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Dominant mares edition.

>What is this thread about?
This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.

>What exactly is welcome in this thread?
A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.

Other variations are welcome as well, so long as they are complementary to the domination/submission focus of the thread.

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Historical Note:
This thread was originally founded to support the “Submission is Mandatory” story by MrNameless. While the story has gone on hiatus, it’s content is referred to by a number of stories in this thread.

Submission is Mandatory by MrNameless (Recommended)
Nightmare Moon summons Anon to defeat the EoH. In return, she grants him ownership of the Mane 6.
https://poneb.in/ycY3zrvA

(Non-Canon SiM Expanded Universe Stories)
Octavia POV (Recommended) https://poneb.in/Y2AahdQp
Other Stories - https://poneb.in/3AFdqxvs

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Active stories ( updated in the last thread #138/138.1):
>The Culture of Rubber Ponies by ManicQuil
Ponies covered in latex.
https://ponepaste.org/7692
End of the last update: >>42386103
>The Carat and Stick by RapeApe !bwwXn5Gx.o
Cadance forces Rarity onto medifag Anon.
https://ponepaste.org/733 https://ponepaste.org/4327 https://ponepaste.org/9692
Non canon spin-off https://ponepaste.org/9701
End of the last update: >>42415736
>Oneshot with Twilight and Luna
>>42427087

Last updated (completed) in #135:
>Pink Haze by Glimbrain
Anon is bullied by three pink mares, but what goes around comes around.
https://ponepaste.org/10656, https://ponepaste.org/10809, https://ponepaste.org/10866, https://ponepaste.org/11063
Final update: >>42233797

Last updated in #133.1:
>Shadowbolt story
A shadowbolt operative going on an infiltration mission.
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>How to train a Scootaloo
Scootaloo receives a special kind of Wonderbolts training.
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>>42497425 (OP)
Last updated in threads #127 and #127.1:
>Untitled
The perfect Accessory to own.
Starts here: >>41365586

Last updated in #126:
>Harsh is The Night by ManicQuil
EQG story with a sub Rainbow Dash and her mistress Luna.
Starts here: >>40261868
Last update here: >>41332381

Last updated in #124:
>Thralls of Twilight by ManicQuil
The retired princesses show Twilight a new hidden side in their relationship.
Starts here: >>41137667
Last updated here: >>41137667

Last updated in #121:
>Short EQG christmas story with Dom Celestia and sub Dazzlings by ManicQuil
Starts here: >>40663996
Ends here: >>40670457

Last updated in #118:
>Untitled
Applebloom trying out a special outfit for Nightmare Night
Starts here: >>40211580
Last update here: >>40241892

>>42497427
Last updated in threads #127 and #127.1:
>Untitled
The perfect Accessory to own.
Starts here: >>41365586

Last updated in #126:
>Harsh is The Night by ManicQuil
EQG story with a sub Rainbow Dash and her mistress Luna.
Starts here: >>40261868
Last update here: >>41332381

Last updated in #124:
>Thralls of Twilight by ManicQuil
The retired princesses show Twilight a new hidden side in their relationship.
Starts here: >>41137667
Last updated here: >>41137667

Last updated in #121:
>Short EQG christmas story with Dom Celestia and sub Dazzlings by ManicQuil
Starts here: >>40663996
Ends here: >>40670457

Last updated in #118:
>Untitled
Applebloom trying out a special outfit for Nightmare Night
Starts here: >>40211580
Last update here: >>40241892

First for pulling her mane.

I imagine Sea Swirl being rejected by Sassaflash, runs into a stray changeling and instead of reporting the bug, she tells it to transform into Sassa and lets it do whatever it wishes to. The poor changeling is creeper out by how masochistic this marine biologist is, but an infinite source of love is worth it.

>>42497425 (OP)
excellent OP image, love it

>>42497440
Who drew that ?

>>42497495
>Changelings putting up with toxic relationships for sustenance.
Im surprised this isnt a common theme.

>>42497425 (OP)
Spike gets out cucked i thought i would never see the day.

>>42497425 (OP)
excellent

Dominate Ponies.

>>42497831
Found it https://derpibooru.org/images/3264133

>>42499280
Leather looks good on her.

Does anyone know why Megalomania stopped updating ? Was Pentapony getting bored with it ?
https://ponepaste.org/4098

>>42499368
Probably the same reason 98% of all greens getting abandoned.

>>42500530
very nice

Any spicy stories you guys have been reading lately ?

>>42500884
https://derpibooru.org/images/722039

>>42500884
Storm King's mount
https://derpibooru.org/images/2283460

How long will it take this time for RapeApe to notice that the thread is back ?

>>42503915
Probably until the new update is ready to be posted.

Harshwhinny's colors does not look good for anything but a self-absorbed mare.

>>42503231
I would mount that too.

>>42501693
So cute! Fillydom is really hot.

Button braids should be used more as a degrading element.

>>42508056
Speaking of that mane style, what do you guys think of it being used as part of a mask or suit https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39251262/ ?
Personally its making me wonder how well hair could be used as a locking point for a more creative entrapment.

>>42509944
She should make Hashwhinny undress her a lot more often.

>>42509730
Maybe he'll post something this weekend.

Bump

>>42508056
Wow...

>>42513300
Which one works better as the rein holder ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/220917

>>42497440
Do you think Rarity is picky about her future partners because she wants bring in her sister as part of the package ?

>>42508056
unf

>>42513300
Anybody got more art of bound horses in horse settings ?

Does that anon who I talked a lot with about a gimp rarity scenario still lurk here ?

Oh, we back? Uh... I might be able to get it out tomorrow. Depends on if I have the discipline or not; it's done except for padding out the lewd scene.

>>42516787
>except for padding out the lewd scene
I wouldnt mind waiting a bit more for that.

>>42516787
>>42516797
Does it come with some "mouth only" undressing ?
>>42510024

Whip rarity, gently stroke and strangle rarity, modify raritys body against her will, expose rarity, blackmail rarity, keep rarity chaste and orgasm free, edge and denial rarity, brainwash rarity, force rarity to make fetish clothes, turn rarity into an analslut

A new student shows up at Cadance's class.

>>42517045
Shadowbolts recruited her with the promise of making Dash hers in the future.

>>42517619
Condition her to only get off on the most extreme, depraved kind of stuff.
>modify raritys body against her will
Make her body match what she thinks of herself after the whole training https://twibooru.org/3564929

>>42519700
Simultaneously or afterwards?

Actually, now that I think of it, show her a picture of her now, and follow up with incremental steps of what will happen to her next. Since at this time, she is already wearing an arousalsensing gem as part of a clitpiercing, we will quickly know what she actually gets off to

>>42520424
>show her a picture of her now, and follow up with incremental steps of what will happen to her next
Make her always see her present self in a mirror during the act.

>arousalsensing gem as part of a clitpiercing
Do you think it should somehow punish her anytime she tries to hold back her pleasure ?
Like not necessarily with an unbearable effect, but still with something that definitely cant be ignored.

Can someone take over bumping until tomorrow ?

>>42516800
Not this time. It'll happen again sooner or later.
>>42517619
This is good advice.
>>42519700
I DO like fitting degradation and the like in, but I don't think we want to ruin her beauty.

