>>58015985
>repetition. most words that originally repeated are replaced with synonyms in specific places.

Very specific props to you for this, anon. It's something a lot of writers in general do and it's something that I always take notice of. I find it can really make or break a sentence/paragraph and make stuff really awkward to read and sort of ruins it for me. The fact that you've gone to the effort to bother going back and editing your stuff shows you're a good writer that cares about your shit. That's more than I can say for myself.
While I haven't read your stuff yet, (it's on the list along with lots of stuff, since I've never actually been much of a reader, in all honesty.) this sort of stuff is what motivates me to actually sit down and read, if only to show appreciation for the effort it takes for anons to write stuff in the first place. It also motivates me to write more myself, instead of just spending all my time drawing silly pictures.

>>58016133
play full randomizer. I've never done it, but it sounds like a fun challenge.

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>>58016278
>Heidi
extremely yes. Blossom is also very straight and wants a husband one day. Shelby too, but is currently in her "boys are lame" era and is an independent woman what don't need no man. She's married to justice and battle.