Hat-trick edition

>>4429520
The thumbnail looks cooler than the actual picture.

>>4429527
You still get the cowboy skellington shadow
But bigger

Gato!

Pidge!

Bee!

>>4429488 (OP) I hate cellphone denoising filters
>>4429491 cute but lacking in composition, eye is guided nowhere
>>4429495 could be nice if colors weren't blown out, clamped white and green, makes it look like a stylized painting though.
>>4429508 Composition should have been centered and focused on the gentleman's face, so that we can briefly read the sign and focus on his content face. would be better in black and white too as everything in the picture doesnt look too modern, could pass it as an old school picture, more mature.
>>4429510 boring, doesnt tell a story nor looks visually appealing with the big reflection. colors remind me of 2008 low budget television series though, bit nostalgic I guess. Putting the focus on the blue shirt gives her a smoothed out look, maybe something interesting do be done with this technique.

>>4429511 lazy color work and composition, definitly some potential with a more cinematographic framing, wasted potential by lack of planning when taking the picture. Zooming and centering on the two head would have more impact imo.
>>4429512 building doesnt look interesting enough for a whole picture of it
>>4429513 probably a cellphone pic so poor zooming and ugly denoising, but the whole bottom part of the picture is useless and keeping only whats above the last wire would give it a stronger composition

>>4429514 clean composition, good detail, not the most beautiful landscape but presents it well.
>>4429520 cool lighting, could edit it to remove the ugly corners and give it a nice color grading
>>4429550 beautiful landscape, sadly these clouds in the foreground look ugly, like a white stain, very flat, not entirely your fault though, great lighting on the ground, the clouds should have caught some shadows to give depth

>>4429554 nice grading, nice cat, nice focus, nice photo
>>4429556 lighting a bit strong, sky too desaturated
>>4429557 nice bee nice movement nice photo
>>4429586 good idea, good potential, sadly we can't see shit
>>4429590 would make a good black and white pic, artefacts from long distance ruins it

>>4429595
Critiquing without posting would be cringe

>>4429592
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>>4429594
>>4429595
Appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback.

Feel free to tell me what you don't like and like about these
My critiques were quick blunt and on the harsher side, and quite frankly probably wrong, I just wish to start a discussion instead of blindly posting tons of pictures.

>>4429602
based

>>4429600
feels mature and controlled, feels on the more informative side than artistic side

>I wouldn't usually take this kind of pictures but I found the lighting and the statue very cute

>>4429605
poetic. brutal square cold social housing next to pretty nostalgic fields of flowers. It being film seals the look, good feeling, good picture

>>4429609
Nigga that's canola

>>4429610
it's colza

>>4429599
really appreciate this one, very good contrast, very nice that the dark parts keep this much info
>>4429602
Very cinematic, big fan, did you do the one with the firefighters on a mountain top that was in the tilt-shift thread?
>>4429608
kitsch
>>4429609
thanks

>>4429610
read nigga read, these are flowers still
>>4429612
nice colors
>kitsch
I laughed, happy to have at least one kitsch in my photo collection, my mother indeed enjoys this kind of decorations.

rare people picture

>>4429619
wish that line wasn't there

I'm really not sure where I'm trying to go with this but I dont mind feedback
Retouched in photoshop and added a paper texture

>>4429623
Needs more haloing, ken. And turn up the magenta for dat pinatubian light.

>>4429622
i like the line

>>4429612
The firefighters picture wasnt me, my white borders are inspired from the guy posting cool amercan landscapes in here so It may look like some other people work
>>4429622
That's what photoshop is here for, and luckily for you I know how to use it

>>4429623
you watch too many Wes Anderson movies

>>4429624
Haha yeah, I liked the collage look, with goofy colors, but the white line on the border between rock and sky is a pain

>>4429623
the women are too dark, make them come out a tiny bit more

>>4429632
magic

>>4429623
The pic is nice, but you should really keep a cleaner studio.

>>4429633
Tried to make it easier on the eye

>>4429637
much better imo, now there's only the white line left
or you simply accept it and leave it there

>>4429631
Oh yeah, now I understand what I was feeling about this image, tell me that boat doesnt belong in a Wes Anderson movie !

>Went for a cinematographic look for this one and I hope it's not kitsch

>>4429550
Nice. NZ?

>>4429556
Should have waited for the pigeon to finish its business.

>>4429586
Needs a darker background

>>4429599
I like how the filename hints at the location. A little too dark for me, but it's charming in a nostalgic way.

>>4429619
Nicely done

>>4429637
Nice Comp, highlights could be muted a bit for my taste.

>>4429669
We are approaching levels of jeethood that our forefathers would have deemed unfathomable.

>>4429676
Highlights are now muted sir, just like in the movies sir

>>4429676
A little less dark for you now