>Rarity proudly and eagerly stepped into Lovelace’s shop.
>After ensuring nopony was looking, of course.
“Good afternoon- oh my! Are you okay?”
>Lovelace smiled at her, despite being covered in small burns.
“Your tail is smoking! We need to get you medical attention immediately!”
>”It’s totally fine, Rarity! Anon already saw most of these, and he says I’ll be right as rain. He also says that I really need to, like, slow things down? But I don’t have time for that if I’m going to keep up with you!”
“I don’t want you getting yourself hurt! Whatever you’re doing, you’ll have to cease immediately, at the VERY least until you recover!”
>”Don’t worry, nothing bad is going to happen.”
>Her tail burst into flame.
“Water! I’ll get water!”
>”NO! Not water, that’s a SUPER bad idea!”
>She began to wrap herself in some kind of heavy towel, smothering the flame.
>”Okay, so, maybe that was a bit too much…”
“What are you DOING to yourself?”
>”Pushing my limits and rethinking EVERYTHING! I want to be able to offer Rarity quality designs!”
“You’re going to get yourself seriously hurt, or worse!”
>”It’s fiiiine.”
>There was a brilliant and sudden burst of light behind her.
“Did- did lightning just come out of your BUTT?”
>”No, it came out of my pussy. Okay. Maybe I should stop for a while.”
>She ducked behind the counter, leaving Rarity to guess at what was happening.
>There was the rather conspicuous sound of power tools running while she was out of sight.
>When she surfaced, she had a brilliant grin on her face.
>”It’s been a great week, Rarity. An AMAZING week. There’s still a LOT of work to do, but I have a prototype!”
“A prototype of what? Though I do fear to ask!”
>”Of a toy you can use to tease Coco!”
>She produced a red box wrapped up in a bow.
>”Built into her belt, no less!”
“I’m not putting that on her! It CANNOT be safe!”
>”It is! IF you follow the instructions.”
>She produced a scroll and unrolled it.
>It rolled right out the door and into the street.
>”Anon helped me.”
“Be that as it may, I do not wish to cause her any harm! You’ll have to at least demonstrate how it works first. Come, help me put it in.”
>”Nice try, but I wouldn’t unlock you even if I had the key.”
>Rarity pouted.
>”There’s SOOO MUCH room for improvement, and I’m totes going to want to make changes to Coco’s belt eventually. You might notice it’s put together different from yours; I want to be able to take it apart so I can make changes. But she won’t be able to get at the screws while it’s locked, so it should be fine.”
>Rarity was carefully and dutifully reading the scroll.

>>42523475
>”Most of it’s like, legal stuff? About how we’re not responsible if you do something stupid.”
“I can see that. Electricity? You’re going to zap her, ahem, nethers?”
>”It feels SUPER good. But also SUPER weird. It’s like… it feels kinda tingly.”
“Does it feel like making love?”
>”No.”
“Does it feel like touching yourself?”
>”No.”
“Is it a rubbing or penetrating feeling?”
>”Neither. It’s its own thing. And I can almost HEAR you winking! We NEED to get you laid before you go crazy!”
“It’s a tad late for that, dear. Regardless, I must ask if this will… push Coco over the edge.”
>”It’s SUPER unlikely. See, there’s this… little problem.”
>Uh-oh.
>With the tail fires and safety disclaimer, this was bound to be serious!
>”It gets kinda boring after a while.”
“Oh. That IS serious!”
>”It doesn’t change up AT ALL, except that it gets weaker over time? So, like, you kinda get used to it after a bit.”
>That had to be resolved before it could be brought to market.
>”I’m sure I can make it better, but it’s getting REALLY confusing. Do you know much about computers?”
“I know that master curses at his periodically, but doesn’t seem to be able to live without it.”
>”I SHOULD be able to set that thing up so that it changes the shocking up all the time, and randomly turns itself off and on. Change up the intensity and frequency so you don’t get used to it, make sure you never know when it’s coming- it sounds REALLY fun! But it’s WAY beyond me. I, like, don’t have any idea how that stuff works, I just know it can be done. This is probably as good as I can do for a while.”
>Perhaps Twilight could help…
>She was nearly done with the latex project.
>Ah, but she’d need a lot more work before she’d be willing to participate in such a thing.
“That sounds like it could get expensive pretty quickly.”
>”Maybe? Most computer stuff is REALLY small so it’s easy to get here.”
“Hm. How does this thing work?”
>”It’s just an electric crystal attached to some insulated wire that leads to your fun bits. Oh! And something called an inverter? ‘Cause, like, otherwise you'd fill up with electricity? I had to buy that, but thankfully they’re pretty small too. I'm not super sure what the fancy wiring would cost, but hopefully not that much.”
>Hmm…
“Well, it’s clear that there remains a GREAT DEAL of room for improvement, but I must say! This is a rather enticing idea. Lock her up, and zap her until she’s too horny to think. Oooh… I wonder what master and I would do…”
>”You’re trying to masturbate.”
“Don’t be preposterous, I’m-”
>Rarity looked between her legs.
>Her vaginal shield was no longer dyed its luxurious blue.
>It had been worn down and polished into plain steel.
“I- ahem.”
>”I’m going to go to that human and DEMAND he fuck you! This is cruel!”

>>42523477
“I do appreciate the sentiment, dear. But I’m not sure he has the energy.”
>”What energy? You’d get off in 10 seconds flat!”
>Rarity seriously doubted it would take that long.
>”What could he possibly be dealing with?”
“I wish I knew… he’s clearly burdened by something serious, but he just won’t open up about it. And lately he’s been coming home at absurd hours, always well after midnight.”
>”Do you think he’s cheating?”
>The thought had not crossed Rarity’s mind.
>She seriously and critically analyzed the evidence.
>No sexual desire…
>Comes home at weird hours…
>Extremely secretive…
>Emotionally distant…
“No, it’s something else. Something is troubling him. I do so wish he’d share his burden…”
>”You need to talk to him.”
“I-”
>”No, listen for a bit.”
>She RARELY had such a serious tone!
>”If you’re right, he’s in a lot of pain.”
“Well, I do believe his hoof- err, foot has been bothering him since the injury.”
>”Injury? Wait, that doesn’t matter. You know that’s not what I mean.”
“It’s not really my place to pry… everypony has secrets.”
>”It’s EXACTLY your place to pry! You’re supposed to be the pony he can ALWAYS trust, ALWAYS count on!”
>She had a point.
>And still…
>It felt wrong.
>What right did she have to demand answers from her master?
>”You want to be a good sub. I get that. But it doesn’t matter what your role is, you’re supposed to take care of your partner when they need help!”
…
>She couldn't force him to speak.
>It would simply feel wrong!
>But perhaps there was some other solution…
“I- I’ll speak with him when he gets home tonight. Or more likely tomorrow morning.”
>”Great!”
>She seemingly had missed the hesitance in Rarity’s voice.
>And Rarity was happy to have the subject dropped.
“Do you have the display models ready, by chance?”
>”One! Why?”
“Well, I’m just now realising that it might be difficult to explain to Coco why her bits are being zapped. I’m rather hoping I can convince her it was an honest mistake of some sort.”
>”That’s no fun. I SUPER wanna put her in her place and have her begging for my toys.”
“Be that as it may, I have to convince her not to run away.”
>Did she?
>Coco had nowhere to go.
>And Cadence might be able to-
>Rarity shook her head.
“I’d rather traumatise her as little as possible. Perhaps if I pretend there was some kind of mix-up, and-”
>”Blame me.”
“Pardon?”
>”If there was a mix-up, who made the mistake? She’ll DEFINITELY see it was made for her since it fits all her measurements and has the right colours, right?”
“Well, yes…”
>”You can’t pretend you gave her the wrong one. The mix-up would be that it had the wrong features. Who put them there? You’re blaming me.”
>It had been a long time since Rarity last blushed for non-erotic reasons.

