here are Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo!" The yellow one then says.
> "And we're the cutie mark crusaders!" Scootaloo shouts happily. Gesturing to the marks of their rumps, which all look similar to each other. You just now really notice that all the ponies, asides from the younger foals, have markings on their flanks. Well technically you did see them before, but didn't really think about it until now. You then look at your own flank, noticing it's currently blank.
> "I wonder what your cutie mark will be." Sweetie Belle says curiously. But before this conversation continues the school belly rings and you all head inside.
(4/10)

>>42375660
Inside the classroom.
> Your teacher is a regular pony (you really need to find out what exactly they're called) whose coat is a dark purplish pink and mane a mix of 2 different shades of light pink.
> The foals refer to her as 'Miss Cheerilee'. You note that down mentally as you sit down. Sitting in a corner in the back row.
> Nearby are the crusaders. They all wave at you. You awkwardly wave back.
> "Alright class, I'd like to introduce a new student." All the foals turn to look at you, causing you to shrink back a bit. The teacher gesturing for you to come up. Which you hesitantly do so.
> "Class, meet Green Hornet." Cheerilee says. "Hello Green Hornet." The class says in unison. Cheerilee turning to look at you.
> "H-hello, it's nice to meet you all." You hesitantly say. Quite nervous. Feeling embarrassed that you're acting like this, you're supposed to be a grown man. You shouldn't be acting like a filly. Even if you're in the body of one.
> You sit back down and try to make yourself look smaller. Wanting to avoid as much attention as possible. Unfortunately it's not very effective.
> Before you know it, it's already recess. Having spent most of the time doodling in your notebook. Having easily finished the work your teacher gave you within a matter of minutes.
> Deciding you should probably play with some of the foals to avoid standing out, you approach the crusaders. They're playing tag. And luckily for you, they're more than happy to have you join. Much to your surprise, you end up enjoying playing with them immensely.
> Before you know it, recess is over and it's time to head back inside. The rest of the school day going by just as quickly. Although the crusaders offer to take you to their clubhouse and hangout, you're feeling quite tired and just want to relax a little. So you head back to Lyra's and Bon Bon's house.
(5/10)

>>42375664
Back at 'home'.
> You wave to Lyra who's laying down on the couch as you enter. Heading up to your room and laying down on your bed. Looking around your room, you notice that there's some new things. A toy chest with a few toys in it. A package of crayons. And a painting hanging on a wall that depicts ponyville at sunset.
> You decide to draw as you relax. Making a few sketches of the sights you've seen so far since since ending up in this world. Eventually falling asleep and taking a nap.
> Eventually you're waken up by Lyra. "Dinner time.~" She says happily. You follow her down to the dinner table. Bon Bon waving at you two as you enter and sit down.
> "So how was school today? You make any friends?" Bon Bon asks innocently. Taking a bite out of a baked potato.
> "It was good I guess. Made friends with a trio of fillies called the cutie mark crusaders. Besides that, it wasn't very eventful. Spent most of my time drawing. The school work the teacher handed out was pretty easy."
> Lyra chuckles. "Looks like our little girl is a genius, honey." She says as she turns to look at her partner.
> Bon Bon simply smiles and giggles in response.
> After dinner, the rest of the night goes by quickly. You get bathed, have dessert, snuggle with Lyra and Bon Bon for a bit, brush your teeth, and then go to bed.
(6/?)

