>>7676036
okay so I read this, here's my feedback
I think you cram to much into the pages, be it the visuals or the dialogue, like some anon said, you need to work on bubbles and lettering, let it breathe a little

the art is rough of course but its fine, I understand whats going on visually which is the most important thing
altho keep in mind that im open to every visual style under the sun, I like experiencing all sorts of media so to me there's little to nothing that will be off putting enough for me to not give something a try, but most people aren't like this
so altho to me the art is fine, too others it might be too rough, it might be a barrier for entry thats a little too high

You'll naturally get better at drawing so i'd say the biggest things for you, at least artistically is just letting the visuals breathe, let the lettering breath, don't cram so much into a single page

for the positives, I enjoyed what I read
im interested in the relationship between the 2 main characters, the focus on a girl who's an e-celeb, her boyfriend manager, the behind the scene of being an e celeb, it was pretty interesting
the dialogue was generally good, a bit clucky at time but its charming
I also appreciate some of the funny little details like
i'd for sure keep reading it
(also you really capture the "bottom heavy woman" build that you often see in those industries kek)