>>7642676
I think im struggling with making things sowl.
This was my more well recieved piece on newgrounds.

The rest dont even come close.

And im trying to figure out why. Maybe because what is happening is defined a lot better. Then my other work, maybe its the hourglass figure or because i took a week (i have workshifts), and the scope was a lot smoller.
Maybe the coin to face to sword line gives it a bit of an extra guidance.