>>11329328
Just caught up in this thread.

Some of the criticism has already been mentioned but, the text choice isn't great, and the captions going over the picture or over the characters in the picture should be avoided as a principle rule.

The one in your current post with the black side bar is perfectly fine but the off choice text is not pleasant to read.

>>11319940
text here is too bland and feels generic, where as >>11326274 this text might be able to fit in with some pictures/scenes its overall too "soft" and cartoony.

Here's a picture of one done more or less perfectly with the text not overlapping and not using a sidebar for text