>>42375666
A couple of months later.
> You trot down the street with your fellow fillies. Humming happily. Heading towards a candy store. You don't have any bits, but luckily one of your moms is the owner of the store. All the other foals are jealous of that.
> You and the crusaders happily ask your mom for some candy. And she happily oblidges. Absolutely spoiling you and your friends.
> You and the crusaders then head out to the crusader's clubhouse. Today you're going to try figuring out what your cutie mark could potentially be. Since you're currently still a blank flank.
> As you walk along the road with your friends, you pull out your notebook and look through it. As you do, you suddenly pause. Looking at some of the first drawings you drew in it. Drawings of your original world. A feeling of dread and horror filling you.
> You realize how you've barely even thought about your original world after only a couple of weeks. How you've already started to see yourself as a filly. How you're already seeing Lyra and Bon Bon as your moms and their house as your home. How you're already starting to forget some things about your original world. And worse of all, how your personality is starting to change. Becoming as infantile as all the other ponies that call this world home.
> Your friends notice that you suddenly stopped. As well as the look of dread on your face. Looks of concern starting to form on their faces.
> "What's wrong Hornet?" Applebloom asks with concern.
> "I-it's nothing..." You lie. It doesn't look like any of them actually believe you, but they don't push the topic.
> You continue to follow them to the clubhouse. Still excited to find your cutie mark, but not as excited as before. The dread caused by the fact you're starting to change mentally still lingers in your mind.
> Eventually you all arrive at the clubhouse and head inside.
(7/10)

>>42375671
In the clubhouse.
> "So what is it you like to do, Hornet?" Sweetie Belle asks curiously. Scooting up a little towards you.
> "Well I like to read, draw, make music with my mom Lyra, I play the trumpet and she plays the lyre, and help my mom Bon Bon make sweets." You reply. Eating a gummy made by your mom.
> "Maybe your talent is illustrating and writing books?" Scootaloo suggests. Handing you some paper and a pencil.
> "That's a great idea Scootaloo!" Applebloom shouts. Complimenting the pegasus. Causing Scootaloo to blush a little.
> You happily begin to write and draw. Finding that you enjoy it immensely. Before you know it, you finish and have a small book's worth of pages. Stapling it together and and handing the book to the crusaders.
> They slowly read through the book before turning to look at you. All three smiling at you.
> "This is really good!" Scootaloo says. Her wings flapping a little.
> "Yeah!" Applebloom and Sweetie Belle say in unison.
> The praise makes your cheeks flush. A glow now coming from your flanks. Before you know it, the glow has died down and a cutie mark us staring you in the face. An open book with a pencil writing a question mark on it.
> You jump up with joy and hug the crusaders tightly. The trio hugging back happily. You can't wait to show your moms that you got your cutie mark.
(8/10)

>>42375673
A couple of days later.
> You're writing another book. You've been doing that a lot lately. That and also illustrating them.
> Outside you hear screams and commotion. Curiously you head outside to see what the fuss is. Especially since it makes it hard to focus on the book you're writing.
> Outside you see some ponies running away from a manticore. But you're not too concerned. This world is quite tame compared to your previous world. Without a single bit of hesitation, you pickup a nearby newspaper off the ground and bap the creature on the snoot. "No! Bad manticore! Bad!"
> The creature proceeds to turn tail and run. The other ponies staring at you in awe. You causally shrug and turn to head back inside. But before you get the chance to, you're sweeped up by the crowd and are carried away. The crowd shouting and cheering. Pinkie Pie already setting up a party to celebrate your 'heroic deed'.
> You sigh. Today is going to be a long day.
(9/10)

>>42375674
Years later.
> You're a grown mare now. You can barely remember your old life now, but you hardly care about that nowadays. You've more or less settled into the world. You're a successful author, and a 'hero'. Although your heroic deeds have just been bapping any villain or monster causing trouble you come across with a rolled up newspaper.
> Whenever you're not writing, you help your mom Bon Bon with her shop as a side job.
> Life is good. Sure somethings you do other ponies consider odd. Such as how you prefer salty and savory things over sweets. How you don't really care if you're insulted. You've heard far worse when you were human. How most things that scared other ponies didn't phase you in the slightest. How you had a darker sense of humor compared others. But despite that, they still accept you.
> Taking a sip of coffee, you stretch and head outside. You felt like visiting your mom's today.
The end.
(10/10)

>>42375321
I have finished posting it.

>>42375679
Thank you!

>>42375681
You're welcome.

>>42375689
Anyway, thoughts?

>>42375692
Not them, but I like that the natural conclusion of dealing with human issues in your past life is being a slightly maladjusted badass pone

>>42375749
Lmao. Glad you like it.

