>>7615032
>I feel the author was either rushed, or like me: too lazy to iterate upon the work until it feels polished.
You are correct. I wrote it, wanted to edit it a bit before submission, then realized that the chances of me actually having the time TO edit it was so low.
Ironically, I was stuck in traffic on the way home, and thus, no time to plan it.
>>7612660
I'll write an 18th century inter-class thrilling betrayal for you next time.