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7/15/2025, 10:41:50 PM
I have now read the following 4chanslop
>Reincarnated as a Mecha
>Yellow Typhoon
>Born Under a Black Sun
>Volume 1 + Interludes for The Crow and The Rabbit
I'm making good progress I think. Now for my thoughts on the story as of the end of the first volume. First of all, I owe you five American dollars which I believe is a fair price for that volume. Figure out how you will enable that money to hit your account. When compared to the last one I caught up on (Black Sun) your setting is not as viscerally entrancing to me and makes my brain itch to try and figure out what is being alluded to. On the other hand, you also don't have any shit I think is fucking dogshit in that volume either. Something recently I read which has somewhat similar vibes, at least for the protagonist, is Otome Heroine Survival (japslop) and I will say Ferene compares favourably. Despite being low fantasy, you also somehow aren't a historyfag, or maybe you are and just don't care that leather armor is made up D&Dism (among other details that don't really matter to the story). I don't like yuri but I read a lot of it somehow, so I can say you fall on the good side of it and don't overly exhibit the voyeuristic, exhibitionist, AGP, or footfag vibes so many other yurifag writers do. Congrats. Along those lines I also think you compare favourably to The Hero-Killing Bride, which again has some general vibes in common in my opinion. Onee-san and Giant as well. You fit in with these sorts of titles, no clue if this will mean anything to you at all but interpret it as a favourable comparison.
Other than that, your writing is probably more competent feeling. While my personal preferences didn't make my brain go crazy with dopamine on your writing, it was a good read. Finishing the volume left me wanting more, which is probably a good thing. I have chosen to give a follow to your series as a result.
I will keep reading and reviewing 4chanslop that gets posted to this thread. So far, two have been short and underwhelming, and two have been far above the median, with one hitting a lot harder for me while I recognize the other as (quite a bit) more competently written. That's pretty good so far I think.
>Reincarnated as a Mecha
>Yellow Typhoon
>Born Under a Black Sun
>Volume 1 + Interludes for The Crow and The Rabbit
I'm making good progress I think. Now for my thoughts on the story as of the end of the first volume. First of all, I owe you five American dollars which I believe is a fair price for that volume. Figure out how you will enable that money to hit your account. When compared to the last one I caught up on (Black Sun) your setting is not as viscerally entrancing to me and makes my brain itch to try and figure out what is being alluded to. On the other hand, you also don't have any shit I think is fucking dogshit in that volume either. Something recently I read which has somewhat similar vibes, at least for the protagonist, is Otome Heroine Survival (japslop) and I will say Ferene compares favourably. Despite being low fantasy, you also somehow aren't a historyfag, or maybe you are and just don't care that leather armor is made up D&Dism (among other details that don't really matter to the story). I don't like yuri but I read a lot of it somehow, so I can say you fall on the good side of it and don't overly exhibit the voyeuristic, exhibitionist, AGP, or footfag vibes so many other yurifag writers do. Congrats. Along those lines I also think you compare favourably to The Hero-Killing Bride, which again has some general vibes in common in my opinion. Onee-san and Giant as well. You fit in with these sorts of titles, no clue if this will mean anything to you at all but interpret it as a favourable comparison.
Other than that, your writing is probably more competent feeling. While my personal preferences didn't make my brain go crazy with dopamine on your writing, it was a good read. Finishing the volume left me wanting more, which is probably a good thing. I have chosen to give a follow to your series as a result.
I will keep reading and reviewing 4chanslop that gets posted to this thread. So far, two have been short and underwhelming, and two have been far above the median, with one hitting a lot harder for me while I recognize the other as (quite a bit) more competently written. That's pretty good so far I think.
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