>>42523480
“You do seem to have a point. I shall have to find another approach.”
>”Blame me.”
“Yes, yes. I see the issue. I’ll think of something else.”
>”I’m telling you to blame me.”
>Had she zapped her brain too hard?
>”If it’s my fault, you’ve got an excuse for not stopping it, and for not unlocking her.”
“True, but how am I meant to persuade her to work with you?”
>”She already doesn’t want to talk to me.”
“And I think this would exacerbate the issue!”
>”You think too much.”
>It certainly would simplify things.
>And she DID have permission…
>”Just tell her you’re selling my stuff and that’s that. You’re the boss.”
>She had made Coco partner…
>”Besides, she’s too meek to fight you.”
>She might flee…
>”Just grow a pair and do it!”
“A pair of what?”
>”I don’t know, it’s just an expression I heard once.”
“I see… Very well, it is decided! I might have to retaliate against you on Coco’s behalf lest I be seen as apathetic- she MUST have a friend during these trying times, after all! But we shall find a way to make it work. Thank you, Lovelace. How do I activate this?”
>”Somepony didn’t finish reading the scroll.”
“Oh, right.”
>The text was rather dry, but simple enough.
>Before long, Rarity was on her way to the boutique.
>She was accosted by Applejack as she approached the boutique.
>”Come with me.”
“Applejack! I didn’t see you approaching.”
>”I can help you.”
“With what?”
>”I can protect you from him!”
>Oh dear.
>”Why are you always wearing dresses these days? You normally only do that on special occasions.”
“Well, I, um, it’s marketing!”
>”You’re hiding something under there, aren’t you?”
>Rarity froze up.
>”Is it bruises? Are y’all being hurt?”
“Applejack! I assure you, I am unharmed!”
>”Why are you torturing Coco?”
“Whatever do you mean?”
>”Y’all know I’ve been watching. I ain’t exactly sneaky. Coco hates what you’re doing to her, and you know it! That ain’t the Rarity I know.”
“I- well…”
>Rarity averted her gaze.
>”I can help you, Rarity. I can protect you from him. Me and the girls, well, you know what we’re capable of. And even if you think that ain’t enough, I can get plenty more muscle.”
“I don’t need saving!”
>”I don’t believe you.”
>It wasn’t an accusation.
>It wasn’t a condemnation either.
>It was a simple statement of fact.
>”That human did something to you. I don’t know what, and I don’t know why you won’t let us help, but he did something.”
“Applejack, I GREATLY appreciate the concern, but master has done me no wrong.”
>”What did you just call him?”
>Her blood was running cold.
>Had she said it?
“The doctor.”
>”Did he use those potions of his to brainwash you or something?”
“Perish the thought!”
>”Is he extorting you?”
“No!”
>”Blackmailing?”

>>42523483
“You do seem to have a point. I shall have to find another approach.”
>”Blame me.”
“Yes, yes. I see the issue. I’ll think of something else.”
>”I’m telling you to blame me.”
>Had she zapped her brain too hard?
>”If it’s my fault, you’ve got an excuse for not stopping it, and for not unlocking her.”
“True, but how am I meant to persuade her to work with you?”
>”She already doesn’t want to talk to me.”
“And I think this would exacerbate the issue!”
>”You think too much.”
>It certainly would simplify things.
>And she DID have permission…
>”Just tell her you’re selling my stuff and that’s that. You’re the boss.”
>She had made Coco partner…
>”Besides, she’s too meek to fight you.”
>She might flee…
>”Just grow a pair and do it!”
“A pair of what?”
>”I don’t know, it’s just an expression I heard once.”
“I see… Very well, it is decided! I might have to retaliate against you on Coco’s behalf lest I be seen as apathetic- she MUST have a friend during these trying times, after all! But we shall find a way to make it work. Thank you, Lovelace. How do I activate this?”
>”Somepony didn’t finish reading the scroll.”
“Oh, right.”
>The text was rather dry, but simple enough.
>Before long, Rarity was on her way to the boutique.
>She was accosted by Applejack as she approached the boutique.
>”Come with me.”
“Applejack! I didn’t see you approaching.”
>”I can help you.”
“With what?”
>”I can protect you from him!”
>Oh dear.
>”Why are you always wearing dresses these days? You normally only do that on special occasions.”
“Well, I, um, it’s marketing!”
>”You’re hiding something under there, aren’t you?”
>Rarity froze up.
>”Is it bruises? Are y’all being hurt?”
“Applejack! I assure you, I am unharmed!”
>”Why are you torturing Coco?”
“Whatever do you mean?”
>”Y’all know I’ve been watching. I ain’t exactly sneaky. Coco hates what you’re doing to her, and you know it! That ain’t the Rarity I know.”
“I- well…”
>Rarity averted her gaze.
>”I can help you, Rarity. I can protect you from him. Me and the girls, well, you know what we’re capable of. And even if you think that ain’t enough, I can get plenty more muscle.”
“I don’t need saving!”
>”I don’t believe you.”
>It wasn’t an accusation.
>It wasn’t a condemnation either.
>It was a simple statement of fact.
>”That human did something to you. I don’t know what, and I don’t know why you won’t let us help, but he did something.”
“Applejack, I GREATLY appreciate the concern, but master has done me no wrong.”
>”What did you just call him?”
>Her blood was running cold.
>Had she said it?
“The doctor.”
>”Did he use those potions of his to brainwash you or something?”
“Perish the thought!”
>”Is he extorting you?”
“No!”
>”Blackmailing?”

