>>128326649
>>128326706
As the TranceAnon from /dmp/, I will listen to this
BPM is a bit high, but that's a minor complaint (now-a-days, 140+ is common for trance)
That little drum combo you keep reusing does not really fit trance, try something simpler, more of a crescendo thing
It needs more pads and some whooshing noise... it needs to feel fuller
Overall though, the melodies and sounds are good. I like the second half. It works well for old school-ish trance (doesn't really fit the modern trance sound, but that's fine). The overall arrangement could be shuffled up a bit though. Trance should have a gradual buildup, then a release into the breakdown, then a buildup out of the breakdown into a drop, then high energy, and then gradual cool down into the end. You have all of the elements, but with some re-ordering it would fit the template better. There should definitely be more going on after the breakdown ends, that should be one of the most energetic parts of the track.
>>128326929
To really release it, you need a version that a DJ can mix with preceding and succeeding tracks in their set. Right now, you have a "Radio Edit" length track, and the overall arrangement actually works decently for that (though could still use a bit of re-ordering). But for a full length mix, the buildup/release/breakdown/drop/closing should be very structured.
Listen to these to hear what I'm talking about:
https://youtu.be/T2kMZ0pglfE Binary Finary - "1998 (Gouryella Remix)"
https://youtu.be/647jA8M4ecs Same track, but the Radio Edit