>>42376409
I've seen this picture numerous times but this is the first time I noticed they're sleeping on the bed backwards

>>42348316
No thanks. My body stays the way it is.
But I can get you some wisdom teeth from my local cemetery.

>>42348316
i only have 3, can i at least be a mudpony?

>>42348316
I have no idea where my wisdom teeth are
I have no idea if I ever even grew any

Hi. I am looking for fanfiction/greens centered around a man/stallion that has been transformed into a mare having sex with another stallion. I don't care about the transformation itself. No foalcon/anonfilly stuff please.
I feel like i've seen literally everything fimfiction has to offer on that fetish and LLMs are the only remaining recourse, but i would be glad if you were able to recommend something new.

Here are some examples of what i'm looking for, what i consider to be the best
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/332193/2/topsy-turvy/chapter-2
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/512054/dont-bet-on-it
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/511351/comeuppance
Also these 2 posts are very hot
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/39024775/#39025346
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/39024775/#39025498

Stories i know about and which fit the description even if i didn't find them to be as hot as the ones above:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/109700/royal-duties
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/81262/kinds-of-love
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/166496/fecundity
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/363890/a-novel-match
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/295442/maid-to-please
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/537804/subjective-perspective
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/113092/sated-curiosity
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/80277/one-knight-stand
Plus there was that green where a human appeared in Starlight's village and got immediately transformed into a mare.

>>42377067
Seen this one?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/494765/better-than-best-friends

>>42377292
cute anonmare

>>42347233 (OP)
Well, this is interesting (pic semi-related, also RIP his dub VA James Carter Cathcart, stuck until the end actually)

>>42375676
BTW, how do you upload to ponepaste?

>>42378088
Isn't it self explanatory? Just put the text in the box. https://ponepaste.org

My little heartbreak?

>>42378185
What about her? I thought her stories got very boring after a while.

>>42378189
... I see... Also, where did you get that? I do believe that the artist was Genbu... And I haven't seen them since they fell off the planet... I really hope they didn't die...

hello I've been redirected here many times in other threads so I guess this means this is supposed to be my home, right fellow ptfgr's? :)))

>>42378338
So what kind of pony do you want to be?

>>42378330
It's on the artist's Deviantart, along with some other post-TF pony art. https://www.deviantart.com/genbulein/art/Heartbreak-1-438800005

>>42378352
You know their story is still going, for like 12 years... Makes you wonder what the ultimate goal of these little stories they've written is...

Is this a trans thread or something seems like 90% of the stories posted here are male character turned into mare or filly

>>42348595
You can't be a Pegasus or unicorn for only 3. And she only let's you screw one of her freinds.

>>42378423
Who wouldn't want to be a mare?

>>42378516
I don't. The sex you have on earth should be the same in Equestria no matter what.

>>42379039
but what if it's more fun
better yet, what if it's just PG so it doesn't matter AND you get an eye full of cute in the mirror every morning to bring a smile to your face

>>42377077
Just read it and it's great, thanks anon! Do you know any more similar stories?

>>42378423
It's not that skewed. Stallions are good too.

>>42378516
I don't wanna be a mare. I want to be a big strong stallion forever subservient to the mares of equestria

>>42380100
I keep seeing this image. What's the sauce?

>>42380296
Reverse image search yields this: https://derpibooru.org/images/3372212

>>42380242
That's a cool anon pony design right there, makes him looks like he's a snobby noble from Canterlot

>>42348316
What if I was born without mine?

>>42380822
dancing filly!

>>42369339
Moondancer!

>>42369339
Does anonfilly qualify as an existing character? Or do they have to exist in the canon show specifically

>>42381674
Anon filly doesn't count since anyone could be anon filly and is more of a placeholder for generic pony oc

>>42370205
Sweet art!

Maid anonmare.

>>42369753
Cool, now do a genderbend version

>>42381931

>>42381894
beautiful anonmare

>>42382438
What about girl failure anonmare?

>>42382853
She needs a good mare to take her under her wing and teach Anon how to be a mare.

