>>126937065
sound selection is really bad and it appears to be clipping too, making it sound even worse.
>>126937142
lead synth is nice
vocal chops could do with being louder
buildup at 1:20 is great
daft punk vibe around 1:20 - 1:40
kind of a weird ending, felt like you didn't know how it should climax...
Overall really really good anon, I'd love to know how this was made. What synths/etc. you use.
>>126937158
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>>126937395
I don't like the hithats & claps, they have no impact.
synths sound meh and are too dry
the 808 bassline is the best part tbqh
that last one is just a shitpost, you didn't even try to be subtle that time.
>>126937470
>how do you feel about the L/R pan
it's hard to really say without the full context of thre rest of the track, but I don't think it's a good idea. Alternating between hard L/R panning to make something "sound interesting" usually doesn't work and is imo quite cheesy, change up how it sounds instead or play around with its width instead. Personally, I'd have all of them centered but process the final "all systems online" with a vocal doubler or similar to add width, maybe even mess with it using a pitch shifter too.
>>126937718
I think there's some weird phase issue happing about 1 minute in
I find the crash/ride coming out the right throughout the majority of the song really distracting
I re-listened to the previous version
>>126932381 which I feel sounds better overall.
The newer edit is fatiguing to listen to, I think you over-compressed it. However, the in the previous version the vocal doesn't quiet sit in the mix and the drums lack punch.
It's really close to being a great mix, but both versions are a bit off imo.
>>126938975
there's something unsettling about this
nice composition tho
not a lot to critique as a mix
>>126941918
kick is too loud
lead synth bit too quiet
snare(?) drum hit too quiet
I like that epiano
over 2 minutes in now, starting to feel repetitive. I feel the beat/perc should have a change up by now