Hi /tg/, first time posting so hopefully I don't break any rules.
Anyway, pic related is a story I am writing, mostly for my own pleasure and to 'exercise' that creative muscle, so to speak.
It takes place in the battletech universe, on a planet I made up. The main character will begin the story as a mercenary, who returns home with ptsd, and learn to slowly love life again through the simple poverty of his home village, only to have it ripped from him. he will then go on a DUNE-esque rampage with his own battletech, and since it seem to be the only one on the planet, he will lead his people to victory and sit atop a throne of corpses.
That's the idea, anyway. please go easy on the grammar mistakes, it is a 1st draft. I would appreciate ANY feedback otherwise.