>>42382853
Equestria is a utopia, why would there be troons there

>>42383076
>Equestria is a utopia
Horsefucker heaven and utopia are two different things Anon.

>>42383076
Your mother.

>>42383074
And then marry.

>>42383076
You're right, there wouldn't be troons there!
Because they would all be mares!

>>42382853
Extremely mediocre and ugly OC pushed by one single artist. Just a copy of floorb except anon shaped for some reason.
"Anon as a failed stinky neet doing nothing" is not a particularly interesting depiction and this doesn't change when he's a mare. Anon is much better as an active and lively shitposter.

>>42383547
>Anon as a failed stinky neet doing nothing" is not a particularly interesting depiction and this doesn't change when he's a mare.
Couldn't agree more, just seeing it makes me sick
>>42383284
Good, I want them all to be the most beautiful mares so they can forget their strife and live life the way they dream

>>42383076
this

>>42383818
>>42383284
>Good, I want them all to be the most beautiful mares so they can forget their strife and live life the way they dream
You two are so based it's unreal

>>42383076
Because ponies like scootaloo exist and prove that even in perfect horsey land people will get fucked somehow

We need more stories of Twilight transforming people into fillies and brainwashing, hypnotizing, and/or mind controlling them.

>>42383284
This you? >>42344627
I can't believe some of you are unironic trannies.

>>42386096
She always needs more assistants in her library.

>>42375676
found this adorable btw nonny!

>>42386116
Yes, that's me.
I am a woman, I just understand how body dysmorphia feels and I take mental health seriously.
How do you ironically be a tranny?

>>42386254
It's pretty easy to ironically be a tranny. It's an easy way to piss people off. I just thought this board was different or that the guys here were shitposting or were just defaulting to mares since that's the 'default' for ponies. I don't know. So you're supposedly a real woman? I don't find the notion of women on 4chan/MLP weird - I know we have more women than most boards and about 30% of our userbase is women. And a lot of the women I know just mask as men, I know all of this. But it is very suspicious to constantly be talking about trannies and pushing others into it - a very typical trait of those within the trans community. And I can't really take a changeling for their word, either.
For a starters, how does pushing people into a delusion known to foster poor mental health help anyone? How does pushing them into that recursive delusion spiral at all? Especially if it's to do with ponies. At least with women, you can attempt to be a crude imitation of one with stuff like Estradiol Valerate or whatever. There's no Equinium Valerate. People like you make me so incredibly bitter my brain short-circuits and I don't even know how to say it right.

>>42386116
>>42386254
>>42386323
why the fuck is /ptfg/ always like this?
go back to your offboard circlejerk or back to /lgbt/ you go /n/igger

>>42386123
Glad you liked it!

>>42386096
That, and bat pony TFs.

>>42386118
Anon and Spike having to deal with Twilight's magic related bullshit. lmao

>>42386323
>it is very suspicious to constantly be talking about trannies and pushing others into it
But you brought it up by accusing me.
What did I say that was pushing?
>Especially if it's to do with ponies.
I wish I was a changeling.
I start most of my mornings crying in bed because I'm not a changeling.

>>42386371
I mean, you're the one whom first tried to push me into [wretched word] in the FiO thread where you DID push TWICE [>>42344627] and [>>42344727], and >>42383284 I'd argue is pushing it too. Especially on vulnerable people clearly seeming to struggle with the matter. Do you really not see it?
But, I digress. I'm sorry to hear about the last part. That, at least, is not insidious and evil, and I wish you the best of luck. I believe by the end of history, we'll all have forms more befitting of who we are.

>>42386403
I wouldn't say that last one really counts as I see it as hoping everyone gets their ideal form in equestria

>>42385297
I think even in a utopia biology could still screw you. The difference is that the utopia itself doesn't screw them for that, it makes proper room and accounts for them.