>>42523484
“I’m fine, Applejack. And I truly do appreciate your concern! But you’ve no need to worry about me. I am unharmed, in no danger, and here of my own volition.”
>”Can’t help but notice you didn’t deny that one.”
>Applejack stared intently at Rarity’s face.
>She couldn’t help but feel like Applejack was looking straight through her.
>Behind this facade of propriety.
>Down to the horny slut she truly was.
>”Rarity. I don’t care what it is you did. I don’t care what dirt he’s got on you. Hay, I don’t care if you killed a pony! Well, okay, yes I would care. I'd care a lot! But I’d STILL protect you from him! Whatever’s going on, just tell me. I promise you, once I'm done he won’t ever be able to hurt you again.”
>Rarity offered her a genuine, warm smile.
>The words were touching.
>Problematic, but touching.
>She pulled Applejack in for a hug.
“Thank you, Applejack. That means a great deal to me.”
>A wicked grin grew on her face, just out of Applejack's view
“But don’t worry about me. I’m not the one who needs help right now.”
>She was the helper!
>Some day, she'd be training Applejack to be a proper fucktoy as well.
>Applejack pulled away, a look of fierce determination on her face.
>”Understood.”
>Rarity stood still for a while, dumbfounded.
>What was understood?
>Had Applejack actually decided to just leave her be?
“No, that doesn’t seem right…”
>She had a hunch that she’d hear more of this.
>She couldn’t help but imagine Applejack having her butt pounded as she watched her friend walk away.
“Hnng. I-”
>Some crystal ponies gave her a dirty look as they walked past.
“I’m sorry. Have I offended?”
>”Pervert.”
“What? I’m-”
>She was trying to masturbate again.
“Oh. OH! This isn’t what it looks like. I’m just itchy- I- I’ll show myself out! A thousand pardons!”
>A mortified Rarity quickly ran away, desperate to get away from her shame.
>She arrived at the boutique, cheeks flush, breathing rapid and shallow.
>”Rarity? Oh my goodness, are you alright?”
>Coco was a sweet pony.
>Always looking out for the wellbeing of others.
“I am well, thank you for asking.”
>”You seem, um…”
“Just some light jogging.”
>”In a dress?”
>Rarity steeled herself.
>She knew what she had to do.
>It would be a massive sacrifice, but there was no other way.
>Rarity swallowed her pride and locked eyes with Coco.
“Truth be told, I’m getting a tad pudgy.”
>”My lips are sealed.”
“I can’t help but notice you’re not wearing the outfit I made you.”
>”Y-yea-umm, err, that is to say…”
>She wasn’t nude.
>Instead, she was wearing a fairly simple gown.
>It could barely be called attire at all.
>The stitching was sloppy, the cut was uneven, it was hanging poorly, and it was completely devoid of meaningful accents.
>The rich red DID suit her eyes, at least.
“Coco, dear, you can’t be wearing THAT in here. Disrobe immediately.”
>”Uh…”

>>42523488
“And put on the outfit I’d made for you! It’s PERFECT for driving sales! Celestia knows we could use a few. Cadence won't be keeping us occupied forever.”
>”I’d rather not.”
>She spoke strangely firmly.
“Nonsense, dear. What you’re currently wearing is a travesty! It looks like you put it together in fifteen minutes to- hm…”
>Rarity stepped closer, eyeing the garment closely.
>The creases told her it had been folded at some point.
>Coco had made it last night before going to bed.
>And she had made it in a hurry.
“Even if you were in a rush, this… I’ll be generous and call it stitching, it’s extremely poor by your standards. I’d have expected such uneven stitching from a pony who’d never used a sewing machine before. Come now, Coco dear, you’re better than this!”
>She moved to pull the “dress” off of Coco, but her hoof was deflected by Coco’s own.
“Come now, Coco. I cannot have you wearing THIS in the boutique! You must at the very least strip down!”
>”I’d… I’d like to wear this if it’s okay.”
…
“What are you hiding under there?”
>Coco flinched.
>That was all the proof Rarity needed.
“Coco? What happened last night?”
>”I’d rather not talk about it…”
“Did Cadence escort you home?”
…
>”No.”
>That SLUT!
“Coco? I need you to trust me. Please. Tell me what happened.”
>Coco trembled.
>She then choked down a sob.
“Did you get attacked again?”
>She nodded slowly.
“Did- and I AM sorry for asking this, but did you get raped?”
>She slowly shook her head.
>Rarity released a breath she didn’t know she’d been holding.
“They did try though, didn’t they?”
>Coco definitely had other outfits.
>It would be strange for her to throw this together so quickly.
>However…
>She generally only wore attire on her front half.
>She was trying to hide her butt.
>Unacceptable!
“You must have been quite distraught when you got home last night. Being so weary and so shaken, I can understand how you might have some troubles stitching. Still, I cannot abide by this outfit. We shall have to replace it with something else.”
>”I… I think you’d rather have me wearing this.”
“Whatever it is you’re hiding, I have the solution in this parcel.”
>Coco was far from being calm or collected.
>But she had enough presence of mind to look at the package warily.
>”What is it anyway?”
“Well, I was hoping to surprise you, but… you’ve had enough excitement for a while. It’s a garment made of metal.”
>Coco cocked her head.
“Wrong kind of cock.”
>Rarity muttered to herself.
>”Sorry, what was that?”

>>42523490
“Oh, nothing important. I grew rather concerned with the alarming frequency with which you were being assailed, and I was frightened you might be… well, to be crass, raped. It seems as though my fears were well founded… Well, as is USUALLY the case, the solution to societal ills is clothing. What if you were covered up by a garment that your assailants couldn’t remove? You’d be safe!”
>Coco’s eyes were sparkling with excitement.
>”I was thinking I’d have to move back to Manehattan!”
“Could you afford such a thing?”
>”No. But… but now I don’t have to! Oh, thank you Rarity!”
>She pulled Rarity in for a hug.
>And Rarity felt a pang of guilt.
>Coco had been assailed repeatedly because of her.
>She was terrified.
>Hurt.
>And desperate.
>And she was putting all her trust in Rarity to fix it.
>Was she really going to take advantage of her like that?
>”Is something wrong?”
“I’ve never been better, dear.”
>Coco would be turned into a writhing, horny mess.
>And Rarity was smiling.
>She knew she shouldn’t be.
>She knew this was wrong.
>But she was enjoying it far too much to care, and eager to proceed.
>She opened up the box and laid eyes on the best for the first time.
>It was actually more than she’d hoped for.
>Lovelace’s skills were developing marvelously!
>It was a deep, rich and deep amethyst purple, almost perfectly matching Rarity’s mane and tail, with pure white trim along the borders, finished to a mirror shine with a thin coat of some kind of lacquer.
>Rarity could see her own face on the surface, prompting her to wipe the drool from her chin and suppress her lecherous visage.
>An elegant fractal pattern had been etched into the device, providing much needed texture, and naturally drawing the eye in for a closer inspection than might have otherwise been elicited.
>Lovelace had rather cleverly etched certain parts more aggressively than others to render certain areas darker, lending the illusion of shadows to slightly exaggerate the wearer's curves.
>It was a rather broad number that resembled panties more than a belt, leaving a small window to frame the cutie mark but covering the buttocks in addition to the pussy, and wrapping around behind the tail, with a small hole through which the tail- and possibly a tail wrapper- could be fitted.
>The ass was rather conspicuously exposed, almost forcing any observers to look straight at it.
>The vaginal shield was broader than Rarity’s, leaving absolutely no doubt that the genitals were completely inaccessible.
>It was vaguely cup shaped, clearly having been designed to rub and tease the labia with its ribbed surface any time the wearer became aroused.
>A few silvery discs were strategically positioned on and around the shield, presumably to zap her senseless.
>Rarity couldn’t help but smirk as she stared down at the object.

