Thread 81741817

>A look into the life of a failed project and how it's going for her now that she's escaped.

https://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091746

And I'd love a review when you're done, which you can do anonymously here:

https://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=add&no=600091746

And doing commissions, $9 per 1,000 words. Leave your email or Disc if you're interested. Paypal only. My email is also my author name @gmail.com

>>81741817 (OP)
Ngl, I read the whole thing when you posted last time, but had nothing to comment because I am a complete beginner. I would hate to derail your thread but is it okay to ask, how did you learn to write? I want to write but my stories always sound so amateurish or like it is being told by a child. I have experience in essay and business writing if that helps. I am in no place to review but the story kept me interested.

>>81741840
I'll maybe write a longer post because there's a chance

Obviously read more, that's important. Audiobooks don't cut it when you need to feel the words in your own head.

But I also watch movies and think about how I'd describe the places the characters are in. Movies with atmosphere or set in time or interesting places. Those same directors/writers thought they were interesting for a reason. It's a bit more complicated than that though.

>>81741840
>I'll maybe write a longer post because there's a chance

*there's a chance the thread will be quickly deleted

>>81741860
>>81741866
That is fine. If you write a long post and it gets deleted, I can always read the archives.