>>42386323
>But it is very suspicious to constantly be talking about trannies and pushing others into it
Generally speaking most of us are simply lurking until someone tells us we should rope to appease some sort of moral standard or stop taking hormones because "those make you unstable" despite most research suggesting that suicide attempts drop dramatically post-hrt. The discussion about trannies would probably also be fairly infrequent and civil if people stopped bitching about us. i don't speak or care about every last tranny, but it pisses me off to have to justify my existence to people who aren't even paying attention over and over and over and over again
>>42386333
>why is the thread where at least 50% of the stories in its archives are literal tranny wish-fulfillment full of trannies
I FUCKING WONDER

now to address some other common concerns in hopes that i will never have to talk about being a tranny again on this fucking board like that's ever gonna happen
>go back to /lbgt/
none of us go there who like /mlp/, it's a shithole full of misery for people who hate living. you escape /lgbt/ by becoming happy and/or getting a life.
>axewound
i'm fine with my dick, not going to gamble on a surgical procedure that has more related horror stories than steven king has written
>trannies spread the tranny mind virus
this one is a tricky one because so many trannies do unironically try to egg crack. it's annoying, the path is to be forged from within, not to be forced on others. those that do try to convince others that they are trans are generally observing idiosyncratic behavior they have observed in themselves or in close friends of theirs. sometimes they're right on the money. sometimes they aren't and it's just autism. the answer to "why do trannies do x" is often to be found in the simple statement "because a lot of trannies are autistic and have the associated personality quirks that come with assburgers."
>i think you should rope
i'm not going to, i like being alive.
>fedpost
no.

>>42386708
It's crazyyyy when people talk like being trans is "choosing mental illness and sadness" or whatever when its rly the opposite and transitioning gives ppl access to forms of happiness they didn't think were accessible. I looove playing pretend it's fun. I get to be a funny mare in my computer

Honestly, as I think about it, I've always assumed I'd want to be a unicorn since I tend to be pretentious and intellectual pursuits come naturally to me, however pegasi have one cool feature: imagine cloud beds. It gets a bit more complicated, because I also have fear of heights and agoraphobia, so it'd be borderline suicidal. Also a changeling would be fine. Changelings are cute and cool.
>>42386371
>I wish I was a changeling.
Same>>42386371
>I start most of my mornings crying in bed because I'm not a changeling
Well, that's unusual, but heart can be chained either way. I imagine in Equestria we'd get better. Or at least I hope so. Being a pony who can't get restful sleep and is haunted by horrible optic snow does sound better than being a human with this, but my life would still be hell

>>42386708
>bros I'm one of the good ones I swear!!
You can also just shut the fuck up if you don't want this talk to happen
If nobody ever spoke up saying "yes I'm an unironic tranny uwu you're all also trannies because you want to be mares uwu" then I can guarantee that mentions of trannies a) would be much more infrequent and b) even when they'd happen they'd quickly peter out because there'd be not much to talk about. You trannies are regularly stirring the shitpot here so you don't get to complain about it.
>inb4 trannies is not one person, I definitely don't post bait or bite bait guyz!
Cool but trannies as a whole still do, so don't act like "the tranny-complainers are worse than the trannies themselves right guys?". Congratulations you get a gold star for not trying to groom people and not fuelling tranny arguments, but as you acknowledge yourself other trannies DO and continue to be a problem.

>trannies mentioned
>thread derails
Every single time. Stop getting sucked into this.

>>42387222
She's not wrong

>>42383547
>>42383818
i like it because it's cute

>>42387096
I just don't want to see ugly "mares"

>>42384991
>>42388243
Sounds like you need to go to Twilight and receive your daily brain washing.

>>42388327
My brain is too powerful to be washed. Even if she could turn me into a pony.

>>42388454
But it's stinky!

>>42369753
>https://ponepaste.org/11219
Added to the story archive.
https://pone.tf

>>42388557
Stop posting pictures for ants.

>>42388568
Not my fault that's the size it downloads in.

>>42388582

>>42388585

Racist Twilight.

>>42388594
I love the cuddles. Makes me wanna be a little colt

>>42388582

>>42388578
Yes, it is. Manage your image collection properly.

