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Mike !!s1jEdTQxfFE
7/11/2025, 6:28:04 PM No.81790286
rotten apples
rotten apples
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I wrote this yesterday, enjoy!

Bobbin' for apples
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Opened an apple orchard
Beautiful place
Serene, clean air, and tasty
No one came
Apples rotted off the trees for the season
Put them in a rusty trough behind the coop
The juices fermented with the worms
Went to compost more rot and found a girl floating face down in the slew
Pretty heartbreaking, not sure why she was back there or how she drowned
2 weeks later spent the afternoon collecting the fallen apples
Went to toss them
Another girl
Around the same age
Quite pretty, and it's another tragedy
The apple orchard didn't feel so good to spend time at after that so.took a week vacation
Relax, renew, restore
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Mike !!s1jEdTQxfFE
7/11/2025, 6:31:46 PM No.81790325
trough
trough
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>>81790286 (OP)
CCame back and I have that feeling like chewing on cement.
I didn't want to look.
Tried to put it off.
But I couldn't sleep
So I took a flashlight just to confirm it was all just anxiety
7 bodies this time
I needed to know
I didn't want to
But I needed to
So I sat on a log a distance back and just waited
Several hours passed.
Thought I heard a splashing noise
Wasn't quite sure
8 bodies
I sat closer but still out of sight
I wouldn't let this happen again
An hour passe
a figure approached from the dark
I got him.
That fuck.
Something wasn't quite right
The person was alone
They weren't carrying a body
I waited until I could see clearly
A young girl
Quite beautiful
Kind smile
Dressed up like she was going on a date
Dressed in white
She reached the trough
Where the 8 bodies were floating
Among the worms
Rotten apples
She looked at me and waved, smiled
Then went head first into the fermented slew
Face down and stayed that way
Then she started struggling
She was going to drown
I got to her and saved her
Her clothes now an ugly brown
Pieces of worms and rotten apples in her hair
Screamed at me when she came to
Rushed to the slough and dove in
I had to fight to save her life that time
Locked her in the coop and notified the police
Parents arrived disappointed in her
Gave her a talk but her eyes not once looked away from the slough
I tried everything to cordon of that place
Put up signs
Warned those who visited
But the girls would always find a way in
They would always die
I figured it out though
Those young girls
They were trying to eat the rotten apples
Worms and all
Drunk off the ferment
They wouldn't stop
Until they drowned
There was no stopping this
So I made a decision
I sat at the trough
charged a considerable sum
To those young girls
To go bobbin for rotten apples
That way I was there to pull them out in time
The girls loved it
Told all their friends
With pieces of worm stuck between their teeth
At least we saved the orchard
Anonymous
7/11/2025, 7:28:39 PM No.81790897
Fuck off to wattpad, retard namefag