>>42523492
“What do you think?”
>”It’s a bit… airier than I’d like.”
“That’s intended to be a comfort consideration. We don’t want you getting all sweaty during the day. Besides, we don’t want it obstructing other garments! Well, let’s get it on!”
>Rarity muttered to herself again.
“If only…”
>”Sorry, what was that?”
“Ah, I was just wondering if I had the measurements right. Only one way to find out!”
>Coco stared at the box hesitantly.
“You don’t want to get raped, do you?”
>”No… can I have some privacy?”
…
“Go hide behind the bolts of cloth while putting it on, if you must.”
>”I’ll just go upstairs.”
>Curses!
>Rarity trepidatiously followed Coco, hoping no stairs creaked as she went.
>She got lucky.
>Coco had removed her travesty of a dress, to reveal her backside was lightly bruised.
>And COVERED in writing.
>From several different hooves.
>Filthy whore, town bicycle, free use, grade D holes, and more were written on her in what was presumably indelible ink.
>The poor girl.
>Little wonder she was so furtive.
>Perhaps it was a mistake to go so slowly, Rarity thought to herself as she crept down the stairs.
>Maybe she should have just abducted and fucked her like Master had done.
>Maybe this was just extending the pain and delaying the fun.
“Are you almost done up there?”
>Coco sheepishly came downstairs, wearing the stockings, corset, and belt.
>The bridle was absent.
“Ah! You seem to have noticed they’re intended to be an ensemble.”
>”Kinda hard to miss…”
>The body writing was nicely hidden.
“How does it feel?”
>”Um… a bit tight. In a, err, a certain place. We might have to adjust it.”
>Perfect.
>”And I don’t see why they can’t just take it off.”
“There’s a lock, dear. Let me help you.”
>Rarity took a moment to admire her own work.
>The sheer thigh-highs delicately held up by garters subtly flashed thigh with every step, making Coco seem even more slender than she actually was.
>Her corset rather tantalizingly shrunk her midsection, exaggerating her buttocks ever so subtly.
>She was still wearing the flower in her mane and her sailor’s collar.
>Those would have to be slutted up eventually, but for now Rarity was satisfied that her neck was adorned at all.
>And the belt.
>It tied everything together perfectly.
>The metallic glint was unmistakable next to the matte fabric, and though deep, the purple was still inherently brighter than the black of the main outfit.
>One couldn’t help but eye her ass, yet the contrast wasn’t quite so great that the rest of her body faded into the background..
>Rarity could feel pride welling up inside of her.
>Aside from the occasional flash of thigh, Coco was completely covered behind the shoulder.
>And yet, Rarity had never seen a mare more exposed.
>Rarity trotted up to Coco, and fiddled with the back of the belt.

>>42523494
“Ah, yes. See? Well, no, I suppose you can’t see. Right here, above the tail, almost on your back. There’s a buckle you’re meant to do up, and it demands a key.”
>Rarity fiddled with the buckle with one hoof.
>She also fiddled with another mechanism, right near the clitoris.
>Rarity silently cursed herself for not actually examining the object earlier.
>The instructions had been so clear, but-
“Ah! There it is. The locking mechanism, I mean.”
>She slid a crystal into its socket, and produced the key to the belt.
>She locked the clasp on the back, ensuring Coco couldn’t remove it.
>And then, she locked the crystal in place.
>A bolt slid into place, sealing the crystal inside.
>And closing the circuit.
>Coco immediately yelped.
“Oh my! Are you harmed?”
>She was frantically and shamelessly grabbing at her own groin, fruitless pulling at the steel.
>”AH! AH! Take it off!”
>The belt held perfectly, not allowing even the tiniest glimpse of her nethers no matter how she struggled.
>”Something's wrong, take it OFF!”
>Rarity fumbled with the key for a bit, genuinely struggling as Coco squirmed about.
>Coco struggled with the vigor of a frightened rabbit, trying desperately to pull the belt off, contorting every which way, pulling with all her might. And jumping about
>It continued to hold tight, not even allowing the electrodes to break contact.
>Rarity pretended to drop the key, and surreptitiously substituted it for a different one.
>Coco jumped around excitedly, running in circles as though thinking she could somehow outrun the belt.
“Hold still! I can’t- I can’t get it off with you bucking around like that!”
>Coco fell on the floor, belly up, her eyes clenched shut and her whole body trembling.
>The bit down on her front leg just a bit too late to suppress a lurid moan.
>Rarity hesitated.
>It was clear that this thing was stimulating her far too much.
>That Lovelace had grossly underestimated how jaded her own nethers were, and perhaps misjudged how sensitive Coco was.
>That thing would get her off any second.
>The whole point was to get her hot and bothered.
>And yet…
>Rarity felt a terrible sense of excitement as her lust-addled brain processed the possibilities.
>Perhaps it would be best to give her a taste of such pleasures before denying them?
>That’s what master had done.
>And Rarity’s hunger had grown out of control, exactly as Coco’s needed to.
>Add to that the fact that, once she removed it, it would be nigh on impossible to get that belt back on her…
>Rarity knew she had gone too far.
>But she managed to rationalize that she ought to go even further.
>Coco’s legs began convulsing.
>Rarity stepped back, ensuring that the curtains were open.
>There were already a few ponies watching the display.
>Coco screamed again as her back arched, and fluids gushed out of her groin as she finally lost control and succumbed to her climax.

>>42523496
>Rarity took a moment to adjust her own modest dress as she stared down at Coco, feeling smug satisfaction at her humiliation.
>The front door opened, and Coco turned to look in a horrified panic.
>Rarity quickly positioned herself in the way, obstructing the view.
“Ah! I'm afraid we aren't quite open yet.”
>Coco was biting down on her lip, nearly drawing blood in an attempt to hold back a cry of pleasure.
“I'm afraid I must ask that you leave.”
>The stallion didn't go.
>They were trying their hardest to get a better look at Coco.
>Coco had managed to get up.
>But she hadn't regained enough control to walk.
>Her legs were shaking, her may in terrible disarray, and her tongue rolled out like a bitch in heat.
>The intruder was still there.
>Rarity could smell a sale.
“Come back, um, let's say next week if you want somepony fitted.”
>She began to physically push them out of the door, locking it the moment they were gone.
>Coco was trying to draw the curtains, but her legs were too shaky.
>Rarity silently cursed, wondering why the storefront even HAD curtains.
>A loud, lurid moan escaped Coco, and she lost her grip as she fell to her haunches.
>Her eyes rolled into the back of her head, and her breathing grew frantic.
>Rarity could see nothing, but she knew exactly what was happening.
>Coco's clit was doubtlessly winking, furiously grinding itself into the smooth yet ribbed metal that covered it.
>Every breath, every heartbeat would force more and more pleasure on her as she reflexively grinned against the steel she so desperately and fruitlessly sought to escape.
>Rarity drew the first curtain shut, taking just a bit longer than she needed to.
>Coco let out another cry of delight, her hips bucking violently on their own, her eyes painfully aware of the now sizable crowd that had assembled outside.
>Coco tried valiantly to hold on until the second curtain was drawn.
>Rarity took her sweet time.
>And Coco failed, ecstasy consuming her as she came for a second time, plainly in view of the masses.
>Rarity finally closed the curtain.
>She hastily scribbled “new products soon!” on a scrap of paper and slid it under the door jam for whoever chose to read it.
>”P- AH! OHHHH! Ah, PLEASE take it off!”
“The key doesn’t fit!”
>”WHAT?”
“I somehow have the wrong key! There must have been some kind of mixup!”
>”Ah! AH! AH! AH- HNNG!”
>Her fluids had totally saturated her groin and were rapidly staining her stockings as they continued to issue forth.
>Rarity could feel herself salivating as she watching, unable to banish visions of herself pleasuring Coco with her mouth, greedily drinking down every droplet.
>Coco made her way to the stairs on shaky, unstable legs.
>Rarity dropped down on the ground and desperately started trying to masturbate.
>Two hooves pulled frantically at her belt, desperately seeking to remove it as Coco had not so long ago.