>>42387016
>You can also just shut the fuck up if you don't want this talk to happen
so you're allowed to shit up threads but i'm not supposed to reply to you when you do so by your own metrics. makes perfect sense.
>yes I'm an unironic tranny uwu you're all also trannies because you want to be mares uwu
ah, here lies the crux of the issue. you want to be a mare, but don't want to be associated with ptfg by your friends in the 'cognitive dissonance pressure cooker for gay men who love aryanne' discord server. because it's not like hitler would've had you murdered for wanting to covet another man, no he only put trannies in camps. faggots are based and cool, something something rome, something something male concubines, blah blah blah. i've heard it all before, i used mlpol back in the day too.
>the tranny-complainers are worse than the trannies themselves right guys?
yeah, you literally are. most of the discussion in this thread is fairly civil yearning and idea workshopping until one of you shows up, then it turns into a nuclear autism meltdown from both sides.
>>42387096
i wish that this weren't the current state of the board, but it do be like that. anyways pretend the picture i attached is a petpony of the
>formerly human
variety ig
>>42388638
this
>>42388578
for the love of god, you ought to click "view" or "vs" to save every time you save a pony image from a booru

>>42388832
>so you're allowed to shit up threads but i'm not supposed to reply to you when you do so by your own metrics. makes perfect sense.
Yep, cause you're a tranny. Most people wouldn't even discuss this topic if your kind didn't show up every now and then to validate stereotypes.
This includes the discord by the way, which I've never been in but I've heard is apparently full of unironic trannies, and the link is aggressively pushed in the thread OP, so it's not only the posting itt which is an issue (though it obviously is).

>ah, here lies the crux of the issue. you want to be a mare, but don't want to be associated with ptfg by your friends in the 'cognitive dissonance pressure cooker for gay men who love aryanne' discord server. because it's not like hitler would've had you murdered for wanting to covet another man, no he only put trannies in camps. faggots are based and cool, something something rome, something something male concubines, blah blah blah. i've heard it all before, i used mlpol back in the day too.
Holy projection. I want to be a mare. A stallion is fine too even if not my first choice. Do you wanna call this "trans-species" maybe? Fine by me, though it sounds gay.
Under no circumstances I would want to be a w*man, fuck that.
Yes it's kinda sorta analogous to trannies except /ptfg/ has not fucked up actual real-world policies for anyone, and those who are pushing "you're all trannies uwu" are exactly the same as furfags who come in to push "bronies are just diet furries you guyz!". There's some surface level similarity in the concepts, and yes some people are into both (just as how there's furfags who like ponies too), but ultimately the two are quite separate and there's plenty of people who are only interested in one of the two.

Also, in your own post you acknowledge that you don't really like the trannies who go around "egg cracking", so I don't see why you're suddenly defending it.

>most of the discussion in this thread is fairly civil yearning and idea workshopping until one of you shows up, then it turns into a nuclear autism meltdown from both sides.
Precisely my point about you.

>>42388883
>Precisely my point about you.
>Yep, cause you're a tranny. Most people wouldn't even discuss this topic if your kind didn't show up every now and then
you literally just admitted that you are willfully shitting up threads dude
>Also, in your own post you acknowledge that you don't really like the trannies who go around "egg cracking", so I don't see why you're suddenly defending it.
I'm not defending it, I'm saying that there's a high amount of cognitive dissonance among people who want to be mares and also hate the guts of trannies. the laws of society dictate that you should at least /tolerate/ the presence of people who are different than you are, it is one of the most iconic oldfag sayings after all: love and tolerate. when people talk about /pol/, it's often with visceral hatred, and this is exactly why. we used to have a strong board culture, discussion about all kinds of topics were encouraged so long as ponies were involved. /pol/ erodes board cultures and turns them into more /pol/ slop, kind of like you say trannies do to board cultures but it's cool when your friends do it ig because it's 'based'. i just like ponies man, i want to talk about ponies.
>Under no circumstances I would want to be a w*man, fuck that.
Like it or not, a mare is definitionally a female horse. i'm not going to say anything about you for wanting to be a female horse, but you want to possess a horse vagina and have a body with higher estrogen levels than a stallion does. can you at least maybe see where the mental intersection between wanting to be a girl and wanting to be a mare lies, or are you going to continue to pretend that there is little connection between two conceptually similar ideas?
>pic related
is an image i made back in 2020, for some context about where i'm coming from. i used to hate myself so much. again, i am not saying that you are the same as i am, but i have obviously changed.

