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7/5/2025, 4:04:59 PM
>>57972434
My only real critique story wise is the "Gill getting injured with an apparent broken leg", which is a bit of an old hat cliche that didn't make a lot of sense and had very little bearing on the story other than a small bit of emotional drama that sort of fell flat for me. It seemed sort of brushed off right away to allow the team to get to the final fight without having to acknowledge the fact that Gill should have really been out of commission and unable to travel through the final dungeon. I totally understand the need for the pair to get to the treasure together as a team, as the journey truly is the real treasure all along.
I feel like the broken leg could have been replaced with a less immediately threatening injury like a concussion from the fall. A bad bump on the head is still a very serious injury that's potentially less hindering in the moment, giving you more room to suspend your disbelief that Gill could grit his teeth and get through the final leg of the journey without too much trouble. But really, none of that matters all that much and didn't affect my enjoyment of the story as a whole.
2/3
My only real critique story wise is the "Gill getting injured with an apparent broken leg", which is a bit of an old hat cliche that didn't make a lot of sense and had very little bearing on the story other than a small bit of emotional drama that sort of fell flat for me. It seemed sort of brushed off right away to allow the team to get to the final fight without having to acknowledge the fact that Gill should have really been out of commission and unable to travel through the final dungeon. I totally understand the need for the pair to get to the treasure together as a team, as the journey truly is the real treasure all along.
I feel like the broken leg could have been replaced with a less immediately threatening injury like a concussion from the fall. A bad bump on the head is still a very serious injury that's potentially less hindering in the moment, giving you more room to suspend your disbelief that Gill could grit his teeth and get through the final leg of the journey without too much trouble. But really, none of that matters all that much and didn't affect my enjoyment of the story as a whole.
2/3
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