>>42523498
>Manically and mindlessly pushing, struggling, and fighting to get exactly what Coco was trying to escape.
>They released carnal and animalistic moans at the same moment, both driven by desperation.
>Coco fumbled, her legs weakened by pleasure, her muscles spasming as yet another orgasm threatened to overtake her already exhausted and overstimulated body.
>She screamed with delight, her strength finally failing completely, and slipped back down to the ground level.
>Rarity very nearly lost what little control she had remaining, as a powerful impulse washed over her.
>It was nearly everything she could do to not march over to Coco and begin groping her, squeezing and caressing her ass, feeling her up…
>”GET OUT!”
>She was snapped from her reverie as Coco screamed out her command.
“But-”
>”IF YOU CAN’T TAKE IT OFF JUST GET OUT!”
“I cannot leave you until I’m certain you’re unharmed!”
>”JUST GO!”
>It was then that Rarity realized her folly.
>In a brief, fleeting moment of clarity, she knew she had set herself up for failure.
>She was trying her hardest to stay on Coco’s good side.
>In her desperation to make sure Coco had a friend to count on, she was failing to do her job.
>Sure, she could molest Coco while keeping her hooves clean.
>And she could humiliate her.
>And if she was lucky, she might get another chance to overstimulate her.
>But.
>”LEAVE!”
>She couldn’t control her.
>She couldn’t dominate her.
>Rarity had to make a choice.
>Was Coco her friend, or her slave?
>Was Rarity a trusted and valued companion, or a manipulative and duplicitous slut?
>She took a moment to think it over.
>And she was surprised to discover…
>She felt no shame at all with her conclusion.
“No.”
>”BUT- PLEASE!”
“No, I don’t think I shall. Truth be told, I have no clue what’s happening.”
>She felt no guilt as she lied.
“But I do know something.”
>She stood up and walked over to Coco, deliberately making her hips sway with every step.
>She stood before Coco, staring down at her luridly.
>She raised a single hoof.
>And stepped on Coco’s head, forcing her muzzle into the floor.
“You’re enjoying this, you pervert.”
>”No, I-”
>Rarity swatted the exposed part of her butt.
“Don’t lie to me. You came THREE times, you freak! And from the look of your face, you’re already progressing toward your fourth. You’re not just enjoying this, you’re LOVING it.”
>”No, I promise!”
“Prove it. Stop cumming.”
>”I- HNN!”
>Rarity walked away and seated herself at the sewing machine as Coco squirmed.
“You love being watched. I’ve heard about that, apparently it’s not so bizarre. But I had no clue it was so… intense! We had to close early because of you. If you had a TAD more dignity and propriety, this wouldn’t be a problem. But now, we’ll have to get it out of your system.”
>”Ah! Ah! Ooooh~ oh, please~ I couldn’t help it!”
“Come now, Coco.”
>She very nearly did.

>>42523499
“I know you can’t help it. That’s exactly the problem. Now hurry up and get off so I can stop staring.”
>”There’s- there’s something wrong with this thing!”
>Rarity scoffed.
“Are you trying to convince moi that this inert lump of metal is responsible? Is it THRUSTING? Is it GRINDING? Is it even VIBRATING? I examined it with my own eyes, Coco. There are no moving parts on that, and no incantation.”
>Coco was crawling over to her, staring up at Rarity’s long and slender legs.
“I’ve never met such a pervert… Multiple times, and spontaneously no less! And come to think of it, why is it that YOU of all ponies are constantly being groped? Well, now I find myself wondering how many of those ponies you led on. Are you truly that desperate?”
>Coco was starting to lose control again.
>Her eyes were unfocused, her breathing heavy and hot.
>She shot a single hoof to her crotch to claw at the shield.
>Rarity smirked when she saw Coco was trying to push it further in.
“Hm… yes, feel the futility, you dirty slut…”
>Coco was frantically bucking her hips against the air, driven both by a desperate need for stimulation and a futile drive to regain control.
>Every fiber in her body leaned into the pleasure, driving her with primal and animalistic desires.
>The humiliation and fear weren’t enough to bring her back, and she began to drown in her lust again.
>Rarity stared down at her with a mixture of envy and amazement as Coco’s eyes began to glaze over once more.
>Her entire head was consumed by her blushing.
>She bit down on her lip, tensed up…
>And held on for dear life.
>Rarity couldn’t help but admire the futile attempt
“Tell me. Is THIS why the Manehattan branch failed? Were you panting and moaning every time a customer walked in? I can’t have you tarnishing my reputation further! We’ll have to take some… precautions to ensure this doesn’t happen again.”
>Coco’s mouth was hanging open.
>She had begun drooling on the floor.
“It’s clear you’re such a pervert that you cannot be trusted to retain your composure around attractive articles. I should have known when I caught you SNIFFING that rag.”
>She’d promised Coco she wouldn’t bring it up.
>The oathbreaker felt almost giddy as she exerted her control.
“But… I’d rather not just throw you out. It’s not in my nature.”
>Coco’s control finally shattered as she cried out once more.
>Her screams were a lot quieter than they had been before, her convulsions much weaker.
>She was exhausted.
>The belt kept toying with her as she rode the rough and tiring waves of ecstacy.
>She lay on the ground helplessly.
>Panting.
>The belt didn’t relent.
>But she didn’t react.
>She was too tired.
“We’ll talk tomorrow. Try not to embarrass me any further before then.”
>Rarity got up with a huff and made for the front door.

>>42523501

>After a false start with her dramatic exit, she remembered to unlock it.
>The instant she was gone, she jumped with joy.
>That hadn’t gone AT ALL according to plan.
>And she might have just caused herself a great deal of trouble…
>But it was so much FUN!
>She could hardly believe how satisfying it was to sexually torment others.
>To force pleasure on the helpless, to humiliate and expose.
>How master had so much restraint was completely beyond her.
>She needed MORE!
>More humiliation, more molestation!
>Her thoughts were almost totally consumed by how and when she’d get to do it again.
>When the thrill began to fade and her heartbeat began to settle down, she set to planning out her next move.
>Step one, of course, was making provisions in case Coco tried to leave.
>Rarity made her way to the palace, looking to call in a huge favor.
>If Coco didn’t flee the empire, great.
>But if she DID?
>Rarity knew of an EXCELLENT basement where nopony would find her.

I’m really bad at writing lewd scenes. Hopefully the end result was good, but the process is slow and agonizing. I think I need to rethink my approach, but practice is also a good idea.

Looks like Lovelace screwed up and Rarity was too horny to know when to stop. Now we have to deal with it. Any suggestions on what to do with this? I plan on having Rarity leverage this to “hesitantly and begrudgingly” give Coco periodic stress relief, but I’m having almost as much trouble thinking straight as Rarity right now, so maybe it’s retarded.

>>42523483
>>42523484
You posted the same part twice.