>>42389008
>I'm saying that there's a high amount of cognitive dissonance among people who want to be mares and also hate the guts of trannies.
Not really. Again it's very similar to the "diet furries" argument. It's not cognitive dissonance, it's just entirely different communities with different goals and interests.
And again just like with furries there's overlap, but the existence of the overlap does not mean that the two things are identical. The people who overlap like both, but all the other people who aren't in the overlap do not in fact like both. The horsefuckers who aren't furries still aren't furries no matter how much the "diet furry" crowd screeches about it, and the /ptfg/chads who aren't trannies still aren't trannies no matter how much groomers insist on it.

And trannies are quite simply off-topic in a thread about ponies. There is almost no circumstance under which you wanting to have a vagina or have hormone treatment is in any way related to people wanting to have hooves, simple as.

>Like it or not, a mare is definitionally a female horse
>you want to possess a horse vagina and have a body with higher estrogen levels than a stallion does
Unlike you I don't fantasize about what I want my hormone levels to be, because I don't fetishize that shit.
Since you seem to mostly be arguing in good faith, I'll deign this with a real answer. Mares are the default pony in the show, with the vast majority of both foreground and background characters being mares. Ponies are inherently cute and adorable, and mares moreso than stallions (maybe this is the only overlap with a tranny wanting to be "cute"). I personally think stallions have a pretty weird muzzle shape in the show; a lot of art draws stallions in a more appealing way, but show-wise stallions are a lot less visually appealing IMO.
But in particular, mares being the default character in the show means most of the content and focus is on mares. I'm pretty sure my preference would be for a mare mostly because I've consumed so much mare content, heck my introduction to /ptfg/ was Zephyr which is almost entirely about mares.

The mares in the show are also not all traditionally feminine as per human standards. All alicorns are mares, and both heads of state are mares. Of the six main characters, all mares, only one regularly wears makeup and female clothing; two of them would probably be considered chads if they were males in human society.

My point is that the only ones who think "I really want to be a pony with high estrogen levels!" are trannies. Heck, I'm not even a big rgrefag but objectively speaking, Equestria is a matriarchy, so it's not even clear pony mares have estrogen in the way you'd expect.
So, like I said - I acknowledge there's overlap between the communities, but its existence does not mean the non-overlapping parts are related.

>>42389126
Yeah, no. You sound like a tranny sorry.

Anyways, everypony
Can we go back to our regularly scheduled pony shit?
Anyways, standard question #6, what race of a pony would you like to be? Why? How do you imagine their social dynamics would work? (i.e pegasi live in the clouds, how do you think that would impact their relations with other races? How OP would an average unicorn be assuming they put in some effort to learn?)

>>42389189
I'd like to be a unicorn because my habit of staying inside all day and avoiding human contact would be a boon to my magic studies, though obviously if i were living in equestria i would get out more and try to make friends! you simply must stop reading all those dusty old books after all

>>42388638
How TF am I supposed to control what image size the website makes it?

