>>7654682
same comment as before, try to put your quality metric next to it and find where its weaknesses lie
I'm using this one because it's similar in that it's a low-keyed painting with a quasi symmetrical composition
I say that the biggest weakness in yours is that it's not clear if the focal point should be the moon or the character
if it's the character, it should have been made front and center of the image; if it's the moon, its impact is being lessened by the figure.
I also chose this one because it also features 2 main elements, but it's clear in hierarchy which is the main one and which is the subordinate one.