>>42523505
>Any suggestions on what to do with this?
I think Rarity is overthinking on the need for a forceful approach. Coco just got humiliated in front of a huge crowd, word will spread around, she'll probably be so embarassed and afraid of getting even more groped because of this new reputation that she will want to keep using the hated belt and its replacement.

>provisions in case Coco tried to leave.
>Rarity made her way to the palace, looking to call in a huge favor.

Even if she tries skipping town, I think Cadence should still pretend to be Coco's friend in this to convince her otherwise.

>Rarity leverage this to “hesitantly and begrudgingly” give Coco periodic stress relief
I really dont see her believing that her body just became slutty all of the sudden, but maybe thats not important ? She will blame Lovelace first for whatever she did with that belt and still desperately try to make Rarity forgive her and not see her like a slut.

>>42523475
Man I am so out of the loop on this green. Haven't been able to post in probably the last 6 months so I need to do some catching up i guess

>>42523505
Yeeeeesssss an update!

>>42523498
I love that you added that ribbed metal idea to this.

>>42523505
>Hopefully the end result was good
It was ! This one had a lot of nice padding to it, and felt way less rushed than the Harshwhinny one. Also the overstimulation approach was a nice change of pace.

>Rarity made her way to the palace, looking to call in a huge favor.
Really curious to know what Cadance will think of the e-stim idea. Maybe it could warrant a scene with her visiting Lovelace to ask about it. But not before we get one with Coco trying to confront her in this embarassing state of hers.

>>42524382
>6 months
You did miss a lot of good development.

>>42523505
>ensuring nopony was looking
Heh. She won't sell anything at this rate from her lewd lineup if she refuses to be associated with it.
>came out of my pussy
WTF.
>IF you follow the instructions
She can't even follow orders. Like wear her damn collar.
>but I wouldn’t unlock you
Rarity does not need to be kept on the edge anyway.
>I can almost HEAR you winking
See? No need for her to be kept on the edge any more than she is.
>it sounds REALLY fun
From the way she talks, I assume she is wearing one prototype as they speak.
>no longer dyed its luxurious blue
Rares marecum is potent stuff.
>No, it’s something else.
Sounds like only the denial is speaking from her.
>What right did she have
I remember something about this in the contract they signed. I might be wrong.
>convince her it was an honest mistake of some sort
I doubt that will work. A wire going into her clit/pussy is pretty obviously not a mistake.
>You’re blaming me.
I don't understand how that will work. "Hey Coco, Lovelace accidentally made the perfect thing for you based on your measurements, would you like to try it on?"
>she’s too meek to fight you
But Cadance is not.
>I can help you.
I doubt she is willing to make her cum, but prove me wrong.
>That human did something to you.
Or refuse doing.
>master
Might be a costly slipup.
>of my own volition
More like violation.
>just tell me
Even if Rarity opens up to her and make AJ promise not to tell anypony, she won't be able to keep it between them. BTW wasn't the BJ punishment publicly known?
>trying to masturbate again
Doing it in public? She will have some kind of mental breakdown sooner than later at this rate. Anon isn't spending any time with her at all, they barely see each other besides sleeping in the same bed. So he has little opportunity to spot the signs.
>Uh…
There is something under it isn't it?
>That SLUT!
Heh.
>I have the solution in this parcel.
If the solution is making her want to get raped.
>You’d be safe!
Oh so this is how she will sell the idea. Clever.
>take advantage of her like that?
She could like decide not to switch it on. If she does switch it on, there will be two mares stinking up the boutique, yearning for a release.
>followed Coco
I don't see why she need to logically speaking. If we assume Coco tells the truth.
>her backside was
She was definitely raped. Or maybe Cadance did this to decieve Rarity?
>tied everything together perfectly
Unf. We need a drawfag to draw this.
>And closing the circuit
Immediately going from 0 to 100. Coco will have trust issues.
>get her off any second
And is that an issue? It can get her off a few times until she gets used to it.
>ensuring that the curtains were open
Mean. She can't wear a collar in public, but show the whole world other ponies forcibly getting off.
>stallion didn't go
What's up with them? They see a mare and immediately try to fuck it?
>Rarity took her sweet time
I'm surprised she isn't trying to rub herself already.

Cont.

>>42525309
>Rarity dropped down
Ah, now I know why she held out. Coco was in eyesight. Not like she can pay attention to what Rarity is doing.
>JUST GET OUT
Oh yes. Coco wants romance, not physical intimacy.
>she could molest Coco
Which she just did.
>could humiliate he
Another already checked item on the list, with multiple markings.
>You’re enjoying this, you pervert
Projecting her own desires onto her, which she fails to take the smallest step herself.
>Are you truly that desperate?
Well, she is. But not for this.
>Rarity couldn’t help but
Be exactly what she wants from her master.
>hadn’t gone AT ALL according to plan
How exactly she thought this will go? Even if it does not get Coco off, this would have not gone down that much different.
>EXCELLENT basement
Why do I have the feeling that Rarity is the one going to spend a few day in it?

>I’m really bad at writing lewd scenes
Not really. Plus this was not lewd (as in the sene of clop), more like proper SiM torture/dominance. Maybe not proper, because Coco will need to decide to accept her role, not just forced to accept. She has a way out, just like Rarity has a way out.

Thanks for the update.

>>42523492
>>42523494
Im surprised she didnt try showing her own belt to get Coco more on board with the idea.

>>42523505
>plan on having Rarity leverage this to “hesitantly and begrudgingly” give Coco periodic stress relief
You mean with some kind of remote? Cause if so, maybe her magic could be useful again for this. Have Lovelace put a hidden switch hidden inside the metal where only magic can seep through.

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>>42523525
Oops. My bad.
>>42523645
Oh, I wasn't saying that Coco believed it was her own reaction. That's just a pretext Rarity intends to use. That said, your approach is sensible.
>>42524723
Sorry it took so long. I really need to find out how to stop being lazy.
>>42524902
>Coco confronting Lovelace
Would you believe I didn't plan on that? I thought Coco would be too meek and humiliated to try. But you do have a point, Lovelace gloating about it could be a lot of fun.

>>42525314
>How did she think it would go?
Please remember, Rarity is meant to be too horny to think. The fact that the "plan" is full of holes is entirely intended.
>>42525361
She did in an earlier draft, but I cut it since Rarity's supposed to be a massive hypocrite with all this. She's making a habit of forcing Coco to do that which she herself refuses.
>>42525671
Could work. I'm planning on making Rarity the only way Coco can get off in the end. Having a variety of methods would be a good thing.

>>42523505
Well Lovelace really screw it on the intensity. Good for us and Rarity.

Now this is feeding her sadist side, seeking to humillate Coco and keep her under her hoof.

Really a good dose of SIM, but what is gonna be Coco reaction, she would love it but deny it because she fear those feelings?

About Rarity asking Candance help, that would be on the worst case scenario. But it would thrown her on a sooner path to be break.

>>42526502
>Coco would be too meek and humiliated to try
I think at this point she would at least want to confront the belt maker without Rarity knowing about it, seeing as she doesnt want to hear anymore complaints about the gift she gave to Coco. Of course that wouldnt help if Lovelace decided to tell on her, but thats another fun thing you could add the dynamic.

