>>7614581
>>7614628
Hi anon, I'm not an angry defensive 'pyw' type, thanks for the feedback, I'm constantly trying to improve at everyaspectof comic making. I agree my art is not the best, but I believe my storytelling and paneling atleast has improved slightly. The last Oi comic came out February 2024. I don't work on it anymore, but recently I randomly got a bunch of pinup commissions of my old Oi characters, mainly Dana the skeleton witch. It's not the best art but atleast it's much better than my drawings and pinups from a few years ago. What do you recommend I do to improve?

The latest comic I'm working on is called Cosmic Crush. You can read it here, what do you think?
https://m.tapas.io/series/Cosmic-Crush/

I don't have much time to work on art anymore and I tried to make this in color to get a webtoon audience. Color takes me way too long to do so I'm planning to make the next updates in black and white so I can get pages out faster, and that way I can also focus more on lineart. What advice do you have for me?