>>7593161
OK so I went thru the pic and I think you did yourself in with the size difference? Hard to do the "she rests on his knees" like that without an extra pillow for him to sit on I think, if you wanna do it like that.

She's probably a bit too long in the middle, but I'm pretty worn out lately so you may want a second opinion on that. Also I hope its OK I went over the pic here, its the only way I know how to check anatomy/chara builds.

Anyway, I love the dynamics you have in your doodles. Would totally fit with MAD Magazine style sillies.