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7/16/2025, 9:39:16 PM
PMD: Light and Ruin (by Bokurei, comicfury) - ongoing

Shinx human, partner Eevee, post-Explorers. Spoilers for Explorers.

Too short to evaluate yet.

Black-and-white manga-styled, official style pokemon.

I thought it was going to be longer for some reason, but it's pretty recent and only got to chapter two, it's still in the intro phase. Intriguing premise: it's set post-Explorers where the human disappeared at the end, and then came back five years later. The art is unremarkable but clean and pretty. Unfortunately, the writing is bad. The dialogue flow is incredibly unnatural, all the time. It's the kind of dialogue where the characters just state the information that you, the reader, needs to receive, without considering that it's spoken in a way that no human or pokemon being would speak. The author also made a puzzling decision to have a character Q&A at the end of chapter 1. Q&A should happen, at least in my opinion, after the characters are established, not be used to establish them. I'm going to keep an eye on it; if the premise gets delivered on, it'll make up for the stilted dialogue.