>>529979283
>just generally

Dorito/guitar pick face, really odd eyes, odd proportions, list goes on. But at least you're not like >>529973694 who just needs to start over. If you don't know what to do then start with the golden ratio and try again.

>>528200932
Ryoshu has really pretty eyelashes. It's a shame almost nobody draws them like that.

>>528055657
how is chinese princess maker supposed to be the Ryoshu canto
her intervallo got gutted