>>42526506
>making Rarity the only way Coco can get off in the end
Do those crystals have any special property when interacted with magic ? Like for example sending out a specific signal when interacted with a specific magical signature ? That could in turn toggle on a reward mode in the belt circuitry.
Or in a more mechanical case, a covered lock with really tiny pins that only Rarity would know the combination of. But that second case would have been something already invented by unicorns at this point.

>>42523505
Is Rarity going to catch her during one of her lessons with Harshwhinny ?

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Do we have any good griffondom stories ?

>>42525314
>How exactly she thought this will go? Even if it does not get Coco off, this would have not gone down that much different.

Whatever would be considered convenient to her internal narrative, probably.

She wants to make coco horny enough to up her sex drive enough to breach her defenses. Doesn't want to get called out on it. Maybe she was imagining like this ideal fantasy situation where the stimulation is sub-notice or like a little buzz but coco fails to actually identify what's happening, but the buzz was still significant enough to infest her groin with hunger. Wouldn't it be funny if the same thing had been done to rarity at some point or something ha ha ha???

What kind of stupid group of internet fools could possibly buy into something like that? Wouldn't it be more like this, actually, with instant panic followed by eventual physical collapse?

Such is writing. Rarity has become a mirror of you, and you look at her mistakes and are confused.

>>42518412
Hot

>>42529022
How do you think Cadence will take the news ?
Cause this really doesnt seem to do any favours on her end, specially since she has been trying to lead Coco on with this crush on her boss.

In case that Zecora anon shows up, how's that second commission idea coming along ?

>>42530923
I on the other hoof would train my pony to associate rump slaps and spankings as receiving a reward.

>>42526534
I don't intend to lock Coco in that basement. I've changed my mind before, but I feel like we've already seen that. The point of that whole chapter was more or less to show that Rarity is behaving just like her master.
>>42526809
Crystals are just minerals with a magical charge. Rock farmers will strategically position minerals in naturally occurring fields to absorb the energy, and they start discharging immediately after being removed. The Empire happens to have a lot of crystals, and they're used to working with crystals, so their charged stones are all crystalline. Artificers may, with the proper understanding of magic and crystallography, etch them such that they naturally discharge faster or even naturally cast simple spells (such as lightning, heat, or light), but unlike a cell you can't really make it stop at any point.
Put Coco in a strong enough magical field and it'll start zapping her again, but it would need to be extremely potent for it to be noticeable.

With all that said, I'm more than okay with installing a few gimmicks on the belt. I even know how to introduce them, but figuring out what exactly to do and a timeline for all this is going to be rough. Getting that belt off and then putting it back on won't be easy, so I want to make the most of what is likely to be a rare opportunity.
>>42529022
My green is absurd. I've come to accept that suspension of disbelief has to do a LOT of heavy lifting, though I do try not to shatter it completely. This is in fact a much more realistic outcome than how Rarity reacted. I wasn't trying to mock or deride anyone by having this blow up in Rarity's face though, after all, I'm the one that wrote that in the first place. Hopefully nobody took it as an attack. I was trying to demonstrate that she's thinking with her holes, and maybe that Coco is a harder target than she was.
>>42529778
Oh, good question! I should probably explore that next.

>>42532575
Point taken.

But damn, Rarity need to lay off or else it would blow up for worst, shame that the new assignment form Luna is keeping the Doctor busy.

Anyway, it was a good update.

>>42497425 (OP)
sub/brat discord and brat-tamer fluttershy is pretty much canon, haven’t looked for any fan fiction since id rather keep my eyes innocent (kinda), but i think that would be super cute lol

>>42532830
I think I've seen that dynamic with those two before ?

>>42531547
Bump

>>42532575
It's doesn't look like your mocking.

I'm mocking. That's the only language in which absurdity is meaningfully communicated as being absurd. There isn't a way to tell someone "Thou hast hoisted upon your own petard." without dipping into that. Once you fully extract the derision, you're left with a neutral correction. "Sign here" as stated by a banker is meaningfully different from "You left the name blank." as stated by a teacher. However, if you turned in your assignment and the teacher glanced at it and said "sign here", it would not be possible to make that unfunny.

Once you do something silly like go "Wow this outcome was obvious and I don't get how anyone would make that mistake." while also buying into that same idea, it is similarly not possible to fully extract the silly from the situation, and it would be basically dishonest to try.

>suspension of disbelieving
there's actually nothing wrong with the rarity scenario. Fiction isn't "what is" it's "What if?" There's nothing unrealistic about the wizard boy harry potter being a wizard, because in that world the whole universe has literally been constructed so that him being a wizard makes perfect sense to the point of being mundane. There's nothing impossible about a 1000 year trip in a cryopod, because the existence of the technology for the cryopod is a technically not impossible factor required for the creation of the story in which we make statements about such a hypothetical tech. Whether it's a god or a wizard or a guy with tweezers and a circuit board, the fact that we can't reproduce their construction doesn't prove that they couldn't do their feat using knowledge we don't have.

So it's not unbelievable that somewhere in the mammalian nerve system there's a common pathway which transmits a signal we don't actively process, but which makes us mondo horny. I, for one, have never detected the signal which makes me produce testosterone and/or be horny in 30 minutes.

If I understand right, this one is more like a ghost is jerking her off lazily at random every day and she's mistaking that for love, but the concept is understandable and "science black-box" is enough to make me buy "zero-g field" or "flying alien that looks like a mid-westerner", so it's fine as long as I actually know what the black-box is meant to actually do.

>>42532575
>Getting that belt off and then putting it back on won't be easy, so I want to make the most of what is likely to be a rare opportunity.
Didnt Lovelace build that prototype to be modular for future changes ?
>>42523475
>You might notice it’s put together different from yours; I want to be able to take it apart so I can make changes. But she won’t be able to get at the screws while it’s locked, so it should be fine.”
Or at least it sounds somewhat modular.

>>42534482
Oh, that's a relief. I guess I was overthinking things.
>horny nerve signal
I mean... that's almost guaranteed. Our entire body runs on that principle, so it would be a strange outlier. I've done a lot of reading on the subject for this green and admittedly have not been able to isolate it- odds are it's a complex response involving several different hormones- but I'm willing to guarantee it's there.
>ghost lazily jerking her off
I like that simile. It nails what I had in mind.
>>42534515
It is! But we'd either need to get it off Coco, or have Coco standing still while Lovelace worked on it. The former sounds easier.

>>42534687
>Coco standing still
Or cuffed to a mannequin stand.

>>42533592
Boop

>>42515568
Stable rarity.
https://derpibooru.org/images/3671116

So ,anything new from the other green writers ?

>>42540550
Is there any princest story that involves Celestia dealing with her now masochist, penant obsessed sister ?

>>42534687
>But we'd either need to get it off Coco, or have Coco standing still while Lovelace worked on it. The former sounds easier.
True, but the latter sounds much hotter.
Consider: Coco forced to stand in place, vulnerable under appraising eyes, at once utterly powerless and yet paradoxically participant in the matter of her own torment.
Not an easy position to get her into, but there's definitely potential there...

>>42542713
>Coco forced to stand in place, vulnerable under appraising eyes,
>>42535049
Coco being used as a live mannequin to show off the belt, all that while she tries to keep a composure under the unrelenting teasing from zaps.