>>42389189
>What race of a pony would you like to be?
I'd like to be an earth pony. Being a blue collar tradie I enjoy my work and take immense pride in it. The minute I saw apple jack and the farm plus the general work ethic of the earth ponies I knew that would be my tribe. Working hoof and hoof with earthponies would make me happy
>How do you imagine their social dynamics would work? (i.e pegasi live in the clouds, how do you think that would impact their relations with other races?
Given people treat me like trash irl for working a trade instead of going to college being some country bumpkin mid pony wouldn't phase me. Those pampered unicorns and lazy pegasi only exist by the working hooves of the earth ponies
How OP would an average unicorn be assuming they put in some effort to learn?
I know twilight is the exception and not the rule but twilight has some truly incomprehensible magical abilities. She cleared entire fields of trees with one spell, she managed to reverse a dam failure and fix the dam with her magic alone, and can make ponies fly. Her magic is terrifying and I'm glad most unicorns are too lazy to learn more than the basics

>>42389189
I'd like to be a pegasus because sleeping on cartoonish soft clouds has got to be ni-
>Those pampered unicorns and lazy pegasi
Fuck you how dare you say something that is so fucking true, I despise you you filthy mudpony (friendly).
Also you get really nice views, are fast and frankly unicorns appear to me less and less and the appeal of a nerdy life wore off with age and also I understood that while unicorn magic is versatile it can't do anything I'd realistically want to do that way all that much. Also sorry, but being an earth pony is just unappealing to me

>>42389317
You just download the fullsize image you fucking blithering retard. If the image is inherently small then sure but those images you posted aren't small, you downloaded a scaled down version like a fucking idiot, and you should not do that in the future.

>>42389442

>>42389342
Gotta admit, pegasus is a close second. I crave the freedom of the sky

I used to think I'd want to be a unicorn and study cool magic shit and be a nerd but now I'm just so tired. Give me fluffy wings that are good for hugging and let me glide over the green fields of Equestria to clear my mind, and I'll leave the magic to the boneheads who have more will to live left

>>42375676
A nice, (mostly) comfy story. Did you figure out how to ponepaste it yet?

>>42389541
No, I did not.

>>42389566
Can you be more specific about what the problem is?
Or ask this thread for help if there's a technical issue: >>42302368

https://ponepaste.org/11227

>>42389575
I just didn't know how to post, but I've figured it out.

>>42375676
Made a ponepaste.
https://ponepaste.org/11228

>>42389635
>https://ponepaste.org/11228
Well done. Added to the story archive.
https://pone.tf

>>42381894
Think he'll still want to turn back at the end of the month?

>>42357067
Back to this, because why not.

>>42389830
Oh yea, forgot about that, are you gonna take a stab at it

>>42389855
Nah, don't think I could do it justice.

>>42390102
>Do it justice
Honestly, the story has nothing going for it. Basically the story only outlined a premise. All you need to do is make something happen and it'd be an improvement

>>42382853
hot

>>42389508
Anonmare!

>>42391187
Femanon is a rare one to see

>>42390135
I've barely written like 2 green texts. And my writing style is barely anything like the original writer. So I'm not confident I could write a worthy sequel.

>>42390422
Chubby lover spotted.

>>42391377
I think what the other anon means, and I agree, is that the original writer's style is entirely mediocre and there's no particular reason to value it that much.
Even if you think what you'd write is also mediocre, it's probably still going to be fine. You can even rewrite the intro chapter in your own style and with your own details if you want to.

>>42391399
I want to, but I'm not feeling confident in myself to get it right.

>>42376777
Count your teeth starting at the middle and going towards the back: one big flathead, one small flathead, one kinda pointy, one with two points, another with two points, one molar, and then another molar. If there's another tooth after the second molar, that's a wisdom tooth. In some people it's covered by the mucous membrane.

>>42347233 (OP)
Would >rape her

>>42377067
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/374699/wait-what
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430597/the-experiment
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/389269/donuts-come-in-bulk
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/238219/the-other-pool
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/248254/holiday-tales-the-discord-way-hearts-and-hooves
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/217367/nonconsensual-spellcasting
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/200048/bucking-up-the-wrong-tree
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/155179/pinkies-super-secret-extra-special-im-sorry-cupcake
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/132050/fresh-start
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/59524/an-oddly-arousing-evening
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/492278/housemated

>>42347233 (OP)
Cute nurse pone

>>15307081
We dug out an old bit of story art that was lost for ten years from an /mlp/ image archive.

>>42392734
Neat, I wish I had the talent to do that kind of art. I barely have enough time to pump out shitty fan fics