>>126713465i listened to the first song from the youtube link, good guitar, better solo, my major rec is add a bit more of the edgier type screams and shit cause the vocals weren't really carrying the song (same problem with a lot of my music) I heard you do them in the song but you might've used them too sparingly.
Anyway heres an edgier song where I capitalized on some of my harsher singing. Your shits a lot more mint than mine but with my resources my shit is always demoey
https://soundcloud.com/wetdreammachine/cassowary