is this a good riff/composition fellow robots?

https://vocaroo.com/18Z90ap91O9K

yeah it's pretty good man
i liked it

>>81699184 (OP)
you really impressed me OP
i didn't know someone could produce a composition that sounded so audibly grating and ear-piercing to listen to
i honestly don't know if you're just trying to fuck with people or not
if you're actually looking for constructive feedback then practice playing with a metronome so you can keep the guitar and bass in time with the drum machine

>>81699318
hey thanks for feedback
yeah i mean the tempo might be off especially in the end
i dont really enjoy practicing too rigidly i just play random buttrock stuff when im in the mood

>>81699184 (OP)
Out of tempo
Guitar is out of tune
Guitar is way too loud in the mix
Shitty tone
Sounds like you're a couple months into playing guitar,
Man i couldn't even listen to the whole thing
But that's okay you're probably a beginner, practicing could be hard but it's rewarding if you put effort into guitar you'll laugh about this recording in less than a year from now

Guitar is clearly out of tune and the whole band is out of sync. Fix that, come back, and we may have something.

>>81699184 (OP)
What the fuck is this dogshit? Loool

It's this a good beat?
https://vocaroo.com/169YqpZn8GTM

am i the only one thinking it's kinda catchy?

OP here
what do you guys think of this. might be less annoying to listen to
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-dV-l6A67U

>>81700481
You're not the only one + if these people want to listen to harmony and counterpoint to a